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Acidification in coastal waters of Adélie Land, Antarctica (1985–2025)
Abstract. Ocean acidification is expected to be particularly severe in Antarctic continental shelves due to enhanced anthropogenic carbon uptake in cold waters in response to rising atmospheric CO2, sea-ice retreat, freshening and climate-change feedbacks. Models suggest that undersaturated conditions with respect to aragonite (Ωar), a major form of calcium carbonate formed by marine species, could be reached as soon as 2052 for austral winter. Here we present new ocean carbonate system observations from cruises conducted since 2010 in the Adélie Land coastal region in East Antarctica, along with data from a BCG-Argo float and results from a neural network model for the period 1985–2025. The region is a permanent CO2 sink and was most pronounced since 2006. The CO2 sink leads to a positive increase of surface water total CO2 concentrations (CT) (+0.44 ± 0.01 µmol.kg-1.yr-1) and to a progressive decrease of pH (-0.013 per decade) and Ωar (-0.035 per decade) for the winter season. The lowest surface Ωar of 1.2 was observed in winter 2024 from the float data, a critical limit for some marine species such as pteropod. A projection of the CT concentrations in the future, based on observed anthropogenic CO2 concentrations and emissions scenarios, suggests that aragonite saturation state (Ωar = 1) will occur in surface waters as soon as 2055 in the Adélie Land region, which is part of a larger area of East Antarctica proposed as a Marine Protected Area by the Commission for the Conservation of Antarctic Marine Living Resources since the early 2010s.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1664', Anonymous Referee #1, 26 May 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1664', Anonymous Referee #2, 15 Jun 2026
This is an interesting study on ocean acidification of a region of the ocean that is important but undersampled. It shows the level of OA and extrapolates it to the future, where important results emerge. Not surprisingly, biological activity plays a major role in the observed changes/variability. The combination of different sources of data makes the study more robust. The contents of the manuscript is fine, but I think it needs more explanation on the methods used and how the results were obtained.
It would have been helpful to the reviewer to have the figures embedded in the text. I think the journal also prescribes this format.
The numbering of the sub-sections of the results is erroneous. I think it should be 3.1, 3.2. 3.3 and 3.4.
At several place in the text: xCO2 not XCO2.
Below a list with mostly minor comments, but also a few major ones:
L24 … a permanent CO2 sink WHICH was most pronounced …
L25 … to AN increase (delete positive)
L26 delete progressive
L28 pteropods
L36 delete enhanced
Line 59 Shadwick
L39-40 … multiple effects SUCH AS anthropogenic CO2 …
L44-46 “Apart from the Drake Passage to the north of the Antarctic Peninsula (Takahashi et al, 2014; Hauri et al 2015; Munro et al, 2015) no long-term time-series have been used to evaluate OA in coastal Antarctic zones.” I suggest to refrain from the negative position (no long-term time series) and write this in a positive sense: There are two long-term time series …
L50 per decade (no exponents use with words, only with symbols) (also at other places in the text)
L52 delete comma
L53 TO the deep ocean, implying …
L61-64 This sentence is grammatically incorrect. Please reformulate
L68 Please define CT
L70 What kind of CO2 is meant here? Dissolved CO2 or DIC? Please be more specific
L80 I think you mean: in the region off Adélie Land
L81 again which CO2?
L85-88 Please reformulate this sentence
L115 “metadata of SOCAT” needs a reference
L118 cruises
L123 is, not are
L130 Prof. not Pr.
L131 Which one is the R2 cruise? Please explain. It was not mentioned before
L135-136 and earlier: The authors used CRMs and write: “These data were used for the validation of calculated carbonate system parameters using fCO2 data with an AT/salinity relationship” How were the CRMs used? Were the measured data corrected with a factor that was determined from the CRM value and the measured value? Please provide details in the text.
L139 nitrate (no capital)
L161 This relationship was determined with data south of 60°S (as seen in Fig. S4). Why was this region different from the region which was taken for other analyses (south of 63°S)?
L169 and further: The info as to the FFNN, how it works and which parameters, variables and data are used is minimal. For the reader to comprehend and reconstruct the data produced this is not sufficient; the results presented are as if coming from a black box.
L176 Why were only results used for this small region? This region is again different from the two other regions mentioned before.
L177-192 This paragraph does not belong to the methods section, but rather to the results section.
L185 Shadwick
L187, 189 What is the origin of the SAM indices? Please provide reference
Figure 2: The orange square is said to be for year 2010, but it covers at least 3-4 years around 2010. This is confusing. Please choose another way of showing the 2010 value.
Figure 3: The unit of fCO2 is uatm, but the unit of the atmospheric CO2 concentration is ppm. This is not correct in the figure. Why don’t they have the same unit? How can the units be reconciled? Same for Fig. S1 and other
Figure 4: How was normalization of fCO2 and CT done? This could be added to the Methods section
Figure 6: In panel (b), which shows CT, fCO2 is shown in the inset, but there is no scale. I presume that this is not fCO2 but something else, possibly CT calculated from fCO2? Please correct
L204 The ship’s name is not mentioned in the Methods section. There, only L’Astrolabe is mentioned as ship for the three cruises.
L242-247 Did you only calculate the trend using the first and last values? Why not using all data in the time period. This would increase the reliability of the trend calculation.
L280 “Here we selected the data below 100m depth for 1994-2018” Why again a different time period? The argument should be given in the text. And why 100 m? At least a reference should be given with respect to the depth of the mixed layer in this region.
L285-287 “that d13C observations in January 2025 were lower than in January 2003 suggesting that surface waters captured the anthropogenic Suess effect signal (Figure S13) as previously observed in this region (McNeil et al, 2001)” This asks for a better and more extensive explanation in the text.
L323 delete version
L324-325 “The estimated CT using the Cant trend (Eq. 5) is close to the FFNN model and observations (Figure 10a)” This is not completely surprising, as the results were based on the same data.
L325 “The mean difference of CT” Which difference is meant here? Difference with what?
L326-327 “but other process could explain the full trend in surface CT.” I think you mean: … but additional processes need to be included to explain the full trend in surface CT.
L328, 392 CT-rich, not rich-CT
L331-332 I suggest: … that the anthropogenic CO2 uptake is responsible for 70% of the CT increase over 1985-202. But what about the remnant 30%; what factors are responsible for that? Please explain in the text.
L340 ... remnant winter WATER layer …
L342 Suggestion: An important question is when the aragonite undersaturation …
L344 … show SIMILAR results …
L344 Suggestion: Differences between the two future scenarios …
L353 will reach, not reached
L362 Place shipboard before fCO2 and BGC-Argo before pHT
L365 measurements
L394 surface is mentioned twice; one should be deleted
L404 Australian
L405, 422 Earlier the ship was called L’Astrolabe
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-1664-RC2
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Title: Acidification in coastal waters of Adélie Land, Antarctica (1985–2025)
Author(s): Nicolas Metzl et al.
MS No.: egusphere-2026-1664
MS type: Research article
The paper entitled “Acidification in coastal waters of Adélie Land, Antarctica (1985-2025)” uses cruise observations and neural network approaches to estimate the carbonate chemistry in the upper levels of Adélie Land over the last 40 years. It highlights the temporal variability of carbon dioxide fugacity, total dissolved inorganic carbon, total alkalinity, pH on a total scale, anthropogenic carbon, and the saturation state. Furthermore, the authors estimate the variability trends for most of these parameters and extend these trends into the future, correlating the expected saturation states with respect to aragonite with the critical conditions for precipitation associated with the estimated anthropogenic carbon levels over the course of the century.
The paper’s approach is innovative for the region and includes new data from summer 2024-2025. Another innovative perspective is the application of neural-network outputs to the carbonate system in high latitudes.
There are a few points in the paper that need to be addressed before it can be properly published:
I believe that combining both points could provide the authors with more information and improve the reproducibility of the data.
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General comments:
# line 18: standardise the subscript for CO2 and omega aragonite throughout the paper.
# line 21: remove the space before “Here we present …”.
# line 24: add a space between ± and 0.01, and remove “. “ in the units, both throughout the paper.
# line 38: suggest replacing “offshore ocean” with “open ocean”, as cited in line 43
# lines 44-45: several other papers in the coastal zone of the Northern Antarctic Peninsula that are not cited, but should be. These could be useful for the discussion (especially comparisons between Adélie and other sensitive areas to climate change) and cover aspects of CO2 fluxes (Monteiro et al 2020, https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-020-71814-0) and anthropogenic carbon (Kerr et al 2018, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.dsr2.2017.07.007). These are just a few examples.
# line 47: add a space between ± and std in the first trend.
# line 123: add space between ± and 2
# line 123: I did not identify the description of the flags used. Either describe it or reference it in the bridging papers and method.
# lines 131-133: To standardise quality control flag system, mentioned the one used for AT and CT here (correct me if I am wrong, but I believe you are referring to the one by Boyer, T. P., Baranova, O. K., Coleman, C., Garcia, H. E., Grodsky, A., Locarnini, R. A., et al. (2018), World Ocean Database 2018).
# line 134: remove “.” between µmol and kg.
# line 139: O2 with subscript 2.
# line 144: remove “.” Between µmol and kg. Please correct it throughout the manuscript; there are many of these typos.
# line 151: Why did the authors use the dissociation constants of Lueker et al (2000) instead of those of Goyet and Poisson (1989), the latter of which are known to perform well in high latitudes? If based on Dickson (2007) and Sulpis et al (2020), then cite them, please.
# lines 163-165: beyond the open-ocean AT-salinity equations, there are a few others for coastal regions in Antarctica. Have the authors compared these, too? It would be useful to test the open-ocean and coastal region equations and plot the results as a Taylor diagram (https://doi.org/10.1029/2000JD900719).
# line 167: I am sceptical about how representative this neural network might be of the region. I would suggest adding a short paragraph comparing the in situ data from summer 2024-2025 with neural networks from summer 2024-2025, similar to the comparison between lines 211 and 220. Previous cruises could be included in this comparison (those in Table S1). The paragraph between lines 177 – 192 could be modified to be more method-like than result-like. Additionally, the paper lacks a discussion on modes of climate variability in terms of their regional impact on circulation and biological activity. This is important because it can influence CO2 emission and uptake, as well as long-term trends. Incidentally, sessions “2.2” and “2.4” could be reorganised for easier reading. Example: I think BCG-Argo could have its own session.
Correct me if I am wrong. CO2Sys and LIAR were used to estimate AT data, which was then used to estimate pH and omega (lines 149 - 150). If so, how did you propagate the errors of the different estimates into the pH and omega outputs?
# lines 227 – 228: From this line onwards, I have seen the trend estimates as the slope/difference between two points divided by the time interval. Based on the high interannual variability in Antarctica, I am a bit sceptical of this approach. In winter, with only a few in situ measurements, assumptions are required to do so. However, in the summer, several cruises could provide the interannual variability required to determine the long-term trend. Modes of climate variability and signal decomposition could support interannual controls, improving the interpretation and impact of the paper. The same points are valid for lines 242 – 247.
# lines 238 – 241: This should be method.
# lines 249 – 251: data for Chl-a in 2002 support this interpretation (S6), but it is not valid for 2015. Data for Chl-a 2015 in Fig.S7, please reference this.
# lines 255 – 257 & 331 - 335: How does this trend compare with that in other regions surrounding Antarctica?
# lines 277 – 278: Do the mixing and Redfield ratios in this region support the application of this method in the region? What is the error associated with such an estimate?
# lines 373 – 374: What is the relative contribution of anthropogenic carbon uptake versus CDW upwelled during winter to the impact on CT in the study area? Other regions (e.g., Monteiro et al 2020) have suggested more intense CDW intrusions in the Northern Antarctic Peninsula. Could this be experienced in Adélie Land? Could the sea ice block sea-atmosphere interactions during winter and freshening (+ biological activity) during summer, spiking carbon uptake? I think this deeper discussion would be essential to improve impact.
# Fig 1. Suggest adding isobaths to mark the bathymetry (200 m and 1000 m, for instance). This would improve visualisation.