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Tropical belt expansion and its impacts on climate variability in the Mediterranean from 1980 to 2022
Abstract. The Mediterranean region's climatic parameters are undergoing substantial changes driven by climate change and tropical belt expansion. This paper explores the long-term variability of climatic parameters over the Mediterranean region and their relationship with tropical belt expansion by employing observational and reanalysis data from January 1980 to December 2022 through multiple approaches including correlation, linear regression, singular value decomposition (SVD), wavelet coherence (WTC), and principal component analysis (PCA). The lapse rate tropopause height (LRT-H) exhibits upward trends of approximately 80.58 m/dec. Concurrently, the tropical belt shows poleward expansion of approximately 0.14 °/dec and 0.27 °/dec from both applied methods. The tropical edge latitudes (TELs) of both applied approaches are in phase and have a strong positive correlation with LRT-H, surface temperature, and tropospheric temperature while being of strong negative correlation and out of phase with precipitation. However, there is no substantial correlation for the Standardized Precipitation Evapotranspiration Index (SPEI) with TELs or other climatic parameters. The results of SVD analysis depict that the surface temperature and lower tropospheric temperature (TRP-1) have evident coupling with the TELs in the eastern Mediterranean. Furthermore, surface temperature and TRP-1 have significant increasing trends, which are abundant in the eastern and northern Mediterranean. On the other hand, both precipitation and SPEI exhibit downward trends. Over the Mediterranean, an apparent spatial and temporal variation of climatic parameters is observed. The results confirm the linkage between climatic parameters' variability, coherence, and covariability with the TELs variability patterns over the study area, especially in the eastern Mediterranean region.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-6521', Anonymous Referee #1, 20 Feb 2026 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-6521', Anonymous Referee #2, 22 Feb 2026
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This paper investigates the seasonality and annual trend of the tropical belt edge over Mediterranean, giving insights on the local impact of climate change. However, the analyzed data are interpolated from pressure-level ERA5 to a 100m vertical resolution, which requires further justification. The writing also needs significant improvement, as there are many repetitions throughout the manuscript.
Major concerns:
- In session 2.3, pressure-level ERA5 data are interpreted to 100m resolution to calculate the tropopause. I’m wondering how accurate the interpolated data are. The cited paper (Hindley et al., 2015) used COSMIC data, which has a much higher vertical resolution than pressure-level ERA5. Have you tried using 137 model level ERA5 data and see if there is any difference in calculating the tropopause?
- “TPD” and “TPG” have very high correlation (0.9 shown in figure 3) and they showed very similar results. Session 3.2 have a lot of descriptions about what it’s shown in the figures from both methods. Figure 5 and Figure 6 are very similar. Left and right columns in Figure 7 are similar. Figure 8 and Figure 9 are similar. It looks redundant to me to include the discussion for both methods.
- There are many abbreviations throughout the paper. Reducing them may improve readability.
Line-by-line comments:
Lines 24-25: “both applied methods” is confusing because the methods are not stated earlier. I suggest revising this sentence to something like “the tropical belt shows poleward expansion ranging approximately between 0.14 °/dec and 0.27 °/dec.”
Line 25: “of both applied approaches” seems redundant.
Line 40: “climate change has been documented at a magnitude that exceeds global averages” is very broad. Does climate change here means temperature, precipitation, or something else?
I notice this sentence is rephrasing “As mentioned before, Mediterranean climate change has been observed at a magnitude exceeding global means, despite the fact that the emission of greenhouse gases (GHGs) in Mediterranean countries lie at relatively low levels” from the reference. In this paper, this sentence is missing context. I’m not sure if this sentence is a good one to put at the beginning.
Lines 47-48: This sentence repeated “the Mediterranean region has experienced significant shifts of climate in the past” in Line 45.
Lines 59-69: There is no subject in this sentence. A suggestion is “In astronomy and cartography, the tropical boundaries are at latitudes of ~23.5⁰ north and south”.
Lines 63-64: A better flow is needed. The previous sentence is about the seasonal change and “Tropical belt expansion” in this sentence is due to climate forcing. A suggestion is adding “Under climate change,” at the beginning of the sentence.
Lines 66-67: “sea-surface temperature (SST) variability over the tropics” and “ absorbing aerosols hemispheric asymmetry” don’t appear to be the changes driven by the climate change.
Lines 71-73: “even slight expansion of the tropical belt could cause substantial changes in the global climate system” repeats “The expansion of the tropics could cause substantial changes in the global climate system”.
Lines 76-77: I suggest revising “one of the most vulnerable regions to the effects of climate change” to “one of the most vulnerable regions affected by climate change”.
Line 79: “increasing” to “being”.
Line 82: Add “continue to” before “rise”.
Lines 98-99: “This accelerated…and biodiversity” repeats Lines 88-89.
Lines 115-131: Most of session 2.1 repeats the content already shown in the introduction. Please consider shortening or deleting session 2.1.
Lines 180-181: The captions in Figures are repeated in the test. Same in Lines 192-193.
Lines 181-183: Previous literature also shows an increasing trend, but the values presented in this paper are much larger.
Line 185: Add “in LRT-T also” after “our findings”.
Line 189: “consistent with earlier research” appears three times in this paragraph. Please consider revising to avoid repetition.
Line 207: “most of the grid points” is vague. Please consider stippling the regions where p<0.05. Same for line 213, line 510, line 530, line 570.
Figure 2: Repetition in the caption. For example, “Monthly time series of the TPD TEL method over the Mediterranean region for the period January 1980 to December 2022 (a) and monthly time series of the TPG TEL method over the Mediterranean region for the period January 1980 to December 2022 (b).” can be revised as “Monthly time series of the (a) TPD TEL method and (b) TPG TEL method over the Mediterranean region for the period January 1980 to December 2022”.
Line 244: “major tropical systems” is vague.
Line 250: Why stronger land-sea contrast leads to the following statement “resulting in higher TEL values in this region”?
Lines 283-284: “even minor expansion would have significant consequences” is repetition.
Figure 3: It will be more straightforward to put the correlation numbers on the top right panels.
Figure 10: Repetition in the description of panels.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-6521-RC2
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This study investigates the connection of the tropical edge latitude towards climatic parameters, such as temperature, precipitation, and SPEI. The authors hereby focus on the Mediterranean as an important region, which is undergoing significant changes with ongoing anthropogenic climate change. Utilizing ERA5 reanalysis data and some observational data, the authors explore multiple statistical methods. Overall, this is a comprehensive and detailed study. However, the writing and figures require some refinements, as outlined below, this would significantly improve the clarity and readability of the paper.
General comments
Specific comments
Line 182: consider adding the period investigated from the other authors
Figure 2:
Line 261 & Line 262: The abbreviation for standard deviation “SD” has already been introduced in Line 203.
Figure 3 & Figure 4:
Line 403-405: The figure caption is unnecessary and the repetition can be misleading. Refer to the caption of Figure 5. Suggestion: “As in Fig. 5, but for TPG TEL.”
Figure 5 & Figure 6:
Figure 7:
Figure 8 & Figure 9:
Line 496-500: Remove the repetitive figure caption. Refer to the caption of Figure 8. Suggestion: “As in Fig. 8, but for TPG TEL.”
Lines 552-560: This caption is very repetitive – please improve it.
Line 616: Consider discussing the lack of a significant relationship of SPEI.
Technical corrections
Line 39: “greenhouse gases (GHGs) emissions” should be “greenhouse gas (GHG) emissions”
Line 59: it looks like a upper case zero not a “°”
Line 69: add a “the” before “Hadley circulation”
Line 270: remove hyphen between TPD-TEL
Line 541, Line 544: “45° N-50° N” should be “45° N to 50° N”
Line 546: “20° N-30° N” should be “20° N to 30° N”
Line 595: “GHGs” should be “GHG”