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Measurement Report: Seasonal trends and chemical speciation of chromium (III/VI) in different fractions of urban particulate matter – a case study of Radom, Poland
Abstract. The paper assesses chromium occurrence in urban particulate matter: PM10, PM2.5, PM1, and PM0.25 over a calendar year is presented. The seasonality of both pseudo-total chromium content and its valence speciation are studied. The pseudo-total chromium concentration (Crtot) was assayed with GF-AAS and of Cr(VI) with CCSV-DTPA techniques. Crtot concentrations in the particulate matter fractions investigated ranged from 0.08 to 4.09 ng/m3. The results point to a seasonality of Crtot concentration changes in particulate matter. The concentration was maximum in winter (2.23±0.53 ng/m3 on average), while Crtot in PM10 averaged 1.71±0.83 ng/m3 in the whole measurement period. The average Cr(VI) concentration does not exceed 0.40 ng/m3 and was maximum in winter, too (max. 1.354 ng/m3). The Cr(VI) share in PM in the particular seasons varied a lot. It was minimum in summer (9.1 % of Crtot) and maximum in winter (40 % of Crtot). The carcinogenic risk for the urban residents based on the Cr(VI) concentration in PM10 was within the acceptable range (between 1·10−6 and 1·10−4) and amounted to between 1.11·10-6 and 5.78·10-6 for children and from 3.69·10-6 to 1.92·10-5 for adults. The non-carcinogenic health risk caused by the presence of Crtot was acceptable as well. The HQ values for both adults and children were lower than the safe level of 1 and ranged from 1.57·10-2 to 3.92·10-2.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-541', Anonymous Referee #1, 17 Apr 2025
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General Comments:
This manuscript presents measurements of chromium of two oxidation states found in size-resolved particulate matter samples. The measurements spanned ~14 months, enabling assessment of seasonality. The authors include estimates of health risks due to exposure to particulate-bound chromium as well.
The data set is novel and offers further insight into seasonality and exposure of hexavalent chromium in the atmosphere. The scientific method appears robust but the authors should provide further information on analytical methods used (detailed below). I appreciated that the authors published their entire data set in the Supplement for transparency.
In general, the language throughout the text could be improved by replacing general statements with specific numbers from the study; this is described in more detail in Specific Comments below. Also, please note that the particulate matter sizes should be written as subscripts: e.g., PM10, PM2.5, PM1, PM0.25.
Specific Comments:
Abstract
Line 15: The language “The concentration was maximum in winter” is vague. Please specify which measurement (PM10? Crtot?) you are referring to.
Line 18: “varied a lot” needs to be replaced with specific numbers. I suggest combining with the following sentence that contains details.
Lines 19 – 21: Consider removing the term “acceptable risk” and replacing its use with specific estimates of risk or HQ.
Introduction
Line 29: The term “agglomeration” does not have a clear meaning here. Change to “regional” or similar.
Line 44: This sentence implies the toxic compounds are not necessarily within the particulate matter. Consider changing to clarify that PM is comprised of organic and inorganic compounds, some of which are toxic.
Line 48: Change “harmfulness” to “toxicity” for clarification.
Lines 50 – 52: This is the introduction of chromium to readers. Move these sentences to appear before the sentence starting with “Epidemiological” on line 46. Some rewording may be useful to aid in flow after making this change.
Line 57: Provide a reference to justify the claim of the natural range of chromium in ambient PM.
Line 74: For both instances, change “the risk comes” to “the risk that comes”.
Lines 75 – 76: Consider changing “chromium environment pollution is” to “atmospheric chromium levels are”.
Experimental
Line 88: Please add a sentence after this one that clearly defines the “heating campaign” and the range of dates you consider to be under within this subset of your measurements. When reading through the text, it appears that this is synonymous with the winter season? If so, I would recommend only referring to the winter season instead of the heating campaign.
Lines 88 – 90: Please provide summary statistics from the nearest available weather station of temperature and humidity. Precipitation and wind data would be useful as well.
Line 94: Provide the standard deviation of sampling times after reporting the average sample time.
Line 100: Change “particular” to “specific”.
Line 103: This is the first instance of the term “GF-AAS”, write out the entire name of the analytical method.
Line 111: Write out the entire term for “LOD” on first use.
Line 114: You mention the Cr recovery rate. Did you use this number to correct the results from your analysis to infer measured Cr loadings on your samples?
Line 134: The dash used before the recovery percentage could imply a negative recovery to readers. Change the dash to “of” for clarity. Also, did you use this number to correct the results from your analysis to infer measured Cr(VI) loadings on your samples?
Results
Line 140: Change “fraction” to “concentration” as this is referring to the total PM10 values.
Line 151: EU limit for annual PM2.5 should be 20 ug/m3.
Line 159: The parenthetical “(by an average of 12%)” is not clear what numbers you are comparing. Is this comparing the average decline of measured PM between autumn and winter? This may get clarified by defining the dates of the “heating campaign” as mentioned above.
Line 172: Consider changing “quite widely” to a more specific “by 50x”.
Lines 174 – 178: Are there any references you can provide on Poland’s efforts in the last 15 years towards reducing PM or chromium concentrations? New emissions standards or fuel standards would be helpful to the reader to understand the substantial decrease in ambient chromium levels.
Line 184: The parenthetical “(like in the case of particulate matter)” is not clear. Please report the mass fraction of PM10 found in PM2.5 here, and refer readers to Table 1.
Lines 184 – 185: This is too broad a claim to be supported by the data presented here. Change the phrasing to “are likely major influences on the measured chromium concentrations” or remove entirely.
Line 186: Total Cr concentrations were lower than what? If PM10, PM2.5 concentrations should always be lower than PM10 as they are a subset.
Line 188: Delete “during the whole measurement time” as no references were provided for studies overlapping with your reported sample dates.
Line 205: Consider changing “carcinogenic factor” to “carcinogen”.
Line 212: It would be helpful to provide an order of magnitude of the distance between the sampling site and the industrial sources mentioned.
Line 218: The Wang et al. reference specifies which PM size fraction is reported. It would be helpful to add these to the other references presented in this sentence.
Line 220: Consider changing “was PM2.5” to “was found in PM2.5”.
Line 223 (Figure 2): The y-axis values have too many significant digits. Remove the trailing 3 zeroes from each tick label for clarity (e.g., change “1.2000” to “1.2”).
Lines 271 – 272: The statement that a risk above 1 per 10,000 means the atmospheric Cr(VI) is “very likely to develop cancer” is misleading. Use similar phrasing to the language in the next sentence on HQ: A risk above 1 per 10,000 poses significant risk while risk below 1 per 10,000 does not pose significant risk.
Line 275: Change “Cr” to “Cr(VI)".
Lines 278 – 281: I would again caution the use of the term “acceptable” and suggest you simply compare to the stated values from the US EPA (i.e., carcinogenic risk from particle-bound Cr(VI) was below the US EPA threshold for significant risk.).
Line 279: Consider adding a sentence that states while cancer risks for children were generally low, they can be misleading as exposure during development can lead to outsized impacts in adulthood.
Line 284: Change the phrase “posed no threat” to “posed little risk” to reflect risks were low but not zero.
Line 286: Same comment as line 284: change “no non-carcinogenic risk” to “little non-carcinogenic risk”.
Conclusion
Line 291: Same comment as Line 151: EU limit for annual PM2.5 should be 20 ug/m3.
Line 302: The phrase “gravest” does not match the sentiment that it posed little to no risk. Change to “highest”.
Technical Corrections:
Introduction
Line 26: Include the text “(PM)” after first mention of particulate matter in the main text.
Line 33: Delete “The” from “The particulate matter”.
Line 61: Concentration of Cr(VI) needs to have “m3” with appropriate superscript.
Line 62: “According" is misspelled as “Acoording".
Line 70: “Cr (III/VI)” has a space between element and oxidation state. Delete to keep consistency throughout the text.
Experimental
Line 104: Change “A quarter deposited filter” to “A quarter of the deposited filter”.
Line 107: Change “we filtered the solutions” to “the solutions were filtered” to keep a consistent passive voice throughout the text.
Results
Line 141: Change “matters” to “matter”.
Line 142: “on average )” has an unnecessary space before the closing parenthesis.
Line 184: The parenthetical “(like in the case of particulate matter) .” has an extraneous space at the end of the sentence.
Line 191: “Theconcentrations” is missing a space.
Line 194: “particular” should be “particulate matter”.
Line 229: The last ratio here is duplicated “1:100,000”. Is this supposed to be “1:1,000,000”?
Line 247: Delete the word “particles” as it is redundant.
Line 256: Change the sentence starting with “We estimated the health risk” to “The health risk of respiratory exposure to chromium was estimated in the airborne particulate matter investigated” to keep a consistent passive voice throughout the text.
Line 277: “Cr(VI)concentration” is missing a space.
Conclusion
Line 299: “transitive metals” should be “transition metals”.
Line 300: Delete the phrase “particulate matter” as it is redundant.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-541-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Monika Łożyńska, 29 Apr 2025
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Thank you very much for the suggestions and comments contained in the review. All suggested changes have been included in the manuscript. Answers to the comments are presented below:
Specific Comments:
Abstract
- Line 15: The language “The concentration was maximum in winter” is vague. Please specify which measurement (PM10? Crtot?) you are referring to.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: The concentration Crtot in PM10 was maximum in winter (2.23±0.53 ng/m3 on average), and averaged 1.71±0.83 ng/m3 in the whole measurement period.
- Line 18: “varied a lot” needs to be replaced with specific numbers. I suggest combining with the following sentence that contains details.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentences have been corrected. Current version: The Cr(VI) share in PM in the particular seasons varied a lot, minimum in summer (9.1% of Crtot) and a maximum in winter (40% of Crtot).
- Lines 19 – 21: Consider removing the term “acceptable risk” and replacing its use with specific estimates of risk or HQ.
Authors' response:
The authors agree with the reviewer's suggestion. The sentence has been reworded. Current version: The carcinogenic risk for the urban residents based on the Cr(VI) concentration in PM10 was below the US EPA threshold for significant risk (between 1·10−6 and 1·10−4) and amounted to between 1.11·10-6 and 5.78·10-6 for children and from 3.69·10-6 to 1.92·10-5 for adults. The non-carcinogenic health risk caused by the presence of Crtot was also lower than the safe level of 1 - the HQ values for both adults and children ranged from 1.32·10-2 to 3.92·10-2.
Introduction
- Line 29: The term “agglomeration” does not have a clear meaning here. Change to “regional” or similar.
Authors' response:
At the reviewer's suggestion, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Knowledge of the composition, concentration, and sources of particulate matter suspended in the air is of great importance to residents of urban-industrial areas, since breathing these particles can increase mortality or morbidity due to respiratory and pulmonary conditions.
- Line 44: This sentence implies the toxic compounds are not necessarily within the particulate matter. Consider changing to clarify that PM is comprised of organic and inorganic compounds, some of which are toxic.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Various organic and inorganic compounds are also transported together with the particulate matter, some of which are toxic.
- Line 48: Change “harmfulness” to “toxicity” for clarification.
Authors' response:
At the reviewer's suggestion, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Chromium air presence has been studied a lot, given its toxicity.
- Lines 50 – 52: This is the introduction of chromium to readers. Move these sentences to appear before the sentence starting with “Epidemiological” on line 46. Some rewording may be useful to aid in flow after making this change.
Authors' response:
At the reviewer's suggestion, the paragraph has been reworded. Current version: Various organic and inorganic compounds are also transported together with the particulate matter, some of which are toxic. Special attention is paid to heavy metals (Wagner et al., 2008; Pan et al., 2015; Samara et al., 2016) that may contribute to oxidative DNA damage and cause carcinogenic lesions in effect (Somers, 2011; IARC, 2012; Arhami et al., 2017). Chromium occurs in the air in two valence states: Cr(III) and Cr(VI), greatly varying in their physical and chemical properties and toxicity. Chromium(III) is a microelement necessary for living organisms, whereas chromium(VI) is toxic and classified as a carcinogen (Katz, 1991; Barceloux, 1999; Kotaś and Stasicka, 2000). Epidemiological research has shown a close connection between chromium(VI) exposure and lung cancer (IARC, 2012). Chromium air presence has been studied a lot given its toxicity (Nriagu and Nieboer, 1988; Nusko and Heumann, 1997; Świetlik et al., 2011; Tirez et al., 2011; Torkmahalleh et al., 2013; Huang et al., 2014a, 2014b; Kang et al., 2016; Widziewicz et al., 2016; Molik et al., 2018; Nocoń et al., 2018).
- Line 57: Provide a reference to justify the claim of the natural range of chromium in ambient PM.
Authors' response:
At the reviewer's suggestion, a reference has been added. Current version: The natural air content of Crtot is estimated to range from 0.1 ng/m3 to 1 ng/m3 (Nriagu et al., 1988).
- Line 74: For both instances, change “the risk comes” to “the risk that comes”.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Our current study is designed to: (I) assess chromium occurrence and speciation in urban particulate matter fractions of varied particle sizes (PM10, PM2.5, PM1, PM0.25); (II) examine the fluctuations and seasonality of Cr concentrations over one year, and (III) estimate health risk caused by inhalation exposure to airborne Cr in two different exposure schemes: 1) the risk that comes from the Crtot ambient concentrations; 2) the risk that comes exclusively from Cr(VI) species.
- Lines 75 – 76: Consider changing “chromium environment pollution is” to “atmospheric chromium levels are”.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Radom is an interesting location for such research, as the atmospheric chromium levels are a result not only of an aged urban structure relying on private hard coal heating, considerable road transit, and the operation of multiple metal working factories, but also tanneries clustered in the region for more than 70 years.
Experimental
- Line 88: Please add a sentence after this one that clearly defines the “heating campaign” and the range of dates you consider to be under within this subset of your measurements. When reading through the text, it appears that this is synonymous with the winter season? If so, I would recommend only referring to the winter season instead of the heating campaign.
Authors' response:
'Winter season' and 'heating campaign' were treated as synonyms by the authors. The authors agree with the reviewer's suggestion. With this in mind, the entire manuscript has been edited.
- Lines 88 – 90: Please provide summary statistics from the nearest available weather station of temperature and humidity. Precipitation and wind data would be useful as well.
Authors' response:
Thank you for your comment. Averaged weather conditions for each weekly sampling cycle are presented in Table S2 (Supplementary Material), which has been added to the article. All changes resulting from the addition of the table have been made throughout the article. This table is also an appendix to the "Reply to RC1".
- Line 94: Provide the standard deviation of sampling times after reporting the average sample time.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the standard deviation of sampling times has been added. Current version: The sampling time averaged 70 h ± 4 h.
- Line 100: Change “particular” to “specific”.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: The concentrations of the specific particulate matter fractions were calculated by dividing the difference between filter weight prior to and following the exposure by the mean air flow at the time of atmospheric aerosol sampling.
- Line 103: This is the first instance of the term “GF-AAS”, write out the entire name of the analytical method.
Authors' response:
As the reviewer suggested, the abbreviation “GF-AAS” was developed. Current version: In order to assay Crtot by means of graphite furnace atomic absorption spectrometry (GF-AAS), the particulate matter samples collected on filters were mineralised using microwave energy.
- Line 111: Write out the entire term for “LOD” on first use.
Authors' response:
At the reviewer's suggestion, the LOD acronym has been expanded. Current version: Limit of detection (LOD) (instrumental) was found to be 0.2 μg/L of Cr or 0.03 ng/m3 expressed as the concentration of Cr in the air.
- Line 114: You mention the Cr recovery rate. Did you use this number to correct the results from your analysis to infer measured Cr loadings on your samples?
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- Line 134: The dash used before the recovery percentage could imply a negative recovery to readers. Change the dash to “of” for clarity. Also, did you use this number to correct the results from your analysis to infer measured Cr(VI) loadings on your samples?
Authors' response:
Thank you for your comment. The hyphen has of course been replaced by "of". Regarding "recovery value", the use of recovery information in analytical measurements is often optional. In our case, we were guided by the suitability of the measurement data for the specific purpose. We decided to use the original data in the manuscript because the recovery is high enough (Cr - 95.2% and Cr(VI) - 99.3%) and our results are not related to the enforcement analysis (the difference between applying or not applying a correction factor to the measurement data does not mean that a legal limit is exceeded or that a result is in compliance with the limit).
Results
- Line 140: Change “fraction” to “concentration” as this is referring to the total PM10
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: In Radom, the PM10 concentration ranged widely from 5.2 to 68.2 µg/m3 (40±17 µg/m3 on average).
- Line 151: EU limit for annual PM5should be 20 ug/m3.
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- Line 291: Same comment as Line 151: EU limit for annual PM5should be 20 ug/m3.
Authors' response:
Thank you for your comment. The currently applicable annual limit for PM2.5 concentration in the European Union is 25 µg/m3. This value was established by Directive 2008/50. According to the new EU Directive 2024/2881, adopted in December 2024, the limit value has been maintained at the same level as the value to be achieved by 11 December 2026. However, from 2030, the limit value will be 10 µg/m3.
Under Directive 2008/50, the 20 µg/m3 value for PM2.5 was considered as Stage 2 of the limit for the Average Exposure Indicator (AEI), with a planned attainment date of January 1, 2020. However, this stage was indicative and subject to a review by the European Commission, considering new information on health and environmental effects, technical feasibility, and Member States' experience in implementing air quality objectives. In practice, the 20 μg/m3 value has not been formally implemented as a binding legal limit in EU Member States.
- Line 159: The parenthetical “(by an average of 12%)” is not clear what numbers you are comparing. Is this comparing the average decline of measured PM between autumn and winter? This may get clarified by defining the dates of the “heating campaign” as mentioned above.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been edited. Current version: During the winter season, the concentrations of each fraction were nearly double those in summer. In the autumn, however, slightly greater concentrations of PM10, PM2.5 and PM1 were recorded compared to the winter season (on average by 12%). Only PM0.25 concentrations were steady in autumn and winter and stood at 15.9±5.5 µg/m3 and 15.8±6.0 µg/m3, respectively (Table 1).
- Line 172: Consider changing “quite widely” to a more specific “by 50x”.
Authors' response:
Thank you for your comment. The authors decided to remove the phrase 'quite widely'. Current version: Crtot concentrations in the particulate matter fractions studied ranged from 0.08 to 4.09 ng/m3.
- Lines 174 – 178: Are there any references you can provide on Poland’s efforts in the last 15 years towards reducing PM or chromium concentrations? New emissions standards or fuel standards would be helpful to the reader to understand the substantial decrease in ambient chromium levels.
Authors' response:
Thank you for your comment. Appropriate references have been added. Current version: The continuing modernization of the energy, heating, and industrial sectors - such as the EU Clean Air Program (since 2018) and provincial anti-smog resolutions (since 2017) - along with improved fuel quality regulations (established by the Minister of Industry and the Minister of Climate and Environment regarding the quality of solid fuels since 2018), has led to a consistent reduction in the amount of particulate matter pollution emitted into the air each year [EU Clean Air Program, 2024; Regulation of the Minister of Industry and the Minister of Climate and Environment, 2024].
- Line 184: The parenthetical “(like in the case of particulate matter)” is not clear. Please report the mass fraction of PM10found in PM5 here, and refer readers to Table 1.
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- Lines 184 – 185: This is too broad a claim to be supported by the data presented here. Change the phrasing to “are likely major influences on the measured chromium concentrations” or remove entirely.
Authors' response:
The authors agree with the reviewer's suggestions, and the sentences have been corrected. Current version: The maximum Crtot concentration relating to PM10 was found in winter (2.23±0.53 ng/m3 on average), whereas it averaged 1.71±0.83 ng/m3 in the entire measurement period. The PM2.5 fraction contains approximately 80% of the total chromium content. A similar correlation was observed for the PM concentration in the winter season, where 86% of PM10 was the PM2.5 fraction (Table 1). Municipal emissions, primarily stationary coal burning sources, and road traffic can be assumed to are probably the main factors influencing the measured chromium concentrations.
- Line 186: Total Cr concentrations were lower than what? If PM10, PM5concentrations should always be lower than PM10 as they are a subset.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Crtot concentrations in PM2.5, PM1 and PM0.25 were: 1.38±0.69 ng/m3, 1.06±0.55 ng/m3, 0.61±0.39 ng/m3, respectively (Table S2).
- Line 188: Delete “during the whole measurement time” as no references were provided for studies overlapping with your reported sample dates.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the phrase “during the whole measurement time” has been removed. Current version: The mean chromium concentrations relating to PM2.5 in Radom were similar to those determined in other cities in Poland and globally: Zabrze 1.7±1.9 ng/m3 (Rogula-Kozłowska et al. 2013a); Warsaw 1.2±1.4 ng/m3 (Majewski and Rogula-Kozłowska, 2016); Wrocław 1.6±0.8 ng/m3 (Zwoździak et al., 2013); Łódź 2.82±0.34 ng/m3 (PM3, Krzemińska-Flowers et al., 2006); Budapest (Hungary) 1.4 ng/m3, Istanbul (Turkey) 2.8 ng/m3 (Szigeti et al., 2013); Rome (Italy) 3.72 ng/m3 (Canepari et al., 2009).
- Line 205: Consider changing “carcinogenic factor” to “carcinogen”.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been edited. Current version: Chromium speciation was also assayed in all the fractions of airborne particulate matter. Cr(VI), as a particularly harmful metal, is classified by the International Agency for Research on Cancer (IARC) as a Group 1 carcinogen (IARC, 2023).
- Line 212: It would be helpful to provide an order of magnitude of the distance between the sampling site and the industrial sources mentioned.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the distance between the sampling site and the industrial sources has been added. Current version: Cr(VI) presence in Radom’s airborne aerosol may be chiefly a result of municipal (fuel burning in heating plants and household furnaces) and road traffic emissions. Industrial emissions are of lesser importance as the industrial sources are located far away from the sampling points (about 8-10 km).
- Line 218: The Wang et al. reference specifies which PM size fraction is reported. It would be helpful to add these to the other references presented in this sentence.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the size fractions of PM have been added to the remaining literature references. Current version: Similar Cr(VI) concentrations in airborne particulate matter are reported by other authors: Wilmington (USA) 0.5-1.0 ng/m3 (PM2.5) (Khlystov and Ma, 2006), New Jersey (USA) 0.86-1.56 ng/m3 (PM10) (Huang et al., 2014b), Beijing (China) 0.006–0.266 ng/m3 (PM2.5) (Wang et. al., 2023), although higher concentrations are also found, e.g., the Flemish region (Belgium) 1.2–5.2 ng/m3 (PM10) (Tirez et al., 2011).
- Line 220: Consider changing “was PM5” to “was found in PM2.5”.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: Our investigation has shown 78-90% of total Cr(VI) content (depending on the season) was found in PM2.5 (83% on average).
- Line 223 (Figure 2): The y-axis values have too many significant digits. Remove the trailing 3 zeroes from each tick label for clarity (e.g., change “1.2000” to “1.2”).
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the number of significant numbers on the Y axis has been reduced.
- Lines 271 – 272: The statement that a risk above 1 per 10,000 means the atmospheric Cr(VI) is “very likely to develop cancer” is misleading. Use similar phrasing to the language in the next sentence on HQ: A risk above 1 per 10,000 poses significant risk while risk below 1 per 10,000 does not pose significant risk.
Authors' response:
In accordance with the reviewer's comment, the sentences have been corrected. Current version: The acceptable carcinogenic risk ranges from 1.10-6 (1 in 1,000,000) to 1.10-4 (1 in 10,000) (US EPA, 1989). A carcinogenic risk value above the upper limit (1.10-4) suggests that chromium(VI) in atmospheric particulate matter is likely to cause carcinogenic effects in the future from lifetime exposure, while values below the lower limit (1.10-6) do not pose a significant risk. An HQ of less than one suggests no significant risk of non-carcinogenic effects. If the HQ is equal to or greater than 1, non-carcinogenic effects are possible in the future.
- Line 275: Change “Cr” to “Cr(VI)".
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: The estimated potential carcinogenic (CR) and non-carcinogenic (HQ) risk of inhalatory exposure to Cr(VI) present in PM10 for urban residents is shown in Table 3.
- Lines 278 – 281: I would again caution the use of the term “acceptable” and suggest you simply compare to the stated values from the US EPA (i.e., carcinogenic risk from particle-bound Cr(VI) was below the US EPA threshold for significant risk.).
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- Line 279: Consider adding a sentence that states while cancer risks for children were generally low, they can be misleading as exposure during development can lead to outsized impacts in adulthood.
Authors' response:
As suggested by the reviewer, the sentences have been corrected. Current version: The estimated potential carcinogenic (CR) and non-carcinogenic (HQ) risk of inhalatory exposure to Cr(VI) present in PM10 for urban residents is shown in Table 3. Both were maximum in winter, when Cr concentrations become highest. In the light of the standard interpretation, however, regardless of the season, the carcinogenic risk to residents based on Cr(VI)concentration in PM10 was below the US EPA threshold for significant risk (between 1·10−6 and 1·10−4) and amounted to between 1.11·10-6 and 5.78·10-6 for children and from 3.69·10-6 to 1.92·10-5 for adults. Even in the case of maximum Cr(VI) concentration in PM10 during the winter season, the estimated carcinogenic risk to the population of Radom was lower than the upper limit: CR=9.24·10-6 for children and CR=3.12·10-5 for adults. However, although the risk of cancer in children is generally low, it can be misleading because exposures during development can have disproportionately dramatic effects in adulthood.
- Line 284: Change the phrase “posed no threat” to “posed little risk” to reflect risks were low but not zero.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been edited. Current version: The estimated non-carcinogenic inhalation risks from chromium for the residents of Radom posed little risk, either.
- Line 286: Same comment as line 284: change “no non-carcinogenic risk” to “little non-carcinogenic risk”.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: The HQ values calculated on the basis of the total Cr concentration in PM10 were lower than the safe level (HQ = 1) and ranged from 1.32·10-2 to 2.14·10-2, indicating little non-carcinogenic risks from chromium.
Conclusion
- Line 302: The phrase “gravest” does not match the sentiment that it posed little to no risk. Change to “highest”.
Authors' response:
As recommended by the reviewer, the sentence has been corrected. Current version: The health risk to urban residents, both carcinogenic and non-carcinogenic, is estimated to be highest in winter as Crtot and Cr(VI) concentrations reach their top values.
Technical corrections:
Thank you so much for all your suggestions. The authors agree with all the reviewer's comments in the "Technical Corrections" section. All suggested changes are incorporated into the manuscript. The entire article was also reviewed for the writing of the particulate matter sizes as subscripts (PM10, PM2.5, PM1, PM0.25).
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Monika Łożyńska, 29 Apr 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-541', Anonymous Referee #2, 22 Apr 2025
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General comments:
This study presents a valuable dataset on chromium speciation in urban particulate matter (PM), with a focus on seasonal variability and health risk implications. The research addresses an important gap in air quality studies for mid-sized European cities. While the experimental design and analytical approach are generally sound, the manuscript would benefit from improved clarity in data interpretation, deeper discussion of environmental implications, and stronger integration with existing literature. Below are specific recommendations to enhance the manuscript’s scientific rigor and readability.
- Abstract
Line 15: Replace vague phrasing “The concentration was maximum in winter” with a quantified statement.
Lines 18–19: Combine and specify.
Lines 19–21: Replace “acceptable risk” with: “The hazard quotient (HQ) for Cr(VI) reached Z in winter, indicating potential non-carcinogenic risk (HQ > 1).”
- Introduction
Line 29: Clarify “agglomeration” eg. using“urban-industrial areas”to avoid ambiguity.
Line 44: Revise to explicitly link PM and toxicity.
Line 57: Add a reference for natural Cr levels.
- Experimental Section
Line 88: Define “heating campaign” explicitly.
Line 94: The sampling time reported to be averaged 70h, then, does it mean that the sampling duration time is different in different samplers? More explanation should be provided.
Line 94, The air rate was also not consistent during the whole experiment (in the range of 0.35-0.5 m3/min), then, how the four particle sizes (PM10,PM2.5,PM1 and PM0.5) were divided by the cascade impactor?
Line 103: Define“GF-AAS”. Address sampling biases (e.g., single-site data) and analytical constraints (e.g., GF-AAS detection limits for low-concentration samples).
Line 111: Define “LOD”
Line 114: Clarify recovery adjustments. Clarify whether recovery-adjusted data are reported . If yes, state correction methodology; if no, justify.
4.Results & Discussion
Line 155-160 Include temperature, humidity, precipitation, and wind speed statistics to contextualize seasonal trends.
Line 174-180 The discussion should better situate Radom’s Cr levels within broader European urban air pollution trends. How do the observed concentrations compare to other Polish or EU cities with similar industrial/traffic profiles?
Line 184-189 Provide more detailed hypotheses for seasonal trends (e.g., winter increases due to heating emissions, summer decreases due to atmospheric dispersion). Link these to meteorological data (e.g., inversion events, wind patterns).
Section 3.4 The risk assessment is a strength, but it should explicitly compare calculated hazard quotients (HQs) or cancer risks with regulatory thresholds (e.g., WHO, EU limits). Discuss how findings align with EU air quality directives (e.g., compliance with Cr(VI) thresholds).
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-541-RC2
Data sets
Measurement Report: Seasonal trends and chemical speciation of chromium (III/VI) in different fractions of urban particulate matter – a case study of Radom, Poland Monika Łożyńska https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.14808852
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