Linking open-ocean polynyas and deep convection in the Southern Ocean across CMIP6 models
Abstract. Open-ocean polynyas (OOPs) and deep convection in the Southern Ocean are critical features of the global climate system, however, their representation and mutual dependence in climate models remain poorly understood. This study investigates the occurrence and coupling of OOPs and deep convection across 49 CMIP6 models using long-term pre-industrial control simulations. Our results reveal that while most models simulate both phenomena, their spatial and temporal co-occurrence varies substantially. Although deep convection is typically associated with surface salinification and heat loss, it does not always result in detectable polynyas. We identify two distinct regimes of OOPs across the ensemble: "deep OOPs", which are directly coupled to deep ocean convection, and "shallow OOPs", which form independently of deep mixing, likely driven by surface forcing or sea-ice divergence. The representation of these regimes is strongly influenced by the choice of ocean model component. These findings highlight the importance of process-based diagnostics in evaluating Southern Ocean overturning and suggest that the connection between surface polynyas and deep water formation is more complex than traditionally assumed in climate models.
Review of  Linking open-ocean polynyas and deep convection in the Southern Ocean across CMIP6 models
This study examines Southern Ocean open-ocean polynyas (OOPs) across CMIP6 models. The study is extensive, analysing 49 models from the CMIP6 piControl ensemble using the final 500 years of data from each model. The authors use a combination of deep convection diagnostics, polynya detection methods, and a standard set of Southern Ocean variables, presenting frequency maps and correlations with sea ice and ocean variables.
The authors find that, while deep convection is associated with salinification and heat loss, it is not always associated with the occurrence of OOPs. This was a particularly interesting result. They identify two distinct types of OOPs within the models, referred to as deep and shallow polynyas, which are associated with different mixing processes and are highly model dependent.
Overall, the manuscript is very well written, with a clear experimental design and results presented in a logical and accessible manner. The science is of high quality, including appropriate statistical analyses, and fits well within the scope of The Cryosphere. The methodology is sound and well justified, acknowledging the wide range of approaches used in the literature for detecting both polynyas and deep convection, while adapting these methods to the availability of variables across CMIP6 models. Additionally, I particularly appreciated the comprehensive assessment of each model group.
The results will be of interest to researchers studying polynyas in either polar region, the mechanisms driving their formation, and their representation across climate models. The manuscript builds upon the currently limited CMIP6 sea ice literature and contributes to the growing body of work assessing polynya formation. With a few very minor corrections, I believe this manuscript will be suitable for publication in The Cryosphere. I therefore recommend minor revisions.
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