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Soil horizon development and altitudinal-vegetational zonation decouple microbial biomass from bulk soil nutrient availability across a Himalayan treeline ecotone
Abstract. Alpine treeline ecotones are environmentally sensitive transition zones where vegetation structure, soil development, and nutrient cycling interact over short spatial scales. Despite increasing attention to Himalayan treeline dynamics, the distribution of soil microbial biomass and its stoichiometric relationships across vegetation and soil horizon gradient remains poorly understood. We quantified microbial biomass carbon (MBC), nitrogen (MBN), and phosphorus (MBP), together with soil organic carbon (SOC) and total nitrogen (TN), across four altitudinal–vegetational zones and four genetic soil horizons in the Rolwaling Himalayan treeline ecotone, Nepal. Linear mixed-effects models were used to evaluate the effects of soil horizon development, vegetation zonation, and slope aspect on microbial biomass concentrations and stoichiometric relationships. Soil horizon development was the dominant control on microbial biomass distribution. MBC, MBN, and MBP declined significantly with depth (p < 0.001), with the surface O-horizon accounting for 55.7 %, 62.0 %, and 62.8 % of the cumulative horizon-wise concentrations of MBC, MBN, and MBP, respectively. Altitudinal-vegetational zonation generated pronounced non-linear patterns. SOC and TN concentrations were highest in the lower krummholz zone dominated by Rhododendron campanulatum, whereas MBC and MBN concentrations peaked in lower dwarf shrub heath zone, demonstrating a clear decoupling between bulk soil nutrient concentrations and microbial biomass. Microbial phosphorus concentrations exceeded microbial nitrogen concentrations by 3.9-fold across the study area, yielding an overall microbial biomass stoichiometry of 3.4:0.3:1 (MBC:MBN:MBP), substantially different from globally synthesised microbial biomass ratios, indicating plasticity in microbial biomass stoichiometry in stress environments in treeline ecotones. Our results indicate that microbial biomass distribution across the Rolwaling treeline ecotone is shaped by both soil horizon differentiation and altitudinal-vegetational zonation. The contrasting spatial patterns of microbial biomass and bulk soil nutrient concentrations suggest that measurements of total soil nutrients alone may not fully capture biologically active nutrient dynamics in high-elevation ecosystems.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3815', Anonymous Referee #1, 21 Sep 2026 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3815', Anonymous Referee #2, 26 Sep 2026
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This manuscript investigates microbial biomass C, N, and P and microbial stoichiometry across soil horizons and altitudinal–vegetational zones in a Himalayan treeline ecotone. The study addresses an interesting topic and provides a useful dataset across contrasting vegetation zones and genetic soil horizons. However, several methodological and interpretative issues need further clarification. The main concerns relate to the preparation of soil samples before microbial biomass analysis, the calculation and interpretation of relative horizon contributions from mass-based concentrations, and several mechanistic interpretations that extend beyond the variables directly measured in this study. The statistical interpretation and consistency between the results and conclusions should also be carefully checked. My specific comments are provided below.
Abstract
- Horizon contributions
The statement that the O-horizon accounted for 55.7%, 62.0%, and 62.8% of MBC, MBN, and MBP should be reconsidered. These values are based on mass-based concentrations rather than stocks. Concentrations from different horizons cannot be directly summed to represent their contribution to the whole soil profile without considering horizon thickness and soil mass or bulk density. Please revise this interpretation throughout the manuscript.
- Stoichiometric plasticity
The statement that the microbial biomass stoichiometry of 3.4:0.3:1 indicates stoichiometric plasticity is too strong. The observed ratios show differences from globally reported values, but they do not directly demonstrate microbial physiological plasticity. Please revise this interpretation.
Introduction
- Environmental stress
Please check the discussion of environmental stress. High pH is mentioned as an environmental stress, whereas the soils at the study site are described as strongly acidic. Please revise this paragraph to better reflect the conditions relevant to the study area.
- Microbial CUE
Please use caution when discussing microbial CUE because CUE was not measured in this study. The relationship between the observed biomass stoichiometry and CUE should not be presented as a mechanism directly evaluated here.
- Hypothesis 3
Please revise H3. Differences in microbial biomass stoichiometry can be tested directly, but “nutrient constraints” and “microbial adaptation” are mechanistic interpretations that were not directly measured in this study.
Materials and Methods
Soil sampling and laboratory analysis
- Soil drying before microbial biomass analysis — major concern
Please justify the use of soil dried at 40 °C for microbial biomass analysis. Drying followed by rewetting and three weeks of incubation may alter the microbial biomass compared with the original field condition. Please discuss how this sample preparation may affect the interpretation of MBC, MBN, and MBP.
Expression of soil properties
- Relative contribution of soil horizons — major concern
Please reconsider the calculation and interpretation of the relative contribution of each horizon. Concentrations expressed per unit soil mass cannot be directly summed across horizons to represent their contribution to the whole soil profile without considering horizon thickness and soil mass or bulk density.
Statistical analysis
- MBP model simplification
Please provide more details on the simplification of the MBP model. Specify which interaction terms were removed and how the final model structure was selected after the singularity problem was identified.
- Zero or negative CFE flushes
Please provide further justification for treating all zero or negative CFE flushes as experimental artifacts and assigning them as missing values. Please clarify whether these observations were checked for analytical or procedural problems before exclusion.
Results
- Figures 3–6: Please improve the overall quality and readability of these figures. Some labels, symbols, and text are difficult to read at the current size. Please increase the figure resolution and ensure that all graphical elements remain clearly legible at publication size.
Soil organic carbon and total nitrogen
- Profile contributions
Please revise this interpretation according to the comment in the Methods regarding the calculation of horizon contributions.
Microbial biomass
- Non-significant zone effect
The effect of altitudinal–vegetational zone was not significant (p = 0.259). Please avoid describing these differences as a distinct pattern and present them as descriptive trends only.
- p = 0.058
The interaction was not statistically significant at the stated α = 0.05 (p = 0.058). Please avoid referring to it as “marginally significant.”
Microbial stoichiometry
- Overall 3.4:0.3:1 ratio
Please clarify how the overall microbial biomass stoichiometry of 3.4:0.3:1 was calculated, particularly because MBC, MBN, and MBP contained different numbers of missing observations.
- Very high variability
The MBC:MBN ratio in the E-horizon shows extremely high variability (CV = 396.9%). Please discuss this variability when interpreting the approximately 17.8-fold difference from the O-horizon.
Discussion
4.1 Vertical pedogenic control
- “Biological activity”
Please revise “biological activity” because microbial biomass was measured, but microbial activity was not directly assessed.
4.2 Decoupling between microbial biomass and bulk soil nutrients
- qMIC and microbial efficiency
This interpretation is too strong. Higher qMIC indicates a greater proportion of SOC present as microbial biomass, but it does not directly demonstrate more efficient substrate utilization or faster nutrient cycling.
- Biologically available nutrient fractions
This statement is not directly supported by the measured variables. Biologically available nutrient fractions and microbial activity were not measured in this study. Please revise this interpretation.
4.3 Microbial stoichiometry and nutrient constraints
- Stoichiometric plasticity
Please revise this interpretation according to the earlier comment regarding microbial stoichiometric plasticity.
- Severe N limitation
Please use caution when interpreting high MBC:MBN ratios as evidence of severe N limitation. Nitrogen limitation and the proposed shifts toward maintenance and nutrient scavenging were not directly measured in this study.
4.4 Ecological implications
- Nutrient availability and microbial utilization efficiency
Please use more cautious wording here because nutrient availability and microbial utilization efficiency were not directly measured.
- Length of Discussion
The Discussion is quite lengthy and includes several mechanistic interpretations that were not directly evaluated in this study. Please consider condensing the Discussion and clearly distinguishing the observed results from proposed mechanisms.
Conclusion
- Biologically available substrates
Please use more cautious wording because nutrient accessibility was not directly measured in this study.
- Nutrient accessibility
Please use more cautious wording because nutrient accessibility was not directly measured in this study.
- Nutrient constraints and stoichiometric flexibility
This conclusion is too strong. Differences from global microbial stoichiometric ratios do not directly demonstrate nutrient constraints or microbial stoichiometric flexibility. Please revise this statement.
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In this manuscript, Adhikari et al. investigated the spatial distribution and stoichiometric relationships of soil microbial biomass (MBC, MBN, MBP) across an altitudinal–vegetational gradient and four soil horizons in the Rolwaling Himalayan treeline ecotone, Nepal. This manuscript addresses a critical knowledge gap regarding soil microbial dynamics and nutrient stoichiometry in high-elevation ecosystems. The dataset combined both soil horizon differentiation and altitudinal-vegetational zonation in an understudied region (the Himalayas). A particularly interesting and well-presented finding is the empirical demonstration of a clear decoupling between bulk soil nutrient availability (SOC, TN) and microbial biomass (MBC, MBN), as well as the unusually low C:N:P ratio (3.4:0.3:1) indicating microbial stoichiometric plasticity under environmental stress. Overall, the manuscript is well-written and logically structured. However, there are several conceptual, methodological, and interpretive limitations that need to be addressed before publication. Below are my detailed major and minor comments: