Assessing summertime hydrological cycle acceleration through drought indices
Abstract. The rate (or velocity) of the hydrological cycle affects water availability for agriculture, energy production, and planning for droughts or floods. Therefore, acceleration in the velocity of the hydrological cycle is likely to impact multiple hydrological domains and management practices. Previous work has primarily studied hydrological cycle velocity and acceleration through the lens of flux magnitudes and their change. Motivated to expand this definition to characterize temporal coupling between stages in the hydrological cycle, we introduce a novel definition of hydrological cycle velocity and acceleration derived from the concept of drought propagation. We define the hydrological cycle velocity as the response time between the 1-month Standardized Precipitation Index (SPI) and the 1-month Standardized Soil Moisture Index (SSI) and define acceleration as the change in response time between an early time period and a late period. Using gridded reanalysis data over the conterminous United States (CONUS) from 1951–2020, we analyzed the summer period (June, July, August) to minimize the lagging-effects of cold-season processes. Response times exceeded 100 days in southwestern CONUS (indicating a slower hydrological cycle velocity), but were substantially shorter elsewhere, 10–20 days, indicating a faster hydrological cycle velocity. A Random Forest variable importance analysis revealed strong negative associations of response time and mean annual flux magnitudes, with higher precipitation and evaporation associated with shorter response times. Regarding potential acceleration between an earlier (1951–1985) and later (1986–2020) period, 48.47 % of reanalysis grid cells experienced a deceleration (lengthening of response time) of their local summer hydrological cycle, while 39.32 % of grid cells experienced an acceleration (shortening of response time). However, a false detection rate correction found a lack of robust field significance (aFDR=0.05), a finding reinforced by a regional decadal trend analysis. By framing hydrological cycle acceleration in terms of propagation of meteorological anomalies to land surface anomalies, we expand the conceptual basis for diagnosing changes in the hydrological cycle.
This manuscript proposes a new framing of hydrological-cycle acceleration based on the lag that maximizes the correlation between the 30-day Standardized Precipitation Index and the 30-day Standardized Soil Moisture Index. The approach is applied to ERA5-Land over CONUS for 1951-2020. The authors characterize the spatial distribution of this response time, use random forests to examine associated hydroclimatic variables, and compare response times between 1951-1985 and 1986-2020. They find longer response times in the western and southwestern United States, shorter response times in the eastern United States, and no grid cells with statistically significant temporal changes after false-discovery-rate correction.
The manuscript has several strengths. The research question is timely, the distinction between flux intensification and temporal coupling is potentially useful, and the long record and continental-scale application are valuable. The use of spatially blocked cross-validation and multiple-testing correction also strengthens the analysis. The authors also appropriately acknowledge several limitations, such as the occurrence of broad or multiple correlation peaks in the western United States.
However, the central metric has not yet been shown to be a robust measure of hydrological-cycle velocity or acceleration. The maximum-correlation lag is sensitive to the accumulation scale, temporal autocorrelation, switching between competing correlation peaks, precipitation and soil-water storage from earlier seasons, and the structure of ERA5-Land and changes in the underlying observing system. The bootstrap analysis also does not fully account for uncertainty in the selected lag or in both comparison periods. I therefore recommend major revision.
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Liu, Y., Hu, T., Yang, J., & Yu, L. (2026). Understanding meteorological, runoff, and agricultural drought propagation and their influencing factors in an ensemble of multiple datasets. Hydrology and Earth System Sciences, 30(9), 2775-2795.
The results should be framed as spatial associations rather than "drivers" or causal influences. For example, “higher precipitation results in shorter response times” should be revised to “higher precipitation is associated with shorter predicted response times.” The interpretation of permutation importance should also note that importance is assigned to manually selected representatives of correlated clusters and therefore cannot be attributed uniquely to an individual variable. Partial-dependence plots can also be misleading when predictors are strongly correlated because they may average predictions over combinations that are rare or absent in the data.
A baseline comparison using precipitation, aridity, or climate region alone together with residual maps or a leave-one-region-out test would show whether the RF adds information beyond the dominant climatological gradient. Reporting uncertainty across spatial folds and the sensitivity to the blocking and clustering choices would further support the importance rankings.
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