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Seasonal surface melt onset and firn freeze-up across the central Wrangell and St. Elias Mountains
Abstract. High-elevation alpine firn is increasingly influenced by surface melt and meltwater retention, yet the spatial extent and timing of these processes remain poorly quantified. Here we present spatially distributed estimates of seasonal surface melt onset and firn freeze-up across the central Wrangell and St. Elias Mountains using time series C-band Synthetic Aperture Radar data from the Sentinel-1 mission, 2015–2024. Melt onset and freeze-up are identified from characteristic changes in backscatter associated with the presence of liquid water in snow and firn. Seasonal melt is detected across nearly all elevations in the range. Melt onset broadly tracks the seasonal rise of the 0 °C isotherm up to ∼3,000 m a.s.l., while freeze-up shows pronounced delays relative to subfreezing air temperatures at mid-elevations, indicating widespread meltwater retention within the firn. Combining freeze-up timing, air temperature, and elevation, we classify firn water-retention regimes and find that dry firn is confined to the highest elevations, covering only 3 % of our area of interest. These results highlight the influence of meltwater on firn evolution in the Wrangell/St. Elias Mountains and demonstrate the utility of SAR for monitoring alpine glacier melt dynamics in data-sparse regions.
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This study characterizes the melt and refreeze evolution across a portion of the Wrangell and St. Elias mountains. The study offers an interesting method to characterize various zones of dry firn, wet firn, and melt by assessing the variability in the delay of wet snow/firn refreeze (as detected from Sentinel-1 SAR backscatter) compared to the 0˚C isotherm (derived using temperature lapse rates from weather stations across the region). The study is compelling and seamlessly combines remote sensing observations with in-situ observations and insights from models. The paper is also written at a very high quality, was generally easy to follow, and enjoyable to read. However, I have some major reservations about some of the results, particularly the classification of the ablation zone, and limitations associated with the melt detection algorithm.
Main comments
The level of writing of this paper is very high (definitely sufficient for publication). Still, readability would be improved with the removal or vast reduction of acronyms (S1, S1A/B, AOI, VV, VH, SEB, PDD, PR, K/H, ELA), especially for non-technical readers. I would highly recommend writing these out in full. This is ultimately not crucial and up to the discretion of the authors. Note some other acronyms not mentioned that are probably okay to use: SAR, AWS, HOBO, DOY.
The authors claim in the introduction and conclusion to be the first study to assess melt across the region, which is not true. Wells et al. (2026) also used Sentinel-1 SAR backscatter to produce melt onset time series for all glaciers >2 km2 in the region. It may be worth comparing these results in the supplement, which use the same -3 dB threshold from mean winter backscatter but for slightly different data (Wells et al. use cross-polarized SAR, this study uses co-polarized SAR) and slightly different onset elevation determination (Wells et al. use an ‘all melt’ threshold and hypsometric approach per-glacier, this study averages melt onset maps during elevation binning of all pixels in the study domain).
My main concern regards the firn melt zone classification results (as shown in Fig. 7). The accumulation area of the glaciers in this region is roughly 50-55% (Zeller et al., 2025), but this study only maps the ablation area as 12% of the area. In turn, this means that nearly 90% of the glacierized area is some classification of a firn zone, with over 70% being either wet firn, dry to wet firn, or dry firn. The authors need to motivate the physical meaning or interpretation of the transition zones, as the "wet firn to ablation" zone almost certainly contains no firn in reality. For many glaciers in the region, the "wet firn" zone itself is delineated as covering the entire glacier.
This may be the result of processing at the study domain scale, as opposed to per-glacier. As such, melt signals are mixed and aggregated into bins that span different parts of glaciers, especially across the large range of climates (maritime/coastal and continental/interior) and elevations (0 to 5000+ m a.s.l.) within the domain. While this is a major limitation of the study, it may still be okay as long as the authors make it explicitly clear that these results should be interpreted only as a domain-wide estimate and not necessarily indicative of any particular glacier (the authors don’t parse results for specific glaciers, but this could maybe still be explicitly stated). In this case, it also might make sense to remove the map in Fig. 7 and just show the zones in relation to the regional hypsometry to avoid misinterpretation of the results.
My other major concern arises from caution about the melt detection algorithm, particularly over heavy debris cover. Heavy debris can result in that portion of a glacier not exhibiting a clear melt signal. The current algorithm does not detect or identify these pixels as melting, and thus altogether excludes them from the analysis. This is clear from the maps D1-D7, where the terminus of Malaspina glacier, Logan glacier, Chitina glacier, and others (which are heavily debris covered) are never mapped in the melt onset and subsequent maps. The debris covered pixel behavior is also clear in cross-polarized SAR maps on, for example, Chitina glacier (https://alaskasnowlines.streamlit.app/plot_gif?name=Chitina&rgi_id=16307) and Logan glacier (https://alaskasnowlines.streamlit.app/plot_gif?name=Logan&rgi_id=16822), where the backscatter at the debris-covered terminus remains pretty much unchanged throughout time. In the study results, these parts of the glaciers are primarily the regions being mapped as “ablation area” or “wet firn to ablation zone”, even though no melt onset/refreeze interpretations where made over these areas of the glacier to begin with. One way to get around this issue would be to use some sort of “all melt” threshold to account for these lower pixels that are in fact melting but are either debris-covered or generally below the snowline, but this would likely require transitioning to a per-glacier analysis, at least to develop the spatially-distributed melt onset maps.
lastly, in Figure 7, there is an artifact resulting from plotting (hopefully it’s just a cosmetic error!), the DEM, or the mapping algorithm. The glacier areas near the edges of the figure are colored as ablation zones, cutting through other parts of the glaciers in a non-physical way, even in some accumulation areas.
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