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Organic matter composition and origin differ between restored and natural UK saltmarshes up to 100 years after the breach
Abstract. Atmospheric carbon dioxide uptake by restored saltmarshes can be converted to carbon credits that are sold to offset emissions and provide funding for restoration. While carbon stocks in restored marshes were found to reach equivalence with natural sites, the shares of autochthonous and allochthonous carbon sources entering these marshes are less well known. This question has consequences for carbon crediting because only the former can be attributed to the restoration and legitimately included. To determine if differences do exist, the conventional tools for determining organic matter source – elemental, stable isotope and thermogravimetric analyses – were applied to sediments from four restored saltmarshes of different ages. Comparisons were then made with existing data from nearby natural marshes. Breach depth horizons in cores were successfully identified using foraminifera, unicellular marine protists. The C/N-ratio was persistently lower in restored saltmarshes compared with natural counterparts even one hundred years after the creation of a breach. Additionally, δ13C signals indicated a mixture of organic matter sources to the restored sites and there was often a higher proportion, based upon thermal sensitivity, of recalcitrant material in the organic matter of the restored marshes. Together, these results indicated that a higher proportion of allochthonous organic matter that had undergone the processes of decomposition in an external setting, was entering these restored marshes. Understanding the composition of the organic matter in restored marsh sediment will allow more useful and constructive climate change mitigation methods to be developed.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-1559', Cathilyn McIntosh & Craig Smeaton (co-review team), 01 May 2026 reply
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Organic matter composition and origin differ between restored and natural UK saltmarshes up to 100 years after the breachI found this manuscript very interesting and enjoyable to read. The authors have clearly put a great deal of effort into data collection and interpretation, and the study addresses an important topic for understanding organic matter composition differences between natural and restored saltmarshes. It also has clear relevance for evaluating the use of restored sites in carbon credit systems. I have three main overarching comments:
- I am not fully convinced that foraminifera alone provide a robust proxy for determining breach depth at Brancaster West. The inferred depth appears inconsistent with other lines of evidence presented in the manuscript and is notably different from a similar-aged site (Fingringhoe Wick). This raises questions about whether additional proxies or corroborating evidence are needed to strengthen the interpretation of breach depth.
- I agree with the previous reviewer that the discussion would benefit from restructuring. At present, it reads somewhat sequentially, following the order of analyses, which makes it feel closer to a thesis-style presentation. A clearer narrative focus, potentially structured by site and then compared across key gradients such as age since restoration, elevation, or vegetation, would help emphasise the broader story rather than individual analyses.
- Coring locations should be described in greater detail in the study area section, particularly with respect to marsh zone and spatial context within each site, as these are important for interpreting differences between cores used throughout the analyses.
Detailed comments:
50-53: Consider mentioning high productivity here in combination with regular tidal inundation producing waterlogged conditions.
131-132: This sentence (“When measuring the biogeochemical variables…”) seems out of place in the introduction.
137: More justification is needed for the selection of sampling locations within each site. It would also be helpful to describe the marsh zone of each coring location, particularly for the wide cores that are used for comparison throughout the study.
246: Why was the <50 cm threshold chosen? Please provide supporting references if available.
259: Provide manufacturer details for isopropanol for reproducibility.
266: Kemp et al. (2020) could be cited earlier when first mentioning the 50-test threshold.
285, 287: Provide acid concentrations and manufacturer details for reproducibility.
294: Please specify the version of R used.
311: Provide manufacturer details for sulphurous acid. Also, for consistency, consider using either chemical names or compositions throughout.
310-317: Sulphurous acid treatment may also remove total nitrogen, potentially affecting CN ratios. This should be acknowledged as a methodological limitation.
316, 323: Please specify whether certified reference materials or standards were used for QA/QC.
358: Add (Fig. 2b) at the end of the sentence. Also ensure consistent notation (e.g., Lead-210 vs 210Pb).
366: In Fig. 2, consider adding y-axis values for panels c and d for consistency.
382: I am not fully convinced that foraminifera alone are sufficient to determine breach depth. This interpretation may benefit from stronger corroboration with additional evidence, as suggested later in the manuscript.
490-491: Could the lower values observed here be related to a shallower breach depth than suggested by foraminifera?
507: Table 1 may be better placed in the supplementary material, with p-values reported in the text.
534: In Figure 6, the overlap in error bars between potential sources should be acknowledged when interpreting results.
576-578: Could these differences be related to elevation and/or vegetation?
585: The discussion would benefit from reorganisation. A site-based structure, followed by cross-site comparison using key drivers (e.g., age, elevation, vegetation), may help improve narrative clarity. The current structure follows analyses too closely and the order of sites differs from the Results section, which affects readability.
589-591: Were cores within each site collected across different marsh zones or environmental gradients (e.g., distance from creek or breach point)? Were vegetation differences considered?
610-612: Coring locations should be described in more detail in the study area.
612-616: These sentences appear contradictory regarding sediment accretion rates between the two cores.
655-657: Consider whether this applies to more than just older sites.
658-659: This method may be more effective when used in combination with other proxies.
663-665: Again, more detailed description of coring sites would strengthen interpretation.
682-685: Carbon crediting is mentioned but not extensively discussed. A dedicated section or more explicit discussion of implications and limitations may improve clarity.
700-701: This is an interesting result and could be discussed in more depth.
711-712: It would be helpful to compare these values directly with thresholds cited for recently deposited marine OM.
713-717: Could differences in methodology (e.g., TN vs acidified N measurements) explain discrepancies with previous studies? Differences in vegetation between restored and natural sites may also be relevant.
734-736: This may suggest a shallower breach depth at Brancaster West.
757-759: This provides further indication that breach depth may be shallower than inferred from foraminifera alone.
764: Figure S1 appears important and could potentially be moved to the main text or combined with Fig. 7.
775-776: A comparison of site age here would be useful.
782: These findings are interesting and could be further expanded.
793: If other sites are organogenic, this should be described in the study site section for clarity.
796-800: This justification would fit better in the introduction.
813-815: Carbon crediting is mentioned but not fully developed in the discussion. Given its importance, a dedicated section may be beneficial.
823-830: A limitations section would strengthen the manuscript, particularly regarding the use of foraminifera as a standalone proxy.
Grammar:
444: Change “expect” to “except”
542: Change “expect” to “except”I hope these comments help improve the manuscript. It is already a very interesting and important piece of work, and with some restructuring and additional clarification, I believe it will make an excellent final publication.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2026-1559-RC2
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Restored UK Saltmarshes Catrina Gore https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.31812925
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Review: Organic matter composition and origin differ between restored and natural UK saltmarshes up to 100 years after the breach
Thank you for the opportunity to review this submission. The paper “Organic matter composition and origin differ between restored and natural UK saltmarshes up to 100 years after the breach” aims to both identify methods for dating in extremely heterogenous environments as well as describe OC content/stocks, provenance, and thermal stability in restored saltmarshes. This manuscript begins by identifying a need for better understanding of OC dynamics in MR sites due to claims of OC additionality in C crediting schemes and policies. This paper highlights the need to take a multiple site approach due to the extreme variability across MR sites.
This manuscript exhibits several notable strengths, reflecting a high level of care in study design and analysis. While situated within an established body of work–comparing MR and natural saltmarshes–this manuscript provides considerable advances within the current literature by synthesizing data across multiple MR sites. This is a timely contribution considering the increasing pressures to include costal saltmarshes and restoration areas in GHG reporting inventories and C crediting schemes.
To provide the most useful feedback for this manuscript, I have listed my four most overarching critiques followed by line-by- line comments. I have not spent considerable time regarding grammar, spelling, or errors within the references.
Abstract:
33-35: I think a more cautious approach would be to state that the system is just storing more allochthonous C. Stating “…allochthonous organic matter that had undergone the processes of decomposition in an external setting…” assumes that the incoming allochthonous OC was originally labile and the refractory OC observed within the marsh is the product of prior degradation of that labile pool, rather than being refractory at the point of input. Observing a higher proportion of refractory OC does not, on its own, demonstrate a degradation pathway, only a storage outcome.
Introduction:
102-103: Perhaps this should read “relative proportions” or “fractions”, as TGA alone does not provide absolute quantities.
105-106: The definitions of labile and recalcitrant organic matter could be framed more carefully. As written, the statement implies that molecular complexity alone governs lability, whereas molecular structure does not necessarily control long‑term decomposition or persistence of OM (Schmidt et al. 2011). In the context of TGA, lower‑temperature mass loss reflects thermally sensitive compounds that are operationally classified as “labile.” Clarifying that these fractions represent thermal stability and prefacing that compounds are “potentially more easily degradable” would differentiate this from biogeochemical lability and would improve conceptual clarity.
123: See main critique number two above regarding novelty.
124-135: The overarching goals for the foraminiferal dating where quite clearly stated. I think a clear statement regarding the goals for biogeochemical analyses is also required due to the vast number of indices and measurements taken within this category. I think this will help guide the direction of the discussion better as well as help clarify the aims to the reader. The addition of the expected outcomes or hypotheses would also add clarity.
Study Sites:
141-143: This sentence could be re-written for clarity; I am not entirely clear on the main message here.
Figure 1: The grey pinpoints are difficult to see; another color, shade, or size could make this easier to see.
203-204: Because this site receives tidal flow via piped culverts are there additional factors here not captured by the study that would make this site less comparable to the other sites? I think this needs justification.
Methodology:
247-248: It says three wide diameter cores were taken but the map shows only two. Is this a typo?
265-268: Is there justification for selecting to a minimum of 50 individuals as a benchmark?
255-274: Was there a systematic way for identifying breach depth using foraminifera (i.e. count cut off, point break changes? etc...).
333-340: This section could benefit from a few points of clarity. While the Introduction and Discussion emphasise OC additionality, this section appears to indicate that OC stocks are calculated across the entire core. It is not clear under which circumstances the full core is used for stock calculations versus only post‑restoration sediments. In addition, further clarification would be helpful regarding what is meant by assessments being conducted on a “case‑by‑case basis.”
Results:
The Results section does not report DBD values. Please include these data as it provides transparency regarding stock calculations and chronology estimates.
384-468: The foraminiferal results section could be streamlined, particularly if the primary purpose of the paper is to delineate OM/OC additionality in MR sites. Furthermore, I think highlighting why using diversity indices are important could clarify what ecological patterns you are examining.
Figure 3 caption: It is not particularly mentioned how the margins for breach depth were chosen using foraminifera profiles. Also, it does not mention if the shaded regions and light blue line for Aldboro point represent error (standard deviation?).
Figure 4: Where possible, using consistent x‑axis scales for the same measurements would improve comparability across sites and make the figure easier to interpret. It may also be helpful to briefly remind the reader of the meaning and significance of the blue shaded regions (see comment on Fig. 3 caption).
Figure 6: This figure contains a large amount of information and is somewhat difficult to interpret in its current form. As there are no data points in the upper right region of the panels, removing the C4 plant reference may help reduce visual clutter. In addition, the very wide uncertainty associated with the C3 plant reference limits its usefulness; including more specific, species‑level reference values may provide more meaningful context. Reducing the y‑axis range could also help make underlying patterns more apparent.
Figure 8 (a): Please add what the percentage values mean within the caption. Further, without knowledge of the depth (i.e. if the stock was taken from breach or across the whole length of core) you cannot make meaningful comparisons. Perhaps changing the units to density would resolve this issue.
Discussion:
586-593: This paragraph would read better if the main points regarding breach depth identification were outline first, followed by key biogeochemical patterns.
594-665: This section revisits detailed, site‑specific results that have already been touched upon in the Results section. While these examples highlight important caveats associated with using foraminifera for dating, the discussion would benefit from shifting toward a higher‑level synthesis that evaluates the method more holistically. In particular, how to distinguish large background variability from meaningful signal would strengthen this section. Additionally, briefly reiterating the novel aspects of the approach and clearly articulating where this study advances methodological understanding would help to better emphasize its overall contribution.
648-650: If the information about the duration of reclamation at the other MR sites exists this would be an important aspect to add to the Study Site section. Because the history of each site is unique and seems to be a important driver of many of the patterns seen within the data, perhaps a visual timeline of reclamation duration, restoration, and any other notable work on the site would be helpful either as apart of Figure 1 or in the appendix.
675: A less definitive term than “rule” might be more appropriate.
783-803: Please use caution when referring to the term “stability” throughout this paragraph as the TGA only measures thermal sensitivity. The permanence of a compound within a system is largely determined by its environmental context and the ability of microbes to access these compounds.
795: Lehmann et al. 2007 is not found within your references.
792: I am unclear what is meant by the comparison to upland soils here. If this is intended to refer to terrestrial soils, this is the first point in the manuscript where they are mentioned, which makes the comparison somewhat unexpected.
802-803: The interpretation that the allochthonous OM was decomposed externally prior to deposition may be valid, but it implicitly assumes that much of the incoming OM had initially labile components and was subsequently transformed into a more refractory form. However, a proportion of allochthonous OM may be inherently refractory upon input rather than the product of prior decomposition. It is also plausible that both restored and natural marshes receive broadly similar allochthonous inputs, particularly given their geographic proximity, with observed differences instead driven by site‑specific factors such as elevation, hydrology, or sediment dynamics that influence OC retention. Considering additional processes alongside external decomposition may provide a more complete explanation for the observed patterns.
1056-1061: McMahon et al. 2023 has been cited twice.
Overall, this paper provides an impressive comparison of OC/OM quantity and quality across various natural and MR sites and will prove as a useful contribution to the current literature. The issues outlined above indicate a need for considerable restricting or consolidation, however, the underlying dataset and analyses provide a strong foundation for an impactful paper. I hope these comments are helpful and constructive, and I look forward to seeing the final version of the manuscript.
References:
García-Artola A, Cearreta A, Irabien MJ, et al (2016) Agricultural fingerprints in salt-marsh sediments and adaptation to sea-level rise in the eastern Cantabrian coast (N. Spain). Estuarine, Coastal and Shelf Science 171:66–76. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ecss.2016.01.031
Schmidt MWI, Torn MS, Abiven S, et al (2011) Persistence of soil organic matter as an ecosystem property. Nature 478:49–56. https://doi.org/10.1038/nature10386