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Distribution characteristics of summer precipitation raindrop spectrum in Qinghai−Tibet Plateau
Abstract. To enhance the precision of precipitation forecasting in the Qinghai−Tibet Plateau region, a comprehensive study of both macro− and micro−characteristics of local precipitation is imperative. In this study, we investigated the particle size distribution, droplet velocity, droplet number density, Z (Radar reflectivity) − I (Rainfall intensity) relationship, and Gamma distribution of precipitation droplet spectra with a single precipitation duration of at least 20 minutes and precipitation of 5 mm or more at four stations (Nyalam, Lhasa, Shigatse, and Naqu) in Tibet during the recent years from June to August. The results are as follows: (1) In the fitting relationship curve between precipitation raindrop spectral particle size and falling speed at the four stations in Tibet, when the particle size was less than 1.5 mm, the four lines essentially coincided. When the particle size exceeded 1.5 mm, the speed in Shigatse was the highest, followed by Lhasa, and the speed in Naqu was the lowest. The falling speed of particles correlated with altitude. (2) The diameter of the six microphysical features at the four stations increased with altitude. (3) The Z−I relationships at the four stations exhibited variations. Owing to the proximity in altitude between Lhasa and Shigatse, as well as between Nyalam and Nagqu, the coefficients a and index b in the Z−I relationships of the two groups of sites were relatively similar. (4) The fitting curves of the M−P and Gamma distributions of the precipitation particle size at the aforementioned four stations are largely comparable. The M−P distribution fitting exhibits a slightly better effect. The parameter μ in Gamma distribution decreases with the increase of altitude, while N0 and λ in M−P distribution show a clear upward trend with altitude.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-764', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 May 2024
Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. It is interesting to read and a valuable addition to understanding of rainfall characteristics in Tibet, where scarcity of observational data and related studies have limited knowledge of precipitation physics in this high-altitude region. The techniques of observation are straightforward and follow similar methods of rainfall analysis. I don’t have any substantial changes to suggest, but a number of points of clarification need to be addressed by the authors. I would consider them to be minor revisions.
Specific comments with reference to line numbers in the manuscript:
22 In the Abstract, the "six features" are not defined and only become apparent after reading the main body of the text.
27 "better effect" is ambiguous; how about "distribution exhibits a better fit to observations" ?
37. if convection is "severe", shouldn't it be a cumulonimbus 100% of the time?
65 "examine" should be "examined"
101. final falling velocity is more commonly known as "terminal" velocity
115 should be "spectra exhibit"
117, 119 do you perhaps mean "evaluation" instead of "elimination" ?
121 "deformation" used twice in same sentence, so perhaps a synonym could be substituted for one; Battaglia reference needs the publication year
179-180 says that the mean value of the rain intensity is proportional to the intensity, which doesn't make sense and needs to be rewritten
209 the altitude effect on fallspeed can be calculated, and it would be nice to see the numbers; I think "increased" is meant, not "decreased"
212 I didn't understand the phrase starting with "leading to detection...."; could you rewrite this for clarification?
231 the statement "small particles .... are smaller" : is evidence of this given somewhere in the text? I didn't see it.
232-237 The sentence starting "In contrast" refers to Shigatse, I believe, which is being compared to Zheng'an and Hainan. That could be rewritten for clarification.
242 Dm is mean diameter
243 "median" is meant instead of "medium", I assume
244. Suggestion: if Tables 5 and 6 were ordered from highest to lowest altitude, it would help the reader follow the analysis in the text.
259 intensity I should have 1.4 as its exponent
276 by "larger change", what is changing? Or do you mean the maximum (or mean) raindrop size is larger?
277 by "raindrop size", do you mean to say "mean raindrop size"?
296 Reference is made to Eq. 11, but I don't see that equation in the text.
302 should be "light and moderate", not just "moderate"
317 you state "this is attributed to instruments at high altitudes being closer to the clouds". I don't understand what is meant by that. All drops should accelerate to terminal velocity within several meters of fall.
325 the spectrum is said to be "broader", but where is that shown?
329 "slightly better", as you said in the Abstract.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
Dear reviewer:
Thank you for your decision and constructive comments on my manuscript.We agree with the reviewers' suggestions and will incorporate the recommended changes into the manuscript. The comments have been revised in the manuscript. The following is a related question reply:
27 "better effect" is ambiguous; how about "distribution exhibits a better fit to observations" ?
This refers to the fact that the results obtained using m-p fitting are closer to the actual observed values.
117, 119 do you perhaps mean "evaluation" instead of "elimination" ?
Evaluate first, and then eliminate those that do not meet the requirements.
76 by "larger change", what is changing? Or do you mean the maximum (or mean) raindrop size is larger?
Yes, my means the mean raindrop size is larger. This sentence has been rewritten.
296 Reference is made to Eq. 11, but I don't see that equation in the text.
The Eq.11 is on line 169.
325 the spectrum is said to be "broader", but where is that shown?
This is reflected in the microscopic parameters of raindrop size.
We sincerely appreciate the time and effort invested by the reviewers in evaluating our manuscript.
Yours sincerely
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-764', Anonymous Referee #2, 28 May 2024
This manuscript presents raindrop measurements collected at four mountainous regions of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. These surface disdrometer observations are unique and provide an opportunity to study rain microphysical processes in this remote region. This study is looking at the terminal fall speed of raindrops at different sites in the Plateau region. One problem with this study is that the known terminal fall speed effects due to atmospheric air density is not included in this study. Without including the air density effects, it is not known whether the observed increase in terminal fall speed with altitude is due to local microphysical processes, or the known air density adjustment. Before this work can be published, the study needs to include the known air density adjustment to the measurements before comparing the data from the different altitude sites.
The suggestions to improve the manuscript are divided into two sections: major and minor.
Major suggestions to improve the manuscript
1. Lines 103 -114 and Equation (1). The terminal fall speed presented in Atlas et al. (1973) and shown in Equation (1) is for raindrops falling at sea level. The terminal fall speed is dependent on altitude, with raindrops falling faster at higher altitudes. Table 2 in Atlas et al. (1973) list fall speed corrections versus altitude in a Standard Atmosphere. Also, the work of Foote and Du Toit (1969, Journal of Applied Meteorology, pages 249-253) provides a fall speed adjustment for observations made at altitudes above sea level. The discussion of air density adjustment to terminal fall speeds needs to be included in the manuscript.
2. Line 206-210 and Figure 3. The raindrop terminal fall speed at elevations over 3000 above sea level are faster than raindrop terminal fall speeds near sea level. Can this difference shown in Figure 3 be described by the expected air density adjustments suggested by Foote and Du Toit (1969)? Is there a better air density adjustment that fits these data?
3. Lines 259-262, and Figure 4. Given that the raindrops fall faster at higher altitudes, it is expected that rain with the same radar reflectivity factor will have larger rainfall rates at 3000 m elevation than at sea level. Thus, it is to be expected that the comparison with the sea level Z-I relationships (Z = 300 I^1.4) will underestimate the observed Z-I relationship at sites above 3000 m. The manuscript needs to address the challenge of comparing observations above 3000 m with previous work done at sea level. This could be done by adjusting the sea level relationships to elevation or adjusting the elevation data to sea level. Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages. The manuscript needs to reconcile the altitude differences.
4. Lines 242-243. What are the equations for average volume diameter (Dv), mode diameter (Dd), dominate diameter (Dp), and medium diameter (Dnd)? I would like to estimate these quantities in my disdrometer data, so I would like to see the equations in the body or appendix of the manuscript.
5. Lines 243-246. And Table 5. Since the mass-weighted diameter is related to rain intensity, the simple comparison of mass-weighted diameter (Dm) between sites is not very informative in describing the different microphysical characteristics occurring at the different sites. The analysis should partition the data based on rain intensity. For example, compare the Dm for limited rain rate intensity intervals shown in Table 2. Thus, this analysis would ask the question: for a given rain rate, how does Dm change between the sites?
Minor suggestions to improve the manuscript
1. Line 14, and elsewhere, the use of the word “particle” could refer to snow particles or raindrops. If the measurement is ambiguous and it is not known whether the particle is made of frozen or liquid water, then the use of ‘particle’ is appropriate. On the other hand, if only liquid drops or droplets are studied, then the manuscript will be easier to read if the word “particle” is replaced with “drop” or “droplet”.
2. Lines 25-26, and elsewhere. First, the “M-P distribution” is not defined and the reference to Marshall and Palmer (1948) is not referenced. Please include the reference. Second, the “M-P” distribution is different than a general exponential distribution because the ‘M-P distribution’ defines the coefficients in the exponential distribution (and presented in their 1948 paper). You cannot fit parameters to the M-P distribution (as suggested on line 25-26) When non-M-P parameters are estimated and used in an exponential distribution, then it is not called a M-P distribution, it is called an exponential distribution. Please clarify the text.
3. Line 27. What does it mean for a fitting to exhibit “a slightly better effect”? Does this mean a smaller cost function? Please clarify.
4. Line 33. I have not heard before that different precipitation processes can change the “ground heating effect.” What is this ground heating effect and how is it measured? Is it measured from space or from air temperature gauges? A reference would also be helpful.
5. Line 102, and elsewhere. The “final falling velocity” is usually called the “terminal velocity”. Please change this phrase in the manuscript.
6. Lines 121-125. These lines define an axis ratio that is not used in the rest of the manuscript. Please omit this text.
7. Line 207. Where is Guizhou located? Is it at sea level?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
Dear reviewer:
Thank you for your decision and constructive comments on my manuscript.We agree with the reviewers' suggestions and will incorporate the recommended changes into the manuscript. The comments have been revised in the manuscript. The following is a related question reply:
- Line 27. What does it mean for a fitting to exhibit “a slightly better effect”? Does this mean a smaller cost function? Please clarify.
This refers to the fact that the results obtained using m-p fitting are closer to the actual observed values.
- Line 207. Where is Guizhou located? Is it at sea level?
Guizhou is located in the southeast of southwest China, between 103°36'-109°35' E and 24°37'-29°13' N, with an average elevation of 1100m.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-764', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 May 2024
Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. It is interesting to read and a valuable addition to understanding of rainfall characteristics in Tibet, where scarcity of observational data and related studies have limited knowledge of precipitation physics in this high-altitude region. The techniques of observation are straightforward and follow similar methods of rainfall analysis. I don’t have any substantial changes to suggest, but a number of points of clarification need to be addressed by the authors. I would consider them to be minor revisions.
Specific comments with reference to line numbers in the manuscript:
22 In the Abstract, the "six features" are not defined and only become apparent after reading the main body of the text.
27 "better effect" is ambiguous; how about "distribution exhibits a better fit to observations" ?
37. if convection is "severe", shouldn't it be a cumulonimbus 100% of the time?
65 "examine" should be "examined"
101. final falling velocity is more commonly known as "terminal" velocity
115 should be "spectra exhibit"
117, 119 do you perhaps mean "evaluation" instead of "elimination" ?
121 "deformation" used twice in same sentence, so perhaps a synonym could be substituted for one; Battaglia reference needs the publication year
179-180 says that the mean value of the rain intensity is proportional to the intensity, which doesn't make sense and needs to be rewritten
209 the altitude effect on fallspeed can be calculated, and it would be nice to see the numbers; I think "increased" is meant, not "decreased"
212 I didn't understand the phrase starting with "leading to detection...."; could you rewrite this for clarification?
231 the statement "small particles .... are smaller" : is evidence of this given somewhere in the text? I didn't see it.
232-237 The sentence starting "In contrast" refers to Shigatse, I believe, which is being compared to Zheng'an and Hainan. That could be rewritten for clarification.
242 Dm is mean diameter
243 "median" is meant instead of "medium", I assume
244. Suggestion: if Tables 5 and 6 were ordered from highest to lowest altitude, it would help the reader follow the analysis in the text.
259 intensity I should have 1.4 as its exponent
276 by "larger change", what is changing? Or do you mean the maximum (or mean) raindrop size is larger?
277 by "raindrop size", do you mean to say "mean raindrop size"?
296 Reference is made to Eq. 11, but I don't see that equation in the text.
302 should be "light and moderate", not just "moderate"
317 you state "this is attributed to instruments at high altitudes being closer to the clouds". I don't understand what is meant by that. All drops should accelerate to terminal velocity within several meters of fall.
325 the spectrum is said to be "broader", but where is that shown?
329 "slightly better", as you said in the Abstract.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
Dear reviewer:
Thank you for your decision and constructive comments on my manuscript.We agree with the reviewers' suggestions and will incorporate the recommended changes into the manuscript. The comments have been revised in the manuscript. The following is a related question reply:
27 "better effect" is ambiguous; how about "distribution exhibits a better fit to observations" ?
This refers to the fact that the results obtained using m-p fitting are closer to the actual observed values.
117, 119 do you perhaps mean "evaluation" instead of "elimination" ?
Evaluate first, and then eliminate those that do not meet the requirements.
76 by "larger change", what is changing? Or do you mean the maximum (or mean) raindrop size is larger?
Yes, my means the mean raindrop size is larger. This sentence has been rewritten.
296 Reference is made to Eq. 11, but I don't see that equation in the text.
The Eq.11 is on line 169.
325 the spectrum is said to be "broader", but where is that shown?
This is reflected in the microscopic parameters of raindrop size.
We sincerely appreciate the time and effort invested by the reviewers in evaluating our manuscript.
Yours sincerely
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-764', Anonymous Referee #2, 28 May 2024
This manuscript presents raindrop measurements collected at four mountainous regions of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. These surface disdrometer observations are unique and provide an opportunity to study rain microphysical processes in this remote region. This study is looking at the terminal fall speed of raindrops at different sites in the Plateau region. One problem with this study is that the known terminal fall speed effects due to atmospheric air density is not included in this study. Without including the air density effects, it is not known whether the observed increase in terminal fall speed with altitude is due to local microphysical processes, or the known air density adjustment. Before this work can be published, the study needs to include the known air density adjustment to the measurements before comparing the data from the different altitude sites.
The suggestions to improve the manuscript are divided into two sections: major and minor.
Major suggestions to improve the manuscript
1. Lines 103 -114 and Equation (1). The terminal fall speed presented in Atlas et al. (1973) and shown in Equation (1) is for raindrops falling at sea level. The terminal fall speed is dependent on altitude, with raindrops falling faster at higher altitudes. Table 2 in Atlas et al. (1973) list fall speed corrections versus altitude in a Standard Atmosphere. Also, the work of Foote and Du Toit (1969, Journal of Applied Meteorology, pages 249-253) provides a fall speed adjustment for observations made at altitudes above sea level. The discussion of air density adjustment to terminal fall speeds needs to be included in the manuscript.
2. Line 206-210 and Figure 3. The raindrop terminal fall speed at elevations over 3000 above sea level are faster than raindrop terminal fall speeds near sea level. Can this difference shown in Figure 3 be described by the expected air density adjustments suggested by Foote and Du Toit (1969)? Is there a better air density adjustment that fits these data?
3. Lines 259-262, and Figure 4. Given that the raindrops fall faster at higher altitudes, it is expected that rain with the same radar reflectivity factor will have larger rainfall rates at 3000 m elevation than at sea level. Thus, it is to be expected that the comparison with the sea level Z-I relationships (Z = 300 I^1.4) will underestimate the observed Z-I relationship at sites above 3000 m. The manuscript needs to address the challenge of comparing observations above 3000 m with previous work done at sea level. This could be done by adjusting the sea level relationships to elevation or adjusting the elevation data to sea level. Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages. The manuscript needs to reconcile the altitude differences.
4. Lines 242-243. What are the equations for average volume diameter (Dv), mode diameter (Dd), dominate diameter (Dp), and medium diameter (Dnd)? I would like to estimate these quantities in my disdrometer data, so I would like to see the equations in the body or appendix of the manuscript.
5. Lines 243-246. And Table 5. Since the mass-weighted diameter is related to rain intensity, the simple comparison of mass-weighted diameter (Dm) between sites is not very informative in describing the different microphysical characteristics occurring at the different sites. The analysis should partition the data based on rain intensity. For example, compare the Dm for limited rain rate intensity intervals shown in Table 2. Thus, this analysis would ask the question: for a given rain rate, how does Dm change between the sites?
Minor suggestions to improve the manuscript
1. Line 14, and elsewhere, the use of the word “particle” could refer to snow particles or raindrops. If the measurement is ambiguous and it is not known whether the particle is made of frozen or liquid water, then the use of ‘particle’ is appropriate. On the other hand, if only liquid drops or droplets are studied, then the manuscript will be easier to read if the word “particle” is replaced with “drop” or “droplet”.
2. Lines 25-26, and elsewhere. First, the “M-P distribution” is not defined and the reference to Marshall and Palmer (1948) is not referenced. Please include the reference. Second, the “M-P” distribution is different than a general exponential distribution because the ‘M-P distribution’ defines the coefficients in the exponential distribution (and presented in their 1948 paper). You cannot fit parameters to the M-P distribution (as suggested on line 25-26) When non-M-P parameters are estimated and used in an exponential distribution, then it is not called a M-P distribution, it is called an exponential distribution. Please clarify the text.
3. Line 27. What does it mean for a fitting to exhibit “a slightly better effect”? Does this mean a smaller cost function? Please clarify.
4. Line 33. I have not heard before that different precipitation processes can change the “ground heating effect.” What is this ground heating effect and how is it measured? Is it measured from space or from air temperature gauges? A reference would also be helpful.
5. Line 102, and elsewhere. The “final falling velocity” is usually called the “terminal velocity”. Please change this phrase in the manuscript.
6. Lines 121-125. These lines define an axis ratio that is not used in the rest of the manuscript. Please omit this text.
7. Line 207. Where is Guizhou located? Is it at sea level?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
Dear reviewer:
Thank you for your decision and constructive comments on my manuscript.We agree with the reviewers' suggestions and will incorporate the recommended changes into the manuscript. The comments have been revised in the manuscript. The following is a related question reply:
- Line 27. What does it mean for a fitting to exhibit “a slightly better effect”? Does this mean a smaller cost function? Please clarify.
This refers to the fact that the results obtained using m-p fitting are closer to the actual observed values.
- Line 207. Where is Guizhou located? Is it at sea level?
Guizhou is located in the southeast of southwest China, between 103°36'-109°35' E and 24°37'-29°13' N, with an average elevation of 1100m.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2024-764-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Yao Huo, 10 Jul 2024
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