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Brief communication: Ambient-pressure femtosecond laser ablation as a solid-phase sampling method for water ice
Abstract. High-resolution ice-core analysis requires sampling methods that preserve millimeter to sub-millimeter spatial information. We evaluate ambient-pressure femtosecond laser ablation (fs-LA) as a solid-phase and geometry-tolerant sampling method for water ice under cold, dry laboratory conditions. At 35 µJ and 50 kHz, visible localized craters were produced at all tested exposure times, with mean inner diameters of approximately 87–165 µm. Crater formation was repeatable at a 0.5 mm pitch along 400-position scan paths. The 1 s exposure produced the smallest sampling footprint and largest fraction of craters without visible rims, supporting fs-LA as a platform for future cryospheric analyses.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-4182', Anonymous Referee #1, 02 Sep 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-4182', Anonymous Referee #2, 10 Nov 2026
This brief communication assesses the suitability of a 1030 nm wavelength femtosecond (fs) pulse duration laser ablation (LA) setup for sampling material from solid ice samples. The study focuses on crater morphology as an indicator of sampling quality, and analyses the optical appearance of craters collected under different exposure times. Based on this analysis, the system creates craters with predictably distributed sizes, increasing in diameter with increased exposure time.
I recommend the manuscript to be published subject to major revisions. The manuscript is generally well written, and would benefit primarily from making the motivation behind using this new setup, and the choice of analysis, clearer.
- The manuscript links the sample cell geometry to the choice of laser, for example on L30 “Ambient-pressure fs-LA may therefore offer a geometry-tolerant route to localized solid-phase sampling”, or L2-3 “We evaluate ambient-pressure femtosecond laser ablation (fs-LA) as a solid-phase and geometry-tolerant sampling method”. This link needs to be explained. Is the choice of laser dependent on the sample chamber? Could a similar setup be established (with appropriate optics) for a nanosecond laser? If not why not?
- The use of a fs laser is stressed in the manuscript. Other laser parameters, such as laser wavelength, are also important. L20-26 notes that past studies have used different laser types for LA, and notes only that sample geometry was a limitation. With other studies using 157 nm or 193 nm lasers for impurity measurements, a short discussion with a few more recent references regarding choice of laser parameters could motivate the interest in a 1030 nm fs laser over the alternatives. This may also be linked to the point on cell geometry above.
- The study uses crater morphology as an indicator of sampling quality, but does not explain why. Some content from L203-205 and the studies referenced on those lines, and content from L232-235 are likely useful here. Regarding the optical data in figure 1, what is the shadow often seen to the right-hand side of the craters, E.g. 1s #221, or 16s #78?
- Relating to the statement on L82-83 ‘Crater formation remained broadly stable along the scan paths’ - Figure 1.b appears to show a trend, with more visible rims in craters with a higher index. Also, the rolling mean in fig 2b for the 8s scan increases then flattens, and the ratio for the 16s scan in fig 2c trends upwards. Are there trends here? If so, what could be causing them?
- The study does not show downstream coupling to an analytical system; however, a description of how analysis would look in practice would be useful. Discussing an example experimental design using the 96 μm spot size, 0.5 mm pitch, and 1 s exposure (or alternative experimental settings), and how ablated material would be collected and transported from the ambient-air cell would be instructive. This would help interpret the comments on L81 that the 0.5 mm pitch is suitable, and L86 that a 1 s exposure is most suitable for sampling.
L16: Indicate an order of magnitude for the volume of material removed
L27: Specify laser-matter interaction
L45-46: It’s not clear what the 30 cm length ice sections are
L49: The table 1 caption and the data within state 400 positions per exposure time. Figure 1b has white towards the end of the indexes for 1s 2s and 16s. what does the white represent? Were there fewer than 400 measured positions?
The results section contains many short paragraphs, consider combining some for readability. For example, the section starting on L75 could be moved up to before the section starting L72, so the discussion on diameters are placed together
Fig.2a: The y-label would be more understandable as e.g. “Relative frequency” or “Frequency density”
L84: With the trend that lower exposure gives smallest inner diameter, why not test shorter than 1s exposures?
L188: What is the temperature of the jacket?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-4182-RC2
Data sets
Supporting data for: Ambient-pressure femtosecond laser ablation as a solid-phase sampling method for water ice Robin Vinther Nielsen et al. https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.21099024
Model code and software
LA Crater Analyzer Robin Vinther Nielsen https://github.com/MarsRob/LA_crater_analyzer
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The work “Ambient-pressure femtosecond laser ablation as a solid phase sampling method for water ice” presents a fundamental evaluation of the crater morphology upon the ablation of Mili-Q water ice with a novel ambient pressure femtosecond laser ablation unit. The work aims to assess crater morphology by visually inspecting the rim generated by the interaction between the laser and the ice sample. Although interesting I consider this work need a substantial amount of work to be completed and I consider major revision is needed.