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Accounting for empirical global soil organic characteristics and moisture heterogeneities in soil organic decomposition scheme of land surface models
Abstract. Below ground soil organic carbon (OC) decomposition is governed by several biophysical drivers, causing difficulties to accurately capture the spatial patterns of soil OC stock and of CO2 flux in Earth System models (ESMs). These biophysical drivers influence soil OC decomposition due to the respiration of heterotrophic organisms. Formulation in global scale process-based models of these processes consist of functions that modify the soil OC decay rate and therefore the soil heterotrophic respiration (HR) which modify global soil OC stock estimated by models. Current soil HR modifiers employed in models are a single relationship between soil moisture and the rate of decomposition that are employed for all the ecosystem types. Observational database meta-analysis relationships of SOIL MOISTURE and soil HR has been established considering observed soil physical properties. These relationships serve to define an empirical model that consists of a collection of different relationships based on soil organic carbon content, clay fraction and bulk density in order to uniquely substitute SOIL MOISTURE control on soil HR with a function modifier that reflects soil HR spatial heterogeneity.
In the present study, this empirical model has been embedded in the land surface model Organising Carbon and Hydrology In Dynamic Ecosystems (ORCHIDEE). The effect of the multivariate approach on simulation results has been assessed on soil OC stock and soil HR estimations at global scale. Results show that global soil OC stocks are nearly doubled in the modified model version, which is closer to observations-based products compared with the initial version, while CO2 emissions, due to soil HR, are unchanged. The latitudinal soil OC distribution is maintained, displaying as much soil OC stock in tropical regions as under higher latitudes. This study demonstrates the significance of secondary drivers in the relationship between SOIL MOISTURE and the soil HR response to enable accounting for soil OC stock and CO2 fluxes heterogeneous spatial pattern.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3511', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 Oct 2025
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Elodie Salmon, 30 Jan 2026
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2025/egusphere-2025-3511/egusphere-2025-3511-AC1-supplement.pdf
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Elodie Salmon, 30 Jan 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3511', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 Nov 2025
This study reports an improvement to a carbon model, ORCHIDEE, by replacing the water function in the soil process, and examines the impact of this modification. The authors demonstrate how this improvement affects the estimation of soil carbon and respiration by evaluating the spatial distributions and comparing model outputs with data-driven products. The study shows how improving the soil water function in decomposition processes enhances model performance. However, the manuscript is not easily readable for many readers due to a lack of detailed definitions of variables and functions. As it stands, the manuscript is difficult to follow for those who are not familiar with the Moyano function and the ORCHIDEE model. In addition, I am not sure whether soil moisture in the Moyano function and that in ORCHIDEE are conceptually and definitionally the same.
Major comments
1 Definition and depth of soil moisture
I suspect that the definition of soil moisture in Moyano and ORCHIDEE are not the same. I could not find detailed definitions in the manuscript. This issue is fundamental for incorporating the Moyano function.
2 Soil depth for ORCHIDEE SOC: the assumption of "soil OC content accumulated up to 1 m depth"
In this study, it is assumed that soil OC content is accumulated up to 1 m depth in the model (although officially there is no explicit depth definition in the model). If the SOC functions and decomposition constants in the model are based on CENTURY, the effective soil depth for SOC would be much shallower (around 20-30 cm), because CENTURY was originally developed for agricultural lands. Indeed, Figure 4 shows that the observed SOC (0-100 cm) is much higher than the modeled values. I agree that some assumption is needed to compare model outputs with observational data, but is the 1-m assumption appropriate? Would 0-30 cm be more appropriate? More justification and discussion are needed for this 1-m assumption.
3 Inconsistent and unclear variable definitions
Terms such as litter moisture, soil moisture, organic-rich soil, water saturation, relative soil respiration, control moisture function, and control moisture values are not consistently defined. This inconsistency makes it difficult to follow the manuscript. A thorough revision is needed to ensure clarity and consistency.
4 Soil moisture function descriptions
The descriptions and definitions of the soil moisture functions are also difficult to follow and should be clarified.
Specific comments:
Title / Line 81: "Soil organic characteristics" - this phrase is confusing. Do you mean "soil characteristics" or "organic matter characteristics"? Is "soil organic characteristics" common in this field?
Line 17 / Abstract: "SOIL MOISTURE" - why is this in capital letters? RH is defined, but soil moisture is not.
Line 32-33: "Equilibrium" - this word implies stability or balance, but soil carbon is not at equilibrium. Please revise to avoid misunderstanding.
Line 91: This sentence may need a reference.
Line 109: “theta being the soil moisture in m3/m3 and ranges between 0.25 and 1." - There are many indices representing soil moisture in soil science; please define clearly. Also, why is the minimum value 0.25?
Line 112: "Soil moisture in fraction of saturation" - unclear, please define.
Line 113: "Interval of 0.01" - unclear. Soil moisture is continuous, so why calculate at 0.01 intervals?
Line 119: "Soil height" sounds odd; consider "soil depth" or "soil thickness."
Line 120: "Gridded dependent" - unclear.
Line 122-127: "Maintain integrity" - I cannot follow this process; please clarify.
Line 132-137: Definition of the function - I cannot follow this equation. (1) Why interval? (2) Why is the value for interval n a function of interval n-1? (3) Why is SRini necessary to make a moisture function with a maximum of 1?
Line 166-180: These paragraphs seem to belong to the Methods section.
Figure 3: Litter moisture and soil moisture are not defined. In Line 113, "organic richer soil" is mentioned - does this refer to the same thing?
Line 263: "Yedoma" - unfamiliar term; please define.
Figure 4 / Line 245-247: (1 m depth) - see major comment above; the SOC in ORCHIDEE seems equivalent to a shallower depth.
Line 320-321: Modeled RH vs. data-driven RH - the estimates are similar (within 50-53), so I would not say modeled RH is higher than observed, except for Koning. I would describe them as similar in magnitude.
Line 380-388: RH did not change; NPP is important - more explanation is needed. If moisture function values differ, RH should differ. However, because the model runs to equilibrium, are the RH differences offset by different soil carbon stocks (as RH sources)? Is NPP equivalent to RH? This needs more discussion.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-3511-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Elodie Salmon, 30 Jan 2026
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2025/egusphere-2025-3511/egusphere-2025-3511-AC2-supplement.pdf
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Elodie Salmon, 30 Jan 2026
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The authors identified the clear lack in current LSMs and ESMs of using monotonically increasing CMF-functions, although a hill-shaped function is closer to reality by modeling anoxic effects. The proposed integration of a multivariate function by Moyano et. al is clearly a mechanistic improvement, which is argumentatively well explained. Anyway could these advances in the evaluation not clearly be supported, which could maybe done with further evaluation. I propose to consider the manuscript for publication in ESD after major revisions addressing the points below. The additional evaluation requested may, however, reveal structural issues or inconsistencies in the results, which could ultimately justify rejection if major flaws are identified.
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