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Innovative aerosol hygroscopic growth study from Mie-Raman-Fluorescence lidar and Microwave Radiometer synergy
Abstract. This study focuses on the characterization of aerosol hygroscopicity using remote sensing techniques. We employ a Mie-Raman-Fluorescence lidar (LILAS), developed at the ATOLL platform, Laboratoire d’Optique Atmosphérique, Lille, France, in combination with the RPG-HATPRO G5 microwave radiometer to enable continuous aerosol and water vapor monitoring. We identify hygroscopic growth cases when an aerosol layer exhibits an increase in both aerosol backscattering coefficient and relative humidity. By examining the aerosol layer type, determined through a clustering method, the fluorescence backscattering coefficient, which remains unaffected by the presence of water vapor, and the absolute humidity, we verify the homogeneity of the aerosol layer. Consequently, the change in the backscattering coefficient is solely attributed to water uptake. The Hänel theory is employed to describe the evolution of the backscattering coefficient with relative humidity and introduces a hygroscopic coefficient, γ, which depends on the aerosol type. Case studies conducted on July 29 and March 9, 2021 examine respectively an urban and a smoke aerosol layer. For the urban case, γ is estimated as 0.47±0.03 at 532 nm; as for the smoke case, the estimation of γ is 0.5±0.3. These values align with those reported in the literature for urban and smoke particles. Our findings highlight the efficiency of the Mie-Raman-Fluorescence lidar and Microwave radiometer synergy in characterizing aerosol hygroscopicity. The results contribute to advance our understanding of atmospheric processes, aerosol-cloud interactions, and climate modeling.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-84', Anonymous Referee #1, 19 Feb 2024
The authors demonstrate that the additional information of the fluorescence backscatter coefficient improves hygroscopic growth studies with lidar by presenting two case studies. This technical improvement advances the possibilities to study hygroscopic growth of aerosol particles with lidar, which is an important topic for ongoing and future research. Besides this primary goal of the manuscript, a new aerosol clustering method is introduced. Here, I see some difficulties which are further elaborated below. These difficulties lead to my decision to accept the manuscript after major revisions.
Major comments:
The introduction of the new aerosol clustering method FLARE-GMM is a topic on its own and is somehow hidden in the current manuscript. It is neither mentioned in the title nor in the abstract (except of a short hint on line 13). No one will find the method later on, because from the title and abstract a hygroscopic growth study is anticipated.
My decision is to remove the description of FLARE-GMM from the manuscript and focus on the hygroscopic growth study. FLARE-GMM might be presented in an own dedicated publication.
These are the reasons which led to my decision:I. There are no compelling reasons why you need FLARE-GMM for your two case studies. You use it to assess the aerosol type, urban and smoke, respectively. This assessment can be done with conventional lidar-based aerosol typing schemes based on intensive optical properties or with the additional use of the fluorescence capacity as described in Veselovskii et al., 2022.
II. At the current state, the presentation of FLARE-GMM algorithm seems not mature yet.
- Firstly, it seems to be only applicable to the atmospheric conditions at Lille and it is therefore not easily transferrable to other locations. Especially, the absence of marine aerosol in your clustering approach limits it to continental sides. Globally, marine aerosol is one of the major aerosol components. Probably, a clustering has to be repeated for each measurement station.
- Secondly, you state in your conclusion that FLARE-GMM will be enhanced by adding multiwavelength depolarization ratios, lidar ratios and the Ångström exponent. It would be good to add these quantities and prepare a dedicated publication about the mature FLARE-GMM method.
- The description of the method is presently rather short and could be extended in an own publication. It is not clear to me whether the uncertainties of the input quantities are considered and how do you train the algorithm, e.g., which number of data points you have used. Furthermore, you could explain how RH is considered in the model.
- And lastly, the classification accuracy estimation (Sect. 3.1) in the presented way is not so convincing:
- You state that Figure 4 contains dust examples and Figure 5 a smoke layer. Except for the airmass origin you don’t mention any other proof that it is the case. Intensive optical properties can be easily used to proof the presence of dust or smoke layers, respectively.
- The comparison via the confusion matrix with the NATALI algorithm gives an indication that these algorithms provide similar results. However, it is not a convincing proof. Especially, the inability of NATALI to detect any dust layers arouses concerns. I would recommend to compare it more than one aerosol classification scheme. The well-established schemes of Burton et al., 2012 or Groß et al., 2013 might help to dispel some doubts.
Minor comments:
- The title highlights the microwave radiometer, but in your manuscript, it is not very prominent. Please highlight the use of the radiometer stronger in your text
- Affiliations: The level of detail varies a lot between affiliation 1 and 3.
- L 29: Please use the term “ice nucleating particle (INP)” according to the conventions presented in Vali et al., 2015 (needs not to be cited, just for your information).
- L 38: You mention a range of instruments and then directly switch to lidar systems. Traditionally, hygroscopic growth was studied with nephelometers. Please add some lines and references about other studies of hygroscopic growth.
- In general, the reference list concerning hygroscopic growth studies is rather short. Please consider work, e.g., by Paul Zieger, Gloria Titos, Sebastian Düsing and others. Mostly, extinction enhancement was studied, but there are further lidar studies about the backscatter enhancement factor.
- Be more precise in your formulations, e.g.,
L 50 approximately 460 nm -> please provide the central wavelength and the width of the interference filter, here and in line 71
L178 What do you mean with notable temporal resolution? Be precise.
L248 from model estimations. From which model? Probably also from ERA-5, but it is nowhere mentioned.
L250 remains highly stable -> How do you define “highly stable”? I would not consider the curve in Fig. 7 to be highly stable. - L 36,37 Why the references include a a letter for the surname?
- L 46-49: Too much information for an introduction.
- L 52 like pollen or biomass burning smoke
- L 70 At which wavelengths the depolarization ratio is measured?
- L 71 particle linear depolarization ratio
- Indices should not be in italic, e.g., beta_fluo . Please correct in the text, the equations and figures.
- L 90 The link is not necessary.
- Fig. 1 + 2: What is the purpose of these figures? They are not needed to understand the manuscript. Especially, Fig. 2 is just showing a commercially available instrument.
- L 108/109 The assumption that the fluorescence backscatter is unchanged by hygroscopic growth is quite fundamental for your study. Therefore, I would recommend to elaborate a bit further on this assumption. You could summarize/repeat the main arguments of Veselovskii et al., 2020 here again.
- L 130 Here, the absence of marine aerosol puzzled me (see comment above). It is characterized by its strong hygroscopic growth and change in depolarization ratio with RH as shown in previous lidar studies.
- L 163: “absence of definitive benchmarks” -> Wouldn’t be manual typing based on the intensive properties such a definitive bemchmark? -> maybe use depolarization ratio, lidar ratio, Angstrom + fluorescence capacity to do the typing?
- L 166 unequivocally -> You provide only backward trajectories and no further proof.
- Often, you introduce the figures twice, once above the figure and once below (e.g., Fig 6, 8, 9). In the manuscript, you can place the figure in between, but in the real paper the figure will be placed somewhere else. E.g., L 209/210 contain the same content as L 214.
- Fig. 6 Please explain how do you get from 38 profiles to 4262 data points.
- L 219 Marine/CC -> What does it mean?
- Please keep the same date format, e.g., 29 July 2021. At some instances you switch the American format.
- Please use an appropriate time format, e.g., 22:00 instead of 10 pm.
- Fig. 7 and following: You state that your profile was measured at 10 pm. But how long was your measurement? From 22:00 to 22:01 or to 23:00 or from 21:30 till 22:30? Be more precise.
- Fig. 7 and following: Do you report the altitude about ground or above sea level?
- Fig. 7 and following: You state LILAS retrieved optical properties. But do you retrieve the potential temperature from the lidar? Be more precise.
- Fig. 7 and following: In the caption you should write the whole name of the property and not just the symbol, e.g., beta_532, because the caption should explain the figure. If you just repeat what is stated on the axis of the figure, there isn’t any additional information. It holds especially for Fig. 11.
- Do not change the number of significant digits, e.g., L 264 0.91, L 313, and Fig. 11b.
- L 299 The potential temperature is monotonically decreasing in the indicated height range. How do you define a stable potential temperature? The best would be to define it at some point.
- L 315 The uncertainty just increases from 0.28 to 0.3, meaning that the uncertainty was high even without considering the fluorescence backscatter.
- L 320 What do you mean with a decrease in RH by 10%? The statement is ambiguous, because it can mean a decrease from 78% to 68% or 10% from the actual value. I guess, you mean the first one.
- L 355 an urban aerosol layer
- L 359 Could you move LILAS to a place where radiosondes are launched? Or could you use data from a different lidar station with available radiosondes?
References:
Burton, S. P.; Ferrare, R. A.; Hostetler, C. A.; Hair, J. W.; Rogers, R. R.; Obland, M. D.; Butler, C. F.; Cook, A. L.; Harper, D. B. & Froyd, K. D.: Aerosol classification using airborne High Spectral Resolution Lidar measurements -- methodology and examples, Atmospheric Measurement Techniques, 2012, 5, 73-98
Groß, S.; Esselborn, M.; Weinzierl, B.; Wirth, M.; Fix, A. & Petzold, A.: Aerosol classification by airborne high spectral resolution lidar observations, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 2013, 13, 2487-2505
Vali, G.; DeMott, P. J.; Möhler, O. & Whale, T. F.: Technical Note: A proposal for ice nucleation terminology, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 2015, 15, 10263-10270
Veselovskii, I.; Hu, Q.; Goloub, P.; Podvin, T.; Barchunov, B. & Korenskii, M.: Combining Mie--Raman and fluorescence observations: a step forward in aerosol classification with lidar technology, Atmospheric Measurement Techniques, 2022, 15, 4881-4900
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-84-RC1 - AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Robin Miri, 13 Mar 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-84', Anonymous Referee #2, 19 Feb 2024
The manuscript focuses on characterizing aerosol hygroscopicity using remote sensing techniques. The innovative approach of utilizing Raman lidar measurements with fluorescence capacity is highlighted as a means to enhance this characterization. The use of the fluorescence backscatter coefficient as a weighting factor in tracking the evolution of aerosol concentration within the aerosol layer is deemed a valuable approach that addresses many limitations inherent in remote sensing techniques for such studies. Therefore, I recommend that the manuscript be published following the revisions suggested by the referees.
However, the study does face some limitations, particularly evident in the case studies presented. Both cases suffer from large uncertainties in relative humidity estimation, stemming from the combination of water vapor mixing ratio from the lidar and temperature from ERA-5 reanalysis databases. This could lead to increased uncertainties in the observed values of the hygroscopic parameter (gamma). Furthermore, the second case (9 March 2023) exhibits a narrow variation of RH in the hygroscopic case, potentially amplifying errors. Despite these limitations, the results demonstrate the potential of this new approach for future studies. It prompts the question of whether there are opportunities to improve the retrieval of relative humidity. Could combining water vapor profiles from the lidar with temperature data from microwave radiometers enhance the RH profile? This alternative approach could be compared with your results to evaluate its effectiveness.
Another aspect hindering aerosol characterization is the use of the FLARE-GMM model. Authors mention that the model is not trained below 1500 m, where the two hygroscopic layers are found. I suggest a more comprehensive identification and characterization of the aerosols presented in this case. Why not utilize aerosol measurements from your station, such as sun-photometer measurements during those days, Angström exponent profiles from the lidar, backtrajectory analysis, or models like CAMS to identify the type of aerosol?
Regarding the objections raised by referee 1 regarding the inclusion of the aerosol clustering method FLARE-GMM in this publication, I concur and refrain from adding further comments on this aspect.
Below are some minor comments:
- In the keywords section, consider replacing "classification" with "aerosol typing."
- Line 45: Please provide explanations for the acronyms EARLINET/ACTRIS-FR.
- Lines 47-49: The following sentence is unclear; improve the wording: "The elastic signal is generated from the elastic scattering of laser light by atmospheric molecules and aerosols. The depolarized signal refers to the part of the elastic signal that retains laser polarization or becomes depolarized after scattering. Finally, the Raman signal results from inelastic scattering, or Raman scattering, by atmospheric molecules."
- Line 68: Ensure a space between the number and units, e.g., "70 mJ at 355 nm."
- Line 121: Similarly, include a space between the number and units, e.g., "1.5 km."
- Line 172: Replace "materialized" with "observed."
- Line 239: Express time as "22:00 UTC" and "21:00 UTC" instead of "10 pm" and "9 pm," respectively, throughout the manuscript.
- Figure 7: Indicate whether altitude is measured above ground or sea level for all figures.
- Figure 7: Consider showing a wider range of profiles to observe model and lidar measurements in the lower troposphere, including clean regions.
- Line 256: Correct "bellow" to "below."
- Line 289: Ensure a space between the number and units, e.g., "532 nm."
- Line 299: Be cautious in asserting from this plot that potential temperature remains stable in the hygroscopic layer.
- Lines 355-356: Replace "and" with “an", “ .. of an urban: ..."
- Check for typos in citations (e.g., "Guzman et al." instead of "Navas-Guzmán et al."). Ensure all citations appear in the reference list.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-84-RC2 - AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Robin Miri, 13 Mar 2024
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-84', Anonymous Referee #1, 19 Feb 2024
The authors demonstrate that the additional information of the fluorescence backscatter coefficient improves hygroscopic growth studies with lidar by presenting two case studies. This technical improvement advances the possibilities to study hygroscopic growth of aerosol particles with lidar, which is an important topic for ongoing and future research. Besides this primary goal of the manuscript, a new aerosol clustering method is introduced. Here, I see some difficulties which are further elaborated below. These difficulties lead to my decision to accept the manuscript after major revisions.
Major comments:
The introduction of the new aerosol clustering method FLARE-GMM is a topic on its own and is somehow hidden in the current manuscript. It is neither mentioned in the title nor in the abstract (except of a short hint on line 13). No one will find the method later on, because from the title and abstract a hygroscopic growth study is anticipated.
My decision is to remove the description of FLARE-GMM from the manuscript and focus on the hygroscopic growth study. FLARE-GMM might be presented in an own dedicated publication.
These are the reasons which led to my decision:I. There are no compelling reasons why you need FLARE-GMM for your two case studies. You use it to assess the aerosol type, urban and smoke, respectively. This assessment can be done with conventional lidar-based aerosol typing schemes based on intensive optical properties or with the additional use of the fluorescence capacity as described in Veselovskii et al., 2022.
II. At the current state, the presentation of FLARE-GMM algorithm seems not mature yet.
- Firstly, it seems to be only applicable to the atmospheric conditions at Lille and it is therefore not easily transferrable to other locations. Especially, the absence of marine aerosol in your clustering approach limits it to continental sides. Globally, marine aerosol is one of the major aerosol components. Probably, a clustering has to be repeated for each measurement station.
- Secondly, you state in your conclusion that FLARE-GMM will be enhanced by adding multiwavelength depolarization ratios, lidar ratios and the Ångström exponent. It would be good to add these quantities and prepare a dedicated publication about the mature FLARE-GMM method.
- The description of the method is presently rather short and could be extended in an own publication. It is not clear to me whether the uncertainties of the input quantities are considered and how do you train the algorithm, e.g., which number of data points you have used. Furthermore, you could explain how RH is considered in the model.
- And lastly, the classification accuracy estimation (Sect. 3.1) in the presented way is not so convincing:
- You state that Figure 4 contains dust examples and Figure 5 a smoke layer. Except for the airmass origin you don’t mention any other proof that it is the case. Intensive optical properties can be easily used to proof the presence of dust or smoke layers, respectively.
- The comparison via the confusion matrix with the NATALI algorithm gives an indication that these algorithms provide similar results. However, it is not a convincing proof. Especially, the inability of NATALI to detect any dust layers arouses concerns. I would recommend to compare it more than one aerosol classification scheme. The well-established schemes of Burton et al., 2012 or Groß et al., 2013 might help to dispel some doubts.
Minor comments:
- The title highlights the microwave radiometer, but in your manuscript, it is not very prominent. Please highlight the use of the radiometer stronger in your text
- Affiliations: The level of detail varies a lot between affiliation 1 and 3.
- L 29: Please use the term “ice nucleating particle (INP)” according to the conventions presented in Vali et al., 2015 (needs not to be cited, just for your information).
- L 38: You mention a range of instruments and then directly switch to lidar systems. Traditionally, hygroscopic growth was studied with nephelometers. Please add some lines and references about other studies of hygroscopic growth.
- In general, the reference list concerning hygroscopic growth studies is rather short. Please consider work, e.g., by Paul Zieger, Gloria Titos, Sebastian Düsing and others. Mostly, extinction enhancement was studied, but there are further lidar studies about the backscatter enhancement factor.
- Be more precise in your formulations, e.g.,
L 50 approximately 460 nm -> please provide the central wavelength and the width of the interference filter, here and in line 71
L178 What do you mean with notable temporal resolution? Be precise.
L248 from model estimations. From which model? Probably also from ERA-5, but it is nowhere mentioned.
L250 remains highly stable -> How do you define “highly stable”? I would not consider the curve in Fig. 7 to be highly stable. - L 36,37 Why the references include a a letter for the surname?
- L 46-49: Too much information for an introduction.
- L 52 like pollen or biomass burning smoke
- L 70 At which wavelengths the depolarization ratio is measured?
- L 71 particle linear depolarization ratio
- Indices should not be in italic, e.g., beta_fluo . Please correct in the text, the equations and figures.
- L 90 The link is not necessary.
- Fig. 1 + 2: What is the purpose of these figures? They are not needed to understand the manuscript. Especially, Fig. 2 is just showing a commercially available instrument.
- L 108/109 The assumption that the fluorescence backscatter is unchanged by hygroscopic growth is quite fundamental for your study. Therefore, I would recommend to elaborate a bit further on this assumption. You could summarize/repeat the main arguments of Veselovskii et al., 2020 here again.
- L 130 Here, the absence of marine aerosol puzzled me (see comment above). It is characterized by its strong hygroscopic growth and change in depolarization ratio with RH as shown in previous lidar studies.
- L 163: “absence of definitive benchmarks” -> Wouldn’t be manual typing based on the intensive properties such a definitive bemchmark? -> maybe use depolarization ratio, lidar ratio, Angstrom + fluorescence capacity to do the typing?
- L 166 unequivocally -> You provide only backward trajectories and no further proof.
- Often, you introduce the figures twice, once above the figure and once below (e.g., Fig 6, 8, 9). In the manuscript, you can place the figure in between, but in the real paper the figure will be placed somewhere else. E.g., L 209/210 contain the same content as L 214.
- Fig. 6 Please explain how do you get from 38 profiles to 4262 data points.
- L 219 Marine/CC -> What does it mean?
- Please keep the same date format, e.g., 29 July 2021. At some instances you switch the American format.
- Please use an appropriate time format, e.g., 22:00 instead of 10 pm.
- Fig. 7 and following: You state that your profile was measured at 10 pm. But how long was your measurement? From 22:00 to 22:01 or to 23:00 or from 21:30 till 22:30? Be more precise.
- Fig. 7 and following: Do you report the altitude about ground or above sea level?
- Fig. 7 and following: You state LILAS retrieved optical properties. But do you retrieve the potential temperature from the lidar? Be more precise.
- Fig. 7 and following: In the caption you should write the whole name of the property and not just the symbol, e.g., beta_532, because the caption should explain the figure. If you just repeat what is stated on the axis of the figure, there isn’t any additional information. It holds especially for Fig. 11.
- Do not change the number of significant digits, e.g., L 264 0.91, L 313, and Fig. 11b.
- L 299 The potential temperature is monotonically decreasing in the indicated height range. How do you define a stable potential temperature? The best would be to define it at some point.
- L 315 The uncertainty just increases from 0.28 to 0.3, meaning that the uncertainty was high even without considering the fluorescence backscatter.
- L 320 What do you mean with a decrease in RH by 10%? The statement is ambiguous, because it can mean a decrease from 78% to 68% or 10% from the actual value. I guess, you mean the first one.
- L 355 an urban aerosol layer
- L 359 Could you move LILAS to a place where radiosondes are launched? Or could you use data from a different lidar station with available radiosondes?
References:
Burton, S. P.; Ferrare, R. A.; Hostetler, C. A.; Hair, J. W.; Rogers, R. R.; Obland, M. D.; Butler, C. F.; Cook, A. L.; Harper, D. B. & Froyd, K. D.: Aerosol classification using airborne High Spectral Resolution Lidar measurements -- methodology and examples, Atmospheric Measurement Techniques, 2012, 5, 73-98
Groß, S.; Esselborn, M.; Weinzierl, B.; Wirth, M.; Fix, A. & Petzold, A.: Aerosol classification by airborne high spectral resolution lidar observations, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 2013, 13, 2487-2505
Vali, G.; DeMott, P. J.; Möhler, O. & Whale, T. F.: Technical Note: A proposal for ice nucleation terminology, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 2015, 15, 10263-10270
Veselovskii, I.; Hu, Q.; Goloub, P.; Podvin, T.; Barchunov, B. & Korenskii, M.: Combining Mie--Raman and fluorescence observations: a step forward in aerosol classification with lidar technology, Atmospheric Measurement Techniques, 2022, 15, 4881-4900
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-84-RC1 - AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Robin Miri, 13 Mar 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-84', Anonymous Referee #2, 19 Feb 2024
The manuscript focuses on characterizing aerosol hygroscopicity using remote sensing techniques. The innovative approach of utilizing Raman lidar measurements with fluorescence capacity is highlighted as a means to enhance this characterization. The use of the fluorescence backscatter coefficient as a weighting factor in tracking the evolution of aerosol concentration within the aerosol layer is deemed a valuable approach that addresses many limitations inherent in remote sensing techniques for such studies. Therefore, I recommend that the manuscript be published following the revisions suggested by the referees.
However, the study does face some limitations, particularly evident in the case studies presented. Both cases suffer from large uncertainties in relative humidity estimation, stemming from the combination of water vapor mixing ratio from the lidar and temperature from ERA-5 reanalysis databases. This could lead to increased uncertainties in the observed values of the hygroscopic parameter (gamma). Furthermore, the second case (9 March 2023) exhibits a narrow variation of RH in the hygroscopic case, potentially amplifying errors. Despite these limitations, the results demonstrate the potential of this new approach for future studies. It prompts the question of whether there are opportunities to improve the retrieval of relative humidity. Could combining water vapor profiles from the lidar with temperature data from microwave radiometers enhance the RH profile? This alternative approach could be compared with your results to evaluate its effectiveness.
Another aspect hindering aerosol characterization is the use of the FLARE-GMM model. Authors mention that the model is not trained below 1500 m, where the two hygroscopic layers are found. I suggest a more comprehensive identification and characterization of the aerosols presented in this case. Why not utilize aerosol measurements from your station, such as sun-photometer measurements during those days, Angström exponent profiles from the lidar, backtrajectory analysis, or models like CAMS to identify the type of aerosol?
Regarding the objections raised by referee 1 regarding the inclusion of the aerosol clustering method FLARE-GMM in this publication, I concur and refrain from adding further comments on this aspect.
Below are some minor comments:
- In the keywords section, consider replacing "classification" with "aerosol typing."
- Line 45: Please provide explanations for the acronyms EARLINET/ACTRIS-FR.
- Lines 47-49: The following sentence is unclear; improve the wording: "The elastic signal is generated from the elastic scattering of laser light by atmospheric molecules and aerosols. The depolarized signal refers to the part of the elastic signal that retains laser polarization or becomes depolarized after scattering. Finally, the Raman signal results from inelastic scattering, or Raman scattering, by atmospheric molecules."
- Line 68: Ensure a space between the number and units, e.g., "70 mJ at 355 nm."
- Line 121: Similarly, include a space between the number and units, e.g., "1.5 km."
- Line 172: Replace "materialized" with "observed."
- Line 239: Express time as "22:00 UTC" and "21:00 UTC" instead of "10 pm" and "9 pm," respectively, throughout the manuscript.
- Figure 7: Indicate whether altitude is measured above ground or sea level for all figures.
- Figure 7: Consider showing a wider range of profiles to observe model and lidar measurements in the lower troposphere, including clean regions.
- Line 256: Correct "bellow" to "below."
- Line 289: Ensure a space between the number and units, e.g., "532 nm."
- Line 299: Be cautious in asserting from this plot that potential temperature remains stable in the hygroscopic layer.
- Lines 355-356: Replace "and" with “an", “ .. of an urban: ..."
- Check for typos in citations (e.g., "Guzman et al." instead of "Navas-Guzmán et al."). Ensure all citations appear in the reference list.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-84-RC2 - AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Robin Miri, 13 Mar 2024
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