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Turbulent mixing at the polar jet and transport of cirrus particles into the lowermost extratropical stratosphere
Abstract. The composition of the extratropical transition layer (ExTL), in particular the mixing ratios of ozone and water vapour, has a high impact on the radiative budget of the atmosphere. The ExTL is a transition region above the extratropical tropopause, characterized by smooth vertical gradients between typical tropospheric and stratospheric properties. It is shaped by several transport pathways, including quasi-isentropic mixing at the subtropical jet, diabatic descent from the stratosphere as part of the overturning circulation, and diabatic cross-tropopause exchange. The latter pathway is partially suppressed by the strong static stability above the tropopause, so that diabatic processes are necessary to facilitate mixing between the troposphere and the ExTL.
Here we present in situ measurements taken during the TPEx campaign in summer 2024 over the North Sea, that provide evidence for transport of ice particles through turbulent mixing across the tropopause caused by strong wind shears above the jet stream. The measurements are complemented by Lagrangian analyses of ICON model simulations for atmospheric context and history. High resolution acceleration measurements indicate turbulence while Lagrangian analysis shows suitable conditions for the turbulent mixing one hour prior to the measurements. Trace gas correlations and ice particle measurements confirm cross tropopause mixing through simultaneous occurrence of a stratospheric chemical signature and ice particles in subsaturation. With this combined analysis of measurements and simulations, we demonstrate that turbulent mixing is a potential pathway across the extratropical tropopause and that ice particles mixed into the stratosphere by this process possibly constitute a source of stratospheric water.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-4614', Anonymous Referee #1, 29 Sep 2026 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-4614', Anonymous Referee #2, 10 Oct 2026
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The manuscript egusphere-2026-4614 entitled “Turbulent mixing at the polar jet and transport of cirrus particles into the lowermost extratropical stratosphere” explores turbulent mixing due to strong wind shear near the jet stream as a potential transport pathway of ice particles to the stratosphere across the extratropical tropopause. In situ measurements from the TPEx campaign and Lagrangian analyses of ICON model simulations are used to explore this transport. Specifically, ice particle measurements, trace gas correlations, vertical acceleration measurements, and model derived turbulent kinetic energy (TKE) are used to explore potential mixing. The authors find evidence that ice particles were transported into subsaturated stratospheric air at the northern edge of the anticyclonic portion of the polar jet stream, owing to turbulent mixing associated with strong wind shear above the jet core. I found the presence of ice particles above and below the tropopause coinciding with elevated TKE on this flight to be an interesting case study and appreciate the variety of measurements presented. My main comments are bulleted below, and I recommend a decision of Minor Revisions.
Main Comments:
The details about the campaign and analyzed flight currently feel scattered throughout the manuscript, which makes it more challenging to discern the conditions of the flight that made these measurements and insight towards this transport pathway possible. Including a dedicated sub-section towards an overview of the field campaign and specific flight discussed in this manuscript towards the of the beginning of the methods or results would help make the analysis presented more cohesive. There is currently campaign/flight information at the beginning of Section 2.1, Section 3, and Section 4 that would benefit from being combined. There are a few comments on figures in the specific comments section below that support this theme as well.
To provide the reader with a clearer idea of the flight and conditions encountered throughout, I would recommend the authors include a flight curtain figure, either as a panel within one of the main figures or as a supplemental figure. Figure 4 demonstrates the altitude of level legs and spatially where the particles are encountered along the legs. However, when examining particles and the turbulence proxy in timeseries figures (ex: Figs. 5 and 8), it would be advantageous to know the altitude the aircraft was at and whether it was completing a level leg or increasing in altitude with time.
L77: The motivation towards this study should be emphasized more in the Introduction prior to introducing the objective of this study. Additional emphasis on limitations of previous work would convey the value of this study. One example could be the timescale aspect (discussed in L366-376), where previous work incorporated longer lived tracers.
L159-166: Additional details regarding the TKE proxy variable from vertical accelerations would be beneficial. How are portions of the level legs versus increasing in altitude considered during this flight? Would it be possible to quantify or give examples of the long versus short timescales mentioned in this paragraph? For the rolling variability, was a specific time window used?
L168-169: How is this flight section supposedly laminar? How long is this section of the flight compared to the rest of the flight? Additional details would be advantageous.
Specific Comments
Abstract
L10: Please spell out campaign name for TPEx.
L13: Please spell out full name for ICON before using abbreviation.
Introduction
L21-76: This is a long paragraph which can make it more challenging to focus, consider breaking it up into multiple paragraphs to help with pacing for the reader.
L37: Switch “TST” and “Troposphere-to-Stratosphere Transport” so that TST is in the parenthesis.
L41: Introduce abbreviation of “STE” for stratosphere-troposphere exchange here instead of in line 54.
Methods
L110: FISH is introduced here but mentioned in greater detail below in line 135 – consider spelling out FISH here too or adding something along the lines of ‘(discussed in greater detail below)’ so the reader knows to expect additional details about the instrument.
L174: Spell out ICON model.
L177-178: Would this information be better suited in the data availability statement?
Results
L199: It currently states equivalent potential temperature is color coded with opacity, but in the figure it appears to be blue to yellow and reflectance is opacity?
L205: Please clarify Fig. 4 for “in the figure” for extra clarity when comparing to figures 2 and 3.
L206-207: Detail is given about what the turquoise marks represent, and it is implied that the blue marks are ice particles without the stratosphere signature, however stating this explicitly would be beneficial.
L209: What interval were altitudes of the stacked level legs in the flight?
L227-228: Would it be possible to provide a brief (1-2 sentence) description of the method used to construct the stratospheric marker in addition to the citations given?
L256: Clarify that 2 PVU is used as the dynamical tropopause here. Do the authors have confidence in the 2.0 PVU ICON model contour as the most appropriate tropopause definition?
L272: Change to “as can be seen”
L289-2291: Please consider stating examples of the smaller and larger time scales mentioned here.
L309: Consider “than the atmospheric conditions. The pronounced” for flow.
L330-336: Consider rephrasing this sentence, the takeaways based on the mention of the trajectories and ozone was not particularly clear.
Conclusions
L358: Is “this study” referencing the current manuscript or Emig et al. (2025)?
Figures
Figure 2: Consider adding the flight path overlaid here or some sort of annotation indicating where the flight occurs in the domain.
Figure 2: Increase the text size for the latitude and longitude numerical labels as they are currently much smaller than the remaining text which makes them challenging to read.
Figure 2: The yellow contours can be challenging to distinguish from the white contours and additional shading within the figure. Is there a different color that could provide more contrast? I recognize there are multiple colors already being implemented in this figure so the current color choice may be the best contrast available.
Figure 3: Include what the horizontal wind contour values are and how they align with the color scale.
Figure 3: Would it be possible to zoom in the domain more? It is currently challenging to distinguish which portion of the flight domain aligns with the different horizontal wind contours.
Figure 4: Please include endpoint labels here (Ex: 1, 2, 3 or a, b, c) to relate to figure 2 and increase cohesion of the vertical and horizontal components of this flight. Corresponding endpoint labels on the flight track in Figure 3 would be beneficial.
Figure 5: Label panels a and b instead of top and bottom to be consistent with other multi-panel figures.
Figure 6: The figures panels are labelled a, b, and c so those should be used in the caption as well instead of left, middle, and right.
Figure 7: Please clarify what interval and corresponding color the horizontal wind speed contours are.
Figure 8: Label panels a, b, and c and reference as such.
Figures A1 and 2: Please clarify what interval and corresponding color the horizontal wind speed contours are.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-4614-RC2 -
RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-4614', Anonymous Referee #3, 26 Oct 2026
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Review of «Turbulent mixing at the polar jet and transport of cirrus particles into the lowermost extratropical stratosphere»
by N. Emig, A. Miltenberger, H. Bozem, M. Krämer, A. Afchine, D. Kunkel, H.-C. Lachnitt, Y. Li, p. Reutter, C. Rolf, N. Spelten, H. Tost and P. M. Hoor
This manuscript presents evidence for turbulence induced mixing at the tropopause in the vicinity of the jet stream over the North Sea, based on in-situ measurements of ice particles, trace gases and acceleration measurements. The findings are complemented by an ICON simulation including a Lagrangian analysis of the history of the involved air masses. Ice crystals are found in ice subsaturated regions with stratospheric properties, when characterised by trace gas concentrations. The authors therefore conclude that turbulent mixing of ice particles across the tropopause in the proximity of a jet and the associated regions with high wind shear, is a possible source of stratospheric water vapour.
The topic of this manuscript is very relevant and well within the scope of this journal. The combination of in-situ measurements and ICON simulation is a strength of this manuscript. However, the manuscript is not yet of sufficient quality. In particular, the text and figures should be improved to enhance readability and strengthen the overall message of the manuscript. I therefore recommend major revisions before publication.
General remarks:
As briefly mentioned above, the manuscript includes many interesting and important results. However, the text is sometimes not well structured, such that it is very difficult to follow. Furthermore, the selection of figures and/or the variables that are shown can be improved in my point of view to better support your interpretation and findings. I would therefore highly recommend restructuring certain parts of the manuscript.
1) Introduction
The introduction contains a lot of important information. However, it lacks a clear storyline which at the end of the introduction leads the reader to the open research questions. Even though many important aspects are discussed, the order in which they are explained seems not very well thought and connected to each other. Furthermore, it would be very helpful for the reader if the introduction would very clearly formulate the open research questions and objectives of this manuscript, which could then even be taken up again in the summary and conclusion section. Therefore, I would highly recommend revising the Introduction, with a special focus on coherency and the storyline, and the formulation of clear questions that will be addressed.
2) Methods
In the Methods section, many important information is given. However, for a reader who is not familiar with all the measurement devices, this can be overwhelming. I would tailor the information better towards what exactly is needed for the interpretation of your results later on. E.g. I would start the Chapter with an introductory paragraph, explaining the readers which variables have been measured, and how they will be used in the following analysis. Only then I would go into more detail. A table listing all instruments and variables that have been measured, including the uncertainty would also be very helpful as it would provide overview over the many information.
3) Chapter 3 – TPEx F10
I think that the plots to describe the overall synoptic situation and to place the flight path into context should be improved. Here are some suggestions which you might consider.
Figure 2: PV (or the 2 pvu iso-line) either on an isentrope (315, 320 K) or pressure surface (300 hPa, 250 hPa), which would indicate the position of the tropopause. Isotachs, showing the position of the jet (and indirectly the spacing of the isotachs would give information about wind shear), sea level pressure and the Meteosat satellite image. Maybe you could then remove figure 3.
4) Figures 4, 7 and A1, A2 and chapter 4
It is not clear to me how you have chosen which plot goes to the appendix and which one to the main text. I think that the 2 pvu line (like in Fig. 7 and A1) gives important context and helps to understand if the flight path is in the troposphere or stratosphere (even if it is from an ICON simulation). So, I would very fundamentally think about which variables are most important to show to support your text and revise these figures. Instead of shifting one to the appendix, you could also do a Figure 4a, b (and c) and show all relevant variables. This would avoid that the reader needs to jump back and forth between the figures.
In general, chapter 4 is difficult to read, and I partly got lost because there is no clear storyline and paragraphs are not well connected to each other. I would like to suggest to re-organise the chapter by thinking about what is the exact message of this chapter and which figures and variables are needed to support your findings.
5) Chapter 5, calculation of trajectories
I think that the calculation of trajectories is very valuable in this context. However, I do not fully understand what you did and what is shown in Fig. 10. What does “Curtain based on position of FL350 backward trajectories” mean? Do the plots show the curtain along the averaged backward trajectories that have been started along the flight path of FL350? Or is it a curtain along one single trajectory? Or a curtain along the flight path? Please clarify.
Minor comments:
L 110: FISH has not been introduced. Maybe shift paragraph that explains the FISH measurements (L. 136 – 143) to ~line 110.
L178: JGU has not been introduced. But I think it is also not important here.
Figure 3, caption: Contours of vertical shear do not have units.
L210: ice particles are found in the southern part of the flight track. However, on the lower flight altitudes, there are also ice particles measured in the northern part.
L216, Fig.5: You say that only wo single particle events are detected. I have difficulties to see that in figure 5. Can you explain in more detail?
L219-223: This paragraph is not well connected to the previous one. You might want to take this into account when you restructure chapter 4.
L246: …. simultaneous measurements of cirrus particles….what exactly do you mean here?
L250: …..is short compared to the life time…..
L293 – 296: these sentences are repetitive. I would simplify.
L297: You say that the amplitude of the acceleration variation is more pronounced for the TPC-TOSS. I don’t think that this is clear from figure 8, bottom. Please clarify what you mean here or where this can be seen.
L322-336: This paragraph is difficult to understand. Can you rewrite it? See also comment related to the calculation of trajectories and Figure 10 above.
L346: …directly in in situ …. --> in in-situ
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Review of: “Turbulent mixing at the polar jet and transport of cirrus particles into the lowermost extratropical stratosphere”
By: Nicolas Emig, Annette K. Miltenberger, Heiko Bozem, Martina Krämer, Armin Afchine, Daniel Kunkel, Hans-Christoph Lachnitt, Yun Li, Philipp Reutter, Christian Rolf, Nicole Spelten, Holger Tost, and Peter M. Hoor
Recommendation: Reconsidered after major revisions
General comments:
The manuscript reports a case encountered during the TPEx campaign in 2024, which demonstrated ice particle transported from the upper troposphere to the lowermost stratosphere by turbulence associated with the mid-latitude jet. In addition to trace gas in situ measurements that display a turbulent mixing signature, the study also incorporates model simulation and trajectory analysis to reveal the presence of conditions favourable to turbulence occurrence shortly before, supporting that turbulent mixing was the source of the measured ice particles in the lowermost stratosphere.
While the methodology looks rigorous, the presentation quality, including both the text and figures, should be improved before publication. For instance, the objective or major research questions of the study should be introduced more clearly, allowing readers to recognise the novelty and significance of the study. Also, the description of the figures and the presentation of the evidence can be considerably improved to highlight the major contribution of this study (further details below). Therefore, I recommend a major revision of the manuscript.
Major comments:
Specific comments:
Technical corrections: