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Sea Breeze-Driven Daytime Vertical Distributions of Air Pollutants and Photochemical Implications in an Island Environment
Abstract. Atmospheric pollutants in island and coastal environments are profoundly modulated by sea breezes (SB) and typhoons. Understanding the characteristics of pollutants and their photochemical indicators under different airflow regimes is crucial for effective pollution control. Utilizing Multi-Axis Differential Optical Absorption Spectroscopy (MAX-DOAS) and a sea-land breeze objective identification algorithm, we reveal distinct spatiotemporal patterns in NO2, HCHO, CHOCHO, and associated photochemistry under varying airflow patterns in a rural coastal area of Hainan. Non-sea breeze days (NSBDs) showed higher pollutant levels with broader vertical distribution range under conducive meteorological conditions. Conversely, on sea breeze days (SBDs), SB limits pollutant dispersion and its cooling effect suppresses ozone formation. Furthermore, SB also enhances transport of NO2 and biogenic volatile organic compounds (BVOC) below 300 m, influencing ozone formation sensitivity (OFS) throughout SB phases. Typhoons effectively scavenge pollutants via strong winds and precipitation but also facilitate mid-to-high altitude BVOC transport and vertical dispersion of surface pollutants. Photochemical indicator analysis (HCHO/NO2 [FNR] and CHOCHO/NO2 [GNR]) indicates that the VOC-limited regimes persist even at high altitudes during typhoons. Elevated FNR and GNR thresholds suggest that existing OFS classifications are inadequate for low-NO2 tropical coastal rural areas, underscoring the need for region-specific assessments. Given the BVOC-dominated environment and additional inputs from SB and typhoons, GNR proves more reliable than FNR for OFS determination. This study emphasizes the necessity of integrating local meteorology and environment conditions in O3 control strategies, providing a scientific basis for pollution mitigation in tropical coastal regions prone to SB and typhoons.
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-2588', Hai GUO, 23 Aug 2025
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General Comments
This study employs Multi-Axis Differential Optical Absorption Spectroscopy (MAX-DOAS) observations to characterize the vertical distributions of aerosols, NO₂, HCHO, and CHOCHO under different air current conditions (NSBDs, SBDs, and TDs) in a rural coastal area of Hainan Island, China. The results show that NSBDs are associated with higher pollutant levels and broader vertical distribution ranges. During SBDs, sea breezes limited pollutant dispersion, while their cooling effect suppressed ozone formation. Under TDs, typhoons scavenge pollutants but facilitate mid-to-high altitude BVOC transport and enhance the vertical dispersion of surface pollutants. These findings provide valuable insights into coastal atmospheric processes and pollutant behaviors. The manuscript is generally well-structured and detailed. However, several issues need to be addressed before it can be considered for publication.
Specific Comments
1. Line 30: References should be consistently ordered, either alphabetically by author or chronologically.
2. Line 85: Please clarify the time resolution of the MAX-DOAS observations.
3. Line 130: The sentences beginning with “Accurate identification of … of SB and LB” are redundant and should be revised.
4. Lines 140–150: I suggest moving Figure S4 from the Supplementary Material to the main text and citing it appropriately.
5. Line 165: Please provide the formula used to calculate relative humidity. In addition, the ERA5 data may be too coarse to capture local weather conditions around the in-situ site. For example, uncertainties in planetary boundary layer height are significant. Verification against nearby weather station data is necessary to ensure the robustness of the meteorological analysis.
6. Line 175: Please provide the actual values instead of vague expressions such as “values recorded in Chinese megacity centers.”
7. Figure S5: This figure is not cited in the text.
8. Line 225: The statement of “Notably, most of the SBDs occur consecutively.” can be explained by meso-scale circulations, which usually occur under stable atmospheric conditions dominated by persistent high pressure.
9. Line 245: The claim that “southwesterly winds persist under the typhoon’s peripheral airflow” needs clarification. Since both the typhoon’s location and the sampling site (n this and other studies) change over time, is the peripheral airflow always associated with southwesterly winds?
10. Line 260: Please add vertical wind components to the correlation figures to better support the conclusions.
11. Section 3.3: It is unclear why ozone concentrations are clustered instead of directly
analyzing their evolution under NSBDs, SBDs, and TDs. Please clarify.
12. Lines 315–320: Is it reasonable to use the minimum early-morning ozone concentration as background ozone? Have the effects of NOx titration been excluded?
13. The dataset includes only seven typhoon days, which may be insufficient to represent general typhoon-related airflows. This appears more like a case study.
14. Please clarify whether the results apply only to Hainan Island or can be generalized to other coastal/island environments. Which findings can be extended to similar regions?
Technical Corrections
1. Ensure consistent use of abbreviations: introduce the full term at first mention, followed by the abbreviation, and use the abbreviation thereafter.
2. Line 60: Add a comma before “Nevertheless.”
3. Line 135: Use “Fig. 1a and b” instead of “Fig. 1a,b.”
4. Correct typos, grammatical errors, and syntactic mistakes throughout the manuscript.
5. The English should be polished further, ideally by a native speaker.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-2588-CC1
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