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Terrain is a stronger predictor of peat depth than airborne radiometrics in Norwegian landscapes
Abstract. Peatlands are Earth's most carbon-dense terrestrial ecosystems and their carbon density varies with the depth of the peat layer. Accurate mapping of peat depth is crucial for carbon accounting and land management, yet existing maps lack the resolution and accuracy needed for these applications. This study evaluates whether digital soil mapping using remotely sensed data can improve existing maps of peat depth in western and southeastern Norway. Specifically, we assessed the predictive value of LiDAR-derived terrain variables and airborne radiometric data across two, >10 km2 sites. We measured peat depth by probing and ground-penetrating radar at 372 and 1878 locations at the two sites, respectively. Then we trained Random Forest models using radiometric and terrain variables, plus the national map of peat depth, to predict peat depth at 10 m resolution. The two best models achieved mean absolute errors of 60 and 56 cm, explaining one-third of the variation in peat depth. Terrain variables were better predictors than radiometric variables, with elevation and valley bottom flatness showing the strongest relationships to depth. Radiometric variables showed inconsistent predictive value – improving performance at one site while degrading it at the other. The accuracy of the national map of peat depth did not measure up to any of our remote sensing models, even though it was calibrated to the same data. Still, weak relationships with remotely sensed variables made peat depth hard to predict overall. Based on these findings, we conclude that digital soil mapping can improve existing, broad-scale maps of peat depth in Norway, but highly localized carbon stock assessments are best made from field measurements. Furthermore, the inability of models to identify peat presence outside known peatlands highlights the need for integrated mapping of peat lateral extent and depth. Together, these pathways promise more accurate landscape-scale carbon stock assessments and better-informed land management policies.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1046', Anonymous Referee #1, 11 Apr 2025
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Review: Terrain is a stronger predictor of peat depth than airborne radiometrics in Norwegian landscapes
General Comments
This article comprehensively addresses the modelling challenges of predicting peat depth from terrain variables. It takes high resolution terrain variables (derived from LiDAR) and low resolution (comparatively) airborne radiometric data across two individual peat landscapes in Norway and used Random Forest machine learning algorithm to train combinations of these variables to a multitude of peat depth probes and GPR peat depth measurements taken in order to establish the predict power of such variables for peat depth mapping.
Overall, I found the article to be generally well written, with a very comprehensive and detailed description of modelling mechanism, error derivation, and feature choice. It is a very long article, going into great detail in several areas, and below I suggest at least one section/topic that could be removed entirely to reduce length and increase overall readability. I suggest the authors review all sections for conciseness and reduce the article length where possible. The level of detail may mean a reader less familiar with machine learning modelling may find the article hard to follow. While I do find the article to be within the scope of SOIL, I would be concerned that it focuses heavily on the modelling methodology.
Additionally, there were several areas where the language used was quite casual for a scientific article. Several are highlighted under minor considerations below.
Finally, the main concern noted is the imbalance between the consideration given to radiometric data compared to terrain variables. Considering the title is stating terrain being “better” than radiometrics, and given the emerging understanding of the use of radiometric data in peat land mapping, there is are some fundamental errors in the methods presented, which may be biasing the conclusion alluded to in the title.
Specific Comments
The first concern in the comparison of radiometric data to lidar terrain variables is related to the choice of radiometric variables. The authors opt to use potassium, uranium and thorium ground concentration units alongside the Total Count data from the full energy spectrum. These ground concentration measurements are derived from counts per second measurements on the airplane which are calibrated, usually using pads of known concentrations at a calibration facility. Therefore, concentration of any radioelement is a measurement of the concentration of that element in the top ~ 60 cm – 1 m of the soil. However, peat soils are different. Being organic, they don’t contain the typical geological material that make up soils. Therefore, they act as an attenuative environment to gamma rays. As the potential source of gamma rays in peat areas is blocked and attenuated by the peats, the concentration calibration is no longer physically valid. While these concentration data are indeed provided by the contractors of such surveys, it is now recognized that the counts per second measurement is a more appropriate unit when considering attenuation of gamma rays in peat soils (O'Leary et al, 2022, 2024). In particular considering depth, the deeper the peat, the greater the attenuation of gamma rays. Similarly, the wetter the peat the greater the attenuation of gamma rays. The use of concentration data is not valid for a study in predicting peat depth. I recommend either the authors convert these concentrations to counts per second, or remove all but the Total Count data from their analysis and consider take the next concern into account.
There is an additional argument missing from within the authors discussion, namely the fact that we never know the initial source strength, or counts, of the gamma rays for a given footprint. The measurement at the airplane is an attenuated version of this initial source. This attenuation is controlled by the attenuation coefficient for a given element and depth, soil moisture, bulk density and porosity (Beamish 2013) of the peat soils. From a purely physics/modelling point of view, this makes the prediction of peat depth an underdetermined problem. Even if the soil moisture, bulk density and porosity was known absolutely, the initial source is never known and so any number of peat depths may result in any given gamma count at the airplane. Additionally, this modelling exercise cannot be performed on Total Count data as this is summed from the entire measurement energy spectrum, which contains multiple element specific attenuation coefficient, meaning the Total Count data is only ever indicative of attenuation variability across a site, with no ability to model anything quantitative. This puts Radiometrics in a natural disadvantage for a quantitative prediction of peat depth. Given the title of this article, I find that the discussion around the radiometrics lacked sufficient detail to make a fair comparison, which naturally results in such a bias towards terrain variables in such a modelling context. This is therefore not a result per say, but more a perfectly expected outcome. For this concern, I suggest a more comprehensive discussion around the physical limitations of radiometrics in the prediction of peat depth.
The main focus of this article is on the prediction of peat depth. However, the authors include several sections of the possibility of peatland extent mapping. This is not mentioned at all in the abstract, or the introduction in great detail. As this article is already quite long and complex, I suggest the removal of any sections and text related to mapping peat land extent as it is not the focus of the article and only acts to add unnecessary complexity to an already very technical methodology. The authors even mention in Line 535 that their aim was not to map extent. I suggest the removal of all reference to peatland extent prediction and instead focus on the prediction of peat depth. A much shorter reference to the importance of peatland extent knowledge could perhaps be mentioned in the conclusions, but a full analysis and discussion (section 4.1.4) is not appropriate in this article.
Technical Corrections
Line 58- 59. There is no need to include this sentence with an example here, as the next paragraph goes into the necessary detail on Slope. This is an example of how the authors might reduce the overall size of the article.
Section 2.2
I would suggest moving this opening paragraph to the end of this section as it acts more to sum up how the authors are using the various predictors. It mentions several of the predictors directly, but the are not described until later sections (for example 2.2.1). This would increase the readability of this section.
Line 179: Remove “also using White Box” as this is obvious.
Line 258: The authors mention density; however, they do not expand on this. Was this measured in the field, or an operator’s observation and subjective interpretation of density?
Line 371: What is the relevance of the Persons correlation coefficient of 0.7. Was this tested at all? Readers may not be familiar with this so it should be explained a bit more.
Table 2: I recommend putting a vertical line between the results for both sites so as to easier distinguish between them.
Heading Section 4.1.1 – “but not useless!” is very casual language to be using in a scientific article. This is just one example of this casual language. I suggest the authors review the article for this throughout.
Line 464: “low hanging fruit” is also casual and colloquial and may not be understood by all cultures.
Line 515: “large stocks really are large” – very vague and non-scientific comment. What is large?
Line 530: remove the question at the start of this section.
Line 549: This section is the first mention of the radiometric survey parameters. I would recommend moving some of this section to the Methods and Material section as it is useful descriptors of how the data came to be.
Line 564: Typically, airborne radiometric surveys have strict conditions that they must fly under. One is related to rainfall occurrence and airborne surveys should not happen directly after rainfall. The authors statement with regards to air moisture should be clarified as otherwise the contractor may have been at fault by provide incorrect data, which would have implications for the usage of radiometric data in this area in this study.
Line 628 – 629: remove the sentence starting “The rest of this section….” As it is unnecessary.
Line 634: “luxury” is again a very casual phrasing within a scientific article.
Line 664: “tricky” – casual
Finally, there is no definite conclusion to this article, nor a heading stating same. I suggest the authors either add a section at the end and move some text here to highlight the main conclusions as currently the “discussion” section is quite large and probably not appropriate to act as a combined discussion and conclusion section.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-1046-RC1
Data sets
Peat depth and occurrence in areas covered by airborne radiometric surveys, southeastern and western Norway, 1983-2023. Julien Vollering et al. https://doi.org/10.6073/PASTA/6CE440152F693F2156BF5B692A2E7917
Model code and software
julienvollering/DSMdepth Julien Vollering https://github.com/julienvollering/DSMdepth
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