Global variability in the detectability of power plant NO2 plumes from space
Abstract. We present the first global, data-driven analysis of power plant NO2 plume visibility from space. Using TROPOMI observations over 6,000 of the world’s highest-emitting power plants and hourly CEMS data for 500 U.S. plants, we develop an automated algorithm that labels plumes and attributes them to their sources with 98 % accuracy. We then train a machine learning model to predict plume detectability from environmental, meteorological, and observational variables (F1 score > 0.65, AUC > 0.8). Out of 25 variables, we find that NOx emission rate, surface albedo, wind speed, and sensor zenith angle jointly explain much of the detection variability. An hourly NOx emission rate of ≈ 400 kg/h corresponds to a 50 % detection probability on average, but detection rates vary from < 20 % to > 60 % under different combinations of these conditions. These results provide the first empirical quantification of the physical and environmental factors that govern NO2 plume visibility in satellite data, establishing a foundation for models to use similar predictors as auxiliary variables when quantifying emission rates from plume appearance.
Summary
The paper "Global variability in the detectability of power plant NO2 plumes from space" by Huang and Wang presents a plume detection algorithm and trains a NN to check for plume "detectability", i.e. whether a plume is visible from satellite (TROPOMI) measurements or not.
With this NN, the most important input features driving "detectability" can be identified.
This is an interesting approach and helps to understand which conditions need to be fulfilled for successful plume detection and emission estimation from satellite measurements.
Overall, the study is written well, except that proper references and acknowledgements are lacking.
The method is comprehensible, but one major drawback is the usage of 10m winds, which are inappropriate even directly at the power plant due to stack height. Finally, while "detectability" is interesting, the overall goal is "quantifiability", and the study does not provide information on this.
I recommend publication on AMT after dealing appropriately with the comments below, which require major revisions.
General remarks
I see that modifying the input wind fields implies a complete re-analysis of this study. But it would be the way to go to get the best results of the presented methodology.
Additional comments
This sections starts with an explanation on what has been done with the power plant data, without stating where the data is coming from first (is it the EPA data introduced later in 2.3?). This section needs to be restructured such that the used input data is introduced, shortly described, and appropriately referenced and acknowledged first.