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Roles of oceanic ventilation and terrestrial outflow in the atmospheric non-methane hydrocarbons over the Chinese marginal seas
Abstract. Non-methane hydrocarbons (NMHCs) in the marine atmosphere have been extensively studied due to their important roles in regulating the atmospheric chemistry and climate. However, very little is known about the distribution and sources of NMHCs in the lower atmosphere over the marginal seas of China. Herein, we characterized the atmospheric NMHCs (C2-C5) in both the coastal cities and marginal seas of China in spring 2021, with a focus on identifying the sources of NMHCs in the coastal atmosphere. The NMHCs in urban atmospheres, especially for alkanes, were significantly higher compared to that in marine atmosphere, suggesting that terrestrial NMHCs may serve as an important reservoir/source of the marine atmosphere. A significant correlation was observed between the alkane concentrations and the distances from sampling sites to the nearest land or retention of air mass over land, indicating that alkanes in the marine atmosphere are largely influenced by terrestrial inputs through air-mass transport. For alkenes, a greater impact from oceanic emissions was determined due to the lower terrestrial concentrations, short atmospheric lifetime, and substantial sea-to-air fluxes of alkenes compared to alkanes (489 ± 454 vs 129 ± 106 nmol m-2 d-1). As suggested by the positive matrix factorization, terrestrial inputs contributed to 89 % of alkanes and 69.6 % of alkenes in Chinese marginal seas, subsequently contributing to 84 % of the ozone formation potential associated with C2-C5 NMHCs. These findings underscore the significance of terrestrial outflow in controlling the distribution and composition of atmospheric NMHCs in the marginal seas of China.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Anonymous Referee #1, 14 Mar 2024
The manuscript is mainly describing the specific effects of ocean emission and terrestrial input on the atmospheric NMHCs in a representative marginal sea. While the impact of terrestrial input on the coastal environment is widely recognized, a more detailed discussion has been lacking. The authors address the influence mechanism of terrestrial land-based inputs on nearshore atmospheric NMHCs, taking into the distance from the shore and relevant parameters of air masses, and assess the relative contributions from land and ocean sources. This is meaningful to deepen the understanding of how terrestrial input affecting the marine environment near the coast. I think the manuscript is suitable for publication in the ACP after a revision.
Major comments or suggestions:
1. The positive matrix factorization model is the methodology employed by the authors to deconvolute the source factors of atmospheric NMHCs and assess their respective contributions. The authors should provide a more detailed exposition on the principles of this approach in Method section to enhance clarity and understanding.
2. While the authors have made a clear statement regarding the significant difference in NMHCs between urban and marine atmosphere, there is still a need for a more explicit expression on the distribution characteristics of NMHCs, especially in the marine atmosphere. It is advisable to make advancements in the description within the main text, ideally supplemented with relevant Figure for a comprehensive view.
3. Obviously, the distance from the land to the oceanic station is a crucial parameter in the authors’ discussion. However, I didn’t find any information about the source of distance data or an introduction to the relevant calculation method. The authors should explicitly provide details on these aspects for clarity and transparency in the manuscript.
4. The authors have employed an innovative approach in assessing the impact of sea-air flux on the marine NMHCs, by calculating the atmospheric lifetime-weighted concentrations of different gases. In this way, the variabilities of atmospheric reactivities of different gases were considered simultaneously when examining the relationship between flux and concentration. It is found intriguing and seemed effective. Furthermore, the authors could extend this novel idea to the discussion about the air mass. Both of land retention and transport time of air masses serve as indicators of air mass characteristics, reflecting the impact of land-based inputs. Combining these two parameters to collectively explore the impact of air masses on NMHCs might offer a new perspective, potentially leading to fresh discoveries
Minor comments:1 Show the standard deviation when you mentioned average, like line 266 “the mean (range) concentration of ethane, propane, i-butane, and n-butane was 2.26 (0.277-5.72), 2.95 (0.149-20.1), 2.57 (BD-27.6), and……”
2 line 358 “ethane possesses an atmospheric lifetime of approximately 78 d at 24 h [•OH] concentration of 6×105 molecules cm-3……”. References are needed to illustrated the source and credibility of the data used here.
3 line 468 “ozone formation potential (OFP) of NMHCs was calculated using OFP = MIR × C…” The calculation description should be in the method section and clearly present the specific constants used in the equation and their literature sources.
4 Is it necessary to include both the full term and abbreviation ‘NMHCs’ in the caption of each Figure? Generally, after the initial mention in the text, subsequent references can use the abbreviation alone for conciseness.
5 Increase the font size of the text in the Figures to make them more readable.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 07 Apr 2024
We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comments and suggestions, which help us improve the manuscript. Following the reviewer’s comments, we made a revision to the manuscript. All changes in the revised manuscript are highlighted in blue. We provide below a point-to-point list regarding the changes made in the text for the reviewer’s convenience to review, as seen in the supplement profile "Reply on Referee 1.pdf".
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 07 Apr 2024
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Wu Men, 13 Apr 2024
Recently I noticed the manuscript is being discussed. The authors have conducted a comprehensive analysis of the impact of terrestrial inputs and oceanic emissions on atmospheric NMHCs over coastal seas. It is very interesting. They have made commendable attempts to categorize and quantify the sources of NMHCs in the atmosphere above the Chinese coastal seas. I would like to offer a few suggestions that might assist the authors in refining their work:
1. In analyzing the sources of NMHCs, the authors utilized other types of trace gases for auxiliary analysis. There is a noticeable absence of data source or methodological description regarding CO measurements or data sources.
2. Further clarification is required regarding the final uncertainty stemming from the PMF model. It would be more rigorous to elucidate the reliability and indicative significance of the quantitative results for the sources of atmospheric NMHCs.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-CC1 -
AC2: 'Reply on CC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 17 Apr 2024
We are pleased that out research has captured your interest, and we are grateful for the valuable feedback you provide, which has significantly helped in improving this manuscript. In response to your suggestions, we have made the following modifications.
- In analyzing the sources of NMHCs, the authors utilized other types of trace gases for auxiliary analysis. There is a noticeable absence of data source or methodological description regarding CO measurements or data sources.
Reply: We are sorry for the missing description on CO analysis method and data source. It has been supplied in the manuscript, as indicated below:
Line 132-137:“Specifically, carbon monoxide (CO) was analyzed on-site using a trace gas analyzer (TA3000R, Ametek) with a lower detection limit of 10 ppb; more details can be found in Xu et al. (2023). Note that data on DMS, CO and VHCs from marine atmospheric samples were graciously provided by colleagues in the same laboratory. These data were used only as supporting information in the interpretation of our core dataset in this paper (e.g., correlation analysis).
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Reference:
Xu, G. B., Xu, F., Ji, X., Zhang, J., Yan, S. B., Mao, S. H., Yang, G. P.: Carbon monoxide cycling in the Eastern Indian Ocean. J. Geophys. Res.-Oceans, 128, e2022JC019411, https://doi.org/10.1029/2022JC019411.
- Further clarification is required regarding the final uncertainty stemming from the PMF model. It would be more rigorous to elucidate the reliability and indicative significance of the quantitative results for the sources of atmospheric NMHCs.
Reply: Thanks for your valuable suggestion. We have further elaborated on the uncertainties associated with the PMF results in our revised manuscript, as indicated below:
Line 514-522:
“It must be acknowledged that the classification and quantification results derived from the PMF model inevitably involve uncertainties that are challenging to ascertain precisely. These uncertainties are primarily attributed to factors such as the number of gas species, the number of samples, and the temporal and spatial resolutions of sampling. It is noteworthy, however, the PMF analysis results are relatively consistent with the phenomena described in Sections 3.3 and 3.4. This consistency to some extent validates the accuracy of the PMF analysis and underscores the significant contribution and impact of terrestrial inputs on the atmospheric NMHCs in the marginal seas of China.”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on CC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 17 Apr 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Anonymous Referee #3, 22 May 2024
This paper presents an analysis of canister measurements of NMHCs at several coastal Chinese cities and over the Chinese marginal seas (along with seawater measurements) to assess the relative impact of oceanic versus terrestrial sources over the seas. Their analysis, which used back trajectories and air-sea fluxes calculated from their measurements, determined that alkanes were primarily impacted by terrestrial sources, whereas alkenes had a larger contribution from oceanic ventilation, with higher NMHC ocean fluxes closer to the coast. PMF analysis confirmed these findings, and provided a more detailed source apportionment of the contributions from industrial, vehicle, terrestrial, and oceanic sources.
I found this paper to be relatively well-written and provides new data in a region that has not been frequently studied. However, as is the conclusions are underwhelming; the fact that this study “highlights the significant influence of terrestrial outflow on the distribution and composition of NMHCs in the nearshore atmosphere of China…”doesn’t seem to me a surprising or new finding. I think the paper needs to do more to demonstrate the implications of this—it begins to do so in lines 467-478 with the discussion of ozone formation potential, but I think it needs more. I suggest editing down some of the correlation and distance analysis earlier in the paper (which all reiterates the same conclusions) and expanding the final section. Perhaps the authors could include a modeling analysis on the impact of air quality (ozone and SOA) over the marginal seas? Or, they could at least expand the source apportionment section and do more to highlight what are the underlying air quality implications? I would support publication after this main concern has been addressed.
Specific comments
Line 57-60: There are several more recent studies that provide higher/different global VOC ocean emission estimates than Guenther et al. (1995). Suggest providing a range here to expand the literature review and also highlight how uncertain these fluxes here.
Section 2.7: More detail is needed here to explain the PMF model set-up and what is meant by the scaled residuals shown in Fig. S1.
Lines 338-334: This analysis is interesting—were there also any temperature and/or windspeed differences within and beyond 100 km from shore? Also, could the authors find a way to reference Fig 5a and b here, rather than just listing the total (alkanes+alkenes) emissions in text? It’s a nice figure and I find it easier to digest than the numbers in Table 1, but right now I don’t think those panels are actually referenced in the document.
Technical comments:
Line 45: suggest deleting the word “second” before “organic”
Line 108: Tables are being referenced out of order here. Suggest reordering to avoid this.
Line 177: “analyzed” should be “analyze”
Line 181: “yield” should be “yielding”
Line 359-361: this sentence is awkward, consider revising.
Line 364: “life-weighted” should be “lifetime-weighted”
Line 366: “acknowledging” should be “acknowledges”
Line 399: “NHMCs” should be “NMHCs”
Figure 5e and f: “Slpoe” should be “Slope” in these two panels
Figure S2: Suggest changing the panel titles to eliminate the “@Dummy=first”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-RC2 -
AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Hong-Hai Zhang, 16 Jun 2024
We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comments and suggestions, which help us improve the manuscript. Following the reviewer’s comments, we made a revision to the manuscript. All changes in the revised manuscript are highlighted in blue. We provide below a point-to-point list regarding the changes made in the text for the reviewer’s convenience to review, as seen in the supplement profile "Reply on Referee 2.pdf".
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AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Hong-Hai Zhang, 16 Jun 2024
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Anonymous Referee #1, 14 Mar 2024
The manuscript is mainly describing the specific effects of ocean emission and terrestrial input on the atmospheric NMHCs in a representative marginal sea. While the impact of terrestrial input on the coastal environment is widely recognized, a more detailed discussion has been lacking. The authors address the influence mechanism of terrestrial land-based inputs on nearshore atmospheric NMHCs, taking into the distance from the shore and relevant parameters of air masses, and assess the relative contributions from land and ocean sources. This is meaningful to deepen the understanding of how terrestrial input affecting the marine environment near the coast. I think the manuscript is suitable for publication in the ACP after a revision.
Major comments or suggestions:
1. The positive matrix factorization model is the methodology employed by the authors to deconvolute the source factors of atmospheric NMHCs and assess their respective contributions. The authors should provide a more detailed exposition on the principles of this approach in Method section to enhance clarity and understanding.
2. While the authors have made a clear statement regarding the significant difference in NMHCs between urban and marine atmosphere, there is still a need for a more explicit expression on the distribution characteristics of NMHCs, especially in the marine atmosphere. It is advisable to make advancements in the description within the main text, ideally supplemented with relevant Figure for a comprehensive view.
3. Obviously, the distance from the land to the oceanic station is a crucial parameter in the authors’ discussion. However, I didn’t find any information about the source of distance data or an introduction to the relevant calculation method. The authors should explicitly provide details on these aspects for clarity and transparency in the manuscript.
4. The authors have employed an innovative approach in assessing the impact of sea-air flux on the marine NMHCs, by calculating the atmospheric lifetime-weighted concentrations of different gases. In this way, the variabilities of atmospheric reactivities of different gases were considered simultaneously when examining the relationship between flux and concentration. It is found intriguing and seemed effective. Furthermore, the authors could extend this novel idea to the discussion about the air mass. Both of land retention and transport time of air masses serve as indicators of air mass characteristics, reflecting the impact of land-based inputs. Combining these two parameters to collectively explore the impact of air masses on NMHCs might offer a new perspective, potentially leading to fresh discoveries
Minor comments:1 Show the standard deviation when you mentioned average, like line 266 “the mean (range) concentration of ethane, propane, i-butane, and n-butane was 2.26 (0.277-5.72), 2.95 (0.149-20.1), 2.57 (BD-27.6), and……”
2 line 358 “ethane possesses an atmospheric lifetime of approximately 78 d at 24 h [•OH] concentration of 6×105 molecules cm-3……”. References are needed to illustrated the source and credibility of the data used here.
3 line 468 “ozone formation potential (OFP) of NMHCs was calculated using OFP = MIR × C…” The calculation description should be in the method section and clearly present the specific constants used in the equation and their literature sources.
4 Is it necessary to include both the full term and abbreviation ‘NMHCs’ in the caption of each Figure? Generally, after the initial mention in the text, subsequent references can use the abbreviation alone for conciseness.
5 Increase the font size of the text in the Figures to make them more readable.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 07 Apr 2024
We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comments and suggestions, which help us improve the manuscript. Following the reviewer’s comments, we made a revision to the manuscript. All changes in the revised manuscript are highlighted in blue. We provide below a point-to-point list regarding the changes made in the text for the reviewer’s convenience to review, as seen in the supplement profile "Reply on Referee 1.pdf".
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 07 Apr 2024
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Wu Men, 13 Apr 2024
Recently I noticed the manuscript is being discussed. The authors have conducted a comprehensive analysis of the impact of terrestrial inputs and oceanic emissions on atmospheric NMHCs over coastal seas. It is very interesting. They have made commendable attempts to categorize and quantify the sources of NMHCs in the atmosphere above the Chinese coastal seas. I would like to offer a few suggestions that might assist the authors in refining their work:
1. In analyzing the sources of NMHCs, the authors utilized other types of trace gases for auxiliary analysis. There is a noticeable absence of data source or methodological description regarding CO measurements or data sources.
2. Further clarification is required regarding the final uncertainty stemming from the PMF model. It would be more rigorous to elucidate the reliability and indicative significance of the quantitative results for the sources of atmospheric NMHCs.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-CC1 -
AC2: 'Reply on CC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 17 Apr 2024
We are pleased that out research has captured your interest, and we are grateful for the valuable feedback you provide, which has significantly helped in improving this manuscript. In response to your suggestions, we have made the following modifications.
- In analyzing the sources of NMHCs, the authors utilized other types of trace gases for auxiliary analysis. There is a noticeable absence of data source or methodological description regarding CO measurements or data sources.
Reply: We are sorry for the missing description on CO analysis method and data source. It has been supplied in the manuscript, as indicated below:
Line 132-137:“Specifically, carbon monoxide (CO) was analyzed on-site using a trace gas analyzer (TA3000R, Ametek) with a lower detection limit of 10 ppb; more details can be found in Xu et al. (2023). Note that data on DMS, CO and VHCs from marine atmospheric samples were graciously provided by colleagues in the same laboratory. These data were used only as supporting information in the interpretation of our core dataset in this paper (e.g., correlation analysis).
”
Reference:
Xu, G. B., Xu, F., Ji, X., Zhang, J., Yan, S. B., Mao, S. H., Yang, G. P.: Carbon monoxide cycling in the Eastern Indian Ocean. J. Geophys. Res.-Oceans, 128, e2022JC019411, https://doi.org/10.1029/2022JC019411.
- Further clarification is required regarding the final uncertainty stemming from the PMF model. It would be more rigorous to elucidate the reliability and indicative significance of the quantitative results for the sources of atmospheric NMHCs.
Reply: Thanks for your valuable suggestion. We have further elaborated on the uncertainties associated with the PMF results in our revised manuscript, as indicated below:
Line 514-522:
“It must be acknowledged that the classification and quantification results derived from the PMF model inevitably involve uncertainties that are challenging to ascertain precisely. These uncertainties are primarily attributed to factors such as the number of gas species, the number of samples, and the temporal and spatial resolutions of sampling. It is noteworthy, however, the PMF analysis results are relatively consistent with the phenomena described in Sections 3.3 and 3.4. This consistency to some extent validates the accuracy of the PMF analysis and underscores the significant contribution and impact of terrestrial inputs on the atmospheric NMHCs in the marginal seas of China.”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on CC1', Hong-Hai Zhang, 17 Apr 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2935', Anonymous Referee #3, 22 May 2024
This paper presents an analysis of canister measurements of NMHCs at several coastal Chinese cities and over the Chinese marginal seas (along with seawater measurements) to assess the relative impact of oceanic versus terrestrial sources over the seas. Their analysis, which used back trajectories and air-sea fluxes calculated from their measurements, determined that alkanes were primarily impacted by terrestrial sources, whereas alkenes had a larger contribution from oceanic ventilation, with higher NMHC ocean fluxes closer to the coast. PMF analysis confirmed these findings, and provided a more detailed source apportionment of the contributions from industrial, vehicle, terrestrial, and oceanic sources.
I found this paper to be relatively well-written and provides new data in a region that has not been frequently studied. However, as is the conclusions are underwhelming; the fact that this study “highlights the significant influence of terrestrial outflow on the distribution and composition of NMHCs in the nearshore atmosphere of China…”doesn’t seem to me a surprising or new finding. I think the paper needs to do more to demonstrate the implications of this—it begins to do so in lines 467-478 with the discussion of ozone formation potential, but I think it needs more. I suggest editing down some of the correlation and distance analysis earlier in the paper (which all reiterates the same conclusions) and expanding the final section. Perhaps the authors could include a modeling analysis on the impact of air quality (ozone and SOA) over the marginal seas? Or, they could at least expand the source apportionment section and do more to highlight what are the underlying air quality implications? I would support publication after this main concern has been addressed.
Specific comments
Line 57-60: There are several more recent studies that provide higher/different global VOC ocean emission estimates than Guenther et al. (1995). Suggest providing a range here to expand the literature review and also highlight how uncertain these fluxes here.
Section 2.7: More detail is needed here to explain the PMF model set-up and what is meant by the scaled residuals shown in Fig. S1.
Lines 338-334: This analysis is interesting—were there also any temperature and/or windspeed differences within and beyond 100 km from shore? Also, could the authors find a way to reference Fig 5a and b here, rather than just listing the total (alkanes+alkenes) emissions in text? It’s a nice figure and I find it easier to digest than the numbers in Table 1, but right now I don’t think those panels are actually referenced in the document.
Technical comments:
Line 45: suggest deleting the word “second” before “organic”
Line 108: Tables are being referenced out of order here. Suggest reordering to avoid this.
Line 177: “analyzed” should be “analyze”
Line 181: “yield” should be “yielding”
Line 359-361: this sentence is awkward, consider revising.
Line 364: “life-weighted” should be “lifetime-weighted”
Line 366: “acknowledging” should be “acknowledges”
Line 399: “NHMCs” should be “NMHCs”
Figure 5e and f: “Slpoe” should be “Slope” in these two panels
Figure S2: Suggest changing the panel titles to eliminate the “@Dummy=first”
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2935-RC2 -
AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Hong-Hai Zhang, 16 Jun 2024
We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comments and suggestions, which help us improve the manuscript. Following the reviewer’s comments, we made a revision to the manuscript. All changes in the revised manuscript are highlighted in blue. We provide below a point-to-point list regarding the changes made in the text for the reviewer’s convenience to review, as seen in the supplement profile "Reply on Referee 2.pdf".
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AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Hong-Hai Zhang, 16 Jun 2024
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