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Technical Note: Reducing age dispersion in in-situ (U-Th)/He dating: How to optimize ablation pit geometries with OptiPit
Abstract. Radiometric dating requires the measurement of related parent and daughter isotopes to produce meaningful ages. The alpha ejection during the decay of uranium and thorium spatially separates the parent and daughter nuclides analysed in (U-Th)/He dating by a few tens of microns within the crystals. In-situ (U-Th)/He dating applies two superimposed laser ablation spots to analyse the liberated parent and daughter nuclides sequentially, assuming that the analysed He is derived from the analysed U and Th. However, computer simulation considering alpha ejection visualizes the helium-source volume around the helium-pit and reveals that in-situ (U-Th)/He dating undermines that assumption. Only a fraction of the parent nuclei that produced the measured volume of helium are probed during analysis. Furthermore, while those parent nuclei contribute equally to the analysed radionuclide budget, their contribution to the helium budget is a complex function depending on the relative location of the alpha emitter to the laser ablation spots, as well as the geometry of the latter. This geometry controls the overdispersion of in-situ (U-Th)/He ages produced by radionuclide zonation, which can be reduced to a minimum by optimizing the geometries. This contribution serves as a guideline on how to minimize age overdispersion produced by the interplay of radionuclide zonation and the geometry of the laser ablation spots and demonstrates how to assess the reliability of in-situ (U-Th)/He ages by optimizing the laser pit geometry.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-2590', Cody L. Colleps, 07 Jul 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-2590', Christoph Glotzbach, 05 Aug 2026
This manuscript addresses an important methodological issue that arises when applying in-situ (U-Th)/He thermochronology. The authors investigate the complex geometric relationship between the helium extraction pit and the parent radionuclide analysis pit, and demonstrate how the geometry of the in-situ He and LA-ICP-MS pits influences the representativeness of the measured age. This is a relevant contribution that will be of interest to researchers applying in-situ thermochronology methods.
Overall, the manuscript is well structured and clearly written. The introduction provides an excellent overview of the motivation for the study and convincingly explains the need for the proposed approach. The modelling framework appears comprehensive and the study has the potential to become a useful reference for future analytical workflows.
My main concern relates to the presentation of the methods. I found the methodology section difficult to follow because it effectively requires the reader to reproduce the modelling step-by-step while reading the manuscript. I recommend moving much of this procedural information to the Supplementary Material and instead focusing the main manuscript on the concepts, consequences, and visualization of the modelling results. A detailed user guide for OptiPit, together with instructions for using the accompanying Excel spreadsheet, would be more appropriate as supplementary material.
I attempted to run OptiPit on a workstation PC, but the estimated computation time exceeded 1000 hours. It is possible that I selected inappropriate settings; however, this highlights the need for a detailed "How-To" guide and example project files that users can load directly into OptiPit. Such documentation would greatly improve the accessibility and reproducibility of the workflow.
The manuscript should also clarify whether the proposed optimization procedure needs to be performed for every individual grain or only once for a given mineral system and analytical setup. Performing these calculations for every grain would be highly time consuming and may not be practical, especially because LA-ICP-MS analyses are typically performed using consistent pit sizes throughout an analytical session.
In the discussion, I believe the interpretation of the modelling results is somewhat overstated. The authors explicitly acknowledge that their modelling does not account for kinetic effects, such as those associated with radiation damage, nor for helium diffusion. Therefore, the statement that symmetric zoning does not affect age determination provided that the He and ICP pits are appropriately selected is not fully supported. Indeed, the subsequent discussion acknowledges these limitations. I recommend revising these conclusions to better reflect the assumptions and limitations of the model.
An important practical aspect that should also be discussed is the difficulty of accurately measuring the volume of laser pits with low surface-area-to-volume ratios. Depending on the technique used for pit-volume determination, deep and narrow pits may not be measured accurately, introducing additional uncertainties that are difficult to quantify. Another methodological consideration that is currently not addressed concerns the effect of differing ICP pit geometries between unknown samples (two overlapping cylinders) and reference materials (simple cylinder). Variations in pit geometry could potentially influence LA-ICP-MS data reduction and calibration. Although I am not aware of previous studies that have explicitly investigated this issue, it has been one of the main reasons why I prefer a nested analytical approach (corresponding to the authors' Geometry A), in which a relatively wide and shallow He pit is followed by a slightly narrower ICP pit drilled within it. Besides minimizing potential calibration differences, this approach also allows radionuclide variations with depth to be quantified. In contrast, the proposed Geometry B would more likely produce a mixed signal when compositional zoning is present.
Overall, I find this to be a valuable methodological contribution that is suitable for publication after revision. Addressing the points above, particularly improving the accessibility of the methods and moderating some of the interpretations, will significantly strengthen the manuscript and increase its usefulness for the broader thermochronology community.
Please find a few additional minor comments…
Detailed comments:
Line 234-238: I had a quick look into the spreadsheet, looks complicated and I am somewhat lost in this part of the manuscript. Please explain in more detail what the user should do to make sure of OptiPit.
Line 243: You mentioned this earlier in the manuscript. It is quite obvious that your LA-ICP-MS pit must be the size of the HePit plus the maximum stopping distance to measure all area that contribute to the measured helium. Maybe you simply say somewhere that the maximum LA-ICP-MS pit size is constained by this assumption and you have tested within that constrain.
Line 277: I would not call it ‘schools of thought’ since there are not yet so many papers published with one or the other approach.
Line 349: I thought that the radius of the He pit in geometry A is 30 microns, and that is limiting the radius of the ICP pit to <30 microns. Same for geometry B with 25 microns He pit, while the best ICP pit is also 25 microns. Maybe you say in the sentence before that you also test cases where geometry A and B will be switching to B and A.
Line 350-351: For the geometry B both the He and ICP pit are essentially the same, therefore it is not sampling around the He pit.
Line 370: Use ‘larger contribution’ instead of ‘bigger share’ if that makes sense here.
Line 462: Have you done additional modelling that proves your statement? I would guess that the age offsets that you mentioned previously will increase with increase radionuclide ratios of >5. In addition in the sentence before you mentioned that you have not considered diffusion and kinetic effects and therefore you cannot strictly saying that accurately dating is possible. This also
Line 501-505: Mention also that the He content is also defining the size of the He pit. Grains with low radionuclide and/or age would require larger pit sizes and going deeper is also limited by the ability to measure precisely the volume of laser pits (which is more accurate in cases the laser pits are wide and flat).
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Figure 5: This figure is partly difficult to understand and does require (at least me) to read the text several times. Part a) and d) are easier to get, but b) and c) are difficult and I wonder if this is important to show and can be shown in an easier way.
Figure 8: It is not clear what exactly is shown in the left panel. My guess it is the top view of the modelling domain. I do not really understand the lower x-axis labelling and what are the half circles? Please at least add more explanation in the figure caption.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-2590-RC2
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OptiPit Software Version 1.1 and source code Hagen Hoemann https://rdms.rd.ruhr-uni-bochum.de/concern/datasets/rb68xh68k?locale=en
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This contribution provides an in-depth assessment of a proposed approach to reduce apparent (U-Th)/He date discrepancy induced by a known, yet under evaluated, shortcoming in laser ablation (U-Th)/He dating—i.e., the requirement to ablate and analyze parent and daughter contributions in two separate analytical sessions. The authors provide a well-written, thorough summary explaining how not only the simple mismatch in helium and U-Th laser ablation pits may impact date disparity, but also how the measured helium from a laser ablation pit reflects a more complex total budget of internally produced (within pit) and externally sourced helium. This paper quantitatively demonstrates (with useful illustrations) how differing double-pit geometries can result in highly variable discrepancies in this parent-daughter measurement imbalance. The authors accompany this manuscript with a moderately user-friendly, Window-based software, OptiPit, that allows users to explore the impact of, and optimize, double-pit geometries for in-situ (U-Th)/He analyses that may be unique for each analyzed grain considering varying analytical limitations controlled by age, parent concentrations, grain size, zonation, thermal history, etc.
I believe the authors’ excellent theoretical demonstration of this phenomenon alone warrants this manuscript worthy of publication in Geochronology. Whereas the OptiPit software is fully functional, decently easy to use, and provides a nice 2D/3D visual aid, I do partly question its overall future utility in light of a few potential issues discussed below. Regardless of its prospective utility, I believe this manuscript and OptiPit will be valuable resources to the community, as they effectively communicate some underappreciated complexities inherit to in-situ (U-Th)/He dating. I believe this manuscript is suitable for publication following minor-to-moderate modifications, and below I provide a few comments and suggestions. I thank the authors for their interesting, meticulous, and well-thought-out manuscript.
MAIN COMMENTS:
LINE-BY-LINE COMMENTS:
LINE 19: Consider rephrasing to “IN PART controls the overdispersion”
LINES 67–68: Unclear what is meant by “production of meaningful He ages impossible in some samples” First, are the authors referring to ‘conventional’ dates, or in situ dates here? Second, I believe ‘impossible’ is bit strong here—datasets with complex, damage induced date-disparity can still provide meaningful information.
LINES 69–77: To me, a huge benefit of in-situ dating missing from this list is the ability to directly measure thermal history-dependent helium diffusive profiles in a grain at varying resolutions.
LINE 277: Replace “chapter” with “section?”
LINE 353: I don’t believe ‘inevitable’ is the proper word here? We should not ever expect a zero mismatch, correct? If so, consider rephrasing to state that a zero mismatch is inherently not possible with the double-pit in situ approach.
REFERENCES:
Ault, A. K., and Flowers, R. M., 2012, Is apatite U–Th zonation information necessary for accurate interpretation of apatite (U–Th)/He thermochronometry data?: Geochimica et Cosmochimica Acta, v. 79, p. 60-78.
Glotzbach, C., and Ehlers, T. A., 2024, Interpreting cooling dates and histories from laser ablation in situ (U–Th–Sm) ∕ He thermochronometry: a modelling perspective: Geochronology, v. 6, no. 4, p. 697-717. 10.5194/gchron-6-697-2024
Maier, A. K., Glotzbach, C., and Falkowski, S., 2026, Analytical and modelling strategies for thermal histories from in situ (U-Th-Sm) ∕ He data of single apatites: Geochronology, v. 8, no. 1, p. 165-189. 10.5194/gchron-8-165-2026