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Multi-Source Remote Sensing-Based Reconstruction of Glacier Mass Changes in Southeastern Tibet Since the 21st Century
Abstract. Glaciers are a crucial freshwater resource and a key indicator of climate change. However, tracking annual changes in glacier inventories remains a significant challenge due to persistent cloud cover and seasonal snow accumulation. The increasing availability of satellite data, particularly from the Sentinel series, has greatly enhanced glacier monitoring capabilities. In this study, we developed an ensemble learning-based random forest classifier using data from Landsat, Sentinel-1, Sentinel-2, and NASADEM to automatically delineate glacier extents in southeastern Tibet from 2016 to 2022, achieving the first annual-resolution glacier inventory in the region. To extend the time series to 2000, we manually constructed glacier inventories for 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015 by integrating a three-year dataset centered on each target year, addressing the limitations posed by the absence of early Sentinel data. Our results reveal a consistent decline in glacier area, from 7898.61 ± 652.15 km2 in 2000 to 6317.13 ± 592.57 km2 in 2022, with an average annual loss of 85.03 ± 7.60 km2/y. Notably, the retreat rate accelerated after 2010, increasing from 57.72 ± 16.81 km²/y (2000–2010) to 97.72 ± 17.67 km²/y (2010–2022). By integrating satellite altimetry data, we calculated the glacier mass balance using dynamically updated glacier areas, resulting in an annual mass loss 6.20 ± 1.16 Gt/y. Correlation analysis between glacier thickness and area changes showed a strong positive relationship (R2 = 0.89, p < 0.001). This study provides a novel approach to high-temporal-resolution glacier assessments by incorporating annual dynamic glacier areas into mass balance calculations. The improved accuracy of these estimations offers a refined understanding of cryosphere changes in southeastern Tibet, underscoring the urgency of monitoring glacier dynamics in response to climate change.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1772', Anonymous Referee #1, 20 Jun 2025
In this study, the authors identified gaps in glacier mapping on the southeastern Tibetan Plateau due to high cloud and snow coverage in this region. They developed an ensemble learning-based random forest classifier using Landsat, Sentinel-1, Sentinel-2 and NASA DEM data to automatically delineate glacier extents from 2016 to 2022. They then extended this inventory to 2000 by combining the manually mapped glacier outlines in 2000, 2005, 2010 and 2015. They also provided glacier mass balance information based on satellite altimetry data. Overall, the glacier outlines provided in this study for the southeastern Tibetan Plateau form a useful baseline dataset. The methods developed in this study can also be extended to other regions with high cloud and snow coverage. This manuscript is suitable for publication in The Cryosphere. I recommend making the following improvements:
Major and specific comments:
- Title: How about to change “Tibet” to “Tibetan Plateau” in Title and other places?
- “achieving the first annual-resolution glacier inventory in the region”, suggest adding the spatial resolution here
- “constructed glacier inventories for 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015”, it is possible to find the available data for so dense time interval?
- How about the comparison of mapped glacier area and mass balance with other existing datasets and performance of your datasets?
- “Global changes significantly affect regional climate, rivers and lakes evolution, and the formation of geological hazards”, suggested refs (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41558-020-0855-4, https://doi.org/10.1038/s43017-024-00554-w)
- “Visual interpretation offers high accuracy and ease of use but requires substantial manpower
and resources”, suggested ref (http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.rse.2013.07.043)
- “Keshri et al. (2009) (Keshri et al., 2009)” style correction
- “Y. Lu et al. (Lu et al., 2021)” style correction, I suggest that authors check the citation style throughout this manuscript
- “including K-nearest neighbors (KNN), support vector machines (SVM), gradient-boosting decision trees (GBDT), decision trees (DT), random forests (RF), and multilayer perceptron (MLP).” Please check if all these abbreviations are necessary, and appear multiple times
- “Ye et al (Qinghua, 2020)..” correction
- Introduction: The authors reviewed a broadly studies, and I suggest the authors have a summary of gaps from these existing studies and then proposed the objective s of this study.
- Figure 1: I suggest the authors add a inset to show the location of study area in the Tibetan Plateau.
- “5,000 meters” to “5,000 m”
- square kilometers to km2
- L115: This statistical information can be added in Figure 1 as an inset small figure.
- 2.2 Data and 3 Methods, and other sections: Some subsections are very short in text, and can be combined together.
- Some sections such as Normalized Difference Water Index (NDWI) and Normalized Difference Snow Index (NDSI) are known well, can be cited only.
- Figure 3: I don’t know if this figure is necessary, and the information provided is simple.
- Figure 5: Some keywords for these subfigures can be added on figures.
- Figure 6: can be merged with other figures as the information of this figure is simple.
- Figure 7: Caption: “at 2000” to “in 2000”, and “Result2000” corrected to “Outline in 2000”
- Figure 8: This statistical of glacier area change between 2000 and 2022 is too simple and should be improved.
- 4 Results and analysis: It is only one subsection: 4.1 Glacier extraction results and error analysis. The results section is too short, and the description in abstract that your study has more information. I suggest the authors extend the results section and should be consistent with your abstract.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-1772-RC1 - RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1772', Frank Paul, 25 Jun 2025
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1772', William D. Harcourt, 27 Aug 2025
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