Encoding-dependent verdicts and H_1 miscalibration in ensemble persistent homology of cyclone trajectories
Abstract. Ensemble topological data analysis (TDA) on multi-storm cyclone trajectories has been proposed as a tool to detect coherent perturbations — such as those associated with extreme geomagnetic events — that may not register in any single-storm intensity time series. We construct three principled longitude encodings for the cyclone point cloud (linear modular, unit-sphere, and lat-linear-plus-longitude-circle cylinder) and apply the same ensemble-TDA pipeline to the same data: all storms whose lifetime overlaps the ±15-day peak window of Halloween 2003, St Patrick’s Day 2015, or Gannon 2024 (25 event storms; 1,020 calendar-matched controls). Three findings emerge. First, the D1 pool H_1 permutation p-value depends on encoding choice in a way that flips the qualitative verdict: perm-p_H1 = 0.130 (linear), 0.009 (unit-sphere), 0.214 (cylinder), on identical event and control sets. Second, a 49-placebo calibration returns an H_0 false-positive rate close to the nominal 5 % in all three encodings (8.2 %, 4.1 %, 6.1 %), but an H_1 false-positive rate that is consistently above nominal in all three (8.2 %, 10.2 %, 14.3 %; directional consistency across encodings, not individually significant at n = 49 — the cylinder rate sits at the Wilson 95 % upper bound) — H_1 calibration is inflated by a factor 1.6×–2.9× regardless of encoding choice. Third, this dimension asymmetry between H_0 (calibrated) and H_1 (inflated) recurs in stratified attribution across two basin cells and three single-event cells, and in subsample-size sensitivity tests at N ∈ {400, 600, 800, 1000}. We interpret the pattern as observational evidence that ensemble TDA on cyclone-trajectory data carries an intrinsic H_1 inflation that is not curable by lon-encoding choice alone. The solar-perturbation hypothesis cannot be tested through this pipeline until an encoding-invariant H_1-calibrated protocol is in place. We frame the contribution as a methodological cautionary tale: pooled point-cloud TDA on geospatial trajectories with periodic coordinates is more fragile than its formal stability theorems suggest. We propose a minimum protocol of multi-encoding agreement testing plus dimension-resolved placebo calibration as a precondition for any positive ensemble-TDA claim in this class of problems.
This manuscript tested three existing encoding strategies for ensemble TDA on cyclone trajectories to examine the effects of the solar and geomagnetic activity perturbation on the TC. It is revealed that the results are sensitive to different coordinate encoding methods and intrinsic H1 false positive inflation. Overall, this study is only a methodological cautionary one. It neither proposes a new method nor delivers new physical insights, which means that it has relatively weak novelty. Hence, the current version of this manuscript may be unsuitable for publication in current journal. The following are my main concerns.
1.This manuscript only verifies flaws embedded in the existing ensemble TDA. But there are no original methodological advancements proposed to solve the flaws. In other words, the manuscript only discovers methodological defects without fixing them. Whether the author can propose a new strategy or method to overcome the existing flaws? This will be able to improve the novelty of the manuscript.
2.This manuscript is too technical. It has not discussed the fundamental problems of the physical and methodological limitations. Could the author provide substantial physical interpretations regarding the linkage between solar storms, geomagnetic activity and TC? Additionally, from both methodological and physical perspectives, how to understand the phenomenon that different encoding schemes yield contradictory results?
3.If the manuscript does not aim to investigate the physical linkage between solar activity and tropical cyclones and only serves as a methodological diagnostic, the discussions of physical processes in the introduction should be substantially condensed and analyzing methodological flaws should be stressed.