the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
| 18 Aug 2022
Earthquake Contributions to Coastal Cliff Retreat
Abstract. Modeling suggests that steep coastal regions will experience increasingly rapid erosion related to climate change induced sea level rise. Earthquakes can also cause intense episodes of coastal cliff retreat, but coseismic failures are rarely captured in the historical record used to calibrate most cliff retreat forecast models. Here, we disaggregate cliff-top retreat related to strong ground motion and non-seismic sources, providing a unique window into earthquake contributions to long-term coastal cliff retreat. Widespread landsliding and up to c. 19 m of coastal cliff-top retreat occurred in the area of Conway Flat during the 2016 Kaikōura (New Zealand) earthquake despite relatively low (c. 0.2 g) peak ground accelerations. While coastal cliff-top retreat has been spatially and temporally variable over the past 72 years, historical aerial imagery suggests that large earthquake induced landslide triggering events disproportionately contribute to an average 0.25 m/year retreat at Conway Flat. The 2016 Kaikōura earthquake represents c. 24 % of the total cliff-top retreat over the past 72 years and c. 39 % of cliff-top retreat over the past 56 years. Additionally, significant retreat between 1950 and 1966 is likely the result of local seismicity. Together these two events account for c. 57 % of cliff-top retreat over the past 72 years. Earthquake-related debris piles at the base of the cliffs have been rapidly eroded in the 5 years since the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake (more than 25 % loss of debris volume) and there will likely be little evidence of the earthquake within the next decade. In regions with similar lithologic and coastal conditions, evidence of past widespread single-event cliff-top retreat may be limited or non-existent. The coastal cliffs at Conway Flat demonstrate the potential to significantly underestimate future cliff-top retreat using historical records.
-
Notice on discussion status
The requested preprint has a corresponding peer-reviewed final revised paper. You are encouraged to refer to the final revised version.
-
Preprint
(9964 KB)
-
Supplement
(16 KB)
-
The requested preprint has a corresponding peer-reviewed final revised paper. You are encouraged to refer to the final revised version.
- Preprint
(9964 KB) - Metadata XML
-
Supplement
(16 KB) - BibTeX
- EndNote
- Final revised paper
Journal article(s) based on this preprint
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
-
RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-643', Mark Dickson, 06 Sep 2022
This is an interesting paper that specifically investigates the contribution of earthquakes to coastal cliff retreat. The research is welcome as there has been little written on this topic. Overall I find the methods to be well executed, the results are well illustrated and the paper is well written. My main challenge is in respect to whether the feedbacks between cliff failure and coastal erosion have been sufficiently considered.
Important framing for the paper is stated in section 5.3: "We hypothesize that, in the long-term, large landslide triggering events, for example earthquakes or storms, contribute disproportionately to cliff-top retreat while coastal erosion dominates background retreat at Conway Flat." This can be thought about a little differently from a coastal processes perspective. Over decadal timescales and longer, coastal erosion continually steepens the cliff toe preconditioning the cliff face for failure - some driver is needed for landsliding-driven retreat of the cliff top and this could be a heavy rainfall event, or an earthquake, or in some cases just gradual weathering and gravity. I wonder whether the paper is weighing up the relative importance of different failure event drivers, rather than earthquakes versus coastal erosion? I think this nuance is quite important. For instance, what do you think would be the effect of several large earthquakes in quick succession? Presumably the cliffs would fail toward a stable angle and further erosion would not be unlikely without basal debris removal and oversteepening? In this case, can you be sure that the long-term cliff retreat rate would be increased?
I became a little unclear on what exactly is meant by background retreat rates and long-term retreat rates. For instance, I agree with the point on lines 330-332, that in the long term the retreat rate is ultimately governed by the rate at which marine processes over-steepen the cliff, and I think this point could perhaps be strengthened by referring to some of the relevant modelling (e.g. Wolters and Müller, 2008). But later in the discussion (line 395) it is stated that "These values represent our best estimate of the long-term clifftop retreat rate at Conway Flat over the historical record and are, on average, c. 45% greater than the estimated background retreat rate excluding earthquakes." What exactly is meant by 'background retreat rate' and how does this differ from the long-term retreat rate. I wonder how it is possible to be confident that, had the earthquakes not occurred, that other mechanisms (e.g. rainfall) would not have stimulated failure (if the cliff were over-steepened by coastal erosion)? Eventually a cliff will become steep enough that it will fail, and while this may sound provocative, does it really matter, in respect to the long-term erosion rate, what the triggering event is? In other words, over a given time scale, is the fundamental pace of cliff retreat actually governed by the coastal erosion rate (i.e. the speed at which debris is removed and at which basal steepening occurs)? Clarifying this point would help in respect to several subequent statements. For instance, line 395, "Given the relatively low ground motion at Conway Flat during both the 2016 KaikÅura earthquake and the 1951 Cheviot earthquake, it remains possible that stronger ground motion could result in greater single event retreat. In this case, strong ground motion could have an even larger influence on long-term cliff-top retreat." I'm not so sure about this. If stronger shaking resulted in bigger landslides, then the cliff would fail to a more stable state and more debris would be produced. These feedbacks regulate the long-term retreat rate (e.g. see Dickson et al 2007). And line 400 "excluding earthquake contributions will result in underestimates of long-term coastal cliff retreat over multiple earthquakes" - is this necessarily the case, given the points above?
Useful attempts to extend the work are provided in Equation 1 and the model illustrated in Fig 8. Is equation 1 assumed to be independent of the pre-existing shape of the cliff? If the cliff was already over-steepened, then the magnitude of shaking required to cause failure would be lower, correct? I found the model in Fig 8 interesting and I can see how the combination of high coastal erosion and low earthquake frequency means that earthquakes have limited influence on the retreat rate, but I'm not clear on how low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat combines in the way you allude to, because I guess I am unconvinced that feedbacks have been accounted for (e.g. high sed supply to the coast and failure toward a more stable slope).
Other points to consider:
The introduction section is quite short. I think the potential implications of the research presented would be enhanced if the authors were to broaden the framing a little (e.g. some possible papers to consider below). However, the essential point re tectonic contributions to cliff retreat is well made in the introduction.
70 - label Conway Flat on Fig 1
box label the position of Fig 2 on Fig 1
108 - wording "have had limited to no anthropogenic modification"
The background section is lacking detail on uplift (if any) within the study site? This is important in relation to the level of wave action in relation to the cliff toe. Can some detail be added in this regard.
3.1 and Appendix A - can you provide a little more detail in regard to the appropriateness of using the 2017 DSM for historic photographs? As you demonstrate in the paper, there is significant erosion and landsliding between epochs, but it's not possible to have a DSM for each time period in the historic photograph record - to what extent is this accounted for in the uncertainty estimation?
175 - does the presence of dense vegetation preclude the possibility of cliff retreat - in other words, how were you confident there was no cliff retreat if you couldn't see the cliff because of dense vegetation? "where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no cliff retreat had occurred"
245 - can you be a little clearer with your wording regarding failure/no failure of the Greta Formation? Can you provide some numeric stats on how much of this section failed? This would be useful as a lot of the literature on soft-rock coasts deals with consolidated fine-grained rock as distinct to the (unconsolidated?) overlying delta deposits.
260 - the Medina fan deposit is 'more consolidated' - more than the Dawn fan delta deposits? Is there a way to characterise the degree of consolidation of these different deposits? It would be useful to put these erosion rates into context of other cliff erosion rates reported iternationally. You state that these more consolidated cliffs have eroded less - do you ascribe this to their degree of consolidation?
325 - I find this statement confusing: "it does appear that more indurated material (with assumed higher shear strength) in the lower cliff face may buffer the upper cliff face from wave action effectively reducing the background rate of cliff-top retreat (Emery and Kuhn 1982)". Are you trying to say that the presence of more resistant prevents over-steepening of the cliff face, and that this then manifests in slower cliff-top erosion rates? Can you provide some cliff-profile sections? These will presumably show that where the mudstone occurs the lower cliff is steeper (because of harder rock), in comparison to the sections where the fan deposits extend to the cliff toe. I think these profiles would help support the argument you are developing here.
5.2 - the section on sediment loss from the cliff-toe alludes to storms, and these may well be important, but variability in longshore sediment transport processes could drive much of the natural variability in beach volume - there is an extensive literature related to this. Is there any evidence to suggest that the 1960 tsunami runup resulted in significant sediment transport on beaches in NZ - not that I am aware of? On line 381 you more directly suggest that tsunami debris removal has occurred, but I don't think there is evidence of this?
360 - "Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of a combination of subaerial and marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982)." Here Emery and Kuhn are implying a dominance of marine over subaerial processes.
379 - "Assuming little change in the background rate of coastal erosion between time windows" - here I think you are referring to the removal of basal debris, rather than cliff-toe steepening? Would it be useful for you to refer to beach erosion and cliff-toe erosion to distinguish what you are referring to when you say "coastal erosion"?
Possible refs to consider:
Hapke, C., & Plant, N. (2010). Predicting coastal cliff erosion using a Bayesian probabilistic model. Marine geology, 278(1-4), 140-149.
Hall, J. W., Meadowcroft, I. C., Lee, E. M., & van Gelder, P. H. (2002). Stochastic simulation of episodic soft coastal cliff recession. Coastal Engineering, 46(3), 159-174.
Walkden, M. J. A., & Hall, J. W. (2005). A predictive mesoscale model of the erosion and profile development of soft rock shores. Coastal Engineering, 52(6), 535-563.
Walkden, M., & Dickson, M. (2008). Equilibrium erosion of soft rock shores with a shallow or absent beach under increased sea level rise. Marine Geology, 251(1-2), 75-84.
Ashton, A. D., Walkden, M. J., & Dickson, M. E. (2011). Equilibrium responses of cliffed coasts to changes in the rate of sea level rise. Marine Geology, 284(1-4), 217-229.
Wolters, G., & Müller, G. (2008). Effect of cliff shape on internal stresses and rock slope stability. Journal of Coastal Research, 24(1), 43-50.
Dickson, M. E., Walkden, M. J., & Hall, J. W. (2007). Systemic impacts of climate change on an eroding coastal region over the twenty-first century. Climatic change, 84(2), 141-166.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Colin Bloom, 24 Sep 2022
Dear Professor Dickson, thank you for your thoughtful and detailed comments on our manuscript as well as the citations you provided. You raise several interesting questions that are very much worth considering.
In regard to your overall comment about feedbacks between cliff failure and coastal erosion, we agree that this deserves a bit more attention and we intend to provide some additional detail in our discussion. Perhaps more importantly, we believe that most of your comments can be resolved by clarifying our use of terminology. In particular, as it pertains to the terms ‘long-term retreat’ and ‘background retreat’. In most cases, we intend to modify ‘long-term’ to read ‘multidecadal’ as we believe that this better captures our meaning and the timescales over which forecast models are focused. Additionally, we intend to modify ‘background retreat’ to read ‘non-seismic retreat’ as this term focuses on process rather than timescale. We use the term to differentiate retreat caused by rainfall, undercutting of the cliff face, and/or weathering and gravity from retreat caused by strong ground motion. The overall contribution of this paper is to demonstrate the potential for earthquakes to introduce a high degree of variability into estimates of coastal cliff-top retreat using the historical record and we maintain that our results and discussion demonstrate this well when considering multidecadal timescales.
Below, we engage with your comments in more detail and introduce some additional changes we propose to improve the manuscript. Each of your comments is included (or summarized) with the following notation: and our response follows.
I wonder how it is possible to be confident that, had the earthquakes not occurred, that other mechanisms (e.g. rainfall) would not have stimulated failure (if the cliff were over-steepened by coastal erosion)? Eventually a cliff will become steep enough that it will fail, and while this may sound provocative, does it really matter, in respect to the long-term erosion rate, what the triggering event is? In other words, over a given time scale, is the fundamental pace of cliff retreat actually governed by the coastal erosion rate (i.e. the speed at which debris is removed and at which basal steepening occurs)?
The magnitude and variability of retreat at the cliff-toe was not systematically estimated in our analysis but, based on visual inspection of the imagery, we infer that the cliff-toe at Conway Flat is retreating more steadily than the cliff-top over the historical record. This leads us to believe that you are likely correct about the limited contribution of earthquakes (and other cliff-top triggers) over increasingly long timescales. To help us conceptualize your comments, we developed a hypothetical 300-year annual record of retreat for the top and toe of the Conway Flat cliffs (Figure R1 – See comment supplement) following the logic that coastal erosion from wave action defines cliff position over this longer timescale. This was simply a thought experiment – we were interested in how cliff-toe and cliff-top retreat rates could vary depending on the time interval being considered. The magnitudes of annual retreat (y-axis) in Figure R1 are also schematic but are loosely based on our observations from the historical record where large rainfall events (and other non-seismic triggers) cause infrequent cliff-top retreat of c. 1 to 2 m, earthquakes result in c. 4 m of cliff-top retreat c. every 50 years, and it takes about 10 years after a large event to clear enough debris from the beach for wave action to resume erosion of the cliff-toe.
Over long timescales (longer than the historical and multidecadal records – for example from 0 to 300 years in Figure R1), the position of the cliff-face is dictated by coastal erosion from wave action which primarily influences the toe of the cliff. The retreat rates of the cliff-top and cliff-toe are equal. Over this timescale, earthquakes and other subaerial triggers unrelated to wave action indeed have little influence on the overall position of the cliff. Over decadal and multidecadal timescales, i.e. those considered in the historical record and forecast models (for example 0 to 50 or 50 to 100 years in Figure R1), the rate of cliff-top retreat can vary substantially from retreat at the toe of the cliff. Thus over these timescales, capturing the contribution of e.g. earthquake triggering mechanisms in models becomes quite important for characterising cliff-top retreat rates.
I wonder whether the paper is weighing up the relative importance of different failure event drivers, rather than earthquakes versus coastal erosion? I think this nuance is quite important. For instance, what do you think would be the effect of several large earthquakes in quick succession? Presumably the cliffs would fail toward a stable angle and further erosion would not be unlikely without basal debris removal and oversteepening? In this case, can you be sure that the long-term cliff retreat rate would be increased?
We also agree that some removal of debris and oversteepening of the cliff face at Conway Flat is required to make the cliff-top susceptible to failure. In theory, rapidly successive earthquakes and rainfall events could outpace coastal retreat from wave action and the cliff-top could become less steep and less susceptible to failure. This process would slow cliff-top retreat and give coastal erosion from wave action at the toe the chance to ‘catch up’. This may explain the less steep cliff geometry and lower historical retreat observed south of Inverness Stream (Figure B1). However, in many cases, for example in the fan delta material north of Big Bush Gully, the time required to return the cliff-top to a susceptible geometry between large subaerial triggering events appears to be much lower than the 50-year average return interval for strong ground motion. Between 1950 and 1966 we observed c. 5 m of average retreat at Conway Flat with little evidence of this retreat present in 1966. Within c. 15 years, the cliffs at Conway Flat were once again steep and likely susceptible to further widespread failure.
It is worth mentioning that the degree to which oversteepening is required for failure is dependent on the material properties of the cliff face, the means of triggering a failure, and the failure mechanism. For example, dynamic stresses introduced during an earthquake may result in failure at a less susceptible geometry than would be required for non-seismic failure. On average, 2016 coseismic failures along the Kaikōura coast occurred on c. 40° slopes, much lower than the near vertical slopes present at Conway Flat (Bloom et al. in Review). Additionally, in some cases, failure mechanisms at Conway Flat resulted in steep headscarps that do not preclude subsequent failure at the same location over decadal timescales. Figure 6 in the manuscript shows images of a portion of the cliff face before and after the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake. The debris avalanche at this site has resulted in a steep section of cliff-top that is still highly susceptible to strong ground motion or rainfall induced failure following the 2016 earthquake.
To address your first two comments in the manuscript, we intend to add text at the end of the first paragraph in the introduction reading: “This is particularly important when considering that the cliff face may erode at different relative rates over decadal to multidecadal timescales, for example subaerial influences eroding the cliff-top faster than coastal erosion from wave action at the toe of the cliff.” Additionally, we intend to add a paragraph at the beginning of section 5.3 which reads: “Over long timescales (longer than the historical record), the rate of coastal erosion at the toe of the Conway Flat cliffs may limit the extent of cliff-top retreat and, in turn, the long-term influence of subaerial triggers like earthquakes or rainfall. This is because some oversteepening of the cliff face is likely a prerequisite for cliff-top failure (Wolters and Muller 2008). Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of dominant marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982). Over multidecadal timescales, however, the rate of cliff-top and toe retreat may vary substantially due to the greater temporal variability of subaerial triggers.”
Useful attempts to extend the work are provided in Equation 1 and the model illustrated in Fig 8. Is equation 1 assumed to be independent of the pre-existing shape of the cliff? If the cliff was already over-steepened, then the magnitude of shaking required to cause failure would be lower, correct? I found the model in Fig 8 interesting and I can see how the combination of high coastal erosion and low earthquake frequency means that earthquakes have limited influence on the retreat rate, but I'm not clear on how low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat combines in the way you allude to, because I guess I am unconvinced that feedbacks have been accounted for (e.g. high sed supply to the coast and failure toward a more stable slope).
Equation 1 is a first-order estimate and is unlikely to be very useful in cases where the cliff-top is not susceptible to earthquake induced failures (for example if the cliff-top is not very steep). We intend to revise the text on line 412 to read: “Using these three inputs, and assuming a cliff-top susceptible to failure, we can define a simple equation…”. Assuming there is a susceptible cliff-top available for failure, low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat could result in earthquakes having a substantial influence on multidecadal cliff-top retreat. When erosion rate is integrated over longer time frames, we agree that earthquakes (and other subaerial triggers) are likely subordinate to preconditioning via wave erosion at the toe of the Conway Flat cliffs.
The introduction section is quite short. I think the potential implications of the research presented would be enhanced if the authors were to broaden the framing a little (e.g. some possible papers to consider below). However, the essential point re tectonic contributions to cliff retreat is well made in the introduction.
In looking through the citations that you include, we agree that there is some room to bolster the framing of our introduction with additional references. We intend to revise the first paragraph of the manuscript to read: “As sea level rises from climate change, regional coastal modeling suggests an increasing rate of coastal cliff retreat (e.g. FitzGerald et al., 2008; Limber et al., 2018). This will pose a significant hazard to people and property around the globe, particularly in regions that face a high risk due to population exposure (e.g. He and Beighley 2008). The response of individual coastal cliffs to sea level rise is complicated by a range of feedbacks and site specific conditions, for example changing beach volume and cliff material strength (e.g., Dickson et al., 2007; Ashton et al., 2011) as well as by the temporal variability of cliff retreat (e.g., Hall et al., 2002; Hapke and Plant 2010). Many decadal to multidecadal models of coastal cliff retreat rely heavily on historical records and legacy aerial imagery (typically less than 50-100 years) for calibration, in part to capture some of this spatial and temporal variability (e.g. Dickson et al., 2007; Young et al., 2014; Limber et al., 2018). Unfortunately, direct evidence of past coastal failures is rarely preserved in the active coastal environment (Francioni et al., 2018) making it difficult to confirm that the historical record is representative of all possible preconditioning and triggering mechanisms for coastal cliff collapse. This is particularly important when considering that the cliff face may erode at different relative rates over decadal to multidecadal timescales, for example subaerial influences eroding the cliff-top faster than coastal erosion from wave action at the toe of the cliff.”
70 - label Conway Flat on Fig 1
This will be added in the revised manuscript.
box label the position of Fig 2 on Fig 1
The blue outline currently included and labeled in Figure 1 is the position of Figure 2.
108 - wording "have had limited to no anthropogenic modification"
Commas will be added here to read: “…have had limited, to no, anthropogenic modification…”
The background section is lacking detail on uplift (if any) within the study site? This is important in relation to the level of wave action in relation to the cliff toe. Can some detail be added in this regard.
Lines 129 to 133 discuss coastal uplift in the Kaikōura region. Unfortunately, we have few constraints on the actual uplift at Conway Flat. We will add a sentence to the end of this paragraph reading: “Specific estimates of tectonic uplift at Conway Flat are currently unavailable.” In order to make the importance of uplift clear we will also add the following sentence to the discussion in section 5.1: “While site specific estimates are currently unavailable, tectonic uplift rate may additionally influence wave action in relation to the toe of the cliffs at Conway Flat (e.g., Horton et al., 2022).”
3.1 and Appendix A - can you provide a little more detail in regard to the appropriateness of using the 2017 DSM for historic photographs? As you demonstrate in the paper, there is significant erosion and landsliding between epochs, but it's not possible to have a DSM for each time period in the historic photograph record - to what extent is this accounted for in the uncertainty estimation?
We reference all images horizontally to 2017 aerial imagery and vertically to a DEM generated from the 2017 aerial imagery. While we could have used any of the aerial images as a base for our referencing, the 2017 aerial imagery was chosen based the quality and extent of the dataset (this will be noted in Appendix A). As currently discussed in Appendix A starting at line 505, georeferencing uncertainty was considered based on the residuals between control points in each image and the 2017 imagery. Because each image is referenced to the 2017 image we can include a consistent estimate of georeferencing uncertainty at these control points (typically fence lines, building corners, and stock ponds) which were assumed to be relatively unchanged between image epochs. As you point out, erosion and landsliding between epochs makes it difficult to estimate uncertainty directly along the coastline. Instead we interpolate between our unchanged control points to generate a unique estimate of georeferencing uncertainty for each measurement along the cliff-top.
175 - does the presence of dense vegetation preclude the possibility of cliff retreat - in other words, how were you confident there was no cliff retreat if you couldn't see the cliff because of dense vegetation? "where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no cliff retreat had occurred"
No, the presence of dense vegetation across all epochs does not completely preclude the possibility of cliff retreat but it does suggest that cliff retreat was limited. In most cases where we observed a loss of dense native vegetation due to failure of the cliff-top, some evidence of this failure remained present across the following image epochs. We believe that it is unlikely that significant cliff-top failure could occur and be completely re-obscured over the limited time between our imagery. We intend to revise line 175 to read “…where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no significant cliff retreat had occurred…”
245 - can you be a little clearer with your wording regarding failure/no failure of the Greta Formation? Can you provide some numeric stats on how much of this section failed? This would be useful as a lot of the literature on soft-rock coasts deals with consolidated fine-grained rock as distinct to the (unconsolidated?) overlying delta deposits.
Most failures from the 2016 earthquake occur within overlying unconsolidated fan delta deposits. We only observe a few areas where there is clear evidence of failure within the Greta Formation. Quantifying this regionally is quite challenging and, while we agree that it is worthwhile thinking about the relative contributions of the Greta Formation to cliff retreat at Conway Flat, we believe providing these statistics is largely beyond the scope of the current manuscript. We intend to add the following text on line 249: "Further site-site specific investigation, largely beyond the scope of this work, would be required to further elucidate the relative contribution of the Greta Formation to failures at Conway Flat.”
260 - the Medina fan deposit is 'more consolidated' - more than the Dawn fan delta deposits? Is there a way to characterise the degree of consolidation of these different deposits? It would be useful to put these erosion rates into context of other cliff erosion rates reported iternationally. You state that these more consolidated cliffs have eroded less - do you ascribe this to their degree of consolidation?
To first order, yes, we infer that the consolidation of the Median fan deposit may have resulted in less erosion than the Dawn fan delta deposit. As in the comment above, additional geotechnical investigation would be required to quantitatively define the consolidation or void ratio of the various fan delta deposits at Conway Flat and directly relate erosion rate to material properties.
325 - I find this statement confusing: "it does appear that more indurated material (with assumed higher shear strength) in the lower cliff face may buffer the upper cliff face from wave action effectively reducing the background rate of cliff-top retreat (Emery and Kuhn 1982)". Are you trying to say that the presence of more resistant prevents over-steepening of the cliff face, and that this then manifests in slower cliff-top erosion rates? Can you provide some cliff-profile sections? These will presumably show that where the mudstone occurs the lower cliff is steeper (because of harder rock), in comparison to the sections where the fan deposits extend to the cliff toe. I think these profiles would help support the argument you are developing here.
We are inferring that, in some sections of the Conway Flat coast, lower historical cliff-top retreat could be a result of more resistant geology at the toe of the cliff that prevents undercutting of the upper cliff by wave action (we will replace ‘background retreat’ with ‘non-seismic retreat’). Over multidecadal timescales this may result in subaerial triggers like earthquakes playing a more important role in cliff-top retreat than wave action. As described in a previous comment, when cliff-top retreat outpaces retreat at the toe of the cliff, the steepness of the cliff-top can reduce, effectively slowing cliff-top retreat but this is not always the case at Conway Flat. Figure R2 (see response supplement) provides comparative profiles demonstrating this. In profile A to A’ in Figure R2 the cliff-top is influenced by both wave action at the toe of the slope (pre-2016) and subaerial triggers at the top of the slope. Alternatively in profile B to B’, terracing occurs with Greta formation buffering cliff-top retreat from undercutting by wave action prior to the 2016 earthquake. Despite this, the upper cliff face remained susceptible to subaerial triggers and failed during the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake.
We believe that additional site specific investigation into geologic controls on cliff retreat at Conway Flat would be required to make more robust claims but we are happy to include Figure R2 alongside Figure B1 in the appendix of the revised manuscript.
5.2 - the section on sediment loss from the cliff-toe alludes to storms, and these may well be important, but variability in longshore sediment transport processes could drive much of the natural variability in beach volume - there is an extensive literature related to this. Is there any evidence to suggest that the 1960 tsunami runup resulted in significant sediment transport on beaches in NZ - not that I am aware of? On line 381 you more directly suggest that tsunami debris removal has occurred, but I don't think there is evidence of this?
This is a valid point and we will modify the text on lines 344 to 345 to read “The extent to which storm surge, from events like Ex-tropical cyclone Gita (Figure 7), and variability in longshore sediment transport (Larson and Kraus, 1993; Dickson et al., 2007; Karunarathna et al., 2014) influence the removal of failed debris at Conway Flat remains largely unclear…” Additionally, we do not have direct evidence of sediment transport from the 1960 tsunami runup at Conway Flat but we cannot completely rule this out. We will modify the text on line 381 to read “… that may have enhanced…”
360 - "Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of a combination of subaerial and marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982)." Here Emery and Kuhn are implying a dominance of marine over subaerial processes.
We will modify the text on line 381 to read: “Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of dominant marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982).”
379 - "Assuming little change in the background rate of coastal erosion between time windows" - here I think you are referring to the removal of basal debris, rather than cliff-toe steepening? Would it be useful for you to refer to beach erosion and cliff-toe erosion to distinguish what you are referring to when you say "coastal erosion"?
We agree that our use of terminology could introduce some confusion here. We will modify the text on line 379 to read: “Assuming little change in the rate of beach erosion between time windows…”
-
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Colin Bloom, 24 Sep 2022
-
RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-643', Colin V. Murray-Wallace, 28 Dec 2022
This is a very interesting manuscript on the nuanced issue to quantifying historical records of coastal cliff retreat based on an example from the Conway Flat area on the South Island of New Zealand. The manuscript is well-written and addresses many of the conceptual and methodological issues of quantifying coastal cliff retreat from time-series images.
For people unfamiliar with the area, it would be nice to have a few photographs illustrating the general nature of the coastal cliffs. This would help in part to understand the physical nature of the cliffs and for the reader to infer potential coastal processes responsible for the changing form of the cliffs through time. This would be good particularly for people unfamiliar with this coastal sector.
The manuscript could potentially be strengthened by some description and discussion of the inherent structural integrity of the lithological units on which the cliffs have developed. Apart from the deltaic succesions, can some commentary be made about the other bedrock units in terms of the broad, regional-scale structural characteristics such as fault , joint or cleavage density and trends? Some discussion on whether some lithologies breakup in a predictable manner or in a more random fashion? - Unilinear or non-linear response to strain irrespective to earthquakes?
Perhaps modify Section header 5.1 as 'Geology' is a discipline rather than a descriptor of bedrock characteristics or lithologies.
I wondered if some commentary can be made where the sediment ends up post cliff collapse? It may be useful to have some commentary on this matter. Does the sediment end up on the continental shelf below storm weather wave base, or is it in part, transported along shore? If the latter, does beach nourishment protect the backing cliffs in some localities.
I also wondered if it is appropriate to have some commentary on the general aspect of the coastline at a more detailed level to consider contrasting wave attack and erosion? Are some sectors of the coastline more prone to erosion, therefore increasing the likelihood of coastal retreat irrespective of the influence of earthquakes?
Line 393 - can some supporting information be provided about the validity of the estimate of long-term cliff-top retreat?
Line 406 '... compared with retreat ...'
Indicate place name 'Conway Flat' on Figure 1.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Colin Bloom, 02 Feb 2023
Dear Professor Murray-Wallace,
Thank you for your constructive comments. We have responded to your suggestions below (our responses are in italics), and we have made some additional changes to the manuscript.
This is a very interesting manuscript on the nuanced issue to quantifying historical records of coastal cliff retreat based on an example from the Conway Flat area on the South Island of New Zealand. The manuscript is well-written and addresses many of the conceptual and methodological issues of quantifying coastal cliff retreat from time-series images.
For people unfamiliar with the area, it would be nice to have a few photographs illustrating the general nature of the coastal cliffs. This would help in part to understand the physical nature of the cliffs and for the reader to infer potential coastal processes responsible for the changing form of the cliffs through time. This would be good particularly for people unfamiliar with this coastal sector.
We agree that additional photos may add value for some readers and have included a selection of photos in Appendix C. Figure 6 in the manuscript includes before and after photos from the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake that should allow more expeditious readers to evaluate the nature of the Conway Flat cliffs.
The manuscript could potentially be strengthened by some description and discussion of the inherent structural integrity of the lithological units on which the cliffs have developed. Apart from the deltaic succesions, can some commentary be made about the other bedrock units in terms of the broad, regional-scale structural characteristics such as fault , joint or cleavage density and trends? Some discussion on whether some lithologies breakup in a predictable manner or in a more random fashion? - Unilinear or non-linear response to strain irrespective to earthquakes?
Some additional information on the underlying Greta formation bedrock will be added to the manuscript in section 2.2: “At Conway Flat, situated between the Conway and Waiau river mouths (Figure 2), weak Neogene Greta Formation mudstone (Uniaxial Compressive Strength <2 MPa) with massive near horizontal bedding (Rattenbury et al., 2006; Massey et al., 2018) is overlain by…” and section 5.1 as follows: “In the Kaikōura region and across New Zealand, failures in tertiary sediment including the Greta Formation mudstone tend to occur as large planar slides often failing along preferentially oriented bedding planes (Pettinga, 1987; Mountjoy and Pettinga, 2006; Singeisen et al., 2022) or as shallow debris avalanches in more weathered sections of the rock mass (Massey et al., 2018). We do not observe evidence of planar sliding at Conway Flat over the historical record and most retreat of the underlying Greta formation appears to result from shallow debris avalanching, observed in some aerial imagery, alongside more gradual erosion due to wave action.”
Perhaps modify Section header 5.1 as 'Geology' is a discipline rather than a descriptor of bedrock characteristics or lithologies.
We will modify the Section 5.1 header to read: “Cliff Retreat and Lithology”
I wondered if some commentary can be made where the sediment ends up post cliff collapse? It may be useful to have some commentary on this matter. Does the sediment end up on the continental shelf below storm weather wave base, or is it in part, transported along shore? If the latter, does beach nourishment protect the backing cliffs in some localities.
The nature of sediment transport at Conway Flat is an interesting question with no clear answer given our current analysis. Targeted field and remote sensing investigation, largely beyond the scope of this work, would likely be required to robustly evaluate sediment transport along the Conway coast. This being said, we do believe that this is an important topic to acknowledge, and we will add the following text in Sections 1 and 5.2 respectively:
“The response of individual coastal cliffs to sea level rise is complicated by a range of feedbacks and site specific conditions, for example changing beach volume, the transport of failed material from more erosive sections of coastline, and cliff material strength (e.g., Dickson et al., 2007; Ashton et al., 2011) as well as by the temporal variability of cliff retreat (e.g., Hall et al., 2002; Hapke and Plant 2010).”
“The extent to which storm surge from events like Ex-tropical cyclone Gita (Figure 7) and variability in longshore sediment transport (Larson and Kraus, 1993; Dickson et al., 2007; Karunarathna et al., 2014) influence the removal of failed debris at Conway Flat remains largely unclear due to our limited number of image epochs…”.
I also wondered if it is appropriate to have some commentary on the general aspect of the coastline at a more detailed level to consider contrasting wave attack and erosion? Are some sectors of the coastline more prone to erosion, therefore increasing the likelihood of coastal retreat irrespective of the influence of earthquakes?
Aspect of the coastal cliffs at Conway Flat likely has some influence on wave attack and erosion. In concert with variability in lithology, this may help to explain some local variability in retreat rate but does little to explain widespread retreat observed following earthquake events. We will add the following text in Section 5.1. as follows: “Likewise, local aspect of the cliff face in relation to variable incoming wave direction may influence the rate of cliff retreat but information on changes in wave direction through time are unavailable.”
Line 393 - can some supporting information be provided about the validity of the estimate of long-term cliff-top retreat?
As discussed in more detail in our response to Reviewer 1, we will change ‘long-term’ to ‘multidecadal’ throughout the manuscript as this better represents the timescales over which cliff-top retreat may vary from overall cliff position. Given the average return interval of shaking at Conway Flat (c. 50 years), including retreat from two earthquakes is unlikely to be representative of true multidecadal retreat.
Line 406 '... compared with retreat ...'
We will revise this statement accordingly.
Indicate place name 'Conway Flat' on Figure 1.
A label will be added.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-AC2
-
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Colin Bloom, 02 Feb 2023
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
-
RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-643', Mark Dickson, 06 Sep 2022
This is an interesting paper that specifically investigates the contribution of earthquakes to coastal cliff retreat. The research is welcome as there has been little written on this topic. Overall I find the methods to be well executed, the results are well illustrated and the paper is well written. My main challenge is in respect to whether the feedbacks between cliff failure and coastal erosion have been sufficiently considered.
Important framing for the paper is stated in section 5.3: "We hypothesize that, in the long-term, large landslide triggering events, for example earthquakes or storms, contribute disproportionately to cliff-top retreat while coastal erosion dominates background retreat at Conway Flat." This can be thought about a little differently from a coastal processes perspective. Over decadal timescales and longer, coastal erosion continually steepens the cliff toe preconditioning the cliff face for failure - some driver is needed for landsliding-driven retreat of the cliff top and this could be a heavy rainfall event, or an earthquake, or in some cases just gradual weathering and gravity. I wonder whether the paper is weighing up the relative importance of different failure event drivers, rather than earthquakes versus coastal erosion? I think this nuance is quite important. For instance, what do you think would be the effect of several large earthquakes in quick succession? Presumably the cliffs would fail toward a stable angle and further erosion would not be unlikely without basal debris removal and oversteepening? In this case, can you be sure that the long-term cliff retreat rate would be increased?
I became a little unclear on what exactly is meant by background retreat rates and long-term retreat rates. For instance, I agree with the point on lines 330-332, that in the long term the retreat rate is ultimately governed by the rate at which marine processes over-steepen the cliff, and I think this point could perhaps be strengthened by referring to some of the relevant modelling (e.g. Wolters and Müller, 2008). But later in the discussion (line 395) it is stated that "These values represent our best estimate of the long-term clifftop retreat rate at Conway Flat over the historical record and are, on average, c. 45% greater than the estimated background retreat rate excluding earthquakes." What exactly is meant by 'background retreat rate' and how does this differ from the long-term retreat rate. I wonder how it is possible to be confident that, had the earthquakes not occurred, that other mechanisms (e.g. rainfall) would not have stimulated failure (if the cliff were over-steepened by coastal erosion)? Eventually a cliff will become steep enough that it will fail, and while this may sound provocative, does it really matter, in respect to the long-term erosion rate, what the triggering event is? In other words, over a given time scale, is the fundamental pace of cliff retreat actually governed by the coastal erosion rate (i.e. the speed at which debris is removed and at which basal steepening occurs)? Clarifying this point would help in respect to several subequent statements. For instance, line 395, "Given the relatively low ground motion at Conway Flat during both the 2016 KaikÅura earthquake and the 1951 Cheviot earthquake, it remains possible that stronger ground motion could result in greater single event retreat. In this case, strong ground motion could have an even larger influence on long-term cliff-top retreat." I'm not so sure about this. If stronger shaking resulted in bigger landslides, then the cliff would fail to a more stable state and more debris would be produced. These feedbacks regulate the long-term retreat rate (e.g. see Dickson et al 2007). And line 400 "excluding earthquake contributions will result in underestimates of long-term coastal cliff retreat over multiple earthquakes" - is this necessarily the case, given the points above?
Useful attempts to extend the work are provided in Equation 1 and the model illustrated in Fig 8. Is equation 1 assumed to be independent of the pre-existing shape of the cliff? If the cliff was already over-steepened, then the magnitude of shaking required to cause failure would be lower, correct? I found the model in Fig 8 interesting and I can see how the combination of high coastal erosion and low earthquake frequency means that earthquakes have limited influence on the retreat rate, but I'm not clear on how low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat combines in the way you allude to, because I guess I am unconvinced that feedbacks have been accounted for (e.g. high sed supply to the coast and failure toward a more stable slope).
Other points to consider:
The introduction section is quite short. I think the potential implications of the research presented would be enhanced if the authors were to broaden the framing a little (e.g. some possible papers to consider below). However, the essential point re tectonic contributions to cliff retreat is well made in the introduction.
70 - label Conway Flat on Fig 1
box label the position of Fig 2 on Fig 1
108 - wording "have had limited to no anthropogenic modification"
The background section is lacking detail on uplift (if any) within the study site? This is important in relation to the level of wave action in relation to the cliff toe. Can some detail be added in this regard.
3.1 and Appendix A - can you provide a little more detail in regard to the appropriateness of using the 2017 DSM for historic photographs? As you demonstrate in the paper, there is significant erosion and landsliding between epochs, but it's not possible to have a DSM for each time period in the historic photograph record - to what extent is this accounted for in the uncertainty estimation?
175 - does the presence of dense vegetation preclude the possibility of cliff retreat - in other words, how were you confident there was no cliff retreat if you couldn't see the cliff because of dense vegetation? "where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no cliff retreat had occurred"
245 - can you be a little clearer with your wording regarding failure/no failure of the Greta Formation? Can you provide some numeric stats on how much of this section failed? This would be useful as a lot of the literature on soft-rock coasts deals with consolidated fine-grained rock as distinct to the (unconsolidated?) overlying delta deposits.
260 - the Medina fan deposit is 'more consolidated' - more than the Dawn fan delta deposits? Is there a way to characterise the degree of consolidation of these different deposits? It would be useful to put these erosion rates into context of other cliff erosion rates reported iternationally. You state that these more consolidated cliffs have eroded less - do you ascribe this to their degree of consolidation?
325 - I find this statement confusing: "it does appear that more indurated material (with assumed higher shear strength) in the lower cliff face may buffer the upper cliff face from wave action effectively reducing the background rate of cliff-top retreat (Emery and Kuhn 1982)". Are you trying to say that the presence of more resistant prevents over-steepening of the cliff face, and that this then manifests in slower cliff-top erosion rates? Can you provide some cliff-profile sections? These will presumably show that where the mudstone occurs the lower cliff is steeper (because of harder rock), in comparison to the sections where the fan deposits extend to the cliff toe. I think these profiles would help support the argument you are developing here.
5.2 - the section on sediment loss from the cliff-toe alludes to storms, and these may well be important, but variability in longshore sediment transport processes could drive much of the natural variability in beach volume - there is an extensive literature related to this. Is there any evidence to suggest that the 1960 tsunami runup resulted in significant sediment transport on beaches in NZ - not that I am aware of? On line 381 you more directly suggest that tsunami debris removal has occurred, but I don't think there is evidence of this?
360 - "Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of a combination of subaerial and marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982)." Here Emery and Kuhn are implying a dominance of marine over subaerial processes.
379 - "Assuming little change in the background rate of coastal erosion between time windows" - here I think you are referring to the removal of basal debris, rather than cliff-toe steepening? Would it be useful for you to refer to beach erosion and cliff-toe erosion to distinguish what you are referring to when you say "coastal erosion"?
Possible refs to consider:
Hapke, C., & Plant, N. (2010). Predicting coastal cliff erosion using a Bayesian probabilistic model. Marine geology, 278(1-4), 140-149.
Hall, J. W., Meadowcroft, I. C., Lee, E. M., & van Gelder, P. H. (2002). Stochastic simulation of episodic soft coastal cliff recession. Coastal Engineering, 46(3), 159-174.
Walkden, M. J. A., & Hall, J. W. (2005). A predictive mesoscale model of the erosion and profile development of soft rock shores. Coastal Engineering, 52(6), 535-563.
Walkden, M., & Dickson, M. (2008). Equilibrium erosion of soft rock shores with a shallow or absent beach under increased sea level rise. Marine Geology, 251(1-2), 75-84.
Ashton, A. D., Walkden, M. J., & Dickson, M. E. (2011). Equilibrium responses of cliffed coasts to changes in the rate of sea level rise. Marine Geology, 284(1-4), 217-229.
Wolters, G., & Müller, G. (2008). Effect of cliff shape on internal stresses and rock slope stability. Journal of Coastal Research, 24(1), 43-50.
Dickson, M. E., Walkden, M. J., & Hall, J. W. (2007). Systemic impacts of climate change on an eroding coastal region over the twenty-first century. Climatic change, 84(2), 141-166.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Colin Bloom, 24 Sep 2022
Dear Professor Dickson, thank you for your thoughtful and detailed comments on our manuscript as well as the citations you provided. You raise several interesting questions that are very much worth considering.
In regard to your overall comment about feedbacks between cliff failure and coastal erosion, we agree that this deserves a bit more attention and we intend to provide some additional detail in our discussion. Perhaps more importantly, we believe that most of your comments can be resolved by clarifying our use of terminology. In particular, as it pertains to the terms ‘long-term retreat’ and ‘background retreat’. In most cases, we intend to modify ‘long-term’ to read ‘multidecadal’ as we believe that this better captures our meaning and the timescales over which forecast models are focused. Additionally, we intend to modify ‘background retreat’ to read ‘non-seismic retreat’ as this term focuses on process rather than timescale. We use the term to differentiate retreat caused by rainfall, undercutting of the cliff face, and/or weathering and gravity from retreat caused by strong ground motion. The overall contribution of this paper is to demonstrate the potential for earthquakes to introduce a high degree of variability into estimates of coastal cliff-top retreat using the historical record and we maintain that our results and discussion demonstrate this well when considering multidecadal timescales.
Below, we engage with your comments in more detail and introduce some additional changes we propose to improve the manuscript. Each of your comments is included (or summarized) with the following notation: and our response follows.
I wonder how it is possible to be confident that, had the earthquakes not occurred, that other mechanisms (e.g. rainfall) would not have stimulated failure (if the cliff were over-steepened by coastal erosion)? Eventually a cliff will become steep enough that it will fail, and while this may sound provocative, does it really matter, in respect to the long-term erosion rate, what the triggering event is? In other words, over a given time scale, is the fundamental pace of cliff retreat actually governed by the coastal erosion rate (i.e. the speed at which debris is removed and at which basal steepening occurs)?
The magnitude and variability of retreat at the cliff-toe was not systematically estimated in our analysis but, based on visual inspection of the imagery, we infer that the cliff-toe at Conway Flat is retreating more steadily than the cliff-top over the historical record. This leads us to believe that you are likely correct about the limited contribution of earthquakes (and other cliff-top triggers) over increasingly long timescales. To help us conceptualize your comments, we developed a hypothetical 300-year annual record of retreat for the top and toe of the Conway Flat cliffs (Figure R1 – See comment supplement) following the logic that coastal erosion from wave action defines cliff position over this longer timescale. This was simply a thought experiment – we were interested in how cliff-toe and cliff-top retreat rates could vary depending on the time interval being considered. The magnitudes of annual retreat (y-axis) in Figure R1 are also schematic but are loosely based on our observations from the historical record where large rainfall events (and other non-seismic triggers) cause infrequent cliff-top retreat of c. 1 to 2 m, earthquakes result in c. 4 m of cliff-top retreat c. every 50 years, and it takes about 10 years after a large event to clear enough debris from the beach for wave action to resume erosion of the cliff-toe.
Over long timescales (longer than the historical and multidecadal records – for example from 0 to 300 years in Figure R1), the position of the cliff-face is dictated by coastal erosion from wave action which primarily influences the toe of the cliff. The retreat rates of the cliff-top and cliff-toe are equal. Over this timescale, earthquakes and other subaerial triggers unrelated to wave action indeed have little influence on the overall position of the cliff. Over decadal and multidecadal timescales, i.e. those considered in the historical record and forecast models (for example 0 to 50 or 50 to 100 years in Figure R1), the rate of cliff-top retreat can vary substantially from retreat at the toe of the cliff. Thus over these timescales, capturing the contribution of e.g. earthquake triggering mechanisms in models becomes quite important for characterising cliff-top retreat rates.
I wonder whether the paper is weighing up the relative importance of different failure event drivers, rather than earthquakes versus coastal erosion? I think this nuance is quite important. For instance, what do you think would be the effect of several large earthquakes in quick succession? Presumably the cliffs would fail toward a stable angle and further erosion would not be unlikely without basal debris removal and oversteepening? In this case, can you be sure that the long-term cliff retreat rate would be increased?
We also agree that some removal of debris and oversteepening of the cliff face at Conway Flat is required to make the cliff-top susceptible to failure. In theory, rapidly successive earthquakes and rainfall events could outpace coastal retreat from wave action and the cliff-top could become less steep and less susceptible to failure. This process would slow cliff-top retreat and give coastal erosion from wave action at the toe the chance to ‘catch up’. This may explain the less steep cliff geometry and lower historical retreat observed south of Inverness Stream (Figure B1). However, in many cases, for example in the fan delta material north of Big Bush Gully, the time required to return the cliff-top to a susceptible geometry between large subaerial triggering events appears to be much lower than the 50-year average return interval for strong ground motion. Between 1950 and 1966 we observed c. 5 m of average retreat at Conway Flat with little evidence of this retreat present in 1966. Within c. 15 years, the cliffs at Conway Flat were once again steep and likely susceptible to further widespread failure.
It is worth mentioning that the degree to which oversteepening is required for failure is dependent on the material properties of the cliff face, the means of triggering a failure, and the failure mechanism. For example, dynamic stresses introduced during an earthquake may result in failure at a less susceptible geometry than would be required for non-seismic failure. On average, 2016 coseismic failures along the Kaikōura coast occurred on c. 40° slopes, much lower than the near vertical slopes present at Conway Flat (Bloom et al. in Review). Additionally, in some cases, failure mechanisms at Conway Flat resulted in steep headscarps that do not preclude subsequent failure at the same location over decadal timescales. Figure 6 in the manuscript shows images of a portion of the cliff face before and after the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake. The debris avalanche at this site has resulted in a steep section of cliff-top that is still highly susceptible to strong ground motion or rainfall induced failure following the 2016 earthquake.
To address your first two comments in the manuscript, we intend to add text at the end of the first paragraph in the introduction reading: “This is particularly important when considering that the cliff face may erode at different relative rates over decadal to multidecadal timescales, for example subaerial influences eroding the cliff-top faster than coastal erosion from wave action at the toe of the cliff.” Additionally, we intend to add a paragraph at the beginning of section 5.3 which reads: “Over long timescales (longer than the historical record), the rate of coastal erosion at the toe of the Conway Flat cliffs may limit the extent of cliff-top retreat and, in turn, the long-term influence of subaerial triggers like earthquakes or rainfall. This is because some oversteepening of the cliff face is likely a prerequisite for cliff-top failure (Wolters and Muller 2008). Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of dominant marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982). Over multidecadal timescales, however, the rate of cliff-top and toe retreat may vary substantially due to the greater temporal variability of subaerial triggers.”
Useful attempts to extend the work are provided in Equation 1 and the model illustrated in Fig 8. Is equation 1 assumed to be independent of the pre-existing shape of the cliff? If the cliff was already over-steepened, then the magnitude of shaking required to cause failure would be lower, correct? I found the model in Fig 8 interesting and I can see how the combination of high coastal erosion and low earthquake frequency means that earthquakes have limited influence on the retreat rate, but I'm not clear on how low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat combines in the way you allude to, because I guess I am unconvinced that feedbacks have been accounted for (e.g. high sed supply to the coast and failure toward a more stable slope).
Equation 1 is a first-order estimate and is unlikely to be very useful in cases where the cliff-top is not susceptible to earthquake induced failures (for example if the cliff-top is not very steep). We intend to revise the text on line 412 to read: “Using these three inputs, and assuming a cliff-top susceptible to failure, we can define a simple equation…”. Assuming there is a susceptible cliff-top available for failure, low coastal erosion and high earthquake retreat could result in earthquakes having a substantial influence on multidecadal cliff-top retreat. When erosion rate is integrated over longer time frames, we agree that earthquakes (and other subaerial triggers) are likely subordinate to preconditioning via wave erosion at the toe of the Conway Flat cliffs.
The introduction section is quite short. I think the potential implications of the research presented would be enhanced if the authors were to broaden the framing a little (e.g. some possible papers to consider below). However, the essential point re tectonic contributions to cliff retreat is well made in the introduction.
In looking through the citations that you include, we agree that there is some room to bolster the framing of our introduction with additional references. We intend to revise the first paragraph of the manuscript to read: “As sea level rises from climate change, regional coastal modeling suggests an increasing rate of coastal cliff retreat (e.g. FitzGerald et al., 2008; Limber et al., 2018). This will pose a significant hazard to people and property around the globe, particularly in regions that face a high risk due to population exposure (e.g. He and Beighley 2008). The response of individual coastal cliffs to sea level rise is complicated by a range of feedbacks and site specific conditions, for example changing beach volume and cliff material strength (e.g., Dickson et al., 2007; Ashton et al., 2011) as well as by the temporal variability of cliff retreat (e.g., Hall et al., 2002; Hapke and Plant 2010). Many decadal to multidecadal models of coastal cliff retreat rely heavily on historical records and legacy aerial imagery (typically less than 50-100 years) for calibration, in part to capture some of this spatial and temporal variability (e.g. Dickson et al., 2007; Young et al., 2014; Limber et al., 2018). Unfortunately, direct evidence of past coastal failures is rarely preserved in the active coastal environment (Francioni et al., 2018) making it difficult to confirm that the historical record is representative of all possible preconditioning and triggering mechanisms for coastal cliff collapse. This is particularly important when considering that the cliff face may erode at different relative rates over decadal to multidecadal timescales, for example subaerial influences eroding the cliff-top faster than coastal erosion from wave action at the toe of the cliff.”
70 - label Conway Flat on Fig 1
This will be added in the revised manuscript.
box label the position of Fig 2 on Fig 1
The blue outline currently included and labeled in Figure 1 is the position of Figure 2.
108 - wording "have had limited to no anthropogenic modification"
Commas will be added here to read: “…have had limited, to no, anthropogenic modification…”
The background section is lacking detail on uplift (if any) within the study site? This is important in relation to the level of wave action in relation to the cliff toe. Can some detail be added in this regard.
Lines 129 to 133 discuss coastal uplift in the Kaikōura region. Unfortunately, we have few constraints on the actual uplift at Conway Flat. We will add a sentence to the end of this paragraph reading: “Specific estimates of tectonic uplift at Conway Flat are currently unavailable.” In order to make the importance of uplift clear we will also add the following sentence to the discussion in section 5.1: “While site specific estimates are currently unavailable, tectonic uplift rate may additionally influence wave action in relation to the toe of the cliffs at Conway Flat (e.g., Horton et al., 2022).”
3.1 and Appendix A - can you provide a little more detail in regard to the appropriateness of using the 2017 DSM for historic photographs? As you demonstrate in the paper, there is significant erosion and landsliding between epochs, but it's not possible to have a DSM for each time period in the historic photograph record - to what extent is this accounted for in the uncertainty estimation?
We reference all images horizontally to 2017 aerial imagery and vertically to a DEM generated from the 2017 aerial imagery. While we could have used any of the aerial images as a base for our referencing, the 2017 aerial imagery was chosen based the quality and extent of the dataset (this will be noted in Appendix A). As currently discussed in Appendix A starting at line 505, georeferencing uncertainty was considered based on the residuals between control points in each image and the 2017 imagery. Because each image is referenced to the 2017 image we can include a consistent estimate of georeferencing uncertainty at these control points (typically fence lines, building corners, and stock ponds) which were assumed to be relatively unchanged between image epochs. As you point out, erosion and landsliding between epochs makes it difficult to estimate uncertainty directly along the coastline. Instead we interpolate between our unchanged control points to generate a unique estimate of georeferencing uncertainty for each measurement along the cliff-top.
175 - does the presence of dense vegetation preclude the possibility of cliff retreat - in other words, how were you confident there was no cliff retreat if you couldn't see the cliff because of dense vegetation? "where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no cliff retreat had occurred"
No, the presence of dense vegetation across all epochs does not completely preclude the possibility of cliff retreat but it does suggest that cliff retreat was limited. In most cases where we observed a loss of dense native vegetation due to failure of the cliff-top, some evidence of this failure remained present across the following image epochs. We believe that it is unlikely that significant cliff-top failure could occur and be completely re-obscured over the limited time between our imagery. We intend to revise line 175 to read “…where dense vegetation was present across all epochs of imagery and we were confident that no significant cliff retreat had occurred…”
245 - can you be a little clearer with your wording regarding failure/no failure of the Greta Formation? Can you provide some numeric stats on how much of this section failed? This would be useful as a lot of the literature on soft-rock coasts deals with consolidated fine-grained rock as distinct to the (unconsolidated?) overlying delta deposits.
Most failures from the 2016 earthquake occur within overlying unconsolidated fan delta deposits. We only observe a few areas where there is clear evidence of failure within the Greta Formation. Quantifying this regionally is quite challenging and, while we agree that it is worthwhile thinking about the relative contributions of the Greta Formation to cliff retreat at Conway Flat, we believe providing these statistics is largely beyond the scope of the current manuscript. We intend to add the following text on line 249: "Further site-site specific investigation, largely beyond the scope of this work, would be required to further elucidate the relative contribution of the Greta Formation to failures at Conway Flat.”
260 - the Medina fan deposit is 'more consolidated' - more than the Dawn fan delta deposits? Is there a way to characterise the degree of consolidation of these different deposits? It would be useful to put these erosion rates into context of other cliff erosion rates reported iternationally. You state that these more consolidated cliffs have eroded less - do you ascribe this to their degree of consolidation?
To first order, yes, we infer that the consolidation of the Median fan deposit may have resulted in less erosion than the Dawn fan delta deposit. As in the comment above, additional geotechnical investigation would be required to quantitatively define the consolidation or void ratio of the various fan delta deposits at Conway Flat and directly relate erosion rate to material properties.
325 - I find this statement confusing: "it does appear that more indurated material (with assumed higher shear strength) in the lower cliff face may buffer the upper cliff face from wave action effectively reducing the background rate of cliff-top retreat (Emery and Kuhn 1982)". Are you trying to say that the presence of more resistant prevents over-steepening of the cliff face, and that this then manifests in slower cliff-top erosion rates? Can you provide some cliff-profile sections? These will presumably show that where the mudstone occurs the lower cliff is steeper (because of harder rock), in comparison to the sections where the fan deposits extend to the cliff toe. I think these profiles would help support the argument you are developing here.
We are inferring that, in some sections of the Conway Flat coast, lower historical cliff-top retreat could be a result of more resistant geology at the toe of the cliff that prevents undercutting of the upper cliff by wave action (we will replace ‘background retreat’ with ‘non-seismic retreat’). Over multidecadal timescales this may result in subaerial triggers like earthquakes playing a more important role in cliff-top retreat than wave action. As described in a previous comment, when cliff-top retreat outpaces retreat at the toe of the cliff, the steepness of the cliff-top can reduce, effectively slowing cliff-top retreat but this is not always the case at Conway Flat. Figure R2 (see response supplement) provides comparative profiles demonstrating this. In profile A to A’ in Figure R2 the cliff-top is influenced by both wave action at the toe of the slope (pre-2016) and subaerial triggers at the top of the slope. Alternatively in profile B to B’, terracing occurs with Greta formation buffering cliff-top retreat from undercutting by wave action prior to the 2016 earthquake. Despite this, the upper cliff face remained susceptible to subaerial triggers and failed during the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake.
We believe that additional site specific investigation into geologic controls on cliff retreat at Conway Flat would be required to make more robust claims but we are happy to include Figure R2 alongside Figure B1 in the appendix of the revised manuscript.
5.2 - the section on sediment loss from the cliff-toe alludes to storms, and these may well be important, but variability in longshore sediment transport processes could drive much of the natural variability in beach volume - there is an extensive literature related to this. Is there any evidence to suggest that the 1960 tsunami runup resulted in significant sediment transport on beaches in NZ - not that I am aware of? On line 381 you more directly suggest that tsunami debris removal has occurred, but I don't think there is evidence of this?
This is a valid point and we will modify the text on lines 344 to 345 to read “The extent to which storm surge, from events like Ex-tropical cyclone Gita (Figure 7), and variability in longshore sediment transport (Larson and Kraus, 1993; Dickson et al., 2007; Karunarathna et al., 2014) influence the removal of failed debris at Conway Flat remains largely unclear…” Additionally, we do not have direct evidence of sediment transport from the 1960 tsunami runup at Conway Flat but we cannot completely rule this out. We will modify the text on line 381 to read “… that may have enhanced…”
360 - "Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of a combination of subaerial and marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982)." Here Emery and Kuhn are implying a dominance of marine over subaerial processes.
We will modify the text on line 381 to read: “Prior to 2016, most of the cliff face at Conway Flat was near vertical in many places (Figure 5), an indication of dominant marine erosion (Emery and Kuhn 1982).”
379 - "Assuming little change in the background rate of coastal erosion between time windows" - here I think you are referring to the removal of basal debris, rather than cliff-toe steepening? Would it be useful for you to refer to beach erosion and cliff-toe erosion to distinguish what you are referring to when you say "coastal erosion"?
We agree that our use of terminology could introduce some confusion here. We will modify the text on line 379 to read: “Assuming little change in the rate of beach erosion between time windows…”
-
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Colin Bloom, 24 Sep 2022
-
RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-643', Colin V. Murray-Wallace, 28 Dec 2022
This is a very interesting manuscript on the nuanced issue to quantifying historical records of coastal cliff retreat based on an example from the Conway Flat area on the South Island of New Zealand. The manuscript is well-written and addresses many of the conceptual and methodological issues of quantifying coastal cliff retreat from time-series images.
For people unfamiliar with the area, it would be nice to have a few photographs illustrating the general nature of the coastal cliffs. This would help in part to understand the physical nature of the cliffs and for the reader to infer potential coastal processes responsible for the changing form of the cliffs through time. This would be good particularly for people unfamiliar with this coastal sector.
The manuscript could potentially be strengthened by some description and discussion of the inherent structural integrity of the lithological units on which the cliffs have developed. Apart from the deltaic succesions, can some commentary be made about the other bedrock units in terms of the broad, regional-scale structural characteristics such as fault , joint or cleavage density and trends? Some discussion on whether some lithologies breakup in a predictable manner or in a more random fashion? - Unilinear or non-linear response to strain irrespective to earthquakes?
Perhaps modify Section header 5.1 as 'Geology' is a discipline rather than a descriptor of bedrock characteristics or lithologies.
I wondered if some commentary can be made where the sediment ends up post cliff collapse? It may be useful to have some commentary on this matter. Does the sediment end up on the continental shelf below storm weather wave base, or is it in part, transported along shore? If the latter, does beach nourishment protect the backing cliffs in some localities.
I also wondered if it is appropriate to have some commentary on the general aspect of the coastline at a more detailed level to consider contrasting wave attack and erosion? Are some sectors of the coastline more prone to erosion, therefore increasing the likelihood of coastal retreat irrespective of the influence of earthquakes?
Line 393 - can some supporting information be provided about the validity of the estimate of long-term cliff-top retreat?
Line 406 '... compared with retreat ...'
Indicate place name 'Conway Flat' on Figure 1.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Colin Bloom, 02 Feb 2023
Dear Professor Murray-Wallace,
Thank you for your constructive comments. We have responded to your suggestions below (our responses are in italics), and we have made some additional changes to the manuscript.
This is a very interesting manuscript on the nuanced issue to quantifying historical records of coastal cliff retreat based on an example from the Conway Flat area on the South Island of New Zealand. The manuscript is well-written and addresses many of the conceptual and methodological issues of quantifying coastal cliff retreat from time-series images.
For people unfamiliar with the area, it would be nice to have a few photographs illustrating the general nature of the coastal cliffs. This would help in part to understand the physical nature of the cliffs and for the reader to infer potential coastal processes responsible for the changing form of the cliffs through time. This would be good particularly for people unfamiliar with this coastal sector.
We agree that additional photos may add value for some readers and have included a selection of photos in Appendix C. Figure 6 in the manuscript includes before and after photos from the 2016 Kaikōura earthquake that should allow more expeditious readers to evaluate the nature of the Conway Flat cliffs.
The manuscript could potentially be strengthened by some description and discussion of the inherent structural integrity of the lithological units on which the cliffs have developed. Apart from the deltaic succesions, can some commentary be made about the other bedrock units in terms of the broad, regional-scale structural characteristics such as fault , joint or cleavage density and trends? Some discussion on whether some lithologies breakup in a predictable manner or in a more random fashion? - Unilinear or non-linear response to strain irrespective to earthquakes?
Some additional information on the underlying Greta formation bedrock will be added to the manuscript in section 2.2: “At Conway Flat, situated between the Conway and Waiau river mouths (Figure 2), weak Neogene Greta Formation mudstone (Uniaxial Compressive Strength <2 MPa) with massive near horizontal bedding (Rattenbury et al., 2006; Massey et al., 2018) is overlain by…” and section 5.1 as follows: “In the Kaikōura region and across New Zealand, failures in tertiary sediment including the Greta Formation mudstone tend to occur as large planar slides often failing along preferentially oriented bedding planes (Pettinga, 1987; Mountjoy and Pettinga, 2006; Singeisen et al., 2022) or as shallow debris avalanches in more weathered sections of the rock mass (Massey et al., 2018). We do not observe evidence of planar sliding at Conway Flat over the historical record and most retreat of the underlying Greta formation appears to result from shallow debris avalanching, observed in some aerial imagery, alongside more gradual erosion due to wave action.”
Perhaps modify Section header 5.1 as 'Geology' is a discipline rather than a descriptor of bedrock characteristics or lithologies.
We will modify the Section 5.1 header to read: “Cliff Retreat and Lithology”
I wondered if some commentary can be made where the sediment ends up post cliff collapse? It may be useful to have some commentary on this matter. Does the sediment end up on the continental shelf below storm weather wave base, or is it in part, transported along shore? If the latter, does beach nourishment protect the backing cliffs in some localities.
The nature of sediment transport at Conway Flat is an interesting question with no clear answer given our current analysis. Targeted field and remote sensing investigation, largely beyond the scope of this work, would likely be required to robustly evaluate sediment transport along the Conway coast. This being said, we do believe that this is an important topic to acknowledge, and we will add the following text in Sections 1 and 5.2 respectively:
“The response of individual coastal cliffs to sea level rise is complicated by a range of feedbacks and site specific conditions, for example changing beach volume, the transport of failed material from more erosive sections of coastline, and cliff material strength (e.g., Dickson et al., 2007; Ashton et al., 2011) as well as by the temporal variability of cliff retreat (e.g., Hall et al., 2002; Hapke and Plant 2010).”
“The extent to which storm surge from events like Ex-tropical cyclone Gita (Figure 7) and variability in longshore sediment transport (Larson and Kraus, 1993; Dickson et al., 2007; Karunarathna et al., 2014) influence the removal of failed debris at Conway Flat remains largely unclear due to our limited number of image epochs…”.
I also wondered if it is appropriate to have some commentary on the general aspect of the coastline at a more detailed level to consider contrasting wave attack and erosion? Are some sectors of the coastline more prone to erosion, therefore increasing the likelihood of coastal retreat irrespective of the influence of earthquakes?
Aspect of the coastal cliffs at Conway Flat likely has some influence on wave attack and erosion. In concert with variability in lithology, this may help to explain some local variability in retreat rate but does little to explain widespread retreat observed following earthquake events. We will add the following text in Section 5.1. as follows: “Likewise, local aspect of the cliff face in relation to variable incoming wave direction may influence the rate of cliff retreat but information on changes in wave direction through time are unavailable.”
Line 393 - can some supporting information be provided about the validity of the estimate of long-term cliff-top retreat?
As discussed in more detail in our response to Reviewer 1, we will change ‘long-term’ to ‘multidecadal’ throughout the manuscript as this better represents the timescales over which cliff-top retreat may vary from overall cliff position. Given the average return interval of shaking at Conway Flat (c. 50 years), including retreat from two earthquakes is unlikely to be representative of true multidecadal retreat.
Line 406 '... compared with retreat ...'
We will revise this statement accordingly.
Indicate place name 'Conway Flat' on Figure 1.
A label will be added.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-643-AC2
-
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Colin Bloom, 02 Feb 2023
Peer review completion
Journal article(s) based on this preprint
Viewed
| HTML | XML | Total | Supplement | BibTeX | EndNote | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 466 | 155 | 17 | 638 | 37 | 7 | 6 |
- HTML: 466
- PDF: 155
- XML: 17
- Total: 638
- Supplement: 37
- BibTeX: 7
- EndNote: 6
Viewed (geographical distribution)
| Country | # | Views | % |
|---|
| Total: | 0 |
| HTML: | 0 |
| PDF: | 0 |
| XML: | 0 |
- 1
Colin K. Bloom
Corinne Singeisen
Timothy Stahl
Andrew Howell
Chris Massey
The requested preprint has a corresponding peer-reviewed final revised paper. You are encouraged to refer to the final revised version.
- Preprint
(9964 KB) - Metadata XML
-
Supplement
(16 KB) - BibTeX
- EndNote
- Final revised paper