Frequent new particle formation events in the Indo-Gangetic Plain occur under reduced condensation sink but are obscured by air mass heterogeneity
Abstract. New particle formation (NPF) is a major source of atmospheric aerosols and cloud condensation nuclei, influencing climate and air quality. In highly polluted regions such as the Indo-Gangetic Plain (IGP), where precursor concentrations and condensation sinks are among the highest globally, NPF remains poorly constrained due to limited observations of particles and ions in sub–10 nm size range.
Here, we investigated the occurrence and microphysical evolution of NPF at a suburban IGP site (CAS-AO, Sonipat, Haryana), during May – December 2023 using ion and particle measurements together with meteorological data. NPF events are frequent during summer and less common in winter. The weak seasonal variability of ion concentrations relative to nucleation-mode particles suggests that neutral pathways dominate NPF in this high-sink environment. The median condensation sinks on event-days (0.024 s⁻¹) are approximately half those on non-event days (0.046 s⁻¹). Particle growth rates (maximum concentration method) increase with size, from 14.7 nm h⁻¹ (3–7 nm) to 19.0 nm h⁻¹ (7–20 nm), indicating size-dependent condensational growth.
In this high-background setting, pollution plumes, and meteorological variability intermittently mask or distort NPF signals, limiting the direct applicability of both visual and automated classification methods and growth rate estimation methods. Our observations highlight that careful application and improvement of data analysis methods, along with precursor gas measurements, are required to better constrain nucleation processes by avoiding methodological sensitivity due to the complexity of aerosol dynamic processes in multi-source, high-condensation-sink environments, such as IGP.
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General assessment
Srivastav present PNSD measurements across almost a year in the IGP, focusing on the occurence of NPF events. These are valuable data. India has some of the worst air quality on the planet, and the question of whether secondary formation contributes meaningfully to particle number there is not answered. In China it turned out to matter a great deal, and a well-characterised sub–10 nm dataset from a suburban IGP site is highly valuable. In this context, I think this dataset is worth publishing.
My main concern is one of framing. As it stands, the manuscript reads as though it's working quite hard to present a clean, finished story, and in doing so it skirts around some real limitations in the dataset (data coverage, SMPS availability, pollution contamination of the growth). My view is that being upfront about those limitations would make this a stronger paper, not a weaker one. I'd encourage the authors to lean into that rather than away from it.
The points below are split into a few major issues that I think need resolving before publication, then specific comments, then a general note on the writing.
Major issues
SMPS data availability
This is my biggest concern. Late in the paper (Sect. 3.2.2) it emerges that SMPS data overlapping with the NAIS were available for only ~11 NPF days, of which 3 were usable. This is also clear if the reader is savvy as it is mentioned in sect. 2.3 (“Data for the above 40 nm diameter range from SMPS were available for only a few days (mention in table T1)”, and viewing T1 only shows three events, but this is far from clear!
The condensation sink, the coagulation sink, and the formation rates all require the full size distribution out to the accumulation mode and in a polluted environment CS and CoagS are dominated by the >40 nm particles that only the SMPS sees. So I would strongly encourage the authors to state, explicitly and early:
If the CS conclusion rests on three days, then I'm afraid the central claim of the paper isn't currently supported and needs to be either properly substantiated or removed. If the SMPS coverage is a bit thin, one honest option is to reframe this as a NAIS-led paper, present CS/CoagS/J only for the days where they're defensible (clearly flagged as such), and be explicit that "total particles" actually means "sub 40 nm particles" everywhere the SMPS is absent. None of that is fatal to the paper but the current presentation implies a completeness the data may not have.
Data coverage is never made clear.
Similar to my above point, the measurements run May through December, yet Sect. 3.2.1 implies only 108 data days. While this is a lot of missing time, our instruments are indeed temperamental, so this is quite normal. However, the reader is left guessing where the gaps are and which instruments were running when. I would encourage the authors to open the results with a full time-series / data-availability plot showing NAIS and SMPS coverage across the whole period, alongside the MET data, and anything else appropriate. This single figure would resolve a lot of the ambiguity and would let readers judge the seasonal claims for themselves.
Clarity regarding GRs
Median GRs of ~15 nm/h in the 3–7 nm range (rising to ~19–27 nm/h at larger sizes) are at the very top of anything reported anywhere. If real, that's a very important result with real consequences, as the particle number scales with J, but both the mass of the growing mode and the survival probability are extremely sensitive to GR, so growth this fast could be a major local source of both number and mass.
But the authors themselves acknowledge that pollution plumes intermittently mimic and inflate growth signatures, so I'd want much more reassurance that these GRs aren't contaminated. It would be great if the authors could both
Following from the high GRs, I would encourage you to discuss the potential contribution of these events to particle mass, not just number (see Kulmala et al., 2022, https://doi.org/10.1039/D1EA00096A). Estimating mass from the PNSD would be straightforward for such events where SMPS data exist.
Condensation sink equation (line 257).
Please double-check this. The standard formulation is CS = 2πD .... The manuscript has 4πD, which is a factor-of-two error when Dp is a diameter.
Specific comments
Abstract
Introduction
Instrumentation (2.2.1, 2.2.2)
Figure 2
Figure 3 and associated text
Figure 4 / classification
Figure 6
Figure 9
Section 3.2 / organisation
Figure 10
Figures 11 and 12
Table 1
A general note on the writing
The writing needs a careful check throughout. A few things crop up repeatedly
There's also some wordiness that could be trimmed hard, e.g. "facilitating the observation of changes in resultant particle populations".
Also in the references there appear to be two separate Aalto et al. (2001) entries; please de-duplicate and check the reference list generally.