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Variability of methane content in bottom waters of 46 African lakes
Abstract. Methane (CH4) accumulates in bottom waters of lakes, however, the extent and drivers of inter-lake variation in bottom-water CH4 concentrations are poorly understood and have been studied mainly in northern lakes. This limits predictions of how bottom-water CH4 concentrations respond to warming and eutrophication in lakes, and how these changes might influence surface-water CH4 concentrations and, consequently, CH4 emissions. We report 168 measurements of paired bottom- and surface-water CH4 concentrations from 46 African lakes spanning a wide range of surface area (SA; 0.02–67,075 km²) and maximum depth (2–180 m). Bottom-water CH4 concentrations ranged from 7 to 5,608,382 nmol L⁻¹, spanning six orders of magnitude, and increased with increasing stratification, quantified from vertical density profiles using potential energy anomaly (PEA) and mixed layer depth (MLD), and inferred from NH₄⁺ concentrations or vertical conductivity gradients. Surface-water CH4 concentrations ranged from 7 to 168,114 nmol L⁻¹ and increased with both bottom-water CH4 concentrations and vertical stratification (positively related to PEA and negatively to MLD). The most strongly stratified lakes exhibited high bottom-water CH4 concentrations, resulting in enhanced vertical transfer of CH4 to surface waters despite lower vertical diffusion coefficients. In addition, these lakes had shallower mixed layers and therefore thinner oxygenated surface layers, likely reducing CH4 removal via methane oxidation. The positive relationship between both bottom- and surface-water CH4 concentrations and chlorophyll-a (Chl-a) has previously been interpreted as reflecting enhanced methanogenesis driven by phytoplankton-derived organic matter delivered to sediments. However, such relationships may be indirect and should be interpreted cautiously, as Chl-a was negatively related to MLD in our dataset, and both bottom- and surface-water CH4 concentrations were also negatively related to MLD. The ratio of surface to bottom CH4 concentrations (surface:bottom CH4 ratio) may indicate the relative increase in surface CH4 in response to increases in bottom CH4 driven by warming and eutrophication. This ratio was negatively related to bottom depth, PEA, and MLD, and positively related to bottom-water O2, indicating that the relative increase in surface-water CH4 with increasing bottom-water CH4 is greater in shallower, less stratified systems than in deeper, more stratified systems. Diffusive CH4 emission rates were highest in shallower, less stratified systems, where the response of surface-water CH4 to increases in bottom-water CH4 is expected to be greatest, as indicated by high surface:bottom CH4 ratios. We further tested whether surface-water CH4 concentrations scale with simple metrics in a dataset including highly stratified, small, and deep crater lakes with elevated hypolimnetic CH4. A multiple linear regression using SA and Chl-a explained ~51 % of the variance and appears suitable for upscaling dissolved CH4 concentrations. This approach could enable large-scale extrapolation of diffusive CH4 emissions using spatial datasets for SA and remotely sensed Chl-a.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1976', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 Apr 2026 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1976', Anonymous Referee #2, 22 May 2026
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This manuscript by Borges et al. describes patterns of methane concentrations in the surface and bottom waters of 46 African lakes. The authors observed substantial variability in bottom-water methane concentrations among lakes, and they explain these differences using linear regressions with metrics related to lake morphometry, stratification, and chlorophyll-a.
This dataset and analysis addresses an important gap in our understanding of greenhouse gas concentrations in lakes. Data for bottom-water gas concentrations are needed to develop, calibrate, and improve models of greenhouse gas emission from lakes, and African lakes are underrepresented in existing greenhouse gas concentration datasets. However, I have several concerns described below, primarily regarding the statistical analysis of these data. With revision, this analysis could make important contributions to advancing our understanding of methane cycling in lakes.
Major comments:
One of the strengths of this dataset is that it contains lakes with widely varying size and shape. However, the authors bin the lakes into two size classes (small and large) for most analysis, which does not fully take advantage of this diversity of lakes. For analyses in Figure 4, it would be easy to switch to a regression approach, treating lake size as a continuous variable. In analyses of greenhouse gas concentrations (e.g., Figure 5, 6, 8, 9), lake size could be added as a continuous variable using a multiple regression approach, which the authors already do in one regression (Table 1). Alternatively, or in addition, it may be useful to analyze the relationship between gas concentrations and a metric such as the dynamic ratio, which integrates both lake depth and surface area rather than treating these two variables separately.
Most lakes were sampled multiple times, but the authors do not currently account for repeated measurements in their analysis. Using mixed effect models with a random effect for lake ID would better address these relationships. More broadly, bottom-water methane concentrations are expected to vary dramatically throughout the year due to changes in stratification, biogeochemical processing, and other factors. The manuscript is currently lacking any discussion or analysis of intraannual variability in gas concentrations between the rainy and dry period sampling.
The authors calculate diffusive methane fluxes using surface concentrations and monthly mean wind speeds sourced from WorldClim. However, wind speeds vary substantially across fine spatial and temporal gradients, so these are likely very poor estimates of the actual wind speed at the time of sampling, and diffusive flux estimates are highly sensitive to k600. I do not think diffusive fluxes are necessary in this manuscript, which is primarily focused on bottom-water gas concentrations, and I would recommend removing this analysis.
Minor comments, by line:
Lines 45-47: I am confused by this sentence—is this a separate dataset?
Line 48: An R2 of 0.51 is still fairly low, and it is not clear what metric the authors are using to conclude that this linear regression “appears suitable for upscaling dissolved CH4 concentrations”
Lines 61-63, and throughout: Rabaey et al. 2026 may be a useful reference for contextualizing the concentrations in this study
- Rabaey, J. S., Lewis, A. S. L., Attermeyer, K., Aurich, P., Bansal, S., Bartosiewicz, M., et al. (2026). Depth-resolved carbon dioxide and methane concentrations in 522 lakes, ponds, and reservoirs worldwide. Scientific Data, 13(1), 483. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41597-026-06751-0
Line 139: This sentence is missing the word “water” in “surface water”
Lines 170–181: I am not convinced that the use of 0.2 ºC as a threshold for thermal stratification is appropriate. Density gradients would be a more robust way of classifying whether lakes were stratified (e.g., the threshold of 0.1 kg/m3, as the authors reference on line 77). That tropical lakes tend to have weaker vertical density gradients (lines 179-181) does not justify the use of a different threshold for stratification in these systems. At a minimum, it would be helpful to have a figure illustrating the relationship between thermal gradients and oxygen gradients in the supplemental information to justify this choice of threshold.
Line 218-219: Why not use secchi depth directly? Also, it would be helpful for readers if this relationship was restated here rather than having to refer to Morana et al. (2022).
Line 223: Was the distribution normal after log-transformation?
Line 231: I would not consider MLD to be a metric of stratification strength. Please explain or rephrase.
Line 231 and throughout: I am not convinced that PEA is the relevant metric of thermal stratification here. PEA describes the energy required to mix the entire water column, but gases could exchange between surface and bottom waters without mixing the entire water column. Buoyancy frequency at the thermocline might be more relevant here?
Line 239: It is not clear what is meant by “at the level of individual measurements”
Lines 242-244: Again, this is complicated by the use of PEA, which is likely to be larger in deeper lakes. Is the same true for surface-bottom density differences or buoyancy frequency at the thermocline? More broadly it would also be helpful to have an explanation of why these lakes would show contrasting patterns compared to northern lakes.
Line 255: I agree that this is generally true, but it contrasts with the point the authors made earlier about surface area and maximum depth being poorly correlated in this dataset (e.g., Figure 2).
256: Please clarify that these are negative correlations.
Lines 286-288: This sentence implies that anoxia is simply an indicator of stratification, but methane is not expected to accumulate even under strongly-stratified conditions until oxygen levels approach anoxia (thereby increasing NH4 and conductivity).
Line 284: How was anoxia defined in this study?
Line 292: I would assume that this is due to anoxia in small lakes, which in turn leads to PO43- release from sediments.
Lines 303-308: This does not necessarily indicate an indirect relationship. Chlorophyll-a is temporally variable and an imperfect proxy for phytoplankton biomass. Even if this relationship does not show up across lakes, there is a direct mechanistic connection between autochthonous productivity and methanogenesis (as the authors describe in the introduction).
Lines 309-321: This paragraph is great. Very interesting, and highlights the importance of the work well.
Line 321: What specific “functional and climatic differences”?
Line 327-329: This relationship could also result from many other processes including oxic methanogenesis and inputs of CH4 from bottom waters
Lines 353-356: I am not clear on what subset of lakes was used for this analysis
Lines 361-366: This is a useful point that could be made more forcefully- the empirical relationships developed elsewhere do not hold for African crater lakes
Line 406: Is there a reason you do not count Kraemer et al. 2022 here?
- Kraemer, B. M., Kakouei, K., Munteanu, C., Thayne, M. W., & Adrian, R. (2022). Worldwide moderate-resolution mapping of lake surface chl-a reveals variable responses to global change (1997–2020). PLOS Water, 1(10), e0000051. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pwat.0000051
Line 448: Data are not currently available- access is restricted
Figure 3: Panels d and h do not add much additional information to this figure, and sample sizes are very different between the two classes. I recommend treating lake size as a continuous variable throughout.
Figure 4: This figure would be much more informative if lake size was treated as a continuous variable rather than binning the data into size classes (i.e., creating scatterplots with regression lines rather than boxplots)
Figure 6: Are these all fundamentally oxygen relationships?
Figure 7: I do not think this figure is currently helpful. It is not clear where the numbers come from (e.g., how they were calculated using the data in this study, or which numbers come from Holgerson et al.). “Very stratified” is also unclear and subjective.
I hope these comments are helpful. This is a great dataset and has the potential to be an impactful contribution.
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1976', Anonymous Referee #3, 22 May 2026
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The authors present an impressive dataset covering >40 lakes spanning a wide range of environmental conditions in a region where methane concentrations remain poorly constrained. The potential value of this dataset is however reduced by the relatively superficial analysis. The predictors used in the numerous linear regression relationships appear to have been selected rather arbitrarily, and the causal relationships are often unclear. Proposed mechanisms are repeatedly described as “likely,” while the analysis rarely goes beyond simple linear regressions, some of which are statistically insignificant. In several cases, regressions are constructed between variables that are not independent a priori, such as mixed-layer depth and stratification strength.
The studied lakes differ by orders of magnitude in both environmental characteristics and methane concentrations, yet the analysis relies on a simple binary classification into “shallow” and “deep” lakes. Could the lakes instead be grouped into more meaningful categories, either based on their environmental characteristics or using unsupervised statistical clustering? I noticed a similar remark by another reviewer and fully agree with it. In general, the dataset appears to offer possibilities for a substantially more sophisticated analysis than a collection of linear regressions applied to the entire lake ensemble. A thorough reconsideration of the analytical framework is therefore strongly recommended, ideally based on a more process-oriented selection of predictive variables.
The presentation of the results is overloaded with repetitive figures and difficult-to-read tables (many of which moved to the Supplementary). A more synthetic and concise presentation would substantially improve readability.
The manuscript itself is difficult to follow. It contains too many unnecessary abbreviations and lacks a clear structure. A stricter separation between the Results and Discussion sections is strongly recommended and would help the reader follow the main message. Statements containing the word “likely” should generally be avoided outside the Discussion section.
The attempt to quantify the vertical methane fluxes based on rough estimates of Kz and climatic data on wind is highly uncertain and, in my opinion, could be omitted altogether. Here I also agree with the concerns raised by the previous referee.
Specific remarks:
- 90-92 “In stratified lakes, MOX at the pycnocline and in the mixed layer reduces surface-water CH4, whereas in well-mixed systems, CH4 concentrations tend to be vertically homogeneous.” What is meant here? Does MOX not reduce concentrations in well-mixed lakes? The statement should be clarified. Cf. Lines 281-283.
- 139 Typo: Two liters of surface were collected for ancillary measurements. ‘Water’ is missing.
-122-123 What was the vertical resolution of the YSI EXO-II profiling?
- Line 189-203 (Eqs. 2-4): How the thickness of the thermocline was determined (see also the comment on Lines 122-123)? The concentration difference between the surface and 1 m above the lake bottom is not representative for the concentration jump at the thermocline unless the thermocline is very close to the bottom because the methane content quickly decreases with height due to oxidation and reduced vertical transport due to stratification. The approximation Kz = 3x10-10(N2)-1 suggested by Katzev et al. (2007), when reformulated in terms of the Osborn (1980) expression for diapycnal mixing, means that the TKE dissipation rate ε = 1.5e-9 m2s-3, which is comparably low. Overall, its application to the variety of very contrasting lakes and different seasons is questionable. Note that PEA (Eq. 1) and Kz (Eq. 2) are inherently connected making the correlation in Fig. S6c weakly informative. The thermocline flux estimates are uncertain and better be removed completely.
-Line 235 “MEL normalized by Zmax explained more variance of PEA (r2=0.53, Fig. 3g) than MEL alone (r2=0.25, Fig. 3e)”: MEL/Zmax is a measure of the lake aspect ratio. Logically, deeper lakes with a shorter fetch are stronger stratified. Is Zmax the same as h in Eq. 1?
- 241: “MLD decreased in more strongly stratified lakes, as indicated by its negative relationship with PEA (Fig. S3b).” The statement is confusing. A thinner MLD means a stronger stratification, so the casualty is not clear here. To reduce the hidden correlation between MLD and stratification, PEA can be replaced by a more robust quantity, like the bottom-surface difference of density (temperature).
- 371-373 “To try accounting for intra-lake depth effects in addition to inter-lake SA effects, we tested the relation between surface-water CH4 concentration and SA:bottom-depth that was significant but described less variance (r2=0.420) than SA alone (r2=0.470)”. What kind of intra-lake effects is meant here? The ratio of surface area to lake depth is more or less the same as the characteristic lake length (fetch).
- 383 “MLD and PEA cannot be used as predictors for upscaling purposes as they are not readily available from global or regional spatial datasets.” The statement sounds strange. There are a number of methods and models for estimation of lake stratification from atmospheric forcing with different degrees of certainty, and the atmospheric data are available globally. The lake sector of ISIMIP mentioned in Section 2.2 is a good reference for that.
- 384-387 “The fact that MEL explained more variance (r2=0.483) than SA (r2=0.470) could be linked to the role of stratification/mixing in regulating surface CH4 concentrations. MEL is a better predictor than SA of fetch that determines the vertical mixing and MLD in lakes at equivalent wind speed”. The difference in correlation with SA and MEL is too small for such a conclusion. Probably, the difference will vanish completely if the square root of the surface area (mean fetch) is used as a predictor instead of SA.
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Comments to “Variability of methane content in bottom waters of 46 African lakes” by Borges et al.
General comments
This manuscript presents an extensive dataset of dissolved CH4 in surface and bottom waters in African lakes. In combination with measurements of various other biogeochemical parameters, the authors identify vertical stratification strength as a dominant driver of CH4 concentrations using a regression analysis. The assessment of African lakes is especially valuable, since these lakes are underrepresented in the existing literature. The manuscript is well structured and presents the results in a clear manner.
However, there are some inconsistencies regarding the log-transformation that need to be addressed before publication and an improved statistical analysis could strengthen the interpretation of the data. Overall, my concerns can be easily resolved by a revision of the manuscript.
Specific comments
Technical corrections
References
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Patel, L., Singh, R., & Thottathil, S. D. (2024). Contribution of photosynthesis-driven oxic methane production to the methane cycling of a tropical river network. ACS ES&T Water, 4(7), 2836-2847.