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Towards a risk governance framework for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings: a comparative analysis of national strategies with implications for Algeria
Abstract. Every major earthquake is a reminder that buildings do not collapse because of geology alone: they collapse because the societies in which they stand have not invested in making them safer. This study examines national governance frameworks for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings through a comparative analysis of six high-seismicity countries (Japan, New Zealand, California in the United States, Turkey, Italy, and Greece). Using a five-pillar analytical framework spanning regulatory, technical, financial, institutional, and cultural dimensions, we identify the mechanisms that distinguish effective governance from ineffective intent. Our central finding is that successful seismic risk reduction is never the product of a single policy instrument but emerges from the coherent alignment of five interdependent conditions: enforceable legislation specifically targeting the existing building stock, performance-based financial incentives capable of mobilising private capital, comprehensive national building-risk inventories, coordinated multi-level governance, and a deeply embedded societal risk culture. These findings are translated into a phased and operationally specific governance framework for Algeria, a country whose location on one of the Mediterranean basin's most active seismic belts, combined with a critically vulnerable pre-code building stock and a currently reactive policy architecture, makes the transition to proactive seismic risk governance both urgent and achievable.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3476', Stephane Cartier, 16 Aug 2026
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EC1: 'Reply on RC1', Andrea Bevilacqua, 16 Aug 2026
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Dear Dr. Cartier,
I am writing regarding your review of this manuscript. I noticed that you submitted a very brief report just seven minutes after accepting the review invitation.
As an NHESS Editor, I must ensure all peer reviews meet the journal's standards. I kindly ask you to review the NHESS referee obligations (https://www.natural-hazards-and-earth-system-sciences.net/policies/obligations_for_referees.html) to ensure your assessment aligns with our requirements.
Please let me know if you would like the opportunity to revise and expand upon your report, or if you have any questions. Thanks for your help.
Kind regards,
Andrea Bevilacqua
NHESS EditorCitation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-EC1 -
RC2: 'Reply on EC1', Stephane Cartier, 16 Aug 2026
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Hello,
I did a short comment, because the article is very clear. It is a second version which performed after my previous remarks considering the first version. This article gives a very good international comparison of anti seismic challenges, especially about the management of retrofitting existing buildings. It also propose an accurate way to scale up Algerian safety considering the history of progress accomplished in Algeria. The international comparison gives arguments to help the management of safety in Algeria. All the elements of the text and the figures seems to be well presented and argumented.
I thank you for your vigilance and keep in discussion if necessary.
Please note that I will be disconnected since 25 of August, which is is also a constraint considering your appeal to fix before the 21st.
Best regards, StC.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-RC2 -
EC2: 'Reply on RC2', Andrea Bevilacqua, 16 Aug 2026
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Dear Dr. Cartier,
Thank you for the additional context regarding your prior review of a previous version of this manuscript. This certainly explains the rapid submission of your report.
I appreciate you letting me know, and thank you again for your time and assistance with this manuscript.
Kind regards,
Andrea Bevilacqua
NHESS EditorCitation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-EC2
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EC2: 'Reply on RC2', Andrea Bevilacqua, 16 Aug 2026
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RC2: 'Reply on EC1', Stephane Cartier, 16 Aug 2026
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EC1: 'Reply on RC1', Andrea Bevilacqua, 16 Aug 2026
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3476', Anonymous Referee #2, 07 Sep 2026
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The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2026/egusphere-2026-3476/egusphere-2026-3476-RC3-supplement.pdf
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AC1: 'Reply on RC3', Bachir BENFARHAT, 08 Sep 2026
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Dear Reviewer,
I am writing to express my sincere and heartfelt gratitude for the time and intellectual effort you devoted to reviewing our manuscript entitled "Towards a risk governance framework for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings: a comparative analysis of national strategies with implications for Algeria" (egusphere-2026-3476).
Your comments are, without exception, pertinent, rigorous, and constructive. Far from diminishing the value of the work, they shed light on dimensions that genuinely strengthen the scientific depth and practical relevance of the subject addressed. The questions you raise on regulatory barriers specific to the Algerian context, the supply-chain constraints on technical approaches, the equity implications of tax-based financial mechanisms, the role of local authorities in enforcement, and the need for culturally adapted risk communication reflect a thorough command of both the governance literature and the on-the-ground realities of seismic risk management in developing countries. I am grateful for such a substantive engagement with our work.
I would like to assure you that I will address each of your comments carefully and comprehensively, and that the required technical corrections will be incorporated into the revised manuscript as swiftly as possible. Your observations will undoubtedly result in a stronger, more nuanced, and more operationally grounded contribution to the field.
Thank you once again for your generosity of time and expertise.
Yours respectfully,
Corresponding Author
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-AC1 -
RC4: 'Reply on AC1', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 09 Sep 2026
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Dear Author,
Thank you for being open to our criticism and for responding positively by agreeing to take our comments into account.
Your work is of great importance to Algeria and, more broadly, to developing countries, particularly in seismic risk management.Taking into account the comments and recommendations reported in our expertise report will undoubtedly improve the quality and scope of your contribution to this field, making it more practical and applicable.
I wish you all the best and every success in your future research work.
Kind regards,Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-RC4 -
CC1: 'Reply on RC4', Bachir BENFARHAT, 13 Sep 2026
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Dear Reviewer,
Following my previous email, and after carefully revising the manuscript in accordance with your pertinent and valuable comments, I am pleased to send you the responses to your questions and comments, along with a summary of the revisions made to the manuscript.
Please find attached these two documents for your consideration.
I sincerely appreciate your valuable feedback, which has greatly contributed to improving the quality of the manuscript.
Kind regards,
Bachir Benfarhat
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RC5: 'Reply on CC1', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 15 Sep 2026
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Dear Authors,
Thank you for considering our comments and suggestions and for making the technical and methodological corrections outlined in the peer review report.
I would like to highlight how effectively you incorporated the responses to the specific comments in the revised manuscript. You also exercised good judgment in not incorporating every suggestion, which we consider entirely appropriate given the original objectives and scope of this article. This approach preserves the scientific coherence and general focus of the work without unnecessarily broadening its scope.
The new version incorporates the main technical and methodological corrections. These improvements enhance the clarity, consistency, and readability of the manuscript. They also provide further clarification, either explicitly or indirectly, that may address any questions readers have while reading the manuscript.
Overall, the revised version shows that the comments from the peer review were taken seriously and carefully considered.
Congratulations on your excellent revision work, and thank you again for your efforts in improving the manuscript.
I wish you every success in your future research and continued work on this topic.
Kind regards,Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-RC5
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RC5: 'Reply on CC1', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 15 Sep 2026
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CC1: 'Reply on RC4', Bachir BENFARHAT, 13 Sep 2026
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RC4: 'Reply on AC1', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 09 Sep 2026
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AC1: 'Reply on RC3', Bachir BENFARHAT, 08 Sep 2026
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CC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3476', Mohamed Yacine Kheliouen, 14 Sep 2026
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- Does the paper address relevant scientific and/or technical questions within the scope of NHESS?
Answer: YES
2. Does the paper present new data and/or novel concepts, ideas, tools, methods or results?
Answer: YES
3. Are these up to international standards?
Answer: YES
4. Are the scientific methods and assumptions valid and outlined clearly?
Answer: YES
5. Are the results sufficient to support the interpretations and the conclusions?
Answer: YES
6. Does the author reach substantial conclusions?
Answer: YES
7. Is the description of the data used, the methods used, the experiments and calculations made, and the results obtained sufficiently complete and accurate to allow their reproduction by fellow scientists (traceability of results)?
Answer: YES
8. Does the title clearly and unambiguously reflect the contents of the paper?
Answer: Confusion, I suggest replacing the term ‘national strategies’ with ‘international strategies’, as the strategies discussed relate to foreign countries with experience in the field of earthquake engineering
Towards a risk governance framework for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings: a comparative analysis of international strategies with implications for Algeria
9. Does the abstract provide a concise, complete and unambiguous summary of the work done and the results obtained?
Answer: YES
10 . Are the title and the abstract pertinent, and easy to understand to a wide and diversified audience?
Answer: YES
11. Are mathematical formulae, symbols, abbreviations and units correctly defined and used? If the formulae, symbols or abbreviations are numerous, are there tables or appendixes listing them?
Answer: YES
12. Is the size, quality and readability of each figure adequate to the type and quantity of data presented?
Answer: YES
13. Does the author give proper credit to previous and/or related work, and does he/she indicate clearly his/her own contribution?
Answer: YES
14. Are the number and quality of the references appropriate?
Answer: YES
15. Are the references accessible by fellow scientists?
Answer: YES
16. Is the overall presentation well structured, clear and easy to understand by a wide and general audience?
Answer: YES
17. Is the length of the paper adequate, too long or too short?
Answer: adequate
18. Is there any part of the paper (title, abstract, main text, formulae, symbols, figures and their captions, tables, list of references, appendixes) that needs to be clarified, reduced, added, combined, or eliminated?
NO
19. Is the technical language precise and understandable by fellow scientists?
Answer: YES
20. Is the English language of good quality, fluent, simple and easy to read and understand by a wide and diversified audience?
Answer: YES
21. Is the amount and quality of supplementary material (if any) appropriate?
Answer: YES
Scientific Significance:
Does the manuscript represent a substantial contribution to the understanding of natural hazards and their consequences (new concepts, ideas, methods, or data)?Excellent (1)
Scientific Quality:
Are the scientific and/or technical approaches and the applied methods valid? Are the results discussed in an appropriate and balanced way (clarity of concepts and discussion, consideration of related work, including appropriate references)?Good (2)
Presentation Quality:
Are the scientific data, results and conclusions presented in a clear, concise, and well-structured way (number and quality of figures/tables, appropriate use of technical and English language, simplicity of the language)?Good (2)
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CC3: 'Reply on CC2', Bachir BENFARHAT, 14 Sep 2026
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Dear Reviewer,
Thank you sincerely for this careful observation regarding the terminology used in the title of our manuscript. We genuinely appreciate the attention you have given to this point, and we welcome the opportunity to provide a brief clarification.
The term "national strategies" as used in our title follows the established convention of comparative governance and public policy research. It refers to the national-level governance strategy of each country studied, that is, the national policy of Japan, the national legislative framework of New Zealand, the national financial mechanism of Italy, and so on. This usage is standard in the comparative disaster risk reduction literature, where authors such as Zhang et al. (2022, Journal of Earthquake Engineering), Palm (2019), and Sattar (2021) regularly refer to the "national strategies" of individual countries when conducting cross-country analyses. In this tradition, the term designates what each nation has independently chosen as its sovereign policy response to seismic risk, as distinct from supranational or intergovernmental frameworks such as the Sendai Framework for Disaster Risk Reduction, which would more properly be described as "international" in the sense of transcending national boundaries.
We would respectfully note that substituting "international" for "national" in the title might, in fact, introduce a different ambiguity. A reader encountering the phrase "a comparative analysis of international strategies" could reasonably interpret this as a comparison of multilateral or intergovernmental frameworks rather than a comparison of the independent national policies of sovereign states. Since the latter is precisely the object of our paper, we believe the word "national" is the more accurate descriptor.
That said, we fully and gratefully acknowledge the concern raised. On a first reading of the title alone, without the support of the abstract, the word "national" could momentarily be read as referring only to Algeria's own national strategy rather than to the strategies of all countries studied. This is a legitimate observation, and we take it seriously.
With this in mind, we would like to propose a revised title that resolves the ambiguity without compromising terminological precision:
"Towards a risk governance framework for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings: a cross-national comparative analysis with implications for Algeria."
The expression "cross-national comparative analysis" is widely used across the social science and disaster risk governance literature to describe exactly what our paper does: comparing national-level frameworks across multiple countries. It makes both the international scope and the national unit of analysis explicit, addressing the reviewer's concern while remaining faithful to the object of the study.
We leave the final decision to the reviewer and the editor, and we remain entirely open to any alternative wording the editorial team may prefer. We are grateful for this exchange, which we believe will make the title more immediately accessible to a broad international readership.
Yours sincerely,
Bachir Benfarhat
Corresponding Author
LCTPE Laboratory, Department of Civil Engineering, FST
Abdelhamid Ibn Badis University of Mostaganem, Algeria
b.benfarhat@lagh-univ.dz
ORCID: https://orcid.org/0000-0003-2020-4038Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-CC3 -
RC6: 'Reply on CC3', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 15 Sep 2026
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I completely agree with your response regarding the title of the article.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-RC6 -
CC6: 'Reply on CC3', Mohamed Yacine Kheliouen, 01 Oct 2026
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I fully agree with the suggestion to replace the term “Nationals” with “Transnational” in the title, as I believe that the latter is more appropriate given the scope and content of the article.
Overall, I find the manuscript particularly interesting and scientifically relevant. The results presented are valuable and provide a meaningful contribution to the field. In my opinion, the manuscript merits publication in the journal.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-CC6
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RC6: 'Reply on CC3', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 15 Sep 2026
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RC7: 'Reply on CC2', Mohammed Sayah Goual, 15 Sep 2026
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Dear reviewer;
I believe the term "national strategies" is more appropriate because each strategy is specific to a particular country. It takes into account that country's unique circumstances, priorities, and constraints, which justifies its national character. Conversely, using the term "international strategy" may imply the existence of a common or universal strategy applicable to all countries, which does not necessarily correspond to reality.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-RC7
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RC8: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3476', Anonymous Referee #3, 29 Sep 2026
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The paper proposed a framework aimed at providing a five-pillar governance strategy for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings. Taking information from other countries, authors tried to apply this concept to Algeria. Although the topic of the paper is interesting, I see main concerns that, in my opinion, do not allow me to consider it for publication. Main aspects are:
- The comparative methods is not systematic and reproducibile. I do not see a procedure in which a reliable qantitative evaluation is provided (some scores are provided but in a not clear way - see next point), but only a qualitative assessment. The resulting evaluation is only qualitative and characterized by subjectivity
- The scores definition are based on the authors' assessment, and for this reason cannot be used for evaluating national performance or support goveranance. I would expect some weighting rules or uncertainty analysis at the base of the procedure
- The results obtained are in some way not appliable. If the recommendation is "50–85% tax deduction" on the Algerian Sismabonus, a cost- benefit feasibility analysis is required.
In the end, in this Reviewer's opinion, the outcome of the paper represent a simple policy proposal and not a validated research output, which can be effectively used for the purposes of the paper.
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RC9: 'Reply on RC8', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Sep 2026
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As the title suggests, this article is a comparative analysis of seismic risk management strategies applied in five countries and their implementation in Algeria. In this type of analysis, qualitative aspects take precedence. Therefore, it is unfair to undermine the authors’ efforts and the relevance of the subject.
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CC5: 'Reply on RC9', Bachir BENFARHAT, 30 Sep 2026
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We thank the contributor for this observation regarding the epistemological nature of comparative policy analysis.
The comment correctly identifies an important methodological distinction: comparative governance analysis is a qualitative research paradigm in which the primary unit of analysis is institutional logic rather than a measurable variable. In this tradition, rigour is achieved through systematic evidence triangulation, transparent case selection, and explicit analytical criteria rather than through statistical modelling. These standards are well established in the disaster risk governance literature and in comparative public policy research more broadly.
We nonetheless consider Reviewer 2's comments to be a legitimate and constructive prompt to strengthen the methodological transparency of the paper, particularly with respect to the documentation of the scoring procedure and the fiscal grounding of the policy recommendations. The revision will address these points directly.
We are grateful to all participants in the open discussion for their engagement with the manuscript.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-CC5
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CC5: 'Reply on RC9', Bachir BENFARHAT, 30 Sep 2026
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CC4: 'Reply on RC8', Bachir BENFARHAT, 30 Sep 2026
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We thank you for a rigorous and substantive critique. The three concerns raised are acknowledged and will be addressed in the revised manuscript as follows.
Regarding the reproducibility of the comparative method, we accept that the current presentation of the scoring procedure lacks sufficient transparency. The revision will include an explicit scoring rubric with anchored level descriptors, documented evidence sources per country and per dimension, and an inter-coder reliability check between the two authors. We note that structured comparative governance assessment is an established methodology in disaster risk reduction research and that qualitative evaluation does not, in itself, constitute a validity limitation, provided the procedure is transparent and documented, which the revision will ensure.
Regarding weighting rules and uncertainty analysis, the equal-weighting assumption will be explicitly justified in the revised methodology, grounded in the theoretical interdependence of the five pillars. A sensitivity analysis will be added to demonstrate the robustness of the main findings to score variation.
Regarding the cost-benefit feasibility of the proposed Algerian Sismabonus, we agree that the recommendation requires a stronger fiscal grounding. The revision will include an order-of-magnitude fiscal cost estimate under three uptake scenarios, compared against the avoided-loss estimates in Fig. 4 and contextualised against post-Boumerdes reconstruction expenditure. The proposed deduction range of 50 to 85% will be reframed explicitly as a design parameter subject to fiscal calibration rather than a fixed technical prescription.
A consolidated revision addressing these points, together with comments from all reviewers, will be submitted within the deadline set by the editor.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3476-CC4
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RC9: 'Reply on RC8', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Sep 2026
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the contribution " Towards a risk governance framework for reducing the seismic vulnerability of existing buildings: a comparative analysis of national strategies with implications for Algeria" by Bachir Benfarhat and Djelali Benouar
presents an excellent comparison of management of seismic safety of buildings across five coutries.
This new international comparison underlines some difficulties and opportunities to manage seismic safety of existing buildings.
Thanks to the methodology, the authors can propose some solution to manage seismic safety in Algeria.
So the contribution is very important to all the community of hazards and vulnerability management to cope with natural hazards.