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Dispersal dynamics along river corridors modulate impact of climate change on treeline shift in Hengduan Mountain
Abstract. Alpine treelines are expected to respond to climate warming, but the magnitude and direction of treeline shifts often vary across mountain landscapes. In the Hengduan Mountains, river corridors may shape how forest expansion is expressed as lateral and elevational treeline shifts, with important implications for future alpine habitat loss. Here, we modified and applied the spatially explicit individual based model LAVESI to simulate treeline dynamics along four major river corridors: the Dadu, Lancang, Nu, and Yalong rivers. Simulations covered the historical period from 1940 to 2020 and the future period from 2020 to 2100 under SSP1-2.6, SSP2-4.5, and SSP5-8.5.
During the historical period, simulated treeline shifts were gradual but river specific. Lateral changes were strongest in the Lancang and Nu rivers, intermediate in the Yalong River, and weak in the Dadu River. Elevational changes were more limited, with the Lancang River showing the clearest upward shift and the Nu River remaining close to stable. After 2020, lateral treeline shifts became stronger and more divergent among river corridors and scenarios. In most rivers, future lateral advance increased, with SSP2-4.5 generally producing relatively high cumulative expansion. Elevational shifts followed a related but not identical pattern: the Lancang River maintained the strongest upward trend, the Dadu and Yalong rivers showed moderate increases, and the Nu River remained weakly responsive. The relationship between lateral and elevational changes therefore varied among rivers, indicating that horizontal boundary reorganization did not always translate into comparable upslope shift.
Treeline invasion potential was also uneven. The Dadu River frequently reached the predefined upper limit, although this result should be interpreted in relation to the shorter simulation extent. In contrast, most simulations for the Lancang, Nu, and Yalong rivers remained below the upper limit by 2100, suggesting incomplete occupation of the available treeline tundra ecotone. Overall, our results indicate that future treeline shifts in the Hengduan Mountains are likely to remain spatially heterogeneous across river corridors, with different implications for alpine habitat vulnerability. This vulnerability should therefore be evaluated at the river corridor scale, where lateral expansion, elevational advance, and local topographic and ecological settings jointly shape the potential for future forest expansion.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3246', Anonymous Referee #1, 29 Jul 2026
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Linfeng Wei, 23 Sep 2026
Dear Reviewer 1
Thank you for your comments to our paper. Here are our responses and it is also welcomed to check our responses to the other reviewer.
AI tools were used to improve the language and grammatical editing.
Best,
Linfeng, on behalf of all coauthors
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Linfeng Wei, 23 Sep 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-3246', Anonymous Referee #2, 02 Sep 2026
General comments
This study applies the spatially explicit individual-based model LAVESI to simulate treeline dynamics along four major river corridors (Dadu, Lancang, Nu, Yalong) in the Hengduan Mountains over the historical period (1940–2020) and future scenarios (SSP1-2.6, SSP2-4.5, SSP5-8.5, 2020–2100). Treeline changes are decomposed into lateral (along-corridor) and elevational dimensions, revealing strong heterogeneity among river systems. Key findings include: slow but river-specific historical shifts; stronger lateral advance under SSP2-4.5 than SSP5-8.5 in some rivers; decoupling between lateral and elevational changes; limited invasion potential in most corridors; and spatially uneven alpine habitat loss. The paper highlights the critical role of river corridor topography in modulating treeline responses.
Specific comments
Major Issues
1.The definition of lateral treeline relies on arbitrary thresholds (>1000 individuals, 100 m window, ≥100 m continuous segment). No sensitivity analysis is performed. Changing these thresholds could alter the magnitude or even ranking of lateral shifts among rivers. Justification for threshold choices should be added.
2. Calibration relies on a single plot (plot 404) by tuning elevation offset. Given the strong environmental heterogeneity across the Hengduan Mountains, one plot cannot represent all four river corridors. Cross-validation with at least one plot per river or reporting fit statistics for other plots, is recommended.
3. Dadu River’s total simulation length is only 25 km, while others exceed 250 km. Dadu’s frequent limit-reaching likely reflects its short domain rather than high invasion potential. Although noted in Discussion, no standardization is applied in Results. Comparison using proportion (advance/total available length) would be fairer.
Minor Issues
1. The term “lateral treeline shift” is used frequently from the Abstract onward, but the Introduction provides only ecological context without an operational definition. Readers must wait until Section 2.4.3. A brief definition at the end of the Introduction would improve clarity.
2. To elevate the study from a descriptive modelling exercise to a mechanistically grounded analysis, I strongly recommend that the authors incorporate highly relevant empirical studies on critical thresholds for xylogenesis on the Tibetan Plateau, such as Li et al. (2017), Science Bulletin 62: 804–812 and Ren et al. (2018), Annals of Botany 121: 617–624.
3. The caption in Figure 5 states that fitted lines are visual summaries, but the main text (lines 427–428) describes coupling strength qualitatively (“strongest positive coupling in Lancang”, “almost no elevational response in Nu”), which may imply statistical significance. Correlation coefficients or p-values should be provided, or language softened.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-3246-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Linfeng Wei, 23 Sep 2026
Dear Reviewer 2
Thank you for your comments to our paper. Here are our responses and it is also welcomed to check our responses to the other reviewer.
AI tools were used to improve the language and grammatical editing.
Best,
Linfeng, on behalf of all coauthors
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Linfeng Wei, 23 Sep 2026
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