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Decoupling factors influencing spatial and temporal trends of total nitrogen and ammonia nitrogen levels in lakes across China
Abstract. The heterogeneity of lake nitrogen pollution in its spatial distribution and long-term evolution influences ecosystem functioning and the effectiveness of water environment management. However, whether the drivers shaping the spatial patterns of different nitrogen forms differ from those governing their temporal dynamics remains poorly understood at large spatial scales. Here, we constructed monthly time series (2010–2024) of total nitrogen (TN) and ammonia nitrogen (NH₃-N) concentrations for 3,020 lakes across China’s five limnological regions using an ensemble machine learning framework and to reveal the difference in factors that influence spatial patterns and long-term changes of the two nitrogen forms at the large scale. The results showed that the factors determining where lakes are nitrogen-enriched are not necessarily those controlling whether nitrogen conditions improve or deteriorate over time and that different nitrogen forms respond to management and environmental change through distinct pathways. For TN, the spatial patterns are jointly shaped by external nitrogen loading, land cover, and hydro-climatic conditions, highlighting strong landscape-scale controls. However, its long-term evolution is governed more strongly by temporal variations in external nitrogen inputs than by static spatial characteristics. In contrast, NH₃-N exhibits a more direct and rapid response to external emission reduction measures, with both its spatial and temporal dynamics demonstrating high sensitivity to changes in anthropogenic nitrogen inputs. By highlighting the decoupled controls on spatial patterns and temporal trends, this study underscores the necessity of shifting lake management from static, location-based regulation toward an integrated 'state-rate' adaptive strategy.
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3574', Michael McClain, 31 Aug 2026
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AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Xihua Wang, 07 Sep 2026
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This manuscript presents a monthly analysis of TN and NH3-N concentrations in 3020 lakes across China and their spatial and temporal relationship to select influential factors over a 15-year period (2010-2024). By applying an ensemble machine learning framework, the authors assessed the relative strength of different factors in predicting the spatial and temporal patterns in TN and NH3-N concentrations. The main findings are that, depending on the limnological region of the country, external nitrogen loading, hydro-climatic dynamics, soil N & land cover, and topography structure each appeared as dominant factors in predicting the spatial variability of TN, while only external nitrogen loading and soil N & land cover appeared as dominant factors in predicting the spatial variability of NH3-N. A similar distribution of dominant factors was found with respect to trends in TN over the 15-year study period, while NH3-N trends were related predominantly to external N loading. Differences between the relationships with factors were attributed to the influence of legacy nitrogen stored in the system on TN concentrations and the higher reactivity of NH3-N concentrations in response to continued external N loading. The findings led the authors to recommend nitrogen-form-specific management strategies to account for the differing influences.
In reviewing this manuscript, I was not able to assess the ensemble machine learning framework applied, as it is outside my expertise. My review therefore focuses primarily on data used, the interpretation of the results and the recommendations.
Overall, I found the manuscript to present a thorough and comprehensive analysis of a remarkable dataset. The results are significant and of value, at least with respect to Total N, in addressing problems of N contamination across China and more broadly. It is also well written.
My primary concern centres around the use of NH3-N as a response variable for such a national and catchment scale analysis and the influence this has on the final conclusions. The analysis infers cause and effect relationships between the predictor variables (e.g. external N loading) and the response variables (TN and NH3-N concentrations). This leads to the following statement in the Conclusions section “Based on these findings, we postulate that both the spatial distribution and long-term trend of lake TN across a large geographical region are reflected by watershed-scale cumulation of nitrogen, and that the long-term trend of lake NH₃-N is primarily affected by external nitrogen loading”. From this the authors go on to state “The different responses of lake nitrogen forms in spatial and temporal characteristic across China highlight the need for nitrogen-form-specific management strategies.”
While I judge the analysis and eventual conclusions related to TN concentrations to be reasonable, I do not feel the same about those for NH3-N. Ammonia (NH3) is a highly reactive compound of nitrogen in natural waters generated during the ammonification of organic nitrogen and generally quickly converted to ammonium (NH4+), oxidised to nitrate (NO3-), or taken up and assimilated by plants. The predictor variables considered in this study are quite distal from the conditions in the lakes themselves. NH3-N concentrations could be much better predicted using TN concentrations in the lake, pH and dissolved O2 concentrations. Nitrate would have been the better dissolved inorganic form of N to use for the analysis and may have even resulted in similar conclusions, but I understand that NH3-N was the only option available in the CNEMC dataset. CNEMC monitoring of NH3-N is understandable because it is a priority pollutant and serves as a rapid warning indicator of failures in water treatment systems or flushing events from nearby contamination sources (like feedlots). It is valuable for detecting local effects, but it is not a good indicator of catchment scale characteristics.
The poor utility of NH3-N concentrations as an indicator of external N loading is evident in the concentrations reported in the manuscript. The observed mean concentrations reported in lines 336-339 (maximum 0.159 mg/L) are low and acceptable for water quality Classes I and II in China. By comparison the national multi-year mean TN concentration of 2.07 mg/L in the lakes is slightly above what is acceptable even for water quality Class V. So, comparatively, TN concentrations reflect highly enriched conditions while NH3-N concentrations do not. In short, mean regional TN concentrations in the lakes are a water quality problem, while mean NH3-N concentrations are not.
TN concentrations may very well be influenced by external N loading in the catchment, reflecting as the authors state “the widespread inertia inherent in watershed- and lake-scale nitrogen pollution and recovery processes at the global scale”. But NH3-N concentrations are likely only influenced by the TN concentrations in the lake, which when combined with pH and dissolved oxygen conditions in the lake are not so high as to result in widespread NH3-N concentrations exceeding national water quality standards.
I believe these considerations may be so significant as to remove NH3-N from the analysis. If the authors choose to keep NH3-N in the analysis, I recommend that the considerations raised above be reflected in the revision of the manuscript. TN and NH3-N should not be assumed to respond in equal strength to the variations in the predictor variables distal to the river. The limitations of using NH3-N for such a study should be acknowledged. Results and conclusions related to NH3-N should also therefore be qualified.
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Line 133: Fig 1b is cited, but I do not see a 1b in the figure.
Line 166: “(ERA5)” should be (ERA5-Land).
Lines 515-519: Citation needs to be added for decrease in N loads from 6.8 to 3.5 million tons. What is time unit… per yr?