Exploring Nature-based Solutions in Mountain Regions: A Review of Their Hydrological Functions
Abstract. Mountain regions play a fundamental role in sustaining the water supply for many activities around the world. However, these ecosystems are under increasing pressure due to climate change, changes in land use, and socioeconomic stressors, threatening water security. Implementing Nature-based Solutions (NbS) in mountain catchments are considered and effective means to increase water security, in the mountain regions itself, but also downstream. Despite growing interest, the scientific evidence base on the hydrological impacts of NbS in mountain regions is limited and characterised by methodological inconsistencies and insufficient consideration of climate dynamics. This study aims to review the hydrological performance of NbS in mountain regions and identify key knowledge gaps. We present a typology covering Wetlands, Forest-based interventions (Afforestation, Reforestation, Forest Conservation, and Agroforestry), and Water Harvesting interventions highlighting their hydrological functions. The analysis revealed that the most frequently reported indicators included flow regulation, groundwater recharge, water retention capacity, and soil erosion control. Our findings emphasise the need for more standardised methodologies in this environment, to enable robust comparisons of NbS performance under future scenarios. Strengthening the evidence base will require methodological integration and multiscale analyses that incorporate climate variables, as well as the inclusion of local and indigenous knowledge in planning and evaluation processes. Such efforts are essential for enhancing the design, implementation, and long-term effectiveness of NbS strategies for safeguarding water resources in mountain regions.
The paper is titled "Exploring Nature-based Solutions in Mountain Regions: A Review of Their Hydrological Functions“. This is an important topic and of high relevance, considering the ongoing and rapid changes in mountain hydrology and their associated impacts for mountain communities. As the authors point out correctly, evidence of the effectiveness of Nature-based Solutions (NbS) in mountain regions is still limited and a strengthened and robust evidence base is needed to systematically assess the impacts of such measures. While the title and abstract clearly define the main aim and scope of the study, the manuscript would benefit from a clearer and more focused storyline that better aligns with the title and abstract. At present, some sections of the text seem to diverge from these central objective. The manuscript moves between topics such as a detailed description of the methodology of the literature review, to an extensive yet mainly descriptive presentation of the review results, a conceptual summary of potential hydrological functions of NbS, as well as a discussion of limitations of NbS measures regarding climate change aspects and the inclusion of Indigenous and local knowledge. As a result the focus promised in the title (‘ a review of hydrological functions of NbS in mountain regions’) gets lost and the overall storyline needs more coherence and focus.
Overall, I would suggest a thorough revision of the manuscript with the aim of further refining and focusing its overall scope and objectives. If the intention is to discuss the hydrological functions of NbS, this focus should be reflected in the research questions and in a more quantitative/robust presentation of the results. Alternatively, if the primary goal is to identify gaps in the current NbS research/literature, this focus could be more clearly reflected in the title and in the main aim outlined in the abstract.
Below are several suggestions that may help to further focus the paper on the topic outlined in the title and the abstract, which in my mind would help to improve its impact and visibility.
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Considering the points raised above, I am unable to recommend the publication of the manuscript in its current form. However, I hope the authors view these comments as constructive and helpful for further developing and strengthening the manuscript. I would like to emphasise again, that the topic is highly relevant and a more focussed presentation and discussion could lead to a highly impactful article. The title could be a nice guide to focus the study on a single relevant question: exploring the hydrological functions of nature-based solutions in mountain regions.