Multiscale assessment of Indian monsoon rainfall using ICON and CMIP6 model simulations
Abstract. Indian Summer Monsoon (ISM) rainfall is organized across multiple timescales, from diurnal convection to synoptic disturbances, intraseasonal oscillations, and the seasonal mean. Climate models often show different levels of skill at each of these timescales, raising an important question: how do scale-dependent biases shape overall monsoon variability? Here, we assess a medium-resolution (40 km), non-hydrostatic global model (ICON) together with five hydrostatic CMIP6-class models (CNRM, MPI, GFDL, MIROC6, and IITM-ESM; 50–190 km resolution). All simulations are evaluated in AMIP configuration against high-resolution IMERG observations during 1998–2014, allowing isolation of atmospheric sources of rainfall bias. Rainfall errors are strongly scale-dependent and exhibit clear land–ocean contrasts. At the diurnal scale, ICON reproduces amplitudes over the continent with a relatively small bias (∼5–10 %), whereas MPI overestimates land diurnal amplitude by more than 150 % with premature triggering. The CNRM and GFDL show early daytime convection and weak nocturnal rainfall, while MIROC6 and IITM-ESM exhibit reduced diurnal amplitude linked to convective and resolution limitations. Over the Bay of Bengal, ICON overestimates diurnal amplitude (∼60 %) and variance (∼180 %), whereas CMIP6 models underestimate nocturnal oceanic variability (amplitude < 40 %, variance < 60 %). At synoptic timescales (2–7 days), models differ in their ability to sustain organized monsoon disturbances. ICON and GFDL maintain realistic spatial structure with moderate suppression, while MPI underestimates synoptic variance by up to ∼70–80 %. Other models either has weakened synoptic activity or redistribute variability toward intermediate (10–20 day) bands. Across the ensemble, the 20–100-day intraseasonal band is systematically underestimated (by ∼30–60 %) in the AMIP framework, suggesting that coupled ocean–atmosphere feedbacks, among other factors, contribute to maintaining monsoon intraseasonal oscillations. Seasonal rainfall patterns reflect the combined effect of these multiscale biases. Models that maintain a balanced variance distribution across diurnal, synoptic, and intraseasonal bands show improved seasonal structure, whereas distortions at intermediate frequencies contribute to amplitude and migration errors. These results indicate that credible monsoon simulation depends not only on seasonal-mean accuracy but also on physically consistent variability across timescales. A scale-aware diagnostic framework is therefore essential for improving convective triggering, mesoscale organization, boundary-layer processes, and air–sea coupling in climate models.
Title: Multiscale Assessment of Indian monsoon rainfall using ICON and CMIP6 model simulations
By: Pokhrel et al
Reviewer: Sugata Narsey, Australian Bureau of Meteorology
Recommendation: Accept with minor revisions
In this manuscript the authors systematically evaluate Indian monsoon rainfall at multiple time scales in the ICON non-hydrostatic model and 5 CMIP6 models under a prescribed SST set-up. They explore whether a non-hydrostatic model, and/or higher spatial resolution, improves the simulation of Indian monsoon rainfall across scales. Their findings are mixed – while ICON shows some improvements over the CMIP6 models it also has some larger deficiencies at some time scales and in geographic locations. Likewise, higher resolution alone was not a panacea for Indian monsoon rainfall, with relatively coarse models such as IITM-ESM outperforming or matching other models in some areas. The manuscript is well-written and presented, the analysis is of a high quality, the work is novel, and the conclusions are well-supported by evidence. I recommend that the manuscript is accepted with minor revisions.
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Specific comments:
L27: what does block level mean?
L31: N. 2005 is a strange way to reference.
L45: There is some evidence that monsoon depressions are barotropic:
Diaz, M., & Boos, W. R. (2021). The influence of surface heat fluxes on the growth of idealized monsoon. Journal of the Atmospheric Sciences. https://doi.org/10.1175/JAS-D-20-0359.1
L56: no need for etc
L75: This is a key point that I think could be made much earlier!! Forgot full stop.
L102: why these 5 models? And what is the motivation for ICON specifically?
L170: can you provide some justification for using harmonic analysis? Some citations or examples of previous use. Pros and cons of this vs other potential methods.
L173: throughout the manuscript, please use the acronyms from Table 1.
Fig 2: I wonder how these biases would look as a percentage... I suspect ICON would look better!
L384: full stop.
L577: i can see how this is suggested by results, but its not clearly shown. here, and throughout the manuscript, the link between two or more evaluation metrics could be displayed through a figure (scatter plots for example).
L640: what specifically do you mean by higher-frequency variance? these two statements seem circular, since higher amplitude surely means higher variance.
L645: this seems important. i would clarify this earlier, perhaps even in the methodology.
L671: is this shown somewhere? I guess this indicates a larger-scale e.g. circulation (or finer scale e.g. microphysics) control on precipitation?
L677-681: this sentence is too long.
L694: though here you have prescribed SST so not really well-investigated?
L718: credible for what purpose? No parameterised convection scheme will represent squall lines, but may still be useful for other applications.