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Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management? A Statistical and Radical Chemistry Perspective
Abstract. During the period of April and May 2022, Shanghai implemented city-wide static management measures to control the spread of the Omicron variant. Compared to the lockdown in early 2020, the static management in 2022 occurred during the high-ozone season and lasted for a longer duration. It can be considered as a “large-scale field experiment” to study the response of ambient ozone levels to emission reductions. During this period, we conducted comprehensive observations at Fudan University Jiangwan Campus in the northeast corner of Shanghai. Similar experiments were also conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021. Despite the significant reduction of approximately 30 % in VOCs and around 50 % in NO2 due to static management in 2022, the average ozone level increased by nearly 23 %. This suggests that the reduction in ozone precursors and other pollutants did not lead to a corresponding decrease in ozone concentrations as expected. Cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration revealed four distinct types of diurnal ozone variations. Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, with high ozone levels, experienced significant increases in their share during static management, ultimately leading to an overall increase in average ozone levels in 2022. According to the Observation-Based Model (OBM) simulation analysis, the average peak concentrations of OH, HO2, and RO2 in 2022 were estimated to be 5.3 × 106, 4.9 × 108, and 2.6 × 108 molecules cm−3, respectively, representing an increase of over 30 % compared to the levels in 2020 and 2021. Although HONO photolysis was the main contributor to the primary source of ROx radicals, the radical cycling process remained dominant for the overall production of ROx radicals. Due to a significant decrease in NO2 concentration relative to VOCs, the average VOCs/NO2 ratio increased from 1.6 in 2020 to 3.0 in 2022, which is also reflected in the radical cycling. The ratio of OH radical propagation (OH+VOCs) to termination (OH+NO2) was 2.10, higher than 1.03 in 2020 and 1.60 in 2021, indicating that the different reduction proportions of precursors led to a higher VOCs/NO2 ratio, strengthening the radical cycling. The differential reduction in precursor VOCs and NO2 levels due to static management is the underlying cause for the increase in ozone concentration in Shanghai.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2142', Anonymous Referee #1, 03 Jan 2024
General comments:
The article investigates the increase in ozone levels in Shanghai during city-wide static management measures implemented in April and May 2022 to control the spread of the Omicron variant. Despite significant reductions in VOCs and NO2 emissions, average ozone levels rose by 23%. The study involves comprehensive observations and statistical analysis of ozone profiles categorized into four clusters based on their characteristics. It highlights the importance of radical chemistry and photochemical processes in understanding the increased ozone levels. The research concludes that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime, suggesting that controlling VOCs is vital for effective ozone pollution management. I generally agree with the structure of the manuscript and classify my recommendation as minor revision. However, there are several specific and minor points that I recommend the authors address (see below).
Specific comments:
- How were the simulated radical concentrations validated against observed data, especially considering the variations in different urban and non-urban environments?
- The study details various sources and production rates for radicals. If possible, a deeper exploration of how these sources differ in urban settings and their specific impacts on air quality could be insightful.
- The study relates different ozone profile clusters to radical chemistry variations. Further analysis of how these clusters specifically influence overall ozone levels and atmospheric chemistry would be beneficial.
- The dominance of radical cycling in polluted environments raises questions about its specific role in ozone formation and the potential for targeted interventions in such environments.
Minor comments:
Line 17: The statement that "the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" lacks specific context. What does "nearly 23%" represent in terms of absolute concentrations, and how does it compare to historical averages or expected levels under similar conditions?
Line 39: The phrase "in those countries like China that face air pollution complex" could be better structured for clarity. Consider rephrasing to "in countries like China that face complex air pollution issues."
Lines 40-48: The comparison with the lockdown measures in early 2020 is useful. Could the paper elaborate on how the findings from 2020 influenced the hypotheses or research methods for the 2022 study?
Line 52: Ensure consistent use of punctuation, especially with regard to commas and periods. Should be “During the static management…”? Please briefly describe the definition of static management to make it clear.
Line 70: Were the experimental conditions and methodologies consistent across the different years (2020, 2021, and 2022) to ensure comparability of the data?
Line 82: There seems to be a typo in the coordinates for the Yangpu environment monitoring station (31.53°N, 31.25°E). The longitude seems incorrect.
Lines 107-111: The text is clear but might benefit from a brief explanation of why the stacking model is preferred over simple linear interpolation.
Line 153: The methodology for classifying the 103 VOCs into six categories, including how each category specifically influences ozone formation, requires clarification. How does the classification relate to their respective roles in ozone formation? For example, the study notes a significant reduction in aromatics and a relative stability in OVOCs. What are the implications of these changes for ozone formation, considering their different sources and chemical behaviours?
Line 171: The observed delay in the peak time of VOCs in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021 is attributed to reduced human activities. Can the study provide further evidence or analysis to support this correlation? For example, have VOC patterns changed again and peaked at around 6 am since recovering from the pandemic?
Line 200: The relationship between meteorological conditions, pollution environments, and different types of ozone profiles warrants further exploration. How do these factors interact to form the distinct ozone profile clusters? Recent references (e.g., https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-1185-2018) also suggest that night-time O3 tends to increase for some cities, would this affect the results?
Line 221: The phrase "Reviewing previously observational results" should be "Reviewing previous observational results."
Line 248: The phrase "which has" would be more grammatically correct as "which had."
Line 253: A typo here, "sournces" should be corrected to "sources."
Line 284:
- The word "taked" should be corrected to "took."
- The sentence provides a breakdown of sources in Cluster 4.
Line 313: The phrase "It can be interfered" should be "It can be inferred."
Line 322: The phrase "which provides a valuable opportunity" is correct but could be more concise. Suggested revision: "providing a valuable opportunity."
Line 323:
- The verb "shows" should be "show" to agree with the plural subject "observations."
- Remove the comma after "shows that."
Line 329: The phrase "resulted in the overall increase in the average ozone level" could be more concise. Suggested revision: "led to an overall increase in average ozone levels."
Line 336-337:
Consider rephrasing for clarity: "The different proportions of NO2 and VOC reduction during static management led to an increased OH radical propagation (OH+VOCs) to termination (OH+NO2) ratio, reaching 2.10, higher than 1.03 in 2020 and 1.60 in 2021."
Line 339: Consider rephrasing for clarity: "The important lesson from the static management 'large-scale field experiment' is that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime."
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2142-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
General comments:
The article investigates the increase in ozone levels in Shanghai during city-wide static management measures implemented in April and May 2022 to control the spread of the Omicron variant. Despite significant reductions in VOCs and NO2 emissions, average ozone levels rose by 23%. The study involves comprehensive observations and statistical analysis of ozone profiles categorized into four clusters based on their characteristics. It highlights the importance of radical chemistry and photochemical processes in understanding the increased ozone levels. The research concludes that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime, suggesting that controlling VOCs is vital for effective ozone pollution management. I generally agree with the structure of the manuscript and classify my recommendation as minor revision. However, there are several specific and minor points that I recommend the authors address (see below).
Firstly, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for the valuable time and effort you have dedicated to reviewing my manuscript. We have also re-examined the article and identified issues with the processing of photolysis data. Consequently, we have reran the OBM model and conducted a fresh statistical analysis and discussion of the results related to the OBM model (Section 3.3). The latest findings have not fundamentally altered the original conclusions. The responses to your comments that follow are based on these most recent results.
Specific comments:
How were the simulated radical concentrations validated against observed data, especially considering the variations in different urban and non-urban environments?
R: Thanks for your comments. Unfortunately, this study did not conduct simultaneous observations of free radicals, thus direct verification was not possible. However, there are research teams in China that have carried out comparative studies on radicals’ observations and simulations.
The earliest observation of OH radicals in China was accomplished through collaborative efforts between Peking University and Forschungszentrum Juelich (FZJ), resulting in the construction of a Laser Induced Fluorescence (LIF) instrument for detecting OH and HO2. Additionally, the Anhui Institute of Optics and Fine Mechanics (AIOFM) independently developed a Laser Induced Fluorescence (LIF) instrument. Simultaneously, comparisons with model simulations were conducted during the radical observations.
Tan et al. (2017) from Peking University’s observations and simulation studies in Wangdu, China, indicate that the simulation of radicals exhibits excellent performance. Zhang et al. (2022a) from AIOFM reported good consistency between observed and simulated values of radicals. Those indicate the feasibility of applying observation-based models in the simulation of photochemical processes. Based on error analysis of models and observations, Lu and Zhang (2010) suggested that the ratio of simulated to measured values for HOx (OH + HO2) falling within the range of 0.4-1.6 can be considered acceptable. Applying the chemical box model to dissect photochemical processes is a mature and widely-used approach, currently adopted by teams that lack the capability to conduct radical observations.
Lu et al. (2019) categorized the observed OH radicals into three groups: urban areas, remote regions (including continents, oceans, polar regions, and the free troposphere), and forested areas. The maximum concentrations of OH radicals observed across different categories all fall within the range of 106 to 107 molecules cm-3 (see Figure R1). In this study, the average peak of OH was around 5.0 × 108 molecules cm-3, which is considered a moderate level in urban environments.
The team from AIOFM conducted continuous observations of radicals at the Shanghai Academy of Environmental Sciences (31.17°N, 121.43°E, urban environment) using their independently developed Laser-Induced Fluorescence (LIF) system from November 8th to November 24th, 2019 (Zhang et al., 2022a). The average concentrations of OH and HO2 radicals during the midday hours (11:00-13:00) were 2.7 × 106 and 0.8 × 108 molecules cm-3, respectively. We performed OBM simulations for the same period at the site within this study. The simulation results showed average concentrations of OH and HO2 radicals to be 2.67 × 106 and 0.84 × 108 molecules cm-3, respectively. The diurnal variation trends also demonstrated good consistency. This indirectly indicates that the free radical chemistry simulation results of this study are relatively reliable.
We hope to conduct radical observations in the future through collaborative efforts or independent research, and to conduct comparative studies on radicals in urban and non-urban environments.
Figure R1. Typical observed daily averaged maximum OH concentrations at distinct different geophysical regions (i.e. urban, remote, forest areas) with different measurement techniques (i.e. DOAS, LIF, CIMS, CEAS, and CRDS). The figure is sourced from Lu et al. (2019).
The study details various sources and production rates for radicals. If possible, a deeper exploration of how these sources differ in urban settings and their specific impacts on air quality could be insightful.
R: Thanks for your comments. Over the past few decades, understanding the sources and chemical behavior of HOx has been a focal point in air quality research. Despite the visual similarities in air pollution issues, the chemistry of radicals, particularly the relative importance of the main sources of radicals, varies across different types of regions. Generally, the primary sources of radicals include the photolysis of O3, HONO, HCHO, and other OVOCs, as well as non-photolytic sources such as the reaction of ozone with alkenes and the reaction of NO3 with unsaturated VOCs.
Regarding the impact of the sources of radicals in urban environments on air quality, we conducted a correlation analysis between the sources of radicals and ozone-related indices, as shown in Figure R2. The production rates of radicals P(ROx) had a strong positive correlation with the production rates of ozone P(O3), and both were temperature-dependent. The higher the temperature, the higher P(O3) and P(ROx). Additionally, we defined daily net ozone production O3_net as the difference between the highest ozone value at noon and the lowest value in the morning. The correlation analysis between daily O3_net and the photolysis rates of HONO, O3, HCHO, and OVOCs, as well as the total radical source, reveals a significant positive relationship. This implies that the strength of different sources of modeled radicals positively contributes to ozone production. From the perspective of the slopes, the contribution of HCHO photolysis to net ozone generation is evident. This may be attributed to the enhancement of the NO2-NO-O3 cycle by the HO2 radicals produced from HCHO photolysis.
Figure R2. Correlation analysis between the sources of radicals and ozone-related indices, (a) P(O3) & P(ROx); (b) O3_net & HONO+hv; (c) O3_net & O3+hv; (d) O3_net & HCHO+hv; (e) O3_net & HONO+hv; (f) O3_net & P(ROx).
We have included the above textual and graphical descriptions in the Supplement, please refer to Text S2 and Figure S15. Further explanations can be found in the manuscript on Lines 310-311.
We have also included in the Supplement a review of the radical observation and simulation studies conducted both domestically and internationally, as shown in the following text and table. Please refer to Text S3 and Table S3 in the Supplement.
“We have compiled observations and simulations of radical chemistry conducted by various research teams in different environments (see Table R1). It is evident that the primary sources of radicals vary in different regions and seasons. Compared to marine boundary layer environments, forest environments, and suburban environments, the primary sources of radicals in urban environments were complex. For example, simulation work conducted in urban environments in Nashville, Houston, and Writtle indicates that the photolysis of ozone was a primary contributor to the primary source of radicals (Kovacs et al., 2003; Martinez et al., 2003; Thornton et al., 2002; Mao et al., 2010; Lee et al., 2006; Emmerson et al., 2007; Emmerson and Carslaw, 2009). And in locations like New York, Palaiseau, Shenzhen, the photolysis of HONO played a significant role (Ren et al., 2003a; Ren et al., 2003b; Cai et al., 2008; Dolgorouky et al., 2012; Michoud et al., 2012; Yang et al., 2022). It is noteworthy that within the same urban environment, the dominant sources can vary across different seasons, time periods, and conditions. In Tokyo, the primary sources of free radicals in winter were the reactions between ozone and alkenes, while in summer, they were the photolysis of ozone and OVOCs (Kanaya et al., 2008; Kanaya et al., 2007a). In New York, during the daytime, the primary source was the photolysis of HONO, while at night, it resulted from the reaction between O3 and alkenes(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2006). In Jülich, under high NOx conditions, the primary source was the photolysis of HONO, whereas under low NOx conditions, it was the photolysis of O3 (Kanaya et al., 2012). In marine boundary layer environments, most studies indicated that the photolysis of ozone was the primary contributor to free radicals during the day, while at night, it resulted from the reaction between O3 and alkenes. In suburban and rural environments, the primary contributor was the photolysis of HONO. Just as you mentioned the differences in radical chemistry between urban and suburban environments, historical research has also indicated this, and it is a crucial aspect of the simulation studies we conducted in Shanghai.”
Table R1. Summary of measurements and model comparisons for OH and HO2 in different typical environments, as well as OH reactivity and HOx primary sources
campaign
year
location
Technique
OH measured
HO2 measured
OH reactivity
HOx primary sources
comments
Ref.
Urban environment
SOS
June-July 1999
Nashville, Tennessee,
USA, 36°N, 88°W
LIF
0.8 pptv at noon
80 pptv at noon
11.3±4.8 s-1
O3+hv
OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.33; OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.56; the measured OH reactivity is about 1.2 times larger than modeled.
(Thornton et al., 2002; Martinez et al., 2003; Kovacs et al., 2003)
PUMA
June 1999 & January-February 2000
Birmingham,
UK, 53°N, 2°W
LIF
(2-9)×106 molecule cm-3 in summer, (0.5-4)×106 molecule cm-3 in summer,
(1.5-10)×108 molecule cm-3 in summer, ~4×106 molecule cm-3 in summer,
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O3+alkenes: 46% in summer, 62% in winter
OH modeled-to-measured ratio: 0.58 in summer and 0.5 in winter; HO2 modeled-to-measured ratio: 0.56 in summer and 0.49 in winter.
(Emmerson et al., 2005a; Emmerson et al., 2005b; Heard et al., 2004; Harrison et al., 2006)
TEXAQS
August-September 2000
Houston, Texas, USA, 29°N, 95°W
LIF
Maximum ~0.8 pptv
Maximum ~30 pptv
7-12 s-1
O3+hv
(Mao et al., 2010)
PMTACS-NY
June-August 2001
New York, USA, 41°N, 74°W
LIF
(2-20)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.5-2)×108 molecule cm-3
15-25 s-1
HONO+hv
OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.10; HO2 observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.24; The OH reactivity measurements agree with the calculations to within 10%
(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2003b; Ren et al., 2003a)
HOxComp
9-11 July 2005
Julich, Germany (50°54′33″N, 06°24′44″E)
LIF, DOAS, CIMS
Maximum 9.4×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum 35 pptv
high-NOx: HONO+hv;
low-NOx: O3+hv
Good agreement between model and observations for OH under high isoprene low NOx (fresh isoprene emissions)
(Kanaya et al., 2012)
MCMA
April 2003
Mexico City, Mexico, 19°N,100°W
LIF
(5-8)×106 molecule cm-3
15-60 pptv
25-120 s-1
HCHO+hv
(OH)model=1.2×(OH)-0.008 pptv R2=0.80; (HO2)model=0.90×(HO2)+0.98 pptv R2=0.64; OH reactivity in the model is about 10-20% too low
(Volkamer et al., 2010; Sheehy et al., 2010; Shirley et al., 2006)
TORCH-1
July-August 2003
Writtle, Essex,
UK, 51°N, 0°E
LIF
(1.2-7.5)×106 molecule cm-3, with 2.6×106 molecule cm-3 at night
(0.16-3.3)×108 molecule cm-3, with 2.9×107 molecule cm-3 at night
2-10 s-1
O3+hv
Daytime OH and HO2 Overpredicted by 24% and 7%, respectively; nighttime OH and HO2 unpredicted 41% and 16%, respectively
(Emmerson and Carslaw, 2009; Emmerson et al., 2007; Lee et al., 2006)
IMPACT IV&L
January-February and July-August 2004
Tokyo, Japan,
35°N, 139°E
LIF
In winter, daytime median was 1.5×106 molecule cm-3 and night mean was 1.8×105 molecule cm-3; in summer, daytime median was 6.3×106 molecule cm-3 and night mean was 3.7×105 molecule cm-3
In winter, daytime median was 1.1 pptv and night mean was 0.7 pptv; in summer, daytime median was 5.7 pptv and night mean was 2.6 pptv
the day and night in winter: O3+alkenes; in daytime during summer: O3+hv and OVOCs+hv, during the early morning in summer: HONO+hv
Daytime OH well reproduced by model for both periods; daytime HO2 underestimated in winter and overestimated in summer.
(Kanaya et al., 2008; Kanaya et al., 2007a)
PMTACS-2
January-February 2004
New York, USA, 41°N, 74°W
LIF
maximum 1.4×106 molecule cm-3
maximum 0.7 pptv
20-40 s-1
Daytime: HONO+hv; Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH observed to modelled ratio of 0.98; HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 6, with the greatest values at high NO; OH reactivity measured higher than calculated at rush hour in the morning and in the evening, possibly due to unmeasured or missing VOCs.
(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2006)
MILAGRO
March 2006
Mexico City, Mexico, 19°N, 100°W
LIF
maximum median 4.6×106 molecule cm-3
maximum median 1.9×108 molecule cm-3
HCHO+hv
OH overpredicted by a factor of 1.7 at midday, well reproduced after 14:30; HO2 underpredicted in the morning, well reproduced after 11:30
(Dusanter et al., 2009b; Dusanter et al., 2009a)
TRAMP
August-September 2006
Houston, Texas, USA, 29°N, 95°W
LIF
Daytime: 0.33±0.23 pptv; Nighttime: 0.087±0.066 pptv
Daytime: 22±18 pptv; Nighttime: 11±7.8 pptv
10-20 s-1
morning rush hour: HONO+hv; daytime: O3+hv; nighttime: O3+alkenes
the measured OH was generally greater than the modeled OH
for all mechanisms, especially during the afternoon; For HO2, Good agreement was found in the morning for the models with most mechanisms, except for SAPRC-99 (slope=0.67); This good agreement between
measured and calculated OH reactivity
(Chen et al., 2010; Mao et al., 2010)
MEGAPOLI
July 2009
Palaiseau, French 48.71°N,2.21°E
LIF
~5×106 molecule cm-3
~1.2×108 molecule cm-3
HONO+hv
Photo Stationary State calculations overestimate OH by 50 %, box model overestimated 12% and 5 %, for OH and (HO2+RO2) respectively.
(Michoud et al., 2012; Dolgorouky et al., 2012)
STORM
September- October 2018
Peking University Shenzhen Graduate School, Shenzhen, China 22.60°N, 113.97°E
LIF
maximum of 4.5×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum of 4.2×108 molecule cm-3
18-22 s-1
HONO+hv
Good agreement between the observed and modeled kOH during the several days in Shenzhen
(Yang et al., 2022)
Marine boundary environment
EASE97
April-May 1997
Mace Head, Ireland, 53°N, 10°W
LIF
(2.0-6.0)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.5-3.5)×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
average model-measurement ratios were 2.4 for OH, 3.6 for HO2 between 11:00 and 15:00.
(Creasey et al., 2002; Carslaw et al., 2002)
OKIPEX
July-August 1998
Oki Dogo Island, Japan, 36°N, 133°E
LIF
Below the detection limit of the instrument (0.8 pptv)
Maximum of 17 pptv
O3+hv
Model usually overestimated HO2 by a factor of 2
(Kanaya et al., 2000; Kanaya and Akimoto, 2002)
ORION99
August 1999
Cape Hedo, Okinawa Island, Japan, 27°N, 128°E
LIF
Maximum of 4×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 17 pptv; nighttime: 0.5-5.5 pptv
O3+hv
OH was underestimated by model calculations but within a large uncertainty; Model underestimated daytime HO2 by only 20%
(Kanaya et al., 2001b; Kanaya et al., 2001a; Kanaya et al., 2002a)
SOAPEX-2
January-February 1999
Cape Grim, Tasmania, 41°S, 142°E
LIF
Maximum of 3.5×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum of 2×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
Models overestimated OH by 10%-20%; Models overestimated HO2 by ~40%;
(Sommariva et al., 2004; Creasey et al., 2003)
RISOTTO
June 2000
Rishiri Island, Japan, 45°N, 141°E
LIF
~10 pptv at midday; mean of 4.2±1.2 pptv at night
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH overestimated by ~36%; HO2 overestimated by ~70%, requiring 25 pptv IO to reconcile model with observations
(Kanaya et al., 2002c; Kanaya et al., 2002b)
RISFEX
September 2003
Rishiri Island, Japan, 45.07°N, 141.12°E
LIF
Daytime: maximum of 2.7×106 molecule cm-3; Nighttime: (0.07-0.55)×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 5.9 pptv; Nighttime: (0.5-4.9) pptv
Daytime: O3+hv;
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH overestimated by 35%; HO2 overestimated by 89%; median nighttime modeled-to-observed ratios were 1.29 and 0.56 for HO2 and OH, respectively
(Kanaya et al., 2007b; Qi et al., 2007)
RHaMBLe
May-June 2007
Cape Verde, Atlantic Ocean, 16.85°N, 24.87°W
LIF
Maximum of 9×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 6×108 molecule cm-3; Nighttime: ~0.6 pptv
Daytime: O3+hv;
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
under-predicted OH on average by 18%; under-predicted HO2 by 39%
(Lee et al., 2010; Whalley et al., 2010)
SOS
February-March; June; September 2009
Cape Verde, Atlantic Ocean, 17°N, 25°W
LIF
Maximum of ~9×106 molecule cm-3
maximum of 4×108 molecule cm-3, ~107 molecule cm-3 at night
O3+hv
Concentrations in summer (June,
September) almost double those
observed in winter (Feb, March)
(Carpenter et al., 2010; Vaughan et al., 2012)
Forest environment
AEROBIC
July-August 1997
Indigenous forest, North West Greece, 40°N, 21°E
LIF
(4-12)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.4-9)×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
Model underprediction of OH by ~50%. Modelled HO2 was typically higher than observations. But observations showed high variability
(Creasey et al., 2001; Carslaw et al., 2001)
PROPHET-98
August 1998
Deciduous forest, North Michigan, USA, 45.6°N, 84.7°W
LIF
Daytime: 0.1-0.2 pptv; Nighttime: 0.04 pptv
Daytime: 10-25 pptv: Nighttime: 1-4 pptv
O3+alkenes
OH observations 2.7 times greater than the model; HO2 observations and model in good agreement
(Faloona et al., 2001; Tan et al., 2001)
GABRIEL
October 2005
Suriname, South America
LIF
0.25 pptv
~(50-55) pptv
O3+hv
Observed to modelled ratio of 12.2 for OH and 4.1 for HO2
(Kubistin et al., 2010; Butler et al., 2008; Lelieveld et al., 2008; Martinez et al., 2010)
OP3
April and July 2008
Sabah, Borneo, 5°N, 118°E
LIF
2.5×106 molecule cm-3
2×108 molecule cm-
10-60 s-1
O3+hv
Factor of 10 underprediction in OH when model constrained to OH reactivity. HO2 overpredicted at ground level
(Whalley et al., 2011; Stone et al., 2011; Pugh et al., 2010)
HUMPPA-COPEC-2010
July and August 2010
boreal forest in Hyytiälä, southern Finland 61.9°N, 24.3°E
LIF, CIMS
3.5×106 molecule cm-3
37 pptv
12.4 s-1
O3+hv
OHLIF/OHCIMS = (1.31 ± 0.14);
OHmod./OHobs.=1.00 ± 0.16;
HO2mod. /HO2obs = 0.3 ± 0.2;
simulated OH reactivity does not match the observed OH reactivity
(Hens et al., 2014; Nölscher et al., 2012)
Suburban & rural environments
CAREBeijing-2006
August- early September 2006
Suburban rural site, Beijing, China, 39.61°N, 116.30°E
LIF
(4-17)×106 molecule cm-3
(2-24)×108 molecule cm-3
10-30 s-1
HCHO+hv
A large discrepancy of a factor 2.6 is found at the lowest NO concentration encountered (0.1 ppb)
(Lu et al., 2010)
PRIDE-PRD 2014
autumn 2014
Guangdong Atmospheric Supersite, China 22.73°N, 112.93°E
LIF
maximum median of 4.5×106 molecule cm-3
maximum median of 3×108 molecule cm-3
22-32 s-1
HONO+hv
50 % was unexplained by the measured OH reactants
(Tan et al., 2019)
June 2014
Wangdu, China
LIF
(5-15)×106 molecule cm-3
(3.14)×108 molecule cm-3
10-20 s-1
HONO+hv
Model-measurement ratio was between 1.4 and 2; For HO2, good agreement between modeled and observed concentrations during day and night
(Fuchs et al., 2017; Tan et al., 2017)
BEST-ONE
January- March 2016
suburban site Huairou, Beijing, China 40.41°N, 116.68°E
LIF
2.4×106 molecule cm-3 in severely polluted air; 3.6×106 molecule cm-3 in relatively clean air
0.52×108 molecule cm-3 in severely polluted air; 0.93×108 molecule cm-3 in relatively clean air
26.9 s-1 in severely polluted air; 10.1 in relatively clean air
HONO+hv
OH and HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 1.5 during clean days; underestimated HO2 concentrations by factors up to 5 during pollution episodes
(Tan et al., 2018)
CHOOSE-2019
August- September 2019
Xinjin, Chengdu, China 30.40°N, 103.85°E
LIF
Mean of 9.5×106 molecule cm-3
Mean of 9×108 molecule cm-3
HONO+hv
OH observed to modelled ratio of 0.8, HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 1.0
(Yang et al., 2021; Zhang et al., 2022b)
The study relates different ozone profile clusters to radical chemistry variations. Further analysis of how these clusters specifically influence overall ozone levels and atmospheric chemistry would be beneficial.
R: Thanks for your comments.
Firstly, cluster analysis reveals that the ozone profiles in the Shanghai region can be classified into four clusters, each characterized by: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R2.
The common characteristic of Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 is a lower baseline value of ozone, primarily because a significant amount of ozone was titrated and consumed from nighttime to early morning. As depicted in Figure 5 of the manuscript, the NO2 levels for Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 were significantly higher during the night or early morning peaks, indicating the crucial role of titration. Due to a significant reduction in NOx emissions during the static management period in 2022, the total number of days for Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 decreased from 37 days in 2020 and 40 days in 2021 to 11 days in 2022.
The common characteristic of Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 is a higher daytime net ozone production. This is attributed not only to meteorological conditions favorable for photochemical processes, characterized by high temperatures, low relative humidity, and high radiation but also to the contribution of elevated VOCs concentrations during the early morning peak, which got consumed in the ozone production process. As clearly shown in Figure 5 of the manuscript, the VOC levels during the early morning peak for Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 were significantly higher than those for Cluster 1 and Cluster 3, contributing to the higher daytime net ozone production. Due to a reduction in VOCs emissions during the static management period in 2022, the total number of days for Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 decreased from 28 days in 2020 and 25 days in 2021 to 20 days in 2022. However, the number of days for Cluster 4 increased from 4 days in 2020 and 2021 to 16 days in 2022, as the reduction in NOx emissions in 2022 led to an increase in the number of days with elevated ozone baseline levels.
Overall, the change in the number of days for the four ozone diurnal profiles is influenced by the differential reduction in precursor VOCs and NOx levels. The number of days with higher ozone concentrations for Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 significantly increased in 2022. This directly resulted in an overall elevation of ozone levels during the silent management period in 2022 compared to the same period in 2020 and 2021.
In the radical cycling OH-RO2-RO-HO2-OH, the OH radical initiates a series of subsequent reactions, and RO2 and HO2 are the primary precursors for ozone formation in the presence of NOx. The cycle is terminated through reactions with NOx under high NOx conditions and cross-reactions with ROx under low NOx conditions. We compiled the daytime average concentrations of radicals, sources of radicals, OH propagation and termination, as well as ozone production rates for Cluster 1-4 (see table R2). The concentrations and sources of radicals for Cluster 1-4 have been previously discussed in the manuscript. In summary, both the concentration and source strength of radicals were highest in Cluster 4, followed by relatively comparable levels in Cluster 2 and Cluster 3 as secondary, while Cluster 1 had the lowest levels. In the radical cycling, due to the increased consumption of VOCs, the OH propagation in Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 is significantly higher than in Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. Meanwhile, the low nitrogen oxide concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 weaken the OH termination. This directly reflects that the ratio of OH propagation to termination in Cluster 4 was considerably higher, indicating a more efficient radical cycle. This higher efficiency allows for significant net ozone generation even in the presence of elevated baseline ozone levels.
We have included the relevant description in the manuscript; please refer to Lines 310-315 in the track-changes manuscript.
Table R2. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
The dominance of radical cycling in polluted environments raises questions about its specific role in ozone formation and the potential for targeted interventions in such environments.
R: Thanks for your comments. As mentioned in the response to specific comments, an inappropriate ratio of NOx to VOCs concentrations can enhance the radical cycle, leading to substantial ozone generation within the cycling. The current mainstream perspective on ozone control emphasizes the need to establish a scientific VOCs/NOx emission reduction ratio, aiming to weaken the intensity of the radical cycling. This study suggests that reducing NO2 by about 50% and VOCs by 30% in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling, leading to an increase in ozone levels.
The spatial distribution characteristics of O3 generation sensitivity exhibit both similarities and differences across different regions. Urban sites in the Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei and surrounding areas, the Yangtze River Delta, the Pearl River Delta, and other regions show consistent O3 generation sensitivity, predominantly falling within the VOC control regime. (Wang et al., 2022; Wang et al., 2020a; Lyu et al., 2019; Yu et al., 2020; Wang et al., 2023). However, there are variations in the sensitivity of suburban sites. Suburban sites in the Yangtze River Delta (An et al., 2015; Xu et al., 2017; Zhao et al., 2020), Pearl River Delta (Wang et al., 2017), and Chengdu-Chongqing region (such as Chongqing) (Su et al., 2018) are mainly situated in the VOC control regime. In contrast, suburban sites in the Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei and surrounding areas (Lu et al., 2010; Ran et al., 2011), the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River (such as Wuhan) (Zhu et al., 2020a), and the northwest region (such as Lanzhou) (Xue et al., 2014) are primarily located in the NOx control regime or NOx-VOC mixed control regime. The above emphasize that most areas in my country are still in a high NOx environment and VOCs play an extremely important role in the O3 production process (especially O3 production in urban areas). At this stage, it is still necessary to implement scientific VOCs/NOx collaborative emission reduction measures to weaken the radical cycling. Identifying and controlling key reactive VOC species in O3 generation are essential for effectively mitigating O3 pollution.
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Line 17: The statement that "the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" lacks specific context. What does "nearly 23%" represent in terms of absolute concentrations, and how does it compare to historical averages or expected levels under similar conditions?
R: Thanks for your comments. The comparisons made here are between the static management period of 2022 and the same periods in 2020 and 2021. Therefore, the statement " the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" refers to the average ozone concentration during the static management period of 2022 being approximately 23% higher than the same period in 2020 and 2021. We have added “Compared to 2020 and 2021” at the end of the sentence. Please refer to Line 17.
Line 39: The phrase "in those countries like China that face air pollution complex" could be better structured for clarity. Consider rephrasing to "in countries like China that face complex air pollution issues."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 40.
Lines 40-48: The comparison with the lockdown measures in early 2020 is useful. Could the paper elaborate on how the findings from 2020 influenced the hypotheses or research methods for the 2022 study?
R: Thanks for your suggestion. This paragraph has been reorganized and revised as follows, and please refer to Lines 45-53.
“Prior to this, China had implemented a series of nationwide lockdown measures against the occurrence and spread of the virus in early 2020. This reduction in human activity is expected to significantly reduce air pollutant emissions, as confirmed by lots of studies on lockdown in 2020 (Bao and Zhang, 2020; Huang et al., 2021; Li et al., 2021; Liu et al., 2020; Tian et al., 2021; Wang et al., 2021; Zhang et al., 2022c). Reports on the impact of the lockdown on air quality most commonly focus on measuring nitrogen dioxide (NO2) and fine particulate matter (PM2.5) (Agarwal et al., 2020; Hua et al., 2021; Chu et al., 2021). According to satellite data, tropospheric nitrogen oxides (NOx) emissions have decreased by 30-60% compared to pre-lockdown levels (Feng et al., 2020; Ding et al., 2020; Venter et al., 2020). Similarly, surface PM2.5 levels in northern China have also decreased by approximately 35%. Meanwhile, the average O3 concentration has increased 1.5-2 times (Shi and Brasseur, 2020). In Wuhan, the urban area that implemented stringent measures to limit the spread of the coronavirus, concentrations of PM2.5, NO2, and ozone also exhibited similar changes (Shi and Brasseur, 2020). Most studies attribute the decrease in NO2 and PM2.5 to the suspension of transportation and industrial activities (Rana et al., 2021; Wang et al., 2020b). Huang et al. (2021) suggest that increase in O3 enhances atmospheric oxidation capacity, providing favorable conditions for the formation of secondary particulate matter. Due to the lockdown taking place during winter, which is a season of high particulate matter pollution in China, the reports on the impact of the lockdown on air quality have focused more on the changes in particulate matter. The lockdown in Shanghai in 2022 was implemented in April and May during the high-ozone (O3) season and lasted for a longer duration, providing an opportunity to study atmospheric pollution primarily caused by O3.”
Line 52: Ensure consistent use of punctuation, especially with regard to commas and periods. Should be “During the static management…”? Please briefly describe the definition of static management to make it clear.
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it. Please refer to Line 59. The static management is an epidemic prevention and control measure. Specifically, it means that individuals are prohibited from leaving their homes within the controlled area, residents within the controlled zone are prohibited from leaving their residential units, participation in nucleic acid sampling is restricted to in-and-out, and all citizens are required to stay indoors, avoid going out, and refrain from visiting public places unless absolutely necessary.
In Lines 32 and 33 of the manuscript, it has been explained that the Chinese government, to curb the spread of the virus, implemented control measures citywide static management in Shanghai.
Line 70: Were the experimental conditions and methodologies consistent across the different years (2020, 2021, and 2022) to ensure comparability of the data?
R: Thanks for your suggestion. Yes, the experimental conditions and methods in 2020, 2021 and 2022 are consistent, and the data are comparable.
Line 82: There seems to be a typo in the coordinates for the Yangpu environment monitoring station (31.53°N, 31.25°E). The longitude seems incorrect.
R: Thanks for your correction. The correct latitude and longitude information is 31.25°N, 121.53°E. We have made the correction. Please refer to Line 90.
Lines 107-111: The text is clear but might benefit from a brief explanation of why the stacking model is preferred over simple linear interpolation.
R: Thanks for your suggestion. Because if more than half of the hourly data is missing in a day, linear interpolation would obscure the true diurnal variation characteristics. The stacking model, however, can relatively accurately simulate the missing values.
Line 153: The methodology for classifying the 103 VOCs into six categories, including how each category specifically influences ozone formation, requires clarification. How does the classification relate to their respective roles in ozone formation? For example, the study notes a significant reduction in aromatics and a relative stability in OVOCs. What are the implications of these changes for ozone formation, considering their different sources and chemical behaviors?
R: Thanks for your comments. VOCs components are classified according to functional groups. We have modified this sentence to: “We classified the 103 VOCs into six categories based on functional groups, including alkanes, alkenes, alkynes, aromatics, oxygenated VOCs (OVOCs), and halohydrocarbons”. Please refer to Line 162. We have added an analysis of the role of VOCs in ozone formation in the Supplement, as described in the following text and Figure R3. Please refer to Text S4 and Figure S11 in the supplement.
“Different VOC species display a range of reactivity and diverse potentials for O3 formation, which can be assessed using the maximum incremental reactivity (Carter, 2009). The calculated ozone formation potential (OFP) for each VOC species illustrates the maximum contribution of the species to the formation of ozone. (Bufalini and Dodge, 1983). The OFP for each VOC species is calculated using the following equation (Ma et al., 2019; Zhu et al., 2020b):
OFPi = MIRi x [VOCi] x Mi/Mozone R1
where OFPi (ppbv) represents the ozone formation potential of VOC species i, [VOCi] (ppbv) denotes the atmospheric concentration of VOC species i, and MIRi (g O3/g VOC) is the ozone formation coefficient of VOCi in the maximum increment reactions of ozone. Mozone and Mi are the molar masses (g mol-1) of O3 and VOC species i, respectively.
In addition, another widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity, defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. The OBM model can output the kOH for each VOCs, which reflects the reactivity of VOCs.
The comparison of the mean concentration of the six VOCs groups and their OFP in 2020, 2021, and 2022 is presented in Figure R3. It is obvious that the concentration of the VOC group was not proportional to its OFP. The average proportions of each VOCs component in 2020 and 2021 are 47.2%, 6.7%, 9.2%, 4.8%, 13.8% and 18.4% respectively, while the corresponding average proportions of OFP are 19.6%, 24.0%, 40.4%, 1.1%, 14.1% and 0.9%, respectively. In 2022, with minimal changes in the concentration proportions of alkenes, the OFP proportion increased by 11.3%. The proportion of aromatic hydrocarbons decreased by 4.2%, resulting in a 23.7% decrease in their OFP proportion. The proportion of OVOCs increased by 3.7%, leading to an 8.5% increase in their OFP proportion. In short, the primary contributors to OFP in 2020 and 2021 were aromatic hydrocarbons, followed by alkenes, while in 2022, the main contributors were alkenes, followed by OVOCs.
We combined two indicators, OFP and kOH, to identify key VOCs in photochemical processes. Figure R3b clearly shows a significant positive correlation between the OFP and kOH for each VOC after logarithmic transformation. Therefore, VOCs that rank high in both indicators are sufficient to indicate that these VOCs are key contributors in photochemical processes. In 2020 and 2021, m/p-xylene, toluene, ethylene, and propylene were the top contributors to both OFP and kOH. However, in 2022, propylene and ethylene took the lead in OFP, while propylene, isoprene, and ethylene topped the kOH.”
Figure R3. (a) The mean concentration and OFP of six VOC groups and (b) Scatter plots of the average OFP and OH reactivity for individual VOCs during daytime hours between 06:00 and 18:00 for the periods of April to May in 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Line 171: The observed delay in the peak time of VOCs in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021 is attributed to reduced human activities. Can the study provide further evidence or analysis to support this correlation? For example, have VOC patterns changed again and peaked at around 6 am since recovering from the pandemic?
R: Thanks for your comments. The diurnal variation profiles of VOCs in June 2023 clearly illustrate a shift in the diurnal pattern of VOCs since the recovery from the pandemic, with peaks occurring around 06:00 (see Figure R4a). Additionally, a comparison between the weekday and weekend diurnal profiles in June 2023 confirms historical research, as Cai et al. (2010) suggested, that the diurnal variation of VOCs in the Shanghai area exhibits a distinct weekend effect (see Figure R4b).
We have included an analysis of this section in the Supplement, as referenced by Figure S12. Additionally, the manuscript has been updated to respond to this analysis; please refer to Lines 182-183.
Figure R4. (a) The mean diurnal profiles of VOCs for the periods of April to May in 2020, 2021, and 2022, as well as June 2023. (b) The mean diurnal profiles of VOCs for weekdays and weekends in June 2023.
Line 200: The relationship between meteorological conditions, pollution environments, and different types of ozone profiles warrants further exploration. How do these factors interact to form the distinct ozone profile clusters? Recent references (e.g., https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-1185-2018) also suggest that night-time O3 tends to increase for some cities, would this affect the results?
R: Thanks for your comments. In the response to Specific Comments 3, the characteristics of the four ozone profiles and how precursor species NO2 and VOCs influence ozone profiles were summarized. For meteorological conditions, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 were in environments typical for photochemical processes with high temperature, low RH, and high radiation. This aligns with their corresponding ozone profile features. Cluster 3 experienced low temperature and low RH conditions, while Cluster 1 is characterized by low temperature, low RH, and low radiation, representing conditions typically unfavorable for ozone formation.
You mentioned Yan et al. (2018)’s study, where nighttime ozone concentrations showed an increasing trend in some cities. However, in this study, we compared data for the same months over three consecutive years. The variations in meteorological conditions over these three years, as detailed in the Supplement (see Figures S7-S10), were not particularly pronounced. The primary influencing factor was the reduction in pollutant emissions.
Line 221: The phrase "Reviewing previously observational results" should be "Reviewing previous observational results."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 241.
Line 248: The phrase "which has" would be more grammatically correct as "which had."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 269.
Line 253: A typo here, "sournces" should be corrected to "sources."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 276.
Line 284: The word "taked" should be corrected to "took." The sentence provides a breakdown of sources in Cluster 4.
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 307.
Line 313: The phrase "It can be interfered" should be "It can be inferred."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 342.
Line 322: The phrase "which provides a valuable opportunity" is correct but could be more concise. Suggested revision: "providing a valuable opportunity."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 351.
Line 323: The verb "shows" should be "show" to agree with the plural subject "observations." Remove the comma after "shows that."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 352.
Line 329: The phrase "resulted in the overall increase in the average ozone level" could be more concise. Suggested revision: "led to an overall increase in average ozone levels."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 358.
Line 336-337: Consider rephrasing for clarity: "The different proportions of NO2 and VOC reduction during static management led to an increased OH radical propagation (OH+VOCs) to termination (OH+NO2) ratio, reaching 2.10, higher than 1.03 in 2020 and 1.60 in 2021."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 366.
Line 339: Consider rephrasing for clarity: “The important lesson from the static management 'large-scale field experiment' is that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Lines 368-369.
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2142', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Jan 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.” , Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“ Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
(10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
2022/2020
1.2
2.6
1.4
1.5
1.2
2022/2021
1.0
2.1
1.4
1.5
1.5
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2023-2142-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high-level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
First, thank you for reviewing my manuscript. We found some issues with the photolysis data and have rerun the OBM model. We've also rechecked the results in Section 3.3. The new findings don't change the original conclusions much. My replies to your comments are based on these new results.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
R: Thanks for your correction. We have inserted relevant reference information, please refer to Line 34, Line 167, and Line 252.
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 59.
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 136.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
R: Thanks for your correction. To be more reader-friendly, we’ve enlarged the arrows and changed their colors, as shown in Figure R1.
Figure R1. (a) Comparison of the mean diurnal profiles of the four types of O3 after clustering. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; (b) The proportions of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. (c) Comparison of the O3 levels of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. The top and bottom of the vertical line for each box correspond to the 95th and 5th percentiles, respectively. The dots represent the averages, and the top, middle, and bottom lines of the box mark the 75th, 50th, and 25th percentiles, respectively; (d) Comparison of the average ozone concentrations in 2020, 2021 and 2022 for different ratios of the four clusters.
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 217.
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
R: Thank you for your reminder. The daily variations of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs. We have added the “The diurnal profiles of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs, with Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 exhibiting a distinct morning peak.” to the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 225-226.
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 237.
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 268.
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your comment. Yes, this average rate is for the three years. We have noticed it, please refer to Line 270.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 275.
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 295.
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 316.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 342.
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 352.
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 357.
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
R: Thanks for your comment. We agree with your statement, it is a rigorous statement. We have changed the title to “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Remain High During Shanghai’s Static Management? A Statistical and Radical Chemistry Perspective”.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
R: Thanks for your comment. Based on the existing analysis, the free radical chemistry simulation results indicate that such a proportional decrease in precursors in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling without altering the ozone formation regime.
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
R: Thanks for your comment. We define the minimum concentration in the ozone diurnal profile as the background concentration, and the difference between the midday peak and the morning trough represents the net ozone production. By examining the ozone diurnal profiles of the four clusters, we can determine these two parameters. In this study, the background concentration and net generation of Cluster 1 are approximately 23 ppbv and 15 ppbv, respectively; for Cluster 2, they are 17 ppbv and 46 ppbv; for Cluster 3, 41 ppbv and 17 ppbv; and for Cluster 4, 33 ppbv and 51 ppbv, respectively.
We have included the information about these two parameters in the manuscript, please refer to Line 190-196.
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.”, Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
R: Thank you for your constructive feedback. We appreciate your suggestions and have made the necessary revisions. Please refer to Line 206-207.
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
R: Thanks for your comment. VOCs are both a source of radicals and a consumable in the propagation of radicals. The effect of changes in the concentrations and ratios of the VOCs components on the photochemical processes was analyzed from the point of view of the sources and sinks of the radicals. Figure R2 shows the proportion and daily variation of primary sources of radicals. We can see that in 2020, 2021 and 2023, the primary sources involved in the photolysis process were the main ones, accounting for 81.7%. 71.9% and 83.5%, and reactions with VOCs (mainly alkenes) accounted for 18.3%, 28.1% and 26.5% respectively. The results show that although the decrease in VOCs concentration in 2022 has led to a decrease in the intensity of reactions with VOCs as primary sources of radicals, the proportion of reactions with VOCs was close to the level in 2021. This shows that the reaction with VOCs to generate radicals was still important during the static management period. In addition, the proportions of OVOCs photolysis in 2020, 2021 and 2022 were 14.3%, 19.6% and 10.6% respectively. The photolysis of OVOCs in 2022 was lower in level and proportion than in 2020 and 2021, so from the perspective of radical sources, there is no direct evidence that the change in the concentration proportion of OVOCs during static management would enhance the photochemical process.
Figure R2. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
The radical cycle begins with the degradation of VOCs triggered by OH radicals. A widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity (kOH), defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. Figure R3 illustrates the proportions of OH reactivity contributed by different VOCs components and its daily variation. In 2020, 2021 and 2022, the total kOH contributed by VOCs was 2.1 s-1, 2.6 s-1 and 1.1 s-1, respectively. Due to the influence of static management, the different proportions of decline of different components led to changes in the contribution to kOH. The contribution of aromatics decreased from 27% in 2020 and 31.6% in 2021 to 12% in 2022, while the contribution of olefins increased from 40.8% in 2020 and 43.3% in 2021 to 54.2% in 2022. And the contribution of OVOC did not change significantly. Alkenes play a large role from a radical propagation perspective, but there is no direct evidence that changes in OVOC concentration proportions would enhance photochemical processes.
Figure R3. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of kOH for different VOCs components during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Therefore, it is rather arbitrary to judge in the manuscript that an increase in the proportion of OVOC concentration is likely to enhance photochemical processes just from the change in concentration. Thanks for your comments, we have revised our hypothesis about the role of OVOCs in the manuscript. Please refer to Line 174-176.
“In the radical chemistry section, the photolysis of OVOCs, as well as the reactions of O3 and NO3 with VOCs, have been quantified for their contributions to the radicals. Additionally, the role of VOCs in the propagation of radicals has been quantified.”.
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
R: Thanks for your comment. Following your suggestion, Thank you for your comments. In accordance with your suggestions, we have replaced Figures 6 and 7 in the manuscript with Figures R4 and R5, respectively, to include the total primary sources. Please refer to Line 290 and Line 316. Furthermore, we have included Figures R6 and R7 in the Supplement. Please refer to the Figure S13 and Figure S14. Those include the proportion of each major source and the average daily profile of the total daily P(ROx).
Moreover, we have included an explanation in the Lines 277-278 stating, “Overall, the total primary production rates of ROx in 2022 were 2.34 ppbv h-1, which is lower than the 2.94 ppbv h-1 and 2.85 ppbv h-1 in 2021, as depicted in Figure S13 of the Supplement.”.
Figure R4. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (e), and RO2 (i) concentrations in 2020, 2021, and 2022. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of OH radical (b-d), HO2 radical (f-h), and RO2 radical (j-l) from model calculations in 2020, 2021 and 2022.
Figure R5. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (b), and RO2 (c) concentrations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of ROx radical (d-g) from model calculations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
Figure R6. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Figure R7. The proportions (a, b, c, d) and the mean diurnal profiles (e, f, g, h) of primary sources of daytime radicals for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
R: Thanks for your comment. We have characterized the ozone profiles after clustering into four distinct clusters: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R1. Upon statistical analysis, it was found that the number of days with higher average ozone concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 increased significantly in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021.
As shown in Table R1, the reasons for the high average ozone concentration levels in these two clusters were not entirely the same. The high concentrations in Cluster 3 were due to elevated ozone background concentration, whereas in Cluster 4, the high concentrations were attributed to both high background values and high net production. For Cluster 2, it had a high net ozone production but a lower background concentration. Therefore, in the analysis of the primary sources of radicals, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, which had high net production, exhibited significantly higher primary sources of radicals compared to Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. This suggests from the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters that a high net production indicates active photochemical processes.
The cluster-based analysis of radical chemistry can explain the high O3 concentrations observed in 2022. Cluster 4 is characterized by higher concentrations of HO2 and RO2 radicals and a higher primary source of radicals. Cluster 3 has moderate levels of radical concentrations and primary sources of radicals, but it features a high ozone background value. The increase in the number of days associated with these two clusters in 2022 has contributed to the elevated ozone levels. Cluster 2 has a higher primary source of radicals, indicating active photochemical processes, but the overall ozone levels are moderate due to the lower background ozone values.
Table R1. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
R: Thanks for your comment. The CO and NO data you referred to were not observed simultaneously in this study. Consequently, the CO data used in the model was a fixed value of 0.8 ppmv, and the NO data was calculated by the OBM model. This indeed represents a source of uncertainty in the model.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
R: Thanks for your comment. Firstly, the mcm mechanism utilized in the model includes the decomposition reactions of RO2NO2. Table R2 displays a selection of these RO2NO2 decomposition reactions along with their respective rate constants. Secondly, the manuscript initially described only the reaction rate between RO2 and NO2, which could be misleading. Consequently, we have re-evaluated the net production rate of RO2NO2, calculated as the generation rate minus the decomposition rate. The findings are now displayed in the revised Figure 8.
Table R2. RO2NO2 decomposition reactions involved in MCM mechanism.
reaction rate constant
KD0 = 1.10D-05*M*EXP(-10100/TEMP) ;
KDI = 1.90D17*EXP(-14100/TEMP) ;
KRD = KD0/KDI ;
FCD = 0.30 ;
NCD = 0.75-1.27*(LOG10(FCD)) ;
FD = 10@(LOG10(FCD)/(1+(LOG10(KRD)/NCD)**2)) ;
KBPAN = (KD0*KDI)*FD/(KD0+KDI) ;
reaction equations
% KBPAN : ACRPAN = ACO3 + NO2 ;
% KBPAN : PAN = CH3CO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : BZEMUCPAN = BZEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : TLEMUCPAN = TLEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : OXYMUCPAN = OXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : MXYMUCPAN = MXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PXYMUCPAN = PXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : EBZMUCPAN = EBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PBZMUCPAN = PBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : IPBZMUCPAN = IPBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; … (10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
2022/2020
1.2
2.4
1.4
1.1
1.2
2022/2021
1.0
2.0
1.3
1.2
1.5
R: Thanks for your comment. The insights you've raised are indeed constructive. As previously mentioned in the text, the report by Volkamer et al. (2010) suggests that approximately 20% of radical production is attributed to the decomposition of closed-shell species, while 80% originates from radical cycles. Upon discovering the improper handling of photolysis data, we reran the model. The table below compiles the average rates for each step related to the OH-HO2 cycle based on the model’s results. The results indicate that in 2022, the reaction rate for OH + R (R = CO, HCHO) → HO2 was higher, while the rate for HO2 + R (R = NO, O3, and NO3) → OH was lower compared to the years 2020 and 2021. As for reactions related to O3, the rates in 2022 were 2.4 times and 2.0 times faster than in 2020 and 2021, respectively. We did not observe a more efficient OH-HO2 cycle in 2022. Moreover, the total P(ROx) in 2022 was the lowest among the three years, yet the ROx concentration was the highest. The relationship between the generation rate and the concentration of products is not a direct cause-and-effect.
We have taken into account the OH-HO2 cycle in the radical chemistry analysis, and the results of this analysis have been included in the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 332-334.
Table R2. The reaction rates of the main processes in the OH-HO2 cycle for the three years.
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
3.911
0.052
0.014
1.904
0.309
2021
4.074
0.062
0.015
1.773
0.221
2022
3.435
0.125
0.019
2.086
0.274
2022/2020
0.9
2.6
1.4
1.1
0.9
2022/2021
0.8
2.1
1.3
1.2
1.2
Reference:
Volkamer, R., Sheehy, P., Molina, L. T., and Molina, M. J.: Oxidative capacity of the Mexico City atmosphere-Part 1: A radical source perspective, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 10, 6969-6991, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-10-6969-2010, 2010.
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AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high-level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
First, thank you for reviewing my manuscript. We found some issues with the photolysis data and have rerun the OBM model. We've also rechecked the results in Section 3.3. The new findings don't change the original conclusions much. My replies to your comments are based on these new results.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
R: Thanks for your correction. We have inserted relevant reference information, please refer to Line 34, Line 167, and Line 252.
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 59.
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 136.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
R: Thanks for your correction. To be more reader-friendly, we’ve enlarged the arrows and changed their colors, as shown in Figure R1.
Figure R1. (a) Comparison of the mean diurnal profiles of the four types of O3 after clustering. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; (b) The proportions of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. (c) Comparison of the O3 levels of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. The top and bottom of the vertical line for each box correspond to the 95th and 5th percentiles, respectively. The dots represent the averages, and the top, middle, and bottom lines of the box mark the 75th, 50th, and 25th percentiles, respectively; (d) Comparison of the average ozone concentrations in 2020, 2021 and 2022 for different ratios of the four clusters.
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 217.
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
R: Thank you for your reminder. The daily variations of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs. We have added the “The diurnal profiles of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs, with Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 exhibiting a distinct morning peak.” to the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 225-226.
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 237.
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 268.
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your comment. Yes, this average rate is for the three years. We have noticed it, please refer to Line 270.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 275.
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 295.
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 316.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 342.
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 352.
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 357.
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
R: Thanks for your comment. We agree with your statement, it is a rigorous statement. We have changed the title to “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Remain High During Shanghai’s Static Management? A Statistical and Radical Chemistry Perspective”.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
R: Thanks for your comment. Based on the existing analysis, the free radical chemistry simulation results indicate that such a proportional decrease in precursors in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling without altering the ozone formation regime.
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
R: Thanks for your comment. We define the minimum concentration in the ozone diurnal profile as the background concentration, and the difference between the midday peak and the morning trough represents the net ozone production. By examining the ozone diurnal profiles of the four clusters, we can determine these two parameters. In this study, the background concentration and net generation of Cluster 1 are approximately 23 ppbv and 15 ppbv, respectively; for Cluster 2, they are 17 ppbv and 46 ppbv; for Cluster 3, 41 ppbv and 17 ppbv; and for Cluster 4, 33 ppbv and 51 ppbv, respectively.
We have included the information about these two parameters in the manuscript, please refer to Line 190-196.
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.”, Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
R: Thank you for your constructive feedback. We appreciate your suggestions and have made the necessary revisions. Please refer to Line 206-207.
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
R: Thanks for your comment. VOCs are both a source of radicals and a consumable in the propagation of radicals. The effect of changes in the concentrations and ratios of the VOCs components on the photochemical processes was analyzed from the point of view of the sources and sinks of the radicals. Figure R2 shows the proportion and daily variation of primary sources of radicals. We can see that in 2020, 2021 and 2023, the primary sources involved in the photolysis process were the main ones, accounting for 81.7%. 71.9% and 83.5%, and reactions with VOCs (mainly alkenes) accounted for 18.3%, 28.1% and 26.5% respectively. The results show that although the decrease in VOCs concentration in 2022 has led to a decrease in the intensity of reactions with VOCs as primary sources of radicals, the proportion of reactions with VOCs was close to the level in 2021. This shows that the reaction with VOCs to generate radicals was still important during the static management period. In addition, the proportions of OVOCs photolysis in 2020, 2021 and 2022 were 14.3%, 19.6% and 10.6% respectively. The photolysis of OVOCs in 2022 was lower in level and proportion than in 2020 and 2021, so from the perspective of radical sources, there is no direct evidence that the change in the concentration proportion of OVOCs during static management would enhance the photochemical process.
Figure R2. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
The radical cycle begins with the degradation of VOCs triggered by OH radicals. A widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity (kOH), defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. Figure R3 illustrates the proportions of OH reactivity contributed by different VOCs components and its daily variation. In 2020, 2021 and 2022, the total kOH contributed by VOCs was 2.1 s-1, 2.6 s-1 and 1.1 s-1, respectively. Due to the influence of static management, the different proportions of decline of different components led to changes in the contribution to kOH. The contribution of aromatics decreased from 27% in 2020 and 31.6% in 2021 to 12% in 2022, while the contribution of olefins increased from 40.8% in 2020 and 43.3% in 2021 to 54.2% in 2022. And the contribution of OVOC did not change significantly. Alkenes play a large role from a radical propagation perspective, but there is no direct evidence that changes in OVOC concentration proportions would enhance photochemical processes.
Figure R3. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of kOH for different VOCs components during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Therefore, it is rather arbitrary to judge in the manuscript that an increase in the proportion of OVOC concentration is likely to enhance photochemical processes just from the change in concentration. Thanks for your comments, we have revised our hypothesis about the role of OVOCs in the manuscript. Please refer to Line 174-176.
“In the radical chemistry section, the photolysis of OVOCs, as well as the reactions of O3 and NO3 with VOCs, have been quantified for their contributions to the radicals. Additionally, the role of VOCs in the propagation of radicals has been quantified.”.
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
R: Thanks for your comment. Following your suggestion, Thank you for your comments. In accordance with your suggestions, we have replaced Figures 6 and 7 in the manuscript with Figures R4 and R5, respectively, to include the total primary sources. Please refer to Line 290 and Line 316. Furthermore, we have included Figures R6 and R7 in the Supplement. Please refer to the Figure S13 and Figure S14. Those include the proportion of each major source and the average daily profile of the total daily P(ROx).
Moreover, we have included an explanation in the Lines 277-278 stating, “Overall, the total primary production rates of ROx in 2022 were 2.34 ppbv h-1, which is lower than the 2.94 ppbv h-1 and 2.85 ppbv h-1 in 2021, as depicted in Figure S13 of the Supplement.”.
Figure R4. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (e), and RO2 (i) concentrations in 2020, 2021, and 2022. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of OH radical (b-d), HO2 radical (f-h), and RO2 radical (j-l) from model calculations in 2020, 2021 and 2022.
Figure R5. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (b), and RO2 (c) concentrations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of ROx radical (d-g) from model calculations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
Figure R6. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Figure R7. The proportions (a, b, c, d) and the mean diurnal profiles (e, f, g, h) of primary sources of daytime radicals for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
R: Thanks for your comment. We have characterized the ozone profiles after clustering into four distinct clusters: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R1. Upon statistical analysis, it was found that the number of days with higher average ozone concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 increased significantly in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021.
As shown in Table R1, the reasons for the high average ozone concentration levels in these two clusters were not entirely the same. The high concentrations in Cluster 3 were due to elevated ozone background concentration, whereas in Cluster 4, the high concentrations were attributed to both high background values and high net production. For Cluster 2, it had a high net ozone production but a lower background concentration. Therefore, in the analysis of the primary sources of radicals, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, which had high net production, exhibited significantly higher primary sources of radicals compared to Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. This suggests from the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters that a high net production indicates active photochemical processes.
The cluster-based analysis of radical chemistry can explain the high O3 concentrations observed in 2022. Cluster 4 is characterized by higher concentrations of HO2 and RO2 radicals and a higher primary source of radicals. Cluster 3 has moderate levels of radical concentrations and primary sources of radicals, but it features a high ozone background value. The increase in the number of days associated with these two clusters in 2022 has contributed to the elevated ozone levels. Cluster 2 has a higher primary source of radicals, indicating active photochemical processes, but the overall ozone levels are moderate due to the lower background ozone values.
Table R1. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
R: Thanks for your comment. The CO and NO data you referred to were not observed simultaneously in this study. Consequently, the CO data used in the model was a fixed value of 0.8 ppmv, and the NO data was calculated by the OBM model. This indeed represents a source of uncertainty in the model.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
R: Thanks for your comment. Firstly, the mcm mechanism utilized in the model includes the decomposition reactions of RO2NO2. Table R2 displays a selection of these RO2NO2 decomposition reactions along with their respective rate constants. Secondly, the manuscript initially described only the reaction rate between RO2 and NO2, which could be misleading. Consequently, we have re-evaluated the net production rate of RO2NO2, calculated as the generation rate minus the decomposition rate. The findings are now displayed in the revised Figure 8.
Table R2. RO2NO2 decomposition reactions involved in MCM mechanism.
reaction rate constant
KD0 = 1.10D-05*M*EXP(-10100/TEMP) ;
KDI = 1.90D17*EXP(-14100/TEMP) ;
KRD = KD0/KDI ;
FCD = 0.30 ;
NCD = 0.75-1.27*(LOG10(FCD)) ;
FD = 10@(LOG10(FCD)/(1+(LOG10(KRD)/NCD)**2)) ;
KBPAN = (KD0*KDI)*FD/(KD0+KDI) ;
reaction equations
% KBPAN : ACRPAN = ACO3 + NO2 ;
% KBPAN : PAN = CH3CO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : BZEMUCPAN = BZEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : TLEMUCPAN = TLEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : OXYMUCPAN = OXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : MXYMUCPAN = MXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PXYMUCPAN = PXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : EBZMUCPAN = EBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PBZMUCPAN = PBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : IPBZMUCPAN = IPBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; … (10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
2022/2020
1.2
2.4
1.4
1.1
1.2
2022/2021
1.0
2.0
1.3
1.2
1.5
R: Thanks for your comment. The insights you've raised are indeed constructive. As previously mentioned in the text, the report by Volkamer et al. (2010) suggests that approximately 20% of radical production is attributed to the decomposition of closed-shell species, while 80% originates from radical cycles. Upon discovering the improper handling of photolysis data, we reran the model. The table below compiles the average rates for each step related to the OH-HO2 cycle based on the model’s results. The results indicate that in 2022, the reaction rate for OH + R (R = CO, HCHO) → HO2 was higher, while the rate for HO2 + R (R = NO, O3, and NO3) → OH was lower compared to the years 2020 and 2021. As for reactions related to O3, the rates in 2022 were 2.4 times and 2.0 times faster than in 2020 and 2021, respectively. We did not observe a more efficient OH-HO2 cycle in 2022. Moreover, the total P(ROx) in 2022 was the lowest among the three years, yet the ROx concentration was the highest. The relationship between the generation rate and the concentration of products is not a direct cause-and-effect.
We have taken into account the OH-HO2 cycle in the radical chemistry analysis, and the results of this analysis have been included in the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 332-334.
Table R2. The reaction rates of the main processes in the OH-HO2 cycle for the three years.
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
3.911
0.052
0.014
1.904
0.309
2021
4.074
0.062
0.015
1.773
0.221
2022
3.435
0.125
0.019
2.086
0.274
2022/2020
0.9
2.6
1.4
1.1
0.9
2022/2021
0.8
2.1
1.3
1.2
1.2
Reference:
Volkamer, R., Sheehy, P., Molina, L. T., and Molina, M. J.: Oxidative capacity of the Mexico City atmosphere-Part 1: A radical source perspective, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 10, 6969-6991, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-10-6969-2010, 2010.
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2142', Anonymous Referee #1, 03 Jan 2024
General comments:
The article investigates the increase in ozone levels in Shanghai during city-wide static management measures implemented in April and May 2022 to control the spread of the Omicron variant. Despite significant reductions in VOCs and NO2 emissions, average ozone levels rose by 23%. The study involves comprehensive observations and statistical analysis of ozone profiles categorized into four clusters based on their characteristics. It highlights the importance of radical chemistry and photochemical processes in understanding the increased ozone levels. The research concludes that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime, suggesting that controlling VOCs is vital for effective ozone pollution management. I generally agree with the structure of the manuscript and classify my recommendation as minor revision. However, there are several specific and minor points that I recommend the authors address (see below).
Specific comments:
- How were the simulated radical concentrations validated against observed data, especially considering the variations in different urban and non-urban environments?
- The study details various sources and production rates for radicals. If possible, a deeper exploration of how these sources differ in urban settings and their specific impacts on air quality could be insightful.
- The study relates different ozone profile clusters to radical chemistry variations. Further analysis of how these clusters specifically influence overall ozone levels and atmospheric chemistry would be beneficial.
- The dominance of radical cycling in polluted environments raises questions about its specific role in ozone formation and the potential for targeted interventions in such environments.
Minor comments:
Line 17: The statement that "the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" lacks specific context. What does "nearly 23%" represent in terms of absolute concentrations, and how does it compare to historical averages or expected levels under similar conditions?
Line 39: The phrase "in those countries like China that face air pollution complex" could be better structured for clarity. Consider rephrasing to "in countries like China that face complex air pollution issues."
Lines 40-48: The comparison with the lockdown measures in early 2020 is useful. Could the paper elaborate on how the findings from 2020 influenced the hypotheses or research methods for the 2022 study?
Line 52: Ensure consistent use of punctuation, especially with regard to commas and periods. Should be “During the static management…”? Please briefly describe the definition of static management to make it clear.
Line 70: Were the experimental conditions and methodologies consistent across the different years (2020, 2021, and 2022) to ensure comparability of the data?
Line 82: There seems to be a typo in the coordinates for the Yangpu environment monitoring station (31.53°N, 31.25°E). The longitude seems incorrect.
Lines 107-111: The text is clear but might benefit from a brief explanation of why the stacking model is preferred over simple linear interpolation.
Line 153: The methodology for classifying the 103 VOCs into six categories, including how each category specifically influences ozone formation, requires clarification. How does the classification relate to their respective roles in ozone formation? For example, the study notes a significant reduction in aromatics and a relative stability in OVOCs. What are the implications of these changes for ozone formation, considering their different sources and chemical behaviours?
Line 171: The observed delay in the peak time of VOCs in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021 is attributed to reduced human activities. Can the study provide further evidence or analysis to support this correlation? For example, have VOC patterns changed again and peaked at around 6 am since recovering from the pandemic?
Line 200: The relationship between meteorological conditions, pollution environments, and different types of ozone profiles warrants further exploration. How do these factors interact to form the distinct ozone profile clusters? Recent references (e.g., https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-1185-2018) also suggest that night-time O3 tends to increase for some cities, would this affect the results?
Line 221: The phrase "Reviewing previously observational results" should be "Reviewing previous observational results."
Line 248: The phrase "which has" would be more grammatically correct as "which had."
Line 253: A typo here, "sournces" should be corrected to "sources."
Line 284:
- The word "taked" should be corrected to "took."
- The sentence provides a breakdown of sources in Cluster 4.
Line 313: The phrase "It can be interfered" should be "It can be inferred."
Line 322: The phrase "which provides a valuable opportunity" is correct but could be more concise. Suggested revision: "providing a valuable opportunity."
Line 323:
- The verb "shows" should be "show" to agree with the plural subject "observations."
- Remove the comma after "shows that."
Line 329: The phrase "resulted in the overall increase in the average ozone level" could be more concise. Suggested revision: "led to an overall increase in average ozone levels."
Line 336-337:
Consider rephrasing for clarity: "The different proportions of NO2 and VOC reduction during static management led to an increased OH radical propagation (OH+VOCs) to termination (OH+NO2) ratio, reaching 2.10, higher than 1.03 in 2020 and 1.60 in 2021."
Line 339: Consider rephrasing for clarity: "The important lesson from the static management 'large-scale field experiment' is that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime."
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
General comments:
The article investigates the increase in ozone levels in Shanghai during city-wide static management measures implemented in April and May 2022 to control the spread of the Omicron variant. Despite significant reductions in VOCs and NO2 emissions, average ozone levels rose by 23%. The study involves comprehensive observations and statistical analysis of ozone profiles categorized into four clusters based on their characteristics. It highlights the importance of radical chemistry and photochemical processes in understanding the increased ozone levels. The research concludes that Shanghai operates in a VOCs-limited regime, suggesting that controlling VOCs is vital for effective ozone pollution management. I generally agree with the structure of the manuscript and classify my recommendation as minor revision. However, there are several specific and minor points that I recommend the authors address (see below).
Firstly, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for the valuable time and effort you have dedicated to reviewing my manuscript. We have also re-examined the article and identified issues with the processing of photolysis data. Consequently, we have reran the OBM model and conducted a fresh statistical analysis and discussion of the results related to the OBM model (Section 3.3). The latest findings have not fundamentally altered the original conclusions. The responses to your comments that follow are based on these most recent results.
Specific comments:
How were the simulated radical concentrations validated against observed data, especially considering the variations in different urban and non-urban environments?
R: Thanks for your comments. Unfortunately, this study did not conduct simultaneous observations of free radicals, thus direct verification was not possible. However, there are research teams in China that have carried out comparative studies on radicals’ observations and simulations.
The earliest observation of OH radicals in China was accomplished through collaborative efforts between Peking University and Forschungszentrum Juelich (FZJ), resulting in the construction of a Laser Induced Fluorescence (LIF) instrument for detecting OH and HO2. Additionally, the Anhui Institute of Optics and Fine Mechanics (AIOFM) independently developed a Laser Induced Fluorescence (LIF) instrument. Simultaneously, comparisons with model simulations were conducted during the radical observations.
Tan et al. (2017) from Peking University’s observations and simulation studies in Wangdu, China, indicate that the simulation of radicals exhibits excellent performance. Zhang et al. (2022a) from AIOFM reported good consistency between observed and simulated values of radicals. Those indicate the feasibility of applying observation-based models in the simulation of photochemical processes. Based on error analysis of models and observations, Lu and Zhang (2010) suggested that the ratio of simulated to measured values for HOx (OH + HO2) falling within the range of 0.4-1.6 can be considered acceptable. Applying the chemical box model to dissect photochemical processes is a mature and widely-used approach, currently adopted by teams that lack the capability to conduct radical observations.
Lu et al. (2019) categorized the observed OH radicals into three groups: urban areas, remote regions (including continents, oceans, polar regions, and the free troposphere), and forested areas. The maximum concentrations of OH radicals observed across different categories all fall within the range of 106 to 107 molecules cm-3 (see Figure R1). In this study, the average peak of OH was around 5.0 × 108 molecules cm-3, which is considered a moderate level in urban environments.
The team from AIOFM conducted continuous observations of radicals at the Shanghai Academy of Environmental Sciences (31.17°N, 121.43°E, urban environment) using their independently developed Laser-Induced Fluorescence (LIF) system from November 8th to November 24th, 2019 (Zhang et al., 2022a). The average concentrations of OH and HO2 radicals during the midday hours (11:00-13:00) were 2.7 × 106 and 0.8 × 108 molecules cm-3, respectively. We performed OBM simulations for the same period at the site within this study. The simulation results showed average concentrations of OH and HO2 radicals to be 2.67 × 106 and 0.84 × 108 molecules cm-3, respectively. The diurnal variation trends also demonstrated good consistency. This indirectly indicates that the free radical chemistry simulation results of this study are relatively reliable.
We hope to conduct radical observations in the future through collaborative efforts or independent research, and to conduct comparative studies on radicals in urban and non-urban environments.
Figure R1. Typical observed daily averaged maximum OH concentrations at distinct different geophysical regions (i.e. urban, remote, forest areas) with different measurement techniques (i.e. DOAS, LIF, CIMS, CEAS, and CRDS). The figure is sourced from Lu et al. (2019).
The study details various sources and production rates for radicals. If possible, a deeper exploration of how these sources differ in urban settings and their specific impacts on air quality could be insightful.
R: Thanks for your comments. Over the past few decades, understanding the sources and chemical behavior of HOx has been a focal point in air quality research. Despite the visual similarities in air pollution issues, the chemistry of radicals, particularly the relative importance of the main sources of radicals, varies across different types of regions. Generally, the primary sources of radicals include the photolysis of O3, HONO, HCHO, and other OVOCs, as well as non-photolytic sources such as the reaction of ozone with alkenes and the reaction of NO3 with unsaturated VOCs.
Regarding the impact of the sources of radicals in urban environments on air quality, we conducted a correlation analysis between the sources of radicals and ozone-related indices, as shown in Figure R2. The production rates of radicals P(ROx) had a strong positive correlation with the production rates of ozone P(O3), and both were temperature-dependent. The higher the temperature, the higher P(O3) and P(ROx). Additionally, we defined daily net ozone production O3_net as the difference between the highest ozone value at noon and the lowest value in the morning. The correlation analysis between daily O3_net and the photolysis rates of HONO, O3, HCHO, and OVOCs, as well as the total radical source, reveals a significant positive relationship. This implies that the strength of different sources of modeled radicals positively contributes to ozone production. From the perspective of the slopes, the contribution of HCHO photolysis to net ozone generation is evident. This may be attributed to the enhancement of the NO2-NO-O3 cycle by the HO2 radicals produced from HCHO photolysis.
Figure R2. Correlation analysis between the sources of radicals and ozone-related indices, (a) P(O3) & P(ROx); (b) O3_net & HONO+hv; (c) O3_net & O3+hv; (d) O3_net & HCHO+hv; (e) O3_net & HONO+hv; (f) O3_net & P(ROx).
We have included the above textual and graphical descriptions in the Supplement, please refer to Text S2 and Figure S15. Further explanations can be found in the manuscript on Lines 310-311.
We have also included in the Supplement a review of the radical observation and simulation studies conducted both domestically and internationally, as shown in the following text and table. Please refer to Text S3 and Table S3 in the Supplement.
“We have compiled observations and simulations of radical chemistry conducted by various research teams in different environments (see Table R1). It is evident that the primary sources of radicals vary in different regions and seasons. Compared to marine boundary layer environments, forest environments, and suburban environments, the primary sources of radicals in urban environments were complex. For example, simulation work conducted in urban environments in Nashville, Houston, and Writtle indicates that the photolysis of ozone was a primary contributor to the primary source of radicals (Kovacs et al., 2003; Martinez et al., 2003; Thornton et al., 2002; Mao et al., 2010; Lee et al., 2006; Emmerson et al., 2007; Emmerson and Carslaw, 2009). And in locations like New York, Palaiseau, Shenzhen, the photolysis of HONO played a significant role (Ren et al., 2003a; Ren et al., 2003b; Cai et al., 2008; Dolgorouky et al., 2012; Michoud et al., 2012; Yang et al., 2022). It is noteworthy that within the same urban environment, the dominant sources can vary across different seasons, time periods, and conditions. In Tokyo, the primary sources of free radicals in winter were the reactions between ozone and alkenes, while in summer, they were the photolysis of ozone and OVOCs (Kanaya et al., 2008; Kanaya et al., 2007a). In New York, during the daytime, the primary source was the photolysis of HONO, while at night, it resulted from the reaction between O3 and alkenes(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2006). In Jülich, under high NOx conditions, the primary source was the photolysis of HONO, whereas under low NOx conditions, it was the photolysis of O3 (Kanaya et al., 2012). In marine boundary layer environments, most studies indicated that the photolysis of ozone was the primary contributor to free radicals during the day, while at night, it resulted from the reaction between O3 and alkenes. In suburban and rural environments, the primary contributor was the photolysis of HONO. Just as you mentioned the differences in radical chemistry between urban and suburban environments, historical research has also indicated this, and it is a crucial aspect of the simulation studies we conducted in Shanghai.”
Table R1. Summary of measurements and model comparisons for OH and HO2 in different typical environments, as well as OH reactivity and HOx primary sources
campaign
year
location
Technique
OH measured
HO2 measured
OH reactivity
HOx primary sources
comments
Ref.
Urban environment
SOS
June-July 1999
Nashville, Tennessee,
USA, 36°N, 88°W
LIF
0.8 pptv at noon
80 pptv at noon
11.3±4.8 s-1
O3+hv
OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.33; OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.56; the measured OH reactivity is about 1.2 times larger than modeled.
(Thornton et al., 2002; Martinez et al., 2003; Kovacs et al., 2003)
PUMA
June 1999 & January-February 2000
Birmingham,
UK, 53°N, 2°W
LIF
(2-9)×106 molecule cm-3 in summer, (0.5-4)×106 molecule cm-3 in summer,
(1.5-10)×108 molecule cm-3 in summer, ~4×106 molecule cm-3 in summer,
-
O3+alkenes: 46% in summer, 62% in winter
OH modeled-to-measured ratio: 0.58 in summer and 0.5 in winter; HO2 modeled-to-measured ratio: 0.56 in summer and 0.49 in winter.
(Emmerson et al., 2005a; Emmerson et al., 2005b; Heard et al., 2004; Harrison et al., 2006)
TEXAQS
August-September 2000
Houston, Texas, USA, 29°N, 95°W
LIF
Maximum ~0.8 pptv
Maximum ~30 pptv
7-12 s-1
O3+hv
(Mao et al., 2010)
PMTACS-NY
June-August 2001
New York, USA, 41°N, 74°W
LIF
(2-20)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.5-2)×108 molecule cm-3
15-25 s-1
HONO+hv
OH observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.10; HO2 observed-to-modeled ratio: 1.24; The OH reactivity measurements agree with the calculations to within 10%
(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2003b; Ren et al., 2003a)
HOxComp
9-11 July 2005
Julich, Germany (50°54′33″N, 06°24′44″E)
LIF, DOAS, CIMS
Maximum 9.4×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum 35 pptv
high-NOx: HONO+hv;
low-NOx: O3+hv
Good agreement between model and observations for OH under high isoprene low NOx (fresh isoprene emissions)
(Kanaya et al., 2012)
MCMA
April 2003
Mexico City, Mexico, 19°N,100°W
LIF
(5-8)×106 molecule cm-3
15-60 pptv
25-120 s-1
HCHO+hv
(OH)model=1.2×(OH)-0.008 pptv R2=0.80; (HO2)model=0.90×(HO2)+0.98 pptv R2=0.64; OH reactivity in the model is about 10-20% too low
(Volkamer et al., 2010; Sheehy et al., 2010; Shirley et al., 2006)
TORCH-1
July-August 2003
Writtle, Essex,
UK, 51°N, 0°E
LIF
(1.2-7.5)×106 molecule cm-3, with 2.6×106 molecule cm-3 at night
(0.16-3.3)×108 molecule cm-3, with 2.9×107 molecule cm-3 at night
2-10 s-1
O3+hv
Daytime OH and HO2 Overpredicted by 24% and 7%, respectively; nighttime OH and HO2 unpredicted 41% and 16%, respectively
(Emmerson and Carslaw, 2009; Emmerson et al., 2007; Lee et al., 2006)
IMPACT IV&L
January-February and July-August 2004
Tokyo, Japan,
35°N, 139°E
LIF
In winter, daytime median was 1.5×106 molecule cm-3 and night mean was 1.8×105 molecule cm-3; in summer, daytime median was 6.3×106 molecule cm-3 and night mean was 3.7×105 molecule cm-3
In winter, daytime median was 1.1 pptv and night mean was 0.7 pptv; in summer, daytime median was 5.7 pptv and night mean was 2.6 pptv
the day and night in winter: O3+alkenes; in daytime during summer: O3+hv and OVOCs+hv, during the early morning in summer: HONO+hv
Daytime OH well reproduced by model for both periods; daytime HO2 underestimated in winter and overestimated in summer.
(Kanaya et al., 2008; Kanaya et al., 2007a)
PMTACS-2
January-February 2004
New York, USA, 41°N, 74°W
LIF
maximum 1.4×106 molecule cm-3
maximum 0.7 pptv
20-40 s-1
Daytime: HONO+hv; Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH observed to modelled ratio of 0.98; HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 6, with the greatest values at high NO; OH reactivity measured higher than calculated at rush hour in the morning and in the evening, possibly due to unmeasured or missing VOCs.
(Cai et al., 2008; Ren et al., 2006)
MILAGRO
March 2006
Mexico City, Mexico, 19°N, 100°W
LIF
maximum median 4.6×106 molecule cm-3
maximum median 1.9×108 molecule cm-3
HCHO+hv
OH overpredicted by a factor of 1.7 at midday, well reproduced after 14:30; HO2 underpredicted in the morning, well reproduced after 11:30
(Dusanter et al., 2009b; Dusanter et al., 2009a)
TRAMP
August-September 2006
Houston, Texas, USA, 29°N, 95°W
LIF
Daytime: 0.33±0.23 pptv; Nighttime: 0.087±0.066 pptv
Daytime: 22±18 pptv; Nighttime: 11±7.8 pptv
10-20 s-1
morning rush hour: HONO+hv; daytime: O3+hv; nighttime: O3+alkenes
the measured OH was generally greater than the modeled OH
for all mechanisms, especially during the afternoon; For HO2, Good agreement was found in the morning for the models with most mechanisms, except for SAPRC-99 (slope=0.67); This good agreement between
measured and calculated OH reactivity
(Chen et al., 2010; Mao et al., 2010)
MEGAPOLI
July 2009
Palaiseau, French 48.71°N,2.21°E
LIF
~5×106 molecule cm-3
~1.2×108 molecule cm-3
HONO+hv
Photo Stationary State calculations overestimate OH by 50 %, box model overestimated 12% and 5 %, for OH and (HO2+RO2) respectively.
(Michoud et al., 2012; Dolgorouky et al., 2012)
STORM
September- October 2018
Peking University Shenzhen Graduate School, Shenzhen, China 22.60°N, 113.97°E
LIF
maximum of 4.5×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum of 4.2×108 molecule cm-3
18-22 s-1
HONO+hv
Good agreement between the observed and modeled kOH during the several days in Shenzhen
(Yang et al., 2022)
Marine boundary environment
EASE97
April-May 1997
Mace Head, Ireland, 53°N, 10°W
LIF
(2.0-6.0)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.5-3.5)×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
average model-measurement ratios were 2.4 for OH, 3.6 for HO2 between 11:00 and 15:00.
(Creasey et al., 2002; Carslaw et al., 2002)
OKIPEX
July-August 1998
Oki Dogo Island, Japan, 36°N, 133°E
LIF
Below the detection limit of the instrument (0.8 pptv)
Maximum of 17 pptv
O3+hv
Model usually overestimated HO2 by a factor of 2
(Kanaya et al., 2000; Kanaya and Akimoto, 2002)
ORION99
August 1999
Cape Hedo, Okinawa Island, Japan, 27°N, 128°E
LIF
Maximum of 4×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 17 pptv; nighttime: 0.5-5.5 pptv
O3+hv
OH was underestimated by model calculations but within a large uncertainty; Model underestimated daytime HO2 by only 20%
(Kanaya et al., 2001b; Kanaya et al., 2001a; Kanaya et al., 2002a)
SOAPEX-2
January-February 1999
Cape Grim, Tasmania, 41°S, 142°E
LIF
Maximum of 3.5×106 molecule cm-3
Maximum of 2×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
Models overestimated OH by 10%-20%; Models overestimated HO2 by ~40%;
(Sommariva et al., 2004; Creasey et al., 2003)
RISOTTO
June 2000
Rishiri Island, Japan, 45°N, 141°E
LIF
~10 pptv at midday; mean of 4.2±1.2 pptv at night
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH overestimated by ~36%; HO2 overestimated by ~70%, requiring 25 pptv IO to reconcile model with observations
(Kanaya et al., 2002c; Kanaya et al., 2002b)
RISFEX
September 2003
Rishiri Island, Japan, 45.07°N, 141.12°E
LIF
Daytime: maximum of 2.7×106 molecule cm-3; Nighttime: (0.07-0.55)×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 5.9 pptv; Nighttime: (0.5-4.9) pptv
Daytime: O3+hv;
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
OH overestimated by 35%; HO2 overestimated by 89%; median nighttime modeled-to-observed ratios were 1.29 and 0.56 for HO2 and OH, respectively
(Kanaya et al., 2007b; Qi et al., 2007)
RHaMBLe
May-June 2007
Cape Verde, Atlantic Ocean, 16.85°N, 24.87°W
LIF
Maximum of 9×106 molecule cm-3
Daytime: maximum of 6×108 molecule cm-3; Nighttime: ~0.6 pptv
Daytime: O3+hv;
Nighttime: O3+alkenes
under-predicted OH on average by 18%; under-predicted HO2 by 39%
(Lee et al., 2010; Whalley et al., 2010)
SOS
February-March; June; September 2009
Cape Verde, Atlantic Ocean, 17°N, 25°W
LIF
Maximum of ~9×106 molecule cm-3
maximum of 4×108 molecule cm-3, ~107 molecule cm-3 at night
O3+hv
Concentrations in summer (June,
September) almost double those
observed in winter (Feb, March)
(Carpenter et al., 2010; Vaughan et al., 2012)
Forest environment
AEROBIC
July-August 1997
Indigenous forest, North West Greece, 40°N, 21°E
LIF
(4-12)×106 molecule cm-3
(0.4-9)×108 molecule cm-3
O3+hv
Model underprediction of OH by ~50%. Modelled HO2 was typically higher than observations. But observations showed high variability
(Creasey et al., 2001; Carslaw et al., 2001)
PROPHET-98
August 1998
Deciduous forest, North Michigan, USA, 45.6°N, 84.7°W
LIF
Daytime: 0.1-0.2 pptv; Nighttime: 0.04 pptv
Daytime: 10-25 pptv: Nighttime: 1-4 pptv
O3+alkenes
OH observations 2.7 times greater than the model; HO2 observations and model in good agreement
(Faloona et al., 2001; Tan et al., 2001)
GABRIEL
October 2005
Suriname, South America
LIF
0.25 pptv
~(50-55) pptv
O3+hv
Observed to modelled ratio of 12.2 for OH and 4.1 for HO2
(Kubistin et al., 2010; Butler et al., 2008; Lelieveld et al., 2008; Martinez et al., 2010)
OP3
April and July 2008
Sabah, Borneo, 5°N, 118°E
LIF
2.5×106 molecule cm-3
2×108 molecule cm-
10-60 s-1
O3+hv
Factor of 10 underprediction in OH when model constrained to OH reactivity. HO2 overpredicted at ground level
(Whalley et al., 2011; Stone et al., 2011; Pugh et al., 2010)
HUMPPA-COPEC-2010
July and August 2010
boreal forest in Hyytiälä, southern Finland 61.9°N, 24.3°E
LIF, CIMS
3.5×106 molecule cm-3
37 pptv
12.4 s-1
O3+hv
OHLIF/OHCIMS = (1.31 ± 0.14);
OHmod./OHobs.=1.00 ± 0.16;
HO2mod. /HO2obs = 0.3 ± 0.2;
simulated OH reactivity does not match the observed OH reactivity
(Hens et al., 2014; Nölscher et al., 2012)
Suburban & rural environments
CAREBeijing-2006
August- early September 2006
Suburban rural site, Beijing, China, 39.61°N, 116.30°E
LIF
(4-17)×106 molecule cm-3
(2-24)×108 molecule cm-3
10-30 s-1
HCHO+hv
A large discrepancy of a factor 2.6 is found at the lowest NO concentration encountered (0.1 ppb)
(Lu et al., 2010)
PRIDE-PRD 2014
autumn 2014
Guangdong Atmospheric Supersite, China 22.73°N, 112.93°E
LIF
maximum median of 4.5×106 molecule cm-3
maximum median of 3×108 molecule cm-3
22-32 s-1
HONO+hv
50 % was unexplained by the measured OH reactants
(Tan et al., 2019)
June 2014
Wangdu, China
LIF
(5-15)×106 molecule cm-3
(3.14)×108 molecule cm-3
10-20 s-1
HONO+hv
Model-measurement ratio was between 1.4 and 2; For HO2, good agreement between modeled and observed concentrations during day and night
(Fuchs et al., 2017; Tan et al., 2017)
BEST-ONE
January- March 2016
suburban site Huairou, Beijing, China 40.41°N, 116.68°E
LIF
2.4×106 molecule cm-3 in severely polluted air; 3.6×106 molecule cm-3 in relatively clean air
0.52×108 molecule cm-3 in severely polluted air; 0.93×108 molecule cm-3 in relatively clean air
26.9 s-1 in severely polluted air; 10.1 in relatively clean air
HONO+hv
OH and HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 1.5 during clean days; underestimated HO2 concentrations by factors up to 5 during pollution episodes
(Tan et al., 2018)
CHOOSE-2019
August- September 2019
Xinjin, Chengdu, China 30.40°N, 103.85°E
LIF
Mean of 9.5×106 molecule cm-3
Mean of 9×108 molecule cm-3
HONO+hv
OH observed to modelled ratio of 0.8, HO2 observed to modelled ratio of 1.0
(Yang et al., 2021; Zhang et al., 2022b)
The study relates different ozone profile clusters to radical chemistry variations. Further analysis of how these clusters specifically influence overall ozone levels and atmospheric chemistry would be beneficial.
R: Thanks for your comments.
Firstly, cluster analysis reveals that the ozone profiles in the Shanghai region can be classified into four clusters, each characterized by: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R2.
The common characteristic of Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 is a lower baseline value of ozone, primarily because a significant amount of ozone was titrated and consumed from nighttime to early morning. As depicted in Figure 5 of the manuscript, the NO2 levels for Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 were significantly higher during the night or early morning peaks, indicating the crucial role of titration. Due to a significant reduction in NOx emissions during the static management period in 2022, the total number of days for Cluster 1 and Cluster 2 decreased from 37 days in 2020 and 40 days in 2021 to 11 days in 2022.
The common characteristic of Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 is a higher daytime net ozone production. This is attributed not only to meteorological conditions favorable for photochemical processes, characterized by high temperatures, low relative humidity, and high radiation but also to the contribution of elevated VOCs concentrations during the early morning peak, which got consumed in the ozone production process. As clearly shown in Figure 5 of the manuscript, the VOC levels during the early morning peak for Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 were significantly higher than those for Cluster 1 and Cluster 3, contributing to the higher daytime net ozone production. Due to a reduction in VOCs emissions during the static management period in 2022, the total number of days for Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 decreased from 28 days in 2020 and 25 days in 2021 to 20 days in 2022. However, the number of days for Cluster 4 increased from 4 days in 2020 and 2021 to 16 days in 2022, as the reduction in NOx emissions in 2022 led to an increase in the number of days with elevated ozone baseline levels.
Overall, the change in the number of days for the four ozone diurnal profiles is influenced by the differential reduction in precursor VOCs and NOx levels. The number of days with higher ozone concentrations for Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 significantly increased in 2022. This directly resulted in an overall elevation of ozone levels during the silent management period in 2022 compared to the same period in 2020 and 2021.
In the radical cycling OH-RO2-RO-HO2-OH, the OH radical initiates a series of subsequent reactions, and RO2 and HO2 are the primary precursors for ozone formation in the presence of NOx. The cycle is terminated through reactions with NOx under high NOx conditions and cross-reactions with ROx under low NOx conditions. We compiled the daytime average concentrations of radicals, sources of radicals, OH propagation and termination, as well as ozone production rates for Cluster 1-4 (see table R2). The concentrations and sources of radicals for Cluster 1-4 have been previously discussed in the manuscript. In summary, both the concentration and source strength of radicals were highest in Cluster 4, followed by relatively comparable levels in Cluster 2 and Cluster 3 as secondary, while Cluster 1 had the lowest levels. In the radical cycling, due to the increased consumption of VOCs, the OH propagation in Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 is significantly higher than in Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. Meanwhile, the low nitrogen oxide concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 weaken the OH termination. This directly reflects that the ratio of OH propagation to termination in Cluster 4 was considerably higher, indicating a more efficient radical cycle. This higher efficiency allows for significant net ozone generation even in the presence of elevated baseline ozone levels.
We have included the relevant description in the manuscript; please refer to Lines 310-315 in the track-changes manuscript.
Table R2. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
The dominance of radical cycling in polluted environments raises questions about its specific role in ozone formation and the potential for targeted interventions in such environments.
R: Thanks for your comments. As mentioned in the response to specific comments, an inappropriate ratio of NOx to VOCs concentrations can enhance the radical cycle, leading to substantial ozone generation within the cycling. The current mainstream perspective on ozone control emphasizes the need to establish a scientific VOCs/NOx emission reduction ratio, aiming to weaken the intensity of the radical cycling. This study suggests that reducing NO2 by about 50% and VOCs by 30% in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling, leading to an increase in ozone levels.
The spatial distribution characteristics of O3 generation sensitivity exhibit both similarities and differences across different regions. Urban sites in the Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei and surrounding areas, the Yangtze River Delta, the Pearl River Delta, and other regions show consistent O3 generation sensitivity, predominantly falling within the VOC control regime. (Wang et al., 2022; Wang et al., 2020a; Lyu et al., 2019; Yu et al., 2020; Wang et al., 2023). However, there are variations in the sensitivity of suburban sites. Suburban sites in the Yangtze River Delta (An et al., 2015; Xu et al., 2017; Zhao et al., 2020), Pearl River Delta (Wang et al., 2017), and Chengdu-Chongqing region (such as Chongqing) (Su et al., 2018) are mainly situated in the VOC control regime. In contrast, suburban sites in the Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei and surrounding areas (Lu et al., 2010; Ran et al., 2011), the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River (such as Wuhan) (Zhu et al., 2020a), and the northwest region (such as Lanzhou) (Xue et al., 2014) are primarily located in the NOx control regime or NOx-VOC mixed control regime. The above emphasize that most areas in my country are still in a high NOx environment and VOCs play an extremely important role in the O3 production process (especially O3 production in urban areas). At this stage, it is still necessary to implement scientific VOCs/NOx collaborative emission reduction measures to weaken the radical cycling. Identifying and controlling key reactive VOC species in O3 generation are essential for effectively mitigating O3 pollution.
Minor comments:
Line 17: The statement that "the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" lacks specific context. What does "nearly 23%" represent in terms of absolute concentrations, and how does it compare to historical averages or expected levels under similar conditions?
R: Thanks for your comments. The comparisons made here are between the static management period of 2022 and the same periods in 2020 and 2021. Therefore, the statement " the average ozone level increased by nearly 23%" refers to the average ozone concentration during the static management period of 2022 being approximately 23% higher than the same period in 2020 and 2021. We have added “Compared to 2020 and 2021” at the end of the sentence. Please refer to Line 17.
Line 39: The phrase "in those countries like China that face air pollution complex" could be better structured for clarity. Consider rephrasing to "in countries like China that face complex air pollution issues."
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it according to your opinions. Please refer to Line 40.
Lines 40-48: The comparison with the lockdown measures in early 2020 is useful. Could the paper elaborate on how the findings from 2020 influenced the hypotheses or research methods for the 2022 study?
R: Thanks for your suggestion. This paragraph has been reorganized and revised as follows, and please refer to Lines 45-53.
“Prior to this, China had implemented a series of nationwide lockdown measures against the occurrence and spread of the virus in early 2020. This reduction in human activity is expected to significantly reduce air pollutant emissions, as confirmed by lots of studies on lockdown in 2020 (Bao and Zhang, 2020; Huang et al., 2021; Li et al., 2021; Liu et al., 2020; Tian et al., 2021; Wang et al., 2021; Zhang et al., 2022c). Reports on the impact of the lockdown on air quality most commonly focus on measuring nitrogen dioxide (NO2) and fine particulate matter (PM2.5) (Agarwal et al., 2020; Hua et al., 2021; Chu et al., 2021). According to satellite data, tropospheric nitrogen oxides (NOx) emissions have decreased by 30-60% compared to pre-lockdown levels (Feng et al., 2020; Ding et al., 2020; Venter et al., 2020). Similarly, surface PM2.5 levels in northern China have also decreased by approximately 35%. Meanwhile, the average O3 concentration has increased 1.5-2 times (Shi and Brasseur, 2020). In Wuhan, the urban area that implemented stringent measures to limit the spread of the coronavirus, concentrations of PM2.5, NO2, and ozone also exhibited similar changes (Shi and Brasseur, 2020). Most studies attribute the decrease in NO2 and PM2.5 to the suspension of transportation and industrial activities (Rana et al., 2021; Wang et al., 2020b). Huang et al. (2021) suggest that increase in O3 enhances atmospheric oxidation capacity, providing favorable conditions for the formation of secondary particulate matter. Due to the lockdown taking place during winter, which is a season of high particulate matter pollution in China, the reports on the impact of the lockdown on air quality have focused more on the changes in particulate matter. The lockdown in Shanghai in 2022 was implemented in April and May during the high-ozone (O3) season and lasted for a longer duration, providing an opportunity to study atmospheric pollution primarily caused by O3.”
Line 52: Ensure consistent use of punctuation, especially with regard to commas and periods. Should be “During the static management…”? Please briefly describe the definition of static management to make it clear.
R: Thanks for your suggestion. We have modified it. Please refer to Line 59. The static management is an epidemic prevention and control measure. Specifically, it means that individuals are prohibited from leaving their homes within the controlled area, residents within the controlled zone are prohibited from leaving their residential units, participation in nucleic acid sampling is restricted to in-and-out, and all citizens are required to stay indoors, avoid going out, and refrain from visiting public places unless absolutely necessary.
In Lines 32 and 33 of the manuscript, it has been explained that the Chinese government, to curb the spread of the virus, implemented control measures citywide static management in Shanghai.
Line 70: Were the experimental conditions and methodologies consistent across the different years (2020, 2021, and 2022) to ensure comparability of the data?
R: Thanks for your suggestion. Yes, the experimental conditions and methods in 2020, 2021 and 2022 are consistent, and the data are comparable.
Line 82: There seems to be a typo in the coordinates for the Yangpu environment monitoring station (31.53°N, 31.25°E). The longitude seems incorrect.
R: Thanks for your correction. The correct latitude and longitude information is 31.25°N, 121.53°E. We have made the correction. Please refer to Line 90.
Lines 107-111: The text is clear but might benefit from a brief explanation of why the stacking model is preferred over simple linear interpolation.
R: Thanks for your suggestion. Because if more than half of the hourly data is missing in a day, linear interpolation would obscure the true diurnal variation characteristics. The stacking model, however, can relatively accurately simulate the missing values.
Line 153: The methodology for classifying the 103 VOCs into six categories, including how each category specifically influences ozone formation, requires clarification. How does the classification relate to their respective roles in ozone formation? For example, the study notes a significant reduction in aromatics and a relative stability in OVOCs. What are the implications of these changes for ozone formation, considering their different sources and chemical behaviors?
R: Thanks for your comments. VOCs components are classified according to functional groups. We have modified this sentence to: “We classified the 103 VOCs into six categories based on functional groups, including alkanes, alkenes, alkynes, aromatics, oxygenated VOCs (OVOCs), and halohydrocarbons”. Please refer to Line 162. We have added an analysis of the role of VOCs in ozone formation in the Supplement, as described in the following text and Figure R3. Please refer to Text S4 and Figure S11 in the supplement.
“Different VOC species display a range of reactivity and diverse potentials for O3 formation, which can be assessed using the maximum incremental reactivity (Carter, 2009). The calculated ozone formation potential (OFP) for each VOC species illustrates the maximum contribution of the species to the formation of ozone. (Bufalini and Dodge, 1983). The OFP for each VOC species is calculated using the following equation (Ma et al., 2019; Zhu et al., 2020b):
OFPi = MIRi x [VOCi] x Mi/Mozone R1
where OFPi (ppbv) represents the ozone formation potential of VOC species i, [VOCi] (ppbv) denotes the atmospheric concentration of VOC species i, and MIRi (g O3/g VOC) is the ozone formation coefficient of VOCi in the maximum increment reactions of ozone. Mozone and Mi are the molar masses (g mol-1) of O3 and VOC species i, respectively.
In addition, another widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity, defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. The OBM model can output the kOH for each VOCs, which reflects the reactivity of VOCs.
The comparison of the mean concentration of the six VOCs groups and their OFP in 2020, 2021, and 2022 is presented in Figure R3. It is obvious that the concentration of the VOC group was not proportional to its OFP. The average proportions of each VOCs component in 2020 and 2021 are 47.2%, 6.7%, 9.2%, 4.8%, 13.8% and 18.4% respectively, while the corresponding average proportions of OFP are 19.6%, 24.0%, 40.4%, 1.1%, 14.1% and 0.9%, respectively. In 2022, with minimal changes in the concentration proportions of alkenes, the OFP proportion increased by 11.3%. The proportion of aromatic hydrocarbons decreased by 4.2%, resulting in a 23.7% decrease in their OFP proportion. The proportion of OVOCs increased by 3.7%, leading to an 8.5% increase in their OFP proportion. In short, the primary contributors to OFP in 2020 and 2021 were aromatic hydrocarbons, followed by alkenes, while in 2022, the main contributors were alkenes, followed by OVOCs.
We combined two indicators, OFP and kOH, to identify key VOCs in photochemical processes. Figure R3b clearly shows a significant positive correlation between the OFP and kOH for each VOC after logarithmic transformation. Therefore, VOCs that rank high in both indicators are sufficient to indicate that these VOCs are key contributors in photochemical processes. In 2020 and 2021, m/p-xylene, toluene, ethylene, and propylene were the top contributors to both OFP and kOH. However, in 2022, propylene and ethylene took the lead in OFP, while propylene, isoprene, and ethylene topped the kOH.”
Figure R3. (a) The mean concentration and OFP of six VOC groups and (b) Scatter plots of the average OFP and OH reactivity for individual VOCs during daytime hours between 06:00 and 18:00 for the periods of April to May in 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Line 171: The observed delay in the peak time of VOCs in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021 is attributed to reduced human activities. Can the study provide further evidence or analysis to support this correlation? For example, have VOC patterns changed again and peaked at around 6 am since recovering from the pandemic?
R: Thanks for your comments. The diurnal variation profiles of VOCs in June 2023 clearly illustrate a shift in the diurnal pattern of VOCs since the recovery from the pandemic, with peaks occurring around 06:00 (see Figure R4a). Additionally, a comparison between the weekday and weekend diurnal profiles in June 2023 confirms historical research, as Cai et al. (2010) suggested, that the diurnal variation of VOCs in the Shanghai area exhibits a distinct weekend effect (see Figure R4b).
We have included an analysis of this section in the Supplement, as referenced by Figure S12. Additionally, the manuscript has been updated to respond to this analysis; please refer to Lines 182-183.
Figure R4. (a) The mean diurnal profiles of VOCs for the periods of April to May in 2020, 2021, and 2022, as well as June 2023. (b) The mean diurnal profiles of VOCs for weekdays and weekends in June 2023.
Line 200: The relationship between meteorological conditions, pollution environments, and different types of ozone profiles warrants further exploration. How do these factors interact to form the distinct ozone profile clusters? Recent references (e.g., https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-18-1185-2018) also suggest that night-time O3 tends to increase for some cities, would this affect the results?
R: Thanks for your comments. In the response to Specific Comments 3, the characteristics of the four ozone profiles and how precursor species NO2 and VOCs influence ozone profiles were summarized. For meteorological conditions, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 were in environments typical for photochemical processes with high temperature, low RH, and high radiation. This aligns with their corresponding ozone profile features. Cluster 3 experienced low temperature and low RH conditions, while Cluster 1 is characterized by low temperature, low RH, and low radiation, representing conditions typically unfavorable for ozone formation.
You mentioned Yan et al. (2018)’s study, where nighttime ozone concentrations showed an increasing trend in some cities. However, in this study, we compared data for the same months over three consecutive years. The variations in meteorological conditions over these three years, as detailed in the Supplement (see Figures S7-S10), were not particularly pronounced. The primary influencing factor was the reduction in pollutant emissions.
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2142', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Jan 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.” , Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“ Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
(10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
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2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
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1.4
1.5
1.2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high-level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
First, thank you for reviewing my manuscript. We found some issues with the photolysis data and have rerun the OBM model. We've also rechecked the results in Section 3.3. The new findings don't change the original conclusions much. My replies to your comments are based on these new results.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
R: Thanks for your correction. We have inserted relevant reference information, please refer to Line 34, Line 167, and Line 252.
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 59.
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 136.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
R: Thanks for your correction. To be more reader-friendly, we’ve enlarged the arrows and changed their colors, as shown in Figure R1.
Figure R1. (a) Comparison of the mean diurnal profiles of the four types of O3 after clustering. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; (b) The proportions of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. (c) Comparison of the O3 levels of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. The top and bottom of the vertical line for each box correspond to the 95th and 5th percentiles, respectively. The dots represent the averages, and the top, middle, and bottom lines of the box mark the 75th, 50th, and 25th percentiles, respectively; (d) Comparison of the average ozone concentrations in 2020, 2021 and 2022 for different ratios of the four clusters.
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 217.
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
R: Thank you for your reminder. The daily variations of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs. We have added the “The diurnal profiles of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs, with Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 exhibiting a distinct morning peak.” to the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 225-226.
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 237.
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 268.
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your comment. Yes, this average rate is for the three years. We have noticed it, please refer to Line 270.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 275.
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 295.
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 316.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 342.
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 352.
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 357.
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
R: Thanks for your comment. We agree with your statement, it is a rigorous statement. We have changed the title to “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Remain High During Shanghai’s Static Management? A Statistical and Radical Chemistry Perspective”.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
R: Thanks for your comment. Based on the existing analysis, the free radical chemistry simulation results indicate that such a proportional decrease in precursors in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling without altering the ozone formation regime.
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
R: Thanks for your comment. We define the minimum concentration in the ozone diurnal profile as the background concentration, and the difference between the midday peak and the morning trough represents the net ozone production. By examining the ozone diurnal profiles of the four clusters, we can determine these two parameters. In this study, the background concentration and net generation of Cluster 1 are approximately 23 ppbv and 15 ppbv, respectively; for Cluster 2, they are 17 ppbv and 46 ppbv; for Cluster 3, 41 ppbv and 17 ppbv; and for Cluster 4, 33 ppbv and 51 ppbv, respectively.
We have included the information about these two parameters in the manuscript, please refer to Line 190-196.
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.”, Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
R: Thank you for your constructive feedback. We appreciate your suggestions and have made the necessary revisions. Please refer to Line 206-207.
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
R: Thanks for your comment. VOCs are both a source of radicals and a consumable in the propagation of radicals. The effect of changes in the concentrations and ratios of the VOCs components on the photochemical processes was analyzed from the point of view of the sources and sinks of the radicals. Figure R2 shows the proportion and daily variation of primary sources of radicals. We can see that in 2020, 2021 and 2023, the primary sources involved in the photolysis process were the main ones, accounting for 81.7%. 71.9% and 83.5%, and reactions with VOCs (mainly alkenes) accounted for 18.3%, 28.1% and 26.5% respectively. The results show that although the decrease in VOCs concentration in 2022 has led to a decrease in the intensity of reactions with VOCs as primary sources of radicals, the proportion of reactions with VOCs was close to the level in 2021. This shows that the reaction with VOCs to generate radicals was still important during the static management period. In addition, the proportions of OVOCs photolysis in 2020, 2021 and 2022 were 14.3%, 19.6% and 10.6% respectively. The photolysis of OVOCs in 2022 was lower in level and proportion than in 2020 and 2021, so from the perspective of radical sources, there is no direct evidence that the change in the concentration proportion of OVOCs during static management would enhance the photochemical process.
Figure R2. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
The radical cycle begins with the degradation of VOCs triggered by OH radicals. A widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity (kOH), defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. Figure R3 illustrates the proportions of OH reactivity contributed by different VOCs components and its daily variation. In 2020, 2021 and 2022, the total kOH contributed by VOCs was 2.1 s-1, 2.6 s-1 and 1.1 s-1, respectively. Due to the influence of static management, the different proportions of decline of different components led to changes in the contribution to kOH. The contribution of aromatics decreased from 27% in 2020 and 31.6% in 2021 to 12% in 2022, while the contribution of olefins increased from 40.8% in 2020 and 43.3% in 2021 to 54.2% in 2022. And the contribution of OVOC did not change significantly. Alkenes play a large role from a radical propagation perspective, but there is no direct evidence that changes in OVOC concentration proportions would enhance photochemical processes.
Figure R3. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of kOH for different VOCs components during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Therefore, it is rather arbitrary to judge in the manuscript that an increase in the proportion of OVOC concentration is likely to enhance photochemical processes just from the change in concentration. Thanks for your comments, we have revised our hypothesis about the role of OVOCs in the manuscript. Please refer to Line 174-176.
“In the radical chemistry section, the photolysis of OVOCs, as well as the reactions of O3 and NO3 with VOCs, have been quantified for their contributions to the radicals. Additionally, the role of VOCs in the propagation of radicals has been quantified.”.
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
R: Thanks for your comment. Following your suggestion, Thank you for your comments. In accordance with your suggestions, we have replaced Figures 6 and 7 in the manuscript with Figures R4 and R5, respectively, to include the total primary sources. Please refer to Line 290 and Line 316. Furthermore, we have included Figures R6 and R7 in the Supplement. Please refer to the Figure S13 and Figure S14. Those include the proportion of each major source and the average daily profile of the total daily P(ROx).
Moreover, we have included an explanation in the Lines 277-278 stating, “Overall, the total primary production rates of ROx in 2022 were 2.34 ppbv h-1, which is lower than the 2.94 ppbv h-1 and 2.85 ppbv h-1 in 2021, as depicted in Figure S13 of the Supplement.”.
Figure R4. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (e), and RO2 (i) concentrations in 2020, 2021, and 2022. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of OH radical (b-d), HO2 radical (f-h), and RO2 radical (j-l) from model calculations in 2020, 2021 and 2022.
Figure R5. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (b), and RO2 (c) concentrations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of ROx radical (d-g) from model calculations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
Figure R6. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Figure R7. The proportions (a, b, c, d) and the mean diurnal profiles (e, f, g, h) of primary sources of daytime radicals for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
R: Thanks for your comment. We have characterized the ozone profiles after clustering into four distinct clusters: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R1. Upon statistical analysis, it was found that the number of days with higher average ozone concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 increased significantly in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021.
As shown in Table R1, the reasons for the high average ozone concentration levels in these two clusters were not entirely the same. The high concentrations in Cluster 3 were due to elevated ozone background concentration, whereas in Cluster 4, the high concentrations were attributed to both high background values and high net production. For Cluster 2, it had a high net ozone production but a lower background concentration. Therefore, in the analysis of the primary sources of radicals, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, which had high net production, exhibited significantly higher primary sources of radicals compared to Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. This suggests from the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters that a high net production indicates active photochemical processes.
The cluster-based analysis of radical chemistry can explain the high O3 concentrations observed in 2022. Cluster 4 is characterized by higher concentrations of HO2 and RO2 radicals and a higher primary source of radicals. Cluster 3 has moderate levels of radical concentrations and primary sources of radicals, but it features a high ozone background value. The increase in the number of days associated with these two clusters in 2022 has contributed to the elevated ozone levels. Cluster 2 has a higher primary source of radicals, indicating active photochemical processes, but the overall ozone levels are moderate due to the lower background ozone values.
Table R1. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
R: Thanks for your comment. The CO and NO data you referred to were not observed simultaneously in this study. Consequently, the CO data used in the model was a fixed value of 0.8 ppmv, and the NO data was calculated by the OBM model. This indeed represents a source of uncertainty in the model.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
R: Thanks for your comment. Firstly, the mcm mechanism utilized in the model includes the decomposition reactions of RO2NO2. Table R2 displays a selection of these RO2NO2 decomposition reactions along with their respective rate constants. Secondly, the manuscript initially described only the reaction rate between RO2 and NO2, which could be misleading. Consequently, we have re-evaluated the net production rate of RO2NO2, calculated as the generation rate minus the decomposition rate. The findings are now displayed in the revised Figure 8.
Table R2. RO2NO2 decomposition reactions involved in MCM mechanism.
reaction rate constant
KD0 = 1.10D-05*M*EXP(-10100/TEMP) ;
KDI = 1.90D17*EXP(-14100/TEMP) ;
KRD = KD0/KDI ;
FCD = 0.30 ;
NCD = 0.75-1.27*(LOG10(FCD)) ;
FD = 10@(LOG10(FCD)/(1+(LOG10(KRD)/NCD)**2)) ;
KBPAN = (KD0*KDI)*FD/(KD0+KDI) ;
reaction equations
% KBPAN : ACRPAN = ACO3 + NO2 ;
% KBPAN : PAN = CH3CO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : BZEMUCPAN = BZEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : TLEMUCPAN = TLEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : OXYMUCPAN = OXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : MXYMUCPAN = MXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PXYMUCPAN = PXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : EBZMUCPAN = EBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PBZMUCPAN = PBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : IPBZMUCPAN = IPBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; … (10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
2022/2020
1.2
2.4
1.4
1.1
1.2
2022/2021
1.0
2.0
1.3
1.2
1.5
R: Thanks for your comment. The insights you've raised are indeed constructive. As previously mentioned in the text, the report by Volkamer et al. (2010) suggests that approximately 20% of radical production is attributed to the decomposition of closed-shell species, while 80% originates from radical cycles. Upon discovering the improper handling of photolysis data, we reran the model. The table below compiles the average rates for each step related to the OH-HO2 cycle based on the model’s results. The results indicate that in 2022, the reaction rate for OH + R (R = CO, HCHO) → HO2 was higher, while the rate for HO2 + R (R = NO, O3, and NO3) → OH was lower compared to the years 2020 and 2021. As for reactions related to O3, the rates in 2022 were 2.4 times and 2.0 times faster than in 2020 and 2021, respectively. We did not observe a more efficient OH-HO2 cycle in 2022. Moreover, the total P(ROx) in 2022 was the lowest among the three years, yet the ROx concentration was the highest. The relationship between the generation rate and the concentration of products is not a direct cause-and-effect.
We have taken into account the OH-HO2 cycle in the radical chemistry analysis, and the results of this analysis have been included in the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 332-334.
Table R2. The reaction rates of the main processes in the OH-HO2 cycle for the three years.
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
3.911
0.052
0.014
1.904
0.309
2021
4.074
0.062
0.015
1.773
0.221
2022
3.435
0.125
0.019
2.086
0.274
2022/2020
0.9
2.6
1.4
1.1
0.9
2022/2021
0.8
2.1
1.3
1.2
1.2
Reference:
Volkamer, R., Sheehy, P., Molina, L. T., and Molina, M. J.: Oxidative capacity of the Mexico City atmosphere-Part 1: A radical source perspective, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 10, 6969-6991, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-10-6969-2010, 2010.
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AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Jian Zhu, 12 Mar 2024
The authors present a comprehensive analysis from the perspective in both observations and model simulation to uncover the reason for the high-level Ozone concentration during Shanghai’s static management. And by comparing the similar experiments conducted during the same period in 2020 and 2021, they find that the average concentration of ozone was nearly 23% higher during the static management compared to 2020 and 2021, despite the concentrations of VOCs and NOx decreased approximately 30% and 50%. With cluster analysis of diurnal patterns of ozone concentration, they conclude that the increasing days with high ozone levels leads to an overall high average concentration of ozone during the static management. And with a model to simulate the chemical process, they find that the higher VOCs/NO2 ratio during the static management strengthens the radical cycle and which leads to an active photochemical process.
First, thank you for reviewing my manuscript. We found some issues with the photolysis data and have rerun the OBM model. We've also rechecked the results in Section 3.3. The new findings don't change the original conclusions much. My replies to your comments are based on these new results.
There are the comments to improve the manuscript: Reference:
Some of the references are missed in the main context, for example:
(1) line 33-35, (2) line 158-159, (3) line 231-234
R: Thanks for your correction. We have inserted relevant reference information, please refer to Line 34, Line 167, and Line 252.
Typo, format and description:
(1) line 52: during (should be During)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 59.
(2) may be simply the units for the whole manuscript, for example, in line 129: “36.8±24.1 ug m-3, 30.0±23.1 ug m-3, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3” can be written as “36.8±24.1, 30.0±23.1, and 21.8±14.0 ug m-3”, and this information is related to Figure 1d, it should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 136.
(3) some of the arrows in Figure 4d were submerged and not able to see
R: Thanks for your correction. To be more reader-friendly, we’ve enlarged the arrows and changed their colors, as shown in Figure R1.
Figure R1. (a) Comparison of the mean diurnal profiles of the four types of O3 after clustering. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; (b) The proportions of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. (c) Comparison of the O3 levels of the four clusters in 2020, 2021 and 2022. The top and bottom of the vertical line for each box correspond to the 95th and 5th percentiles, respectively. The dots represent the averages, and the top, middle, and bottom lines of the box mark the 75th, 50th, and 25th percentiles, respectively; (d) Comparison of the average ozone concentrations in 2020, 2021 and 2022 for different ratios of the four clusters.
(4) the content in line 201-203 is corresponding to Figure 5, it should be noticed
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 217.
(5) nothing was written for the PM2.5 profiles in Figure 5d
R: Thank you for your reminder. The daily variations of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs. We have added the “The diurnal profiles of PM2.5 under four clusters exhibit similar patterns to those of VOCs, with Cluster 2 and Cluster 4 exhibiting a distinct morning peak.” to the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 225-226.
(6) line 219: the unit of OH was missed, and the corresponding years should be specified
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 237.
(7) line 247: the (average) rate of
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 268.
(8) line 248: “which has an average rate of around 0.02 ppbv h-1”, does this average rate is for the three years? It should be noticed.
R: Thanks for your comment. Yes, this average rate is for the three years. We have noticed it, please refer to Line 270.
(9) line 254: RO2 (should be RO2)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 275.
(10) line 274: cm3 (should be cm-3)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 295.
(11) line space and post paragraph space for the title of Figure 7.
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 316.
(12) line 313: interfered (should be inferred)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 342.
(13) line 323: that , there (should be that, there)
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 352.
(14) line 328: The average (ozone) concentration
R: Thanks for your correction. We have modified it, please refer to Line 357.
Comments:
(1) For the title: “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Increase During Shanghai’s Static Management?” does it precise to say increase? As the fact is that the O3 concentration keeps in high level during the static period, instead of an increasement.
R: Thanks for your comment. We agree with your statement, it is a rigorous statement. We have changed the title to “Why Did Ozone Concentrations Remain High During Shanghai’s Static Management? A Statistical and Radical Chemistry Perspective”.
(2) In line 136-138: “The literatures have shown that Shanghai in the spring largely operates under VOCs-limited regime (Li et 137 al., 2021a; Xue et al., 2022). Therefore, the reduction in VOCs during the static management period may not be enough to counteract the titration effect of NOx, and may even alter the ozone formation regime in Shanghai.” What is the final conclusion for this prediction based on the current work, does the ozone formation regime changed in the static period?
R: Thanks for your comment. Based on the existing analysis, the free radical chemistry simulation results indicate that such a proportional decrease in precursors in Shanghai would enhance the radical cycling without altering the ozone formation regime.
(3) In line 179-181, four type clusters were described according to the background concentration and net production of ozone, can the authors provide more information on how these two parameters were obtained?
R: Thanks for your comment. We define the minimum concentration in the ozone diurnal profile as the background concentration, and the difference between the midday peak and the morning trough represents the net ozone production. By examining the ozone diurnal profiles of the four clusters, we can determine these two parameters. In this study, the background concentration and net generation of Cluster 1 are approximately 23 ppbv and 15 ppbv, respectively; for Cluster 2, they are 17 ppbv and 46 ppbv; for Cluster 3, 41 ppbv and 17 ppbv; and for Cluster 4, 33 ppbv and 51 ppbv, respectively.
We have included the information about these two parameters in the manuscript, please refer to Line 190-196.
(4) In line 192-193, it says: “Purely statistical analysis indicated that the significant increase in ozone levels in 2022 was due to a higher proportion of Cluster 3 and Cluster 4, which had higher ozone concentrations during the static management period.”, Maybe it is not good to say “significant increase in ozone level”, maybe “significant high and stable level of ozone” better?
R: Thank you for your constructive feedback. We appreciate your suggestions and have made the necessary revisions. Please refer to Line 206-207.
(5) In line 165-166, it says: “Consequently, the rise in OVOC proportion during the static management period has the potential to enhance the photochemical process”. However, when the simulation results presented in line 237-267, the influence of the proportion change of OVOCs in 2022 on O3 was not mentioned, can the conclusion be draw according to the model results?
R: Thanks for your comment. VOCs are both a source of radicals and a consumable in the propagation of radicals. The effect of changes in the concentrations and ratios of the VOCs components on the photochemical processes was analyzed from the point of view of the sources and sinks of the radicals. Figure R2 shows the proportion and daily variation of primary sources of radicals. We can see that in 2020, 2021 and 2023, the primary sources involved in the photolysis process were the main ones, accounting for 81.7%. 71.9% and 83.5%, and reactions with VOCs (mainly alkenes) accounted for 18.3%, 28.1% and 26.5% respectively. The results show that although the decrease in VOCs concentration in 2022 has led to a decrease in the intensity of reactions with VOCs as primary sources of radicals, the proportion of reactions with VOCs was close to the level in 2021. This shows that the reaction with VOCs to generate radicals was still important during the static management period. In addition, the proportions of OVOCs photolysis in 2020, 2021 and 2022 were 14.3%, 19.6% and 10.6% respectively. The photolysis of OVOCs in 2022 was lower in level and proportion than in 2020 and 2021, so from the perspective of radical sources, there is no direct evidence that the change in the concentration proportion of OVOCs during static management would enhance the photochemical process.
Figure R2. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
The radical cycle begins with the degradation of VOCs triggered by OH radicals. A widely used indicator of atmospheric oxidative capacity is the OH reactivity (kOH), defined as the reaction rate coefficient multiplied by the concentration of OH reactants, depending on the abundance and composition of major pollutants. Figure R3 illustrates the proportions of OH reactivity contributed by different VOCs components and its daily variation. In 2020, 2021 and 2022, the total kOH contributed by VOCs was 2.1 s-1, 2.6 s-1 and 1.1 s-1, respectively. Due to the influence of static management, the different proportions of decline of different components led to changes in the contribution to kOH. The contribution of aromatics decreased from 27% in 2020 and 31.6% in 2021 to 12% in 2022, while the contribution of olefins increased from 40.8% in 2020 and 43.3% in 2021 to 54.2% in 2022. And the contribution of OVOC did not change significantly. Alkenes play a large role from a radical propagation perspective, but there is no direct evidence that changes in OVOC concentration proportions would enhance photochemical processes.
Figure R3. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of kOH for different VOCs components during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Therefore, it is rather arbitrary to judge in the manuscript that an increase in the proportion of OVOC concentration is likely to enhance photochemical processes just from the change in concentration. Thanks for your comments, we have revised our hypothesis about the role of OVOCs in the manuscript. Please refer to Line 174-176.
“In the radical chemistry section, the photolysis of OVOCs, as well as the reactions of O3 and NO3 with VOCs, have been quantified for their contributions to the radicals. Additionally, the role of VOCs in the propagation of radicals has been quantified.”.
(6) The information in line 256-257 is for the total P(ROx), but it was not shown in the Figure 6, maybe it should be added to directly see? The same for line 279-280, the total daily P(ROx) was not shown in Figure d-e for different clusters.
R: Thanks for your comment. Following your suggestion, Thank you for your comments. In accordance with your suggestions, we have replaced Figures 6 and 7 in the manuscript with Figures R4 and R5, respectively, to include the total primary sources. Please refer to Line 290 and Line 316. Furthermore, we have included Figures R6 and R7 in the Supplement. Please refer to the Figure S13 and Figure S14. Those include the proportion of each major source and the average daily profile of the total daily P(ROx).
Moreover, we have included an explanation in the Lines 277-278 stating, “Overall, the total primary production rates of ROx in 2022 were 2.34 ppbv h-1, which is lower than the 2.94 ppbv h-1 and 2.85 ppbv h-1 in 2021, as depicted in Figure S13 of the Supplement.”.
Figure R4. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (e), and RO2 (i) concentrations in 2020, 2021, and 2022. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of OH radical (b-d), HO2 radical (f-h), and RO2 radical (j-l) from model calculations in 2020, 2021 and 2022.
Figure R5. The mean diurnal profiles of simulated OH (a), HO2 (b), and RO2 (c) concentrations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4. Colored areas denote 95% confidence intervals; The mean diurnal profiles of primary sources of ROx radical (d-g) from model calculations for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
Figure R6. The proportions (a, b, c) and the mean diurnal profiles (d, e, f) of primary sources of daytime radicals during the periods from April to May of 2020, 2021, and 2022.
Figure R7. The proportions (a, b, c, d) and the mean diurnal profiles (e, f, g, h) of primary sources of daytime radicals for Cluster 1, Cluster 2, Cluster 3, and Cluster 4.
(7) According to the current analysis, it seems like that the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters do not really help to explain the high O3 concentration in 2022, because in line 278-279, it says that:“Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, characterized by significant net ozone production, exhibit distinct features in radical chemistry”, however, in 2022, the main clusters are 3 & 4, in addition, in figure 7, the mean diurnal profiles of OH and HO2 for cluster 3 are always above cluster 4, and even for RO2, it seems like the average concentrations for RO2 in cluster 3 and 4 are close by eyes, please check again if there is a big difference of ROx or P(ROx) for cluster 3 and 4.
R: Thanks for your comment. We have characterized the ozone profiles after clustering into four distinct clusters: Cluster 1 with low background concentration and low net production; Cluster 2 with low background concentration and high net production; Cluster 3 with high background concentration and low net production; and Cluster 4 with high background concentration and high net production, as shown in Table R1. Upon statistical analysis, it was found that the number of days with higher average ozone concentrations in Cluster 3 and Cluster 4 increased significantly in 2022 compared to 2020 and 2021.
As shown in Table R1, the reasons for the high average ozone concentration levels in these two clusters were not entirely the same. The high concentrations in Cluster 3 were due to elevated ozone background concentration, whereas in Cluster 4, the high concentrations were attributed to both high background values and high net production. For Cluster 2, it had a high net ozone production but a lower background concentration. Therefore, in the analysis of the primary sources of radicals, Cluster 2 and Cluster 4, which had high net production, exhibited significantly higher primary sources of radicals compared to Cluster 1 and Cluster 3. This suggests from the radical chemistry analysis based on the clusters that a high net production indicates active photochemical processes.
The cluster-based analysis of radical chemistry can explain the high O3 concentrations observed in 2022. Cluster 4 is characterized by higher concentrations of HO2 and RO2 radicals and a higher primary source of radicals. Cluster 3 has moderate levels of radical concentrations and primary sources of radicals, but it features a high ozone background value. The increase in the number of days associated with these two clusters in 2022 has contributed to the elevated ozone levels. Cluster 2 has a higher primary source of radicals, indicating active photochemical processes, but the overall ozone levels are moderate due to the lower background ozone values.
Table R1. The ozone concentration (ppbv) characteristics, the average daytime radicals concentration (molecules cm-3), and the average reaction rates of the main processes for Cluster 1-Cluster 4.
Cluster 1
Cluster 2
Cluster 3
Cluster 4
O3 background
22.4
16.9
40.6
33.3
O3 net production
14.8
45.9
17.5
50.9
OH concentration
1.4×106
3.3×106
3.1×106
3.9×106
HO2 concentration
0.6×108
1.5×108
1.9×108
3.5×108
RO2 concentration
0.3×108
0.8×108
0.9×108
2.2×108
P(ROx)
0.92
2.09
1.35
2.23
OH propagation (OH+VOCs)
0.68
1.75
1.16
2.03
OH termination (OH+NO2)
0.63
1.14
0.69
0.88
propagation/termination
1.08
1.54
1.69
2.29
P(O3)
3.12
7.73
5.24
8.20
(8) In line 300: “OH oxidation of CO and VOCs produces HO2 and RO2”, the concentration of CO was not given. And also, the concentration of NO was not given.
R: Thanks for your comment. The CO and NO data you referred to were not observed simultaneously in this study. Consequently, the CO data used in the model was a fixed value of 0.8 ppmv, and the NO data was calculated by the OBM model. This indeed represents a source of uncertainty in the model.
(9) In line 306-308: Specifically, the reactions of OH+NO2 and RO2+NO2 accounted for approximately 0.51 ppbv h-1 (0.76 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 0.74 ppbv h-1 in 2021) and 0.80 ppbv h-1 (0.96 ppbv h-1 in 2020 and 1.55 ppbv h-1 in 2021) of the ROx radical loss on daytime average, respectively.” However, the reaction of RO2 with NO2 is generally considered to be not important as the product RO2NO2 formed in the reaction of RO2+NO2 for R=alkyl or substituted alkyl (but not for R=acyl) will thermally decompose rapidly back to reactants at around room temperature (Atkinson, R., Atmospheric chemistry of VOCs and NOx. Atmospheric Environment, 2000. 34(12): p. 2063-2101.), does the decomposition reaction of RO2NO2 included in the model? This process was not shown in Figure 8.
R: Thanks for your comment. Firstly, the mcm mechanism utilized in the model includes the decomposition reactions of RO2NO2. Table R2 displays a selection of these RO2NO2 decomposition reactions along with their respective rate constants. Secondly, the manuscript initially described only the reaction rate between RO2 and NO2, which could be misleading. Consequently, we have re-evaluated the net production rate of RO2NO2, calculated as the generation rate minus the decomposition rate. The findings are now displayed in the revised Figure 8.
Table R2. RO2NO2 decomposition reactions involved in MCM mechanism.
reaction rate constant
KD0 = 1.10D-05*M*EXP(-10100/TEMP) ;
KDI = 1.90D17*EXP(-14100/TEMP) ;
KRD = KD0/KDI ;
FCD = 0.30 ;
NCD = 0.75-1.27*(LOG10(FCD)) ;
FD = 10@(LOG10(FCD)/(1+(LOG10(KRD)/NCD)**2)) ;
KBPAN = (KD0*KDI)*FD/(KD0+KDI) ;
reaction equations
% KBPAN : ACRPAN = ACO3 + NO2 ;
% KBPAN : PAN = CH3CO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : BZEMUCPAN = BZEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : TLEMUCPAN = TLEMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : OXYMUCPAN = OXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : MXYMUCPAN = MXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PXYMUCPAN = PXYMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : EBZMUCPAN = EBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : PBZMUCPAN = PBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; % KBPAN : IPBZMUCPAN = IPBZMUCCO3 + NO2 ; … (10) In addition to the OH-RO2-HO2 cycle, which leads to a high production rate of ROx, and the other cycle for OH-HO2 seems like also be further strengthened in 2022. The average rates for each step related to OH-HO2 cycle are summarized in the following table according to the model results, it is obvious that reactions for HO2 + R (R=NO, O3 and NO3) → OH and OH + R (R=CO, HCHO) → HO2 in 2022 with higher rates. Especially for reaction related to O3, which is 2.6 and 2.1 times faster in 2022 than in 2020 and 2021. Will the OH-HO2 cycle also help to explain the high ROx or P(ROx) in 2022?
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
2.761
0.047
0.013
1.442
0.225
2021
3.215
0.059
0.013
1.449
0.185
2022
3.352
0.122
0.018
2.108
0.275
2022/2020
1.2
2.4
1.4
1.1
1.2
2022/2021
1.0
2.0
1.3
1.2
1.5
R: Thanks for your comment. The insights you've raised are indeed constructive. As previously mentioned in the text, the report by Volkamer et al. (2010) suggests that approximately 20% of radical production is attributed to the decomposition of closed-shell species, while 80% originates from radical cycles. Upon discovering the improper handling of photolysis data, we reran the model. The table below compiles the average rates for each step related to the OH-HO2 cycle based on the model’s results. The results indicate that in 2022, the reaction rate for OH + R (R = CO, HCHO) → HO2 was higher, while the rate for HO2 + R (R = NO, O3, and NO3) → OH was lower compared to the years 2020 and 2021. As for reactions related to O3, the rates in 2022 were 2.4 times and 2.0 times faster than in 2020 and 2021, respectively. We did not observe a more efficient OH-HO2 cycle in 2022. Moreover, the total P(ROx) in 2022 was the lowest among the three years, yet the ROx concentration was the highest. The relationship between the generation rate and the concentration of products is not a direct cause-and-effect.
We have taken into account the OH-HO2 cycle in the radical chemistry analysis, and the results of this analysis have been included in the manuscript. Please refer to Lines 332-334.
Table R2. The reaction rates of the main processes in the OH-HO2 cycle for the three years.
HO2+R→OH
HO2←OH+R
R
NO
O3
NO3
CO
HCHO
2020
3.911
0.052
0.014
1.904
0.309
2021
4.074
0.062
0.015
1.773
0.221
2022
3.435
0.125
0.019
2.086
0.274
2022/2020
0.9
2.6
1.4
1.1
0.9
2022/2021
0.8
2.1
1.3
1.2
1.2
Reference:
Volkamer, R., Sheehy, P., Molina, L. T., and Molina, M. J.: Oxidative capacity of the Mexico City atmosphere-Part 1: A radical source perspective, Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics, 10, 6969-6991, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-10-6969-2010, 2010.
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