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Empirical evidence of overestimated Ku-band sea ice radar freeboards in satellite altimetry
Abstract. Pan-Arctic sea ice thickness estimates are routinely produced from Ku-band radar altimetry observations. State-of-the-art waveform retracking algorithms rely on the uncertain assumption that Ku-band radar waves penetrate through the snow and that the dominant return originates from surface scattering at the snow/ice interface. However, growing evidence suggests that Ku-band radar altimetry freeboards may not always accurately track this elevation. We investigate this question by analyzing the evolution of spaceborne radar and laser freeboards over immobile regions of landfast first-year ice (FYI) and multi-year ice (MYI) off Greenland's coast from mid-winter to mid-summer 2022. Our results suggest that the radar freeboards over FYI trace the snow/ice interface during most of the cold season (up to mid-May, at this location), providing empirical support for the validity of the assumption of full snow penetration at Ku-band frequency. Over MYI, the retracked heights correspond to locations well below the air/snow interface most of the time, at least 60 % deep in the snow, but the exact depth could not be reliably assessed. However, these data also provide evidence for a positive bias in Ku-band radar freeboards during short intervals throughout the winter and the melt season, for both ice types. In particular, our results suggest that, during winter, the Ku-band radar freeboards tend to be biased high: i) for ice with a saline snow cover during a warming event (brine volume>1 %), and ii) during and immediately after strong snowfall events. Winter warming events are often accompanied by snowfall, leading to a cumulative bias for the areas with saline snow – i.e. most FYI in the Arctic. In the period of snow melt onset in May/June, biased radar freeboards appear to be related to saline snow only, but biases are on average larger (up to 10 cm) than during the winter period (under 4 cm). Though our results indicate a positive bias in satellite radar freeboards under specific snow conditions, periods of biased freeboard are short-term during the winter – in total accounting for approximately 15 % of the time. Our findings therefore generally support the assumption of full snow penetration for Ku-band sea ice thickness and dual-altimetry snow depth retrievals during winter, such as planned for the Copernicus Polar Ice and Snow Topography Altimeter (CRISTAL) mission.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1662', Anonymous Referee #1, 07 May 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1662', Anonymous Referee #2, 07 Jun 2026
[Synopsis and recommendation]
This manuscript presents an empirical analysis of Ku-band radar and laser altimeter freeboards over immobile landfast first-year ice and multi-year ice off northeast Greenland. By exploiting the fast-ice condition, the authors are able to follow approximately the same sea-ice areas from ice formation through winter and into the melt season. This is a valuable and novel observational framework, and the topic is highly relevant for The Cryosphere.Overall, I find the study interesting and potentially important. However, I think several key interpretations need to be better qualified. In particular, the manuscript often interprets variations in retracked Ku-band freeboard as evidence for changes in the radar scattering horizon, but the retrieved freeboards are also affected by retracker behavior and processing choices. The manuscript would be strengthened by more clearly separating these two effects, or at least by explicitly acknowledging where they cannot be separated. I therefore recommend publication after major revision.
[General comments]
This is a very good and novel idea: obtaining time series of altimeter observations over the same ice floes by taking advantage of non-drifting fast ice. Our community needs more studies of this kind, and the approach is well suited to investigating the temporal behavior of laser and radar freeboards.My main concern is that the interpretation currently mixes two different sources of variability: first, deviations between the assumed Ku-band radiative process and the actual scattering process in the snow–ice system; and second, limitations or biases of the retracking algorithm itself. Much of the analysis is based on retracked radar freeboard, which is affected by both. A positive bias in retrieved freeboard can arise not only because the relative contributions of air/snow, snow-volume, and snow/ice scattering change, but also because of how the LARM retracker handles fixed or constrained model parameters and the optimization procedure. Please discuss this coupled issue more explicitly throughout the manuscript.
Related to this point, many previous studies used different retracking algorithms, which makes it difficult to synthesize earlier findings into a single physical interpretation. If possible, I recommend that the authors provide information on the retracker used in the studies cited in the Introduction, for example TFMRA50, TFMRA70, LARM, or other approaches. This would help readers understand whether apparent differences among studies reflect physical snow/radar interactions, retracker dependence, or both.
I also wonder whether any time evolution of ice freeboard from in situ observations is available. It would be very helpful to verify whether the suspicious increases in radar freeboard are actually unphysical, rather than real changes in the ice/snow system. A reliable reference is critical when using terms such as “overestimation” and “underestimation.” For example, if SIMBA-derived snow depth and ice thickness are available, they might be converted into freeboard using assumed snow, ice, and seawater densities. Even if such a comparison is limited to MYI or only part of the season, it would provide useful context.
Finally, regarding objective 3, I found it difficult to see how the stated hypotheses were directly tested. The analysis is persuasive in places, but it is mostly observational and interpretive rather than a controlled test. Since LARM is based on a physics-based waveform simulator, the authors could consider adding a controlled numerical experiment. For example, they could define a reference snow–ice scene representing the physical conditions that they argue cause positive radar-freeboard bias, simulate the corresponding waveforms, and then retrack those waveforms under the usual cold, non-saline, snow/ice-interface-dominated assumption. Comparing the retracked radar freeboard with the known ideal radar freeboard would provide a more quantitative test of the proposed mechanism.
[Specific comments]
Line 66: “Landy et al.” appears to be missing the year.Lines 68–70: The manuscript states that only a few studies report satellite-based empirical observations of biases between retracked radar freeboards and the expected snow/ice interface. Armitage and Ridout (2015) and Shi et al. (2024, especially Sect. 5.1) also address closely related issues. Please consider citing these studies.
Line 381: Similar to Jutila et al. (2022), Shi et al. (2023) reanalyzed the SEVER expedition dataset, which was the basis of the widely used two-density approach of Alexandrov et al. (2010), and found that MYI density may be closer to FYI density than commonly assumed. Please consider citing this study if relevant.
Figure 6: It is somewhat difficult to understand the distinction between relative and absolute time. Please clarify this in the caption and/or main text.
Line 623: “For both ice types and during most of the winter, the time series suggests that the retracked heights at Ku-band frequency correspond to locations well below the air/snow interface, and likely close to the snow/ice interface.” What are the clearest pieces of evidence supporting the phrase “likely close to the snow/ice interface”? Please make this reasoning more explicit.
Line 647: “Zhu et al., 2917” should be “Zhu et al., 2024.”?
Lines 649–653: As far as I understand, LARM optimizes an ice-surface roughness parameter during retracking. Does this mean that the roughness effect associated with frost flowers is not fully represented by the LARM waveform model? Please clarify whether such frost-flower-related effects can be absorbed by the LARM roughness optimization, or whether they could still lead to a positive bias in the retracked radar freeboard.
Line 701: “Landy et al.” is missing the year.
Line 710: “Khvorostovsky et al.” is missing the year.
Lines 744–745: The manuscript states that the radar-freeboard increase is temporary. Which specific results support this? Please refer to the relevant time series or quantify the duration more clearly.
Lines 752–753: Is the relevant supporting figure Fig. B2? Please cite it explicitly in the text.
Line 807: “Landy et al.” is missing the year.
Conclusions: Where do the values of 85 % and 60 % come from, and how were they evaluated? Please explain this more clearly in the Results or Discussion before using these numbers in the Conclusions.
Line 833: The phrase “short-term periods with heightened radar freeboards” needs clearer definition. Short-term relative to what timescale, and heightened compared to which reference level?
Line 854: “Kern et al. 2235” should be corrected.
[References]
Armitage, T. W. K. and Ridout, A. L. (2015), https://doi.org/10.1002/2015GL064823Shi et al. (2023), https://doi.org/10.1109/TGRS.2023.3265274
Shi et al. (2024), https://doi.org/10.1029/2024EA003715
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-1662-RC2
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Review Taelman et al., (2026) “Empirical Evidence of overestimated Ku-Band sea ice radar freeboards in satellite altimetry”
This manuscript makes an important and timely contribution to the ongoing debate surrounding the validity of the snow-penetration assumption in Ku-band satellite radar altimetry. By analyzing the temporal evolution of spaceborne laser (ICESat-2) and radar (CryoSat-2, Sentinel-3) freeboards over immobile landfast first-year ice (FYI) and multi-year ice (MYI) off the Greenland coast, Taelman et al. provide one of the first empirical, multi-sensor, in situ–supported assessments of when and under what conditions Ku-band freeboards become positively biased. The paper is carefully structured, the literature review is comprehensive, and the combination of field measurements with satellite time series represents a genuinely novel methodological approach. The finding that radar freeboard over FYI generally tracks the snow–ice interface during cold-season conditions; while exhibiting positive biases under saline snow or snowfall events - is both substantive and well-supported by the data. The implications for the Copernicus CRISTAL mission are clearly articulated and add strong relevance to the work.
That said, several methodological choices require additional justification, and a number of analytical gaps need to be addressed before the manuscript is ready for publication in The Cryosphere. The major concerns center on: (1) the treatment of multi-sensor sampling differences in the time series analysis; (2) the basis for the 100 km ATL10 lead tie-point accumulation distance; (3) the representation of snow depth uncertainty from LaKu; and (4) several insufficiently substantiated concluding statements. These are detailed below:
Specific Comments: