Multiphysical-Chemical Insights into Hailstone Growth from Isotopes, Droplet Freezing, and Insoluble Particles
Abstract. Laboratory experiments play a pivotal role in understanding the microphysical mechanisms of hailstone formation. However, few studies have applied multiple physicochemical analyses to the same hailstone, resulting in a fragmented understanding of hailstone growth. Here, for the first time, we present a comprehensive investigation of an individual layered hailstone by combining three laboratory techniques: isotopic analyses, droplet-freezing experiments and species/size distribution of insoluble particles. Isotopic analyses revealed an up-down vertical growth trajectory, with the embryo exhibiting an exceptionally low freezing temperature of -22.0°C, as considerably lower than values reported in previous studies. Droplet-freezing experiments demonstrated three to four distinct ice-nucleating particle (INP) modes, and showed that initial freezing temperatures increased by 5–6°C from the embryo toward the outer shells. The size distributions and chemical compositions of insoluble particles including organics, dust, and bioprotein particles all varied among the different INP modes. Larger insoluble particles and higher particle concentrations were associated with freezing at higher temperatures. Notably, bioprotein particles larger than 6 μm were absent from the embryo but consistently present in the outer shells, providing a mechanistic explanation for the embryo’s relatively low freezing temperature. By integrating isotopic, droplet-freezing, and insoluble particle species/size measurements on the same hailstone, this study provides new insights into the microphysical mechanisms governing hailstone growth and highlights the importance of insoluble particle characteristics in dominating hailstone ice nucleation.
Review of “Multiphysical-Chemical Insights into Hailstone Growth from Isotopes, Droplet Freezing, and Insoluble Particles” by Wang et al.
General Comment:
This study presents an integrated laboratory investigation of an individual hailstone using the combination of isotopic analyses, droplet-freezing experiments, and insoluble particle characterization to understand its microphysical growth processes. The authors found an alternating up-down growth trajectory, with four distinct ice-nucleating particle modes. Despite being limited to a single hailstone, the findings highlight the important role of insoluble particles in ice nucleation and demonstrate the value of combining multiple techniques to better understand hailstone formation and growth. This is a novel approach with valuable results. The manuscript can be accepted for its publication after the following points are covered.
Major Comments:
Minor comments:
Line 37: Change “embryo but consistently” to “embryo, but consistently”
Line 44 and along the text: Change “S. Zhang et al., 2026” to “Zhang et al., 2026”. Please check the journal citation format and applied to the revised manuscript.
Line 46 and along the text: Change “Conway & Zrnić, 1993” to “Conway and Zrnić, 1993”. Please check the journal citation format and applied to the revised manuscript.
Line 51: Add a reference after “mechanisms”
Lines 60-61 and along the text: Change “Chen, Wu, Chen, et al., 2021” to “Chen et al., 2021”. Please check the journal citation format and applied to the revised manuscript.
Line 100 and along the text: Change “ESEM coupled with EDS” to “ESEM-EDS”
Line 141: Add a reference after “experiment”
Figure 5 and along the text: I suggest using “L-1” instead of “cm-3” as it is commonly used in the ice nucleation community.
Lines 261-262: Please add the temperature range.
Line 295: This was already mentioned above.
Figures 7 and 8. Increase the size of the font.