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What Can We Learn from a Reduced-Dimensional Groundwater Representation for Diagnosing Groundwater–Land Interactions? Insights from the Water Table Ratio
Abstract. Groundwater exerts an important control on land–atmosphere interactions, yet its explicit representation in Earth system models remains computationally prohibitive. Reduced-dimensional metrics, such as the Water Table Ratio (WTR), have been proposed to represent groundwater influences on land–atmosphere interactions. However, their uncertainty, classification stability, and correspondence with process-based representations remain largely unexplored. Here, because groundwater influences on the atmosphere are mediated through land surface processes, we compare WTR-based diagnoses of groundwater–land interactions with those derived from ParFlow–CLM simulations over a 34,000 km² catchment. Groundwater-sensitive regions are first identified by comparing paired ParFlow–CLM simulations with and without groundwater feedback and then used as a physically explicit reference for comparison with WTR. A total of 63 WTR configurations were examined, with Monte Carlo analyses performed for each to quantify uncertainty and classification stability.
Hydraulic conductivity (K) is the dominant source of uncertainty in WTR and exerts the strongest destabilizing effect on its threshold-based classification. Although the domain-wide proportions of correctly classified sensitive and insensitive areas remain nearly unchanged across alternative configurations and Monte Carlo realizations, substantial switching occurs among individual grid cells. Across the 63 WTR configurations, the mean correctly classified fraction was 0.40. In comparison, the critical-water-table-depth (WTD) approach yielded fractions of 0.59, 0.70, and 0.64 using WTD estimates from ParFlow–CLM, PCR-GLOBWB, and Fan et al., respectively. WTR errors are dominated by overestimation rather than underestimation, indicating a conservative screening tendency. Combining observed parameter contrasts with analytical WTR elasticities further identifies K as the dominant contributor to classification discrepancies, with characteristic length (L) providing a secondary contribution. The dominant role of K reveals a key consequence of reducing a heterogeneous three-dimensional groundwater system to a one-dimensional metric governed by a few effective parameters: the resulting classification becomes disproportionately dependent on a single effective hydraulic conductivity field. WTR can therefore support precautionary regional screening, but its local classifications should be interpreted cautiously, particularly where K is poorly constrained or subsurface heterogeneity is strong.
Status: open (until 27 Nov 2026)
- CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-5048', Giacomo Medici, 11 Sep 2026 reply
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-5048', Anonymous Referee #1, 20 Oct 2026
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GENERAL COMMENTS
- The manuscript is well written and provides a detailed description of the methodology adopted. However, the extensive level of detail sometimes makes it difficult to follow the overall rationale behind the calculations and analyses, particularly in Section 4. I would suggest including here an introductory overview, potentially accompanied by a schematic figure, outlining the methodological framework and briefly explaining the rationale behind each step. This would help readers navigate the different stages of the analysis and better understand how they relate to one another.
- The manuscript includes a substantial amount of supplementary material. While this provides additional information, its volume may make it more difficult for readers to identify the key findings and conclusions of the study. I would therefore encourage the authors to consider streamlining the supplementary material by removing figures that are not essential for understanding the analyses and their main outcomes.
- Some methodological choices would benefit from further justification, explanation, and clarification. I have outlined these points in the specific comments below.
- The novelty and original contribution of the study could be more clearly highlighted. I would encourage the authors to strengthen the discussion of the study’s novelty and its contribution to the existing literature, both in the Introduction and in the Discussion and conclusions sections.
- The analyses presented in the manuscript rely on a single K dataset, which limits the possibility of conducting some of the analyses performed for other parameters. I understand the difficulty of obtaining K data at the required spatial resolution over large areas. Nevertheless, I wonder whether it would be feasible to explore a few additional, physically plausible variations in K to assess how sensitive the results are to changes in this parameter. Alternatively, is this analysis beyond the scope of the study?
SPECIFIC COMMENTS
- Providing explicit definitions of some of the concepts and variables introduced in the manuscript could help readers better understand the subsequent methodological descriptions and interpretations, for example:
- Lines 68-69. Please consider briefly explaining how WTR is defined and calculated, including the variables involved and the underlying rationale.
- Line 158. Please provide a brief description of CLM when it is first introduced,
- Line 397. Please consider defining the concept of stability, either here or at an earlier point in the manuscript.
- Line 72. I would suggest using “and” rather than “;” between the two references.
- Line 82. Could the authors please clarify what is meant by “recharge-driven” in this context?
- Figure 1. I would suggest removing the rivers shown in the background of the main panel, as they may add visual clutter without substantially improving the figure’s readability. In addition, the purpose of the phrase “Relatively large discharge location” is unclear to me, please consider removing it if it is not essential. Finally, I suggest formatting the caption in regular type rather than bold, consistently with the captions of the other figures.
- Line 159. Could the authors please explain why ParFlow and CLM are coupled through the upper four layers? What is the rationale for selecting four layers rather than a different number?
- Line 164. Please define the abbreviation WY at its first occurrence.
- Lines 189-190. Please provide further justification for this methodological choice. In particular, it would be helpful to clarify whether this is an established approach in the literature and explain the rationale for adopting it in the present study.
- Lines 197-203. Some additional clarification would help readers better understand the analysis. In particular:
- Where are the differences evaluated: at each grid cell or at different scales?
- Why are LE and EF considered in this analysis, and what is their specific role?
- How are the thresholds identified, and what criteria are used to determine them?
- Lines 221-224. Could the authors explain how the WTD intervals are identified and how the corresponding thresholds are defined? In particular, is this classification based primarily on visual inspection, or is it supported by quantitative analyses or specific criteria?
- Lines 243-248. Could the authors clarify why a threshold value of 1 is selected? It would be helpful to explain its physical interpretation in the context of the analysis and discuss the implications of WTR values below and above this threshold.
- Line 257. Please explain why partial derivatives are introduced at this stage and clarify their specific role in the analysis.
- Line 264. Similarly, could the authors explain the motivation for introducing dimensionless local elasticity? Clarifying its role in the analysis and its physical interpretation would help readers understand its relevance.
- Line 272. Could the authors clarify the basis for the conclusions drawn regarding the relationship between WTR and the other variables? It would be helpful to explain how these conclusions follow from the preceding analysis.
- Line 276. I would suggest specifying the list of parameters denoted by x here, rather than later in the text (line 279), to make the notation clearer from the outset.
- Lines 275-278. Could the authors explain the rationale for expressing changes in WTR logarithmically? In particular, clarifying the physical interpretation of this expression and its advantages for the subsequent analysis would be helpful.
- Line 283. Could the authors clarify the meaning of the term “move” in this context? A more precise description would help avoid ambiguity.
- Line 300. Please consider briefly recalling or explaining why alternative representations of the inputs are required for the analysis and what purpose they serve.
- Lines 358-368. The description of the parameter combinations and simulations in this paragraph is somewhat difficult to follow, partly because it relies on specific terminology (such as “focal”). Providing a few illustrative examples would help clarify this description.
- Lines 374-386. The procedure used to define the parameter ranges is not entirely clear to me. Please consider providing further details on how these ranges are established and explaining the rationale behind the selected limits.
- Lines 402-405. Please consider clarifying the meaning of PR(WTR) and the interpretation of the WTR values discussed in this passage. A brief explanation of how these quantities should be interpreted in the context of the analysis would be helpful.
- Lines 406-412. The calculations and classifications described in this passage would benefit from further explanation. In particular, please clarify the steps involved, the criteria used for the classification, and the motivation for performing this analysis.
- Lines 415-426. Further justification for selecting these specific configurations, rather than other possible combinations, would help readers better understand the purpose and interpretation of the analysis. Were these configurations selected because they are consistent with those considered in previous studies, thereby facilitating comparisons with existing results? If so, explicitly stating this would help clarify the rationale behind their selection.
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-5048', Anonymous Referee #2, 21 Oct 2026
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General comments
Very good research that combines surface and subsurface hydrology. The topic fits the scope of the journal. However, information is missing, and I am available to review the manuscript a second time under request of the editors. Please, address the specific comments.
Specific comments
1. Clarify the novelty of your manuscript in the introduction.
2. Disclose the general aim of your research at the end of the introduction.
3. Describe the multiple specific objectives of your research in the final part of your introduction.
Study area
4. What are you modelling in terms of subsurface hydrology for the geological heterogeneities? Which type of rocks?
Methodology
5. Figure 1. Please, provide more information in the figure and main body about the boundary conditions.
6. Reduce the number of equations.
Results
7. Figure 1. Pay attention to the use of bold.
8. Figure 2. Which is the meaning in terms of heterogeneities? I ask to be more conceptual.
9. Figure 4. Improve the language of this caption. Some sentences are too long.
References
10. Expand literature on subsurface flow in heterogeneous aquifers.
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General comments
Good modelling hydrological research. Please, follow my suggestion to improve the final version of your manuscript.
Specific comments
Lines 32-34. Insert recent review papers that discuss challenges to resolve 3D groundwater flow at the regional and continental scales due to geological heterogeneities, and hydrological uncertainties:
- Condon, L. E., Kollet, S., Bierkens, M. F., Fogg, G. E., Maxwell, R. M., Hill, M. C., ... & Abesser, C. 2021. Global groundwater modeling and monitoring: Opportunities and challenges. Water Resources Research, 57(12), e2020WR029500.
- Lupi, F., Agbotui, P. Y., Medici, G. 2026. Hydraulic Conductivity in the Mesozoic units of the Umbria-Marche succession (Italy); insights towards a sustainable management of carbonate aquifers worldwide. Sustainability, 18, 9297; https://doi.org/10.3390/su18189297.
Line 128. Clarify the general goal of your research at the end of the discussion.
Line 128. Describe the 3 to 4 specific objectives of your research by using numbers (e.g., i, ii, and iii).
Lines 132-186. Please, provide basic information on climate of the study area.
Lines 132-185. Insert basic information on the geology/hydro-stratigraphy of the study area.
Lines 189-onwards. Provide more information on the physical principles underneath ParFlow.
Line 147 “Deeper aquifer”. How deep? Please, be more quantitative.
Line 271. There are several equations. They should have a number associated.
Line 271. There are several equations. Can you reduce the numbers of equations? That’s to be more conceptual towards the audience.
Line 302. Do you need to provide details for water viscosity and density values used for the conversion?
Line 643. Do you need a separate discussion where you engage the international community?
Lines 694-701. I suggest highlighting the novelty of your research.
Figures and tables
Lines 539-544. This caption is too long. Part of the text should be moved to the result section.