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Does size matter? Pico-phytoplankton cell size affects biomass distribution and nutrient limitation in the oligotrophic Eastern Mediterranean Sea
Abstract. The Eastern Mediterranean Sea (EMS) is one of the most oligotrophic marine environments in the world, characterized by extreme nutrient scarcity and strong water-column stratification. In such systems, pico-phytoplankton typically dominate primary production, yet how cell size structures biomass distribution and nutrient limitation remains poorly constrained. Here, we examined the spatial and vertical variability of pico-phytoplankton cell size, abundance, and nutrient status in the easternmost Mediterranean Sea during oligotrophic summer stratification. Using flow cytometry and microscopy, we quantified the cell volumes of Prochlorococcus, Synechococcus, and pico-eukaryotes and combined these with ambient nutrient concentrations to estimate cellular nutrient quotas and Resource Supply Indices (RSI). All three groups exhibited increasing cell size with depth and from offshore to coastal waters, coinciding with higher nutrient availability and chlorophyll concentrations. Synechococcus and pico-eukaryotes were consistently larger in coastal and deeper waters, whereas Prochlorococcus maintained small and relatively constant cell size across environments. RSI analysis revealed widespread nitrogen limitation for Synechococcus and pico-eukaryotes (RSIₙ<1), while phosphorus was generally sufficient (RSIₚ>1). In contrast, Prochlorococcus remained largely unconstrained by either nitrogen or phosphorus, reflecting its low cellular nutrient demand and streamlined physiology. These results demonstrate that cell size is a powerful integrator of environmental forcing and ecological strategy in oligotrophic seas. The dominance of small Prochlorococcus cells under extreme nutrient scarcity imply how stable ocean stratification and nutrient decline may reshape microbial communities and biogeochemical cycling in the future oligotrophic oceans.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-934', Anonymous Referee #1, 02 May 2026
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Eyal Rahav, 23 Jun 2026
Dear Reviewer,
Many thanks for the time and effort you invested in reviewing our manuscript. Your suggestions and comments have significantly improved the manuscript, both scientifically and in terms of clarity and readability.
Please find our detailed response in the attached file.
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Eyal Rahav, 23 Jun 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-934', Anonymous Referee #2, 12 Jun 2026
General comments
This study focuses on variability along an environmental gradient from coastal to offshore areas and with depth, examining the main photoautotrophic picoplankton groups (Synechococcus, Prochlorococcus and picoeukaryotes) in an oligotrophic sea.
Although cell size variability in picoplankton is a relevant topic in microbial ecology, there appears to be a mismatch between the Introduction, Discussion and Conclusion, making the key message of the study unclear. It is not evident whether the main objective is to assess (i) variability in cell sizes across environmental gradients in oligotrophic conditions or (ii) the use of different conversions factors depending on depth for biomass estimation.
In addition, the Introduction should be more clearly emphasize the role of small cell size and its implications for overall community performance, rather than focusing mainly on comparisons between small and large cells. The Material and Methods section should also be reorganized to clearly describe the steps used to determine biovolume, as this represents a central component of the study. Finally, the Discussion should be revised to reduce speculative statements and better align with the presented results and main objectives of the work.
Specific comments.
# Title
Lines 1 and 2: The term pico-phytoplankton may be misleading if the study includes, as not all cyanobacteria are typically considered phytoplankton in the strict taxonomic sense. I recommend replacing “pico-phytoplankton” with “photoautotrophic picoplankton” to more accurately encompass both eukaryotic and cyanobacteria.
# Abstract
Line 31: In this sentence, it is unclear whether the authors use the word “stable” to refer to both ocean stratification and nutrient decline, or only to ocean stratification. If it refers to both, the sentence is difficult to understand because “stable” and “decline” covey contrasting meanings. In that case, I suggest replacing “stable” with “persistence”
Graphical abstract: The meaning of the X and ✓ symbols is not clear…DO they indicate the presence/absence of cells, an increase/decrease in cell size, or another response variable? Please clarify in the figure
# Introduction
Line 39: What do the author mean by “community structure”? Community structure is generally understood as a combination of multiple phytoplankton aspects (cell size, taxonomy, distribution of taxa abundance, functional traits…and other characteristics).
Please rewrite the sentence to clarify which components(s) of community structure are being considered in this study.
Line 41: This sentence is vague and should be revised to provide a clearer and stronger statement. Please rephrase to improve precision and clarity.
Line 42: The terms “low-productivity” and “oligotrophic” are largely redundant, as oligotrophic systems are, by definition, characterized by low productivity. Please consider using only on of these terms to avoid redundancy
Line 42: The same as lines 1 and 2
Lines 42:43: Please delete the phrase ….”dominate the autotrophic community” and the sentence “Pico-phytoplankton are small-sized phytoplankton”…., as this information is redundant and already mentioned in the previous sentence.
Line 47: Why do the authors place “biological pump” in quotation marks? Please clarify whether this is intended and revise if necessary for consistency and clarity. The same in line 60.
Line 48: Please add a more recent reference to support this statement.
Line 54: Replace “Pico-phytoplankton” with “photoautotrophic picoplankton”
Line 59: What do the author mean by “trophic pathways”. Please clarify the term.
Line 63: What do the author mean by “phytoplankton cellular composition”. Please clarify the term.
Line 76: This is the first time Eastern Mediterranean Sea (EMS) is mentioned in the main text. Please define the abbreviations at first use.
Lines 94-95: This is the first time nitrogen (N) and phosphorous (P) are mentioned in the main text. Please define the abbreviations at first use.
# Materials and Methods
Line 104: Replace …”seawater was sampled”… with …”seawater was collected”…
Line 107 -109: Please remove this sentence., as the information is repeated in the following sentences.
Figure 1: Replace “Bottom depth” with just “Depth” for simplicity
Line 125: This sentence is hard to follow. I suggest revising the beginning as follows:
“For determination of chlorophyll-a (chl-a), seawater samples (300 mL) were filtered through …”
Line 126: Please delete for chlorophyll-a (chl-a) analysis.
End of chlorophyll section: The authors do not clearly describe how Chla concentrations were determined. Please include the reference followed (e.g., Ritchie or another standard protocol).
Line 130: Replace the title by “ Photoautotrophic picoplankton analysis”
Line 131: Please replace “Bacterial abudance samples” with a clearer methodological description, e.g.: “Water samples (1.8 mL) were fixed in …” followed by the fixation details. Please also specify the type of containers used e.g., cryotubes/cryovials) to improve clarity and reproducibility.
Line 133:Replace “put” with “stored”.
Line 133: Specify the type of analysis: “Flow cytometry analysis….”
Line 135: Remove “…syringe-based fluidic system and…”. It is not necessary to mention.
Lines 136-138: Caution: In routine flow cytometry analysis, taxonomic groups are not specifically identified, only broad groups, populations or assemblages are resolved.
Please replace “Taxonomic discrimination was…” and the following sentences with: “Photoautotrophic picoplankton groups were identified based on their autofluorescence. Cells were excited at (add lasers of the flow cytometer) and three populations were distinguished according to light forward scatter (FSC, proxy of cell size), light side scatter (SSC, a poxy of cell granularity or complexity), and red and orange fluorescence bands (proxy for chlorophyll and phycoerythrin respectively) (ref).
After this part, the authors should clearly specify which three groups were distinguishable according to the differences in their chlorophyll and phycoerythrin fluorescence signals, FSC and SSC (ref. ref)”.
Lines 138-140: Authors should specify with more details about the conditions of the flow cytometer while collect the event (i.e. flow rate, how many events were recorded, if dilution was needed, and finally how the authors determined the abundance of the assemblages.
Lines 141-154: This is the core of the M&M section and the main goal of the paper. The authors need to be precise in this part. For example…it is confused what is “the cell size distribution” for the authors…It should be simply as “Cell size of the three photoautotrophic picoplankton groups”. Also…since they already mention FSC and SSC signals…not need to mention flow cytometry nether side scatter.
Lines 142-145: It is confused how the instrument was calibrated with the mixture of beads and then use the same beads to build the calibration curve. The mixture of beads was running each day of the samples analysis? How many times was collected this mixture?
Line 145: When the authors mention “flow cytometer settings”, these should be specified earlier in the Methods section (see lines 138-140). Please ensure that all relevant instrument settings are clearly described at first mention to improve clarity and reproducibility.
In this section, where the authors describe how cell sizes of the autotrophic picoplankton groups were determined, the method for calculating biovolume (BV, um3) is missing. Please include a clear description of how BV was estimated for each assemblage. It is the core of the paper.
Caution: SSC is not a proxy of volume…It is proxy for cell granularity and complexity. You need extra calculations to determine the biovolume (BV, um3) of the cells.
Line 147: Include “water” between random and samples.
Lines 147-154: This part of the microscopy analysis is difficult to follow. Please rewrite this section to improve clarity, structure and readability, ensuring that the methodological steps are clearly and logically presented.
Line 155: Please remove the abbreviations from the title and keep the terms in full, to improve clarity.
Line 158: What do the authors mean by “these matrixes? Please clarify which specific matrices are being referred, as the term is unclear in this context.
Lines 159-160: These sentences need to be rephrased and starting with: “The minimum cellular content of a nutrient (Qmin) is defined as the minimum amount required to sustain basic cellular functions and balanced growth under ambient nutrient conditions. In contrast, the maxima cellular content of a nutrient (Qmax) is defined as….
Line 161: Delete “support”
Line 166: This information should be moved to Section 2.4, after indicating that cell size (um) was determined from the calibration curve. Please also clarify that these measurements were subsequently used to estimate biovolume (BV) in the section Cellular nutrient quotas (Qmin and Qmax) and resource supply index (RSI).
Line 166: Delete this sentence from this part.
Line 167: The authors should start the sentence with Biovolume (BV, um3) was calculated assuming spherical cell as shown in Eq.1:
where d is the cell diameter (um) determined from FSC values.
CAUTION: In seawater samples, side scatter (SSC) values are commonly used to determine biovolume estimations, whereas forward scatter (FSC) is less reliable due to variability in light scattering associated with differences in refractive index in natural seawater. Did the authors try to calculate the biovolume with SSC and compare with FSC?
Lines 179-180: What the authors mean with…” if all cells reached Qmax”. What if the cells do not reach Qmax?
Line 182: Remove “Where, “
Lines 187-188: The authors should rephrase this sentence to improve clarity and readability.
Line 189: What do the authors mean by “ standardized environmental matrix”? Please clarify whether this refers to scaled/normalization data (e.g., z-score standardization, range scaling from 0 to 1, or another information). This needs to be explicitly defined to avoid ambiguity.
# Results
Line 204: Please remove the abbreviation form the title
Line 206: How the authors determined sigma-theta (density)? Please clarify.
Line 218: If N:P ratio was often higher than the 16:1 ‘Redfield ratio’, this suggests phosphorous limitation rather than nitrogen limitation. Please rephase this sentence.
Line 221: Remove “Where” at the beginning please.
Line 222: The authors should use the term Deep Chlorophyll Maxima (DCM) with caution and provide a clear justification for its use, given that the reported chlorophyll-a concentration is very low ( ~0.3 μg L-1). Please clarify whether these values truly correspond to a DCM or rather to a weak subsurface chlorophyll maximum.
Line 225: Why do the authors use the term “Low-Nutrient Low-Chlorophyll” in the title and here, if it is not used elsewhere in the text? Please clarify.
Lines 230-231: Please remove this sentence, as it repeats information already said.
Lines 232-233: I suggest expressing the numbers of picoplankton abundance in scientific notation (e.g, 2x 104 ,3 x 106 ) to improve readability.
Figure 4: What do the authors mean by “single-cell volumes”? Please clarify how do these volumes were estimated: were they calculated individually for each cell of each group within a sample and then averaged per sample, or were they derived from mean FSC values per group per sample? This methodological aspect should be clearly described in the Materials and Methods section to ensure reproducibility. If volume were determined form the FCS values average, single-cell should be removed from the figure caption.
Line 276: This is a title for the discussion part.
Lines 277-283: This section, as currently written, is not appropriate for the Results section, as it primarily contains interpretation rather than the presentation of results. The content would be more suitable for the Discussion section. Please consider revised and rewrite it accordingly.
The Figure 7 is not mentioned in the Results section. Please consider describing the main findings associated with this figure in the text. In addition, I recommend using different colors and/or symbols to represent sampling sites according to their distance from the coast and depth, different color arrows and vectors for environmental variables and for the sizes of the three photoautotrophic picoplankton groups respectively. All together would improve the readability and interpretation of the figure.
# Discussion
Lies 314-315: This sentence is part of the Results section.
Lines 317-321. This sentence appears to be based on speculation rather than on observations or evidence from the study site. Please revise the statement to more closely reflect the results obtained in this study or provide supporting evidence for the interpretation.
Line 328: What do the authors mean with “size structuring”? Please clarify.
Line 333: what do the authors mean with “adaptive trait”? Please clarify
Line 333: Please replace “chronic” with “persistence”.
Line 346: What do the authors mean with “to begin with”? Please consider rephrase the sentence.
Lines 334 and 348. The authors discuss differences reported in the literature between small and large Synechococcus. However, it is unclear how this distinction applies to the present dataset. Were both small and large Synechococcus populations identified in this study? If so, please specify in which samples or regions they were observed and how they were distinguished? Otherwise, the relevance of this discussion to the current results should be clarified.
Lines 377-380: These sentences are part of the results section.
Line 385: Please replace “machinery” with “capacity”.
Line 391: The use of the term “evolutionary optimization” appears inappropriate and speculative in the context of this study. Please clarify why the authors infer that this process is occurring in their dataset and provide supporting evidence. If no direct evidence is available, the statement should be rephrased to avoid overinterpretation of the results.
Line 394: What do the authors mean by “intermediate response”? Please clarify this term, as its meaning is not clear in the current context.
Line 398: What do the authors mean by “pico-eukaryotes respond dynamically”? Please clarify this term, as its meaning is not clear in the current context.
Lines 399-400.: What do the authors want to say in this sentence? Please consider rephrase the sentence.
Lines 410-446 The final part of the Discussions speculative and does not clearly convey the main message of the paper. IN addition, it is not well connected to the biomass calculations mentioned in the conclusions. Please revise and restructure this section to better integrate the interpretation with the key results, particularly the biomass estimates, and ensure that the main takeaway of the study is clearly articulated.
# Conclusions:
The authors introduce a new aspect related to biomass estimation and the of different conversion factors. However, it is unclear why the authors did not test biomass calculations sung both a single conversion factor and depth-specific conversions factors, to evaluate potential differences. Please clarify this methodological choice and its implications for the results.
General typos:
Please replace “ml” with “mL” throughout the manuscript.
Please remove “Where,..“ from the beginning of these sentences. This structure is not used in proper English syntax.
Please remove the unnecessary quotation marks throughout the manuscript. For example, in line 384 ( “allows”) and line 390 (“tendency”9, the quotation marks do not appear to serve a specific purpose. Please review the manuscript and remove similar unnecessary quotation marks for consistency and readability.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-934-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Eyal Rahav, 23 Jun 2026
Dear Reviewer,
Many thanks for the time and effort you invested in reviewing our manuscript. Your suggestions and comments have significantly improved the revised maunscipt, both scientifically and in terms of clarity and readability.
Please find our detailed response in the attached file.
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Eyal Rahav, 23 Jun 2026
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This manuscript investigates the spatial and vertical variability of pico-phytoplankton cell size, abundance, and nutrient status in the oligotrophic Eastern Mediterranean Sea (EMS). Using flow cytometry combined with microscopy, the authors quantify cell volumes of Prochlorococcus, Synechococcus, and pico-eukaryotes, and apply a Resource Supply Index (RSI) framework to assess theoretical nutrient sufficiency for each group. The dataset is solid, the sampling design covers a meaningful coastal–offshore gradient, and the integration of cell-size measurements with stoichiometric demand calculations is a valuable contribution to phytoplankton ecology in this understudied zone.
That said, several aspects require substantial revision. My main concerns are: (i) the causal framing in the title and abstract overstates what the data can demonstrate; (ii) the methodological description of cell-size determination has gaps that affect confidence in the results; (iii) the link between cell size and nutrient limitation is conceptually muddled, since the observed differences appear to reflect taxonomic/genetic traits more than size per se; and (iv) several figures, calculations, and references contain inconsistencies or potential errors. In addition, the overall writing quality is uneven, with grammatical issues, awkward phrasing, and inconsistent terminology throughout, and the manuscript would benefit from careful language editing. I therefore recommend major revision, with the specific points detailed below.
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