Automated Analysis of Ripple-Scale Gravity Wave Structures in the Mesosphere Using Convolutional Neural Networks
Abstract. All-sky OH airglow imaging provides two-dimensional observations of mesospheric gravity wave structure near ~87 km altitude. Ripple-scale instability signatures, characterized by 5–15 km horizontal wavelengths and short lifetimes, are particularly difficult to identify consistently using manual inspection. In this study, we develop a reproducible, automated detection framework based on a squeeze-and-excitation convolutional neural network (SE-CNN) trained on 41 x 41 pixel image patches, to identify ripple-scale structures in 512 × 512 pixel all-sky airglow images acquired at Yucca Ridge Field Station (40.7o N, 104.9o W). The time-differenced images are normalized using a robust median-absolute-deviation (MAD) scaling procedure to mitigate star contamination and background variability. The model is trained and validated on manually annotated ripple and non-ripple patches, then evaluated using independent test subsets. The automated detection is performed using a sliding-window approach with spatial and temporal clustering criteria for event definition. At the patch level, the classifier achieves 92% F1-score with high precision and recall. At the event level, automated detections recover approximately 90% of manually identified ripple events while identifying additional low-amplitude occurrences. Validated against previous manual identification study, the automated detection catalog enables objective quantification of ripple occurrence frequency, seasonal modulation, and lifetime distributions. By emphasizing methodological transparency, calibration considerations, and validation metrics, this framework establishes a scalable measurement technique for systematic detection of mesospheric instability signatures in long-term airglow image archives.
This manuscript addresses the application of a convolutional neural network for the identification of ripples in OH airglow all-sky images. This is an up-to-date subject that is relevant to AMT. The introduced method is very interesting and the manuscript is clearly structured. I recommend publication once some revisions have been made.
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This manuscript is intended for publication in AMT. The focus of AMT is on new measurements, methods/algorithms, etc. The manuscript's innovative aspect is its use of a machine learning approach to derive small-scale wave structures, also known as ripples, from OH airglow measurements. This means that the focus is on the algorithm. It would be helpful for readers and other airglow scientists operating similar instruments who might want to apply this or a similar approach, if the algorithm was described in more detail and in an easier-to-follow way.
Even though the focus is on the algorithm and the results do not provide any more information than has already been extracted manually, the discussion could be improved. There is no comparison with other publications, and statements are not supported by citations. Consequently, readers may get the impression that the discussion was put together rather hastily. A similar impression is given by the results section. Figure 4 and 5 are described but not referenced in the text. Figure 6 is not described at all (or I was not able to attribute the description to the figure), and in the case of figure 7, it seems that a different figure is described or that information are lacking in the figure.
Finally, for a long time, ripple structures have been interpreted as being part of the gravity wave breaking process. Li et al. (2017) demonstrated that these small-scale wave structures can also be secondary waves. These authors used not only airglow images, but also additional measurements. As these are not available at most airglow measurement sites, it is not possible, as far as I am aware, to discriminate between instability features and secondary gravity waves based on the horizontal wavelength alone. The manuscript neglects the possibility of small-scale waves being secondary waves. It would be worth mentioning this.
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