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Future changes in Antarctic near-surface winds: regional variability and key drivers under a high-emission scenario
Abstract. Antarctic near-surface winds play a key role in shaping the local climate of Antarctica. For instance, they trigger drifting snow and reduce the amount of precipitation reaching the ground. Despite their importance, substantial uncertainties remain regarding their future changes over the continent, especially in winter, under a warming scenario. Here, we analyse projections of winter near-surface winds in Antarctica produced by four CMIP6 Global Climate Models downscaled by a regional atmospheric model adapted for the study of polar regions. Our analysis first demonstrates that the downscaling helps to improve the representation of near-surface winds at present day. On the continent, projected changes in July wind speeds between the late 21st and 20th centuries reveal considerable regional variability, with opposing trends depending on the area and model used. Nevertheless, the 4 models used agree on a significant strengthening of near-surface winds in Adélie Land, Ross-ice shelf and Enderby Land and a significant weakening in some coastal areas, such as Shackleton ice shelf, Pine Island Glacier and Ronne ice shelf. Using the momentum budget decomposition, we separate and quantify the contributions of different drivers to future changes in wind speed. These drivers include katabatic and thermal wind accelerations (which are related to the the net radiative cooling by the iced surface) as well as large-scale forcing. We project a significant decrease of both katabatic and thermal wind accelerations. Because in a warming climate they act to increase the wind speed in opposite directions, we find an overall compensation effect of the changes in katabatic and thermal wind at the margins of the continent, while large-scale forcing exhibits both significant increases and decreases depending on the location. Ultimately, we find that most significant strengthening of near-surface winds originates from strengthening in the large-sale forcing while most significant weakening of near-surface winds can be attributed to changes in the surface forcing.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1419', Anonymous Referee #1, 02 May 2025
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AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Cécile Davrinche, 18 Jun 2025
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2025/egusphere-2025-1419/egusphere-2025-1419-AC2-supplement.pdf
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AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Cécile Davrinche, 18 Jun 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1419', Anonymous Referee #2, 09 May 2025
The manuscript focuses on projections of surface wind speeds over Anarctica, which is comparatively under researched. The approach is very comprehesive (e.g., four downscaled GCMs, as well as a budget analysis) and the figures are well made - and clearly a lot of effort has gone into this work. Additionally, in general much of the results are well explained, with a good level/balance of detail. So there is much merit to the paper.
However, unfortunately the manuscript is let down by other instances of poor writing and organisation - and indeed I would even go as far as suggesting that the manuscript in its present state was not ready for submission. These concerns are especially evident in the Introduction and Methods section, which come across as rather muddled, disorgansied, and disjointed. I am sure this is not reflective of the authors abilities and knowledge, so this really has to be remedied before the manuscript can be considered for publication. I would really suggest a very thorough rewrite/revision of many of the section is necessary, with all authors contributing.
Major comments:
+ Many parts of the manuscript come across as rather unpolished and the writing disjointed. This really needs to be improved. For example, many of the sentences in the Introduction claim something but do not include a citation for evidence. So sentences such as ‘On the one hand, the greenhouse warming causes an increase of the incoming longwave radiation.’ and ‘Although there is a consensus on the reduction of surface forcing in climate projections’. There are also incidences of repetition, such as in the Introduction with something along the lines of ‘which is proportionate to the strength of the temperature inversion’ mentioned twice, and in the methods and Introduction which both mention something along the lines of ‘Because of their resolution, GCMs are not expected to perform well in locations with complex topography.’ Other instances are the preambles/motivation before the results, which just say in a slightly different fashion what was said before. Please remove all repetition, and remember that your audience/readers only need to be told something once. Also there are typos, such as ‘(e.g. north of Ross and Amery ice shelves and north of the Peninsula’ in the Introduction (so no closure of parentheses). Mistakes such as AWS defined, and the phrase automatic weather station still used. Very random / ad hoc approaches such as using m/s in one sentence and km/hr in the following sentence (methods). These give the feel of a rushed writing process, and of a manuscript submitted before it was really ready. There are also parts of it which are disorgansied, such in section 2.1 mentioning ERA5, and then ERA5 not being explained until later (also it’s not explained in a logical fashion from the methods that ERA5 is being used to select the GCMs.). Poor paragraph structure such as section 2.1.2. Finally, some odd sentences such as ‘We focus on the Antarctic continent, which is the source region of the katabatic forcing’ in the final paragraph of the Introduction.
+ Methods: Out of the blue it is mentioned that the subset of AWSs are selected based on their ability to represent ERA5. This is not justified. Additionally, this seems a rather strange choice, as ERA5 would also struggle to represent steep coastal gradients, so also do poorly representing katabatic winds. So justification is clearly required. The correction to the AWS dataset is also poorly explained (Equations 1 and 2) – its not even clear what is being corrected, and what 1-3 and 1-6 refers to.
+ Selection criteria for GCMs: This seems to state that their performance in the Arctic is also taken into account, which is completely unjustified.
+ There are a lot of locations mentioned, but I don’t think they are always shown on a map.
Minor comments (this is just a selection as there are a lot of ‘minor’ concerns that need to be addressed by a very thorough revision of the paper)
+ Abstract: Not clear what the distinction between katabatic and thermally driven winds is. I think some explanation of the term 'thermally driven' is necessary here, as otherwise the reader is lost.
+ The introduction mentions one mode of variability, the SAM. But what about the Amundsen Sea Low?
+ The katabatic winds are also dependent on the size of the slope.
+ Section 2.1.3: Not sure why the comment on the length of observations in the summer season is necessary. And shouldn’t the number of AntAWS stations mentioned here, actually be mentioned in section 2.1.1. Comes across as disorganised.
+ Section 2.1.4: At least the third time that GCMs issues over representing complex orography has been mentioned. Repetition. Makes the manuscript look extremely disorganised and amateurish.
+ Line 118. Typo. Grill -> Grid
+ Methods: Its not clear what the term ‘Implausibility’ is being used here for.
+ Section 2.3.2: Poor paragraph structure.
+ Section 3.1: The preamble here is inappropriate / repetition. This material should be in the Introduction or Methods, not repeated at the beginning of the results section. This weakens the paper and makes it look disorganised.
+ Section 3.3: Similar comment to above, no need for the preamble.
+ Line 319: SAM defined again
+ Section 3.3.1: Huge amount of repetition on how SAM will change.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-1419-RC2 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC2', Cécile Davrinche, 18 Jun 2025
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2025/egusphere-2025-1419/egusphere-2025-1419-AC1-supplement.pdf
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AC1: 'Reply on RC2', Cécile Davrinche, 18 Jun 2025
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Antarctic near-surface winds are important for blowing snow, precipitation and ice shelf stability. This article presents projections of Antarctic winds for the end of the century under a high-emissions scenario, using the MAR model with a suite of driving global models from CMIP6. A comprehensive overview of changes in winds is presented, with meticulous evaluation of the added value of dynamical downscaling. The authors also decompose the momentum budget in the regional model projections. Although a previous paper on future winds (Bintanja et al., 2014) did estimate two of these terms, to my knowledge this is the first to provide a full budget decomposition of projected winds from regional model output. The results are novel and interesting and I would support this paper’s publication subject to revisions. The main points I raise in this review are regarding the application of the budget:
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