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Spatial Variations in Groundwater-Surface Water Interactions at the Basin Scale of an Arid Region: Insights from Stable Isotopes and Hydrochemistry
Abstract. A comprehensive understanding of groundwater-surface water interaction patterns is crucial, particularly in arid regions of Central Asia, where typical river-groundwater systems are prevalent. In this study, 31 river water and groundwater samples were collected from the Shule River Basin (SRB) in Northwest China and analyzed for hydrochemical and stable isotopic characteristics to elucidate spatial variations in groundwater-surface water interactions. A notable finding is the significant negative correlation between the δ18O of river water and elevation, with a vertical lapse rate of 0.08 ‰/100 m, which is markedly lower than that observed in the adjacent Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. Isotopic analysis indicates that groundwater recharges river water in the upper reaches, while river water recharges groundwater in the lower reaches, highlighting a basin-scale transformation in their relationship. Hydrochemical analysis reveals that river water has an average pH of 8.36 and a mean TDS of 649.93 mg/L, while groundwater shows an average pH of 7.65 and a mean TDS of 759.13 mg/L. Both river water and groundwater exhibit increasing TDS from upstream to downstream, transitioning from slightly hard to hard water, yet both are suitable for irrigation. The chemical composition of river water is primarily influenced by silicate and carbonate weathering, whereas groundwater chemistry is dominated by mineral dissolution and ion exchange processes. This study provides critical insights into basin-scale hydrological cycles in Central Asia’s arid regions, offering valuable guidance for the sustainable management of groundwater resources in semi-arid environments.
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Nima Zafarmomen, 11 Mar 2025
It is a great work, it is worth publishing.
- The introduction effectively highlights the importance of studying groundwater-surface water interactions in arid regions. However, the authors should elaborate on the existing knowledge gaps that this study aims to fill.
- The discussion of previous studies (e.g., Zhou et al., 2015; Wang et al., 2016) is useful but could be more critically analyzed to highlight the limitations of past work and justify the need for this study.
- The sample size (31 samples) is relatively small for a large-scale basin. The authors should discuss whether this sample size is sufficient for robust conclusions.
- The identification of groundwater recharge sources is well-explained, but there is no attempt to quantify the contribution of different sources using mixing models or statistical analysis.
- The role of fault structures and subsurface geological formations in influencing groundwater flow and interaction with surface water should be elaborated.
- I strongly recommend to mention other method in the methodology for SW-GW interaction and cite papers such as: "Assimilation of Sentinel-Based Leaf Area Index for Modeling Surface-Ground Water Interactions in Irrigation Districts"
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-CC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
- The introduction effectively highlights the importance of studying groundwater-surface water interactions in arid regions. However, the authors should elaborate on the existing knowledge gaps that this study aims to fill.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you very much for your recognition and valuable suggestion. We have rewritten the introduction as per your recommendation and that of Reviewer 1. The revised introduction now explicitly details the existing knowledge gaps that our study aims to address. Thank you again for your helpful comments.
- The discussion of previous studies (e.g., Zhou et al., 2015; Wang et al., 2016) is useful but could be more critically analyzed to highlight the limitations of past work and justify the need for this study.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. You are absolutely correct that while some studies have been conducted in this watershed, previous work has largely focused on small-scale analyses of groundwater recharge sources and evolution processes. Inspired by these earlier investigations, our study aims to address groundwater–surface water interactions at the entire watershed scale, providing a more comprehensive and holistic perspective. In response to your comment, we have added a paragraph in the discussion section that critically assesses the limitations of earlier studies and outlines the novelty and strengths of our work. Thank you again for your insightful feedback.
- The sample size (31 samples) is relatively small for a large-scale basin. The authors should discuss whether this sample size is sufficient for robust conclusions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. You are absolutely correct that a sample size of 31 for such a large-scale basin may initially seem limited. We have now incorporated additional analysis in the discussion section to address the representativeness of our samples and to justify the robustness of our conclusions. Thank you again for your valuable feedback.
- The identification of groundwater recharge sources is well-explained, but there is no attempt to quantify the contribution of different sources using mixing models or statistical analysis.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you very much for your valuable comment. Indeed, applying an end-member mixing model to quantify the contributions of different recharge sources is a critical approach. However, previous studies have attempted to address this issue, and it is important to note that in a large-scale basin, groundwater recharge sources can vary significantly, making it challenging to define consistent end-members. Furthermore, such an analysis might divert the focus from the primary objectives of our study. For these reasons, we have chosen to refrain from incorporating a quantitative contribution analysis in this manuscript. Thank you again for your thoughtful suggestion.
- The role of fault structures and subsurface geological formations in influencing groundwater flow and interaction with surface water should be elaborated.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. Indeed, fault structures play an indispensable role in controlling groundwater flow and its interactions with surface water, especially in transitions from mountainous regions to basins. We have now added content related to this aspect in the Materials and Methods section. Thank you for your helpful feedback.
- I strongly recommend to mention other method in the methodology for SW-GW interaction and cite papers such as: "Assimilation of Sentinel-Based Leaf Area Index for Modeling Surface-Ground Water Interactions in Irrigation Districts".
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. I have noted the important and innovative paper you mentioned. In response, we have revised the introduction in the updated manuscript to comprehensively review various methods used to study groundwater–surface water interactions, and we have incorporated relevant citations including the suggested paper. Thank you again for your helpful recommendation.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC1
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Anonymous Referee #1, 06 Apr 2025
General comments:
This manuscript presents a valuable investigation of groundwater-surface water interactions in an arid region basin using stable isotopes and hydrochemical analysis. The study appears methodologically sound and addresses an important gap in understanding hydrological processes in water-scarce environments. Although the description of river and groundwater dynamics in an arid region, using tools such as isotopes and hydrogeochemistry, but they are detailed analyzed.
Below I provide specific comments organized by manuscript section.
Abstract
L10：China's Northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares some ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical similarities with Central Asia, but it cannot fully represent Central Asia.
The paper is entitled "Interactions of Surface Water and Groundwater", yet the abstract fails to elaborate on the mechanisms of their interaction.
L14: Isotope notation must be formatted as superscript, such as: δ18O
Consider adding a sentence about the practical implications of the findings for water resource management in arid regions.
Introduction
Your introduction is very general and elaborate.
The literature review adequately covers relevant studies but could better highlight the novelty of this work.
The rationale for focusing on arid regions is not enough.
Materials and methods
One sampling campaign with merely 23 samples cannot adequately elucidate the groundwater-surface water interaction mechanisms.
L159: Well water samples are obtained from agricultural irrigation wells. Maybe the groundwater sample is mixed with different deep groundwater.
L160-164: What is the distance between the well and the river?
Discussion
The sections 4.2.1, 4.2.2, 4.2.3 are results not discussion.
Discussion needs to be improved to explain the relevancy of these findings. This is rather short in the current version.
Consider adding a conceptual model summarizing interactions.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-RC1 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
Abstract:
- L10：China's Northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares some ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical similarities with Central Asia, but it cannot fully represent Central Asia.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable comment. You are absolutely correct that while China's northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares certain ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical characteristics with Central Asia, it does not fully represent the entire region. We acknowledge that we have broadened the scope regarding Central Asia in the manuscript. We will revise this statement to ensure greater accuracy and clarity.
- The paper is entitled "Interactions of Surface Water and Groundwater", yet the abstract fails to elaborate on the mechanisms of their interaction.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have revised the abstract in the updated manuscript to clarify the mechanisms of surface water and groundwater interactions, ensuring consistency with the title.
- L14: Isotope notation must be formatted as superscript, such as: δ18O.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We will correct this issue and conduct a thorough review of the manuscript to ensure that similar errors do not occur elsewhere.
- Consider adding a sentence about the practical implications of the findings for water resource management in arid regions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have thoroughly revised the abstract and added a sentence highlighting the practical implications of our findings for water resource management in arid regions.
Introduction
- Your introduction is very general and elaborate. The literature review adequately covers relevant studies but could better highlight the novelty of this work. The rationale for focusing on arid regions is not enough.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have revised the first, second, and fourth paragraphs of the introduction. First, we re-reviewed the latest published literature on groundwater–surface water interactions in arid regions and provided a detailed summary of these studies. Second, we have emphasized the significance and innovative aspects of our work. Finally, we clearly stated in the objectives that this study focuses on the heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions at the watershed scale.
Materials and methods
- One sampling campaign with merely 23 samples cannot adequately elucidate the groundwater-surface water interaction mechanisms.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. This issue is indeed crucial and has also been raised in community comments. The Shule River spans over 620 kilometers, from which we collected 23 surface water samples and 8 groundwater samples. Our sampling strategy was developed based on a thorough literature review and an understanding of the study area's specific characteristics. On one hand, as illustrated in Figure 4, the hydrochemical composition in the upper and mid-stream regions remains relatively consistent; significant changes are observed only in the downstream areas, such as near Shuangta Reservoir and on the Guazhou Plain. Thus, we believe that the 23 surface water samples are sufficiently representative. To further substantiate our approach, we have compiled additional published data on the Shule River and provided this information in Supplementary Table S1.
- L159: Well water samples are obtained from agricultural irrigation wells. Maybe the groundwater sample is mixed with different deep groundwater.
RESPONSE：
- Indeed, this is true. Agricultural irrigation wells typically do not have screened intervals isolated by depth in order to maximize water extraction rates. We have acknowledged and clarified this limitation in the sample collection section of our manuscript, explaining the representative nature of the groundwater samples obtained.
- L160-164: What is the distance between the well and the river?
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- The distance between the wells and the river ranges from 0.5 to 9 km, with most wells located around 1 km away. We will include these details in the manuscript to further clarify the representativeness of our groundwater samples.
Discussion
- The sections 4.2.1, 4.2.2, 4.2.3 are results not discussion.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have reorganized these sections accordingly, ensuring that the relevant results have been moved to section 3.
- Discussion needs to be improved to explain the relevancy of these findings. This is rather short in the current version.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have expanded the discussion section (Section 4) to more thoroughly explain and discuss the relevance of our findings.
- Consider adding a conceptual model summarizing interactions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have now included an explanation and summary of the conceptual model in both the discussion and conclusion sections of the manuscript.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 Apr 2025
General Comments:
The manuscript submitted by Wang et al. presents a highly valuable contribution to the current frontiers in hydrology by elucidating the interactions between groundwater and surface water along a complete watershed in Central Asia. By integrating hydrochemical and isotopic techniques, the study effectively demonstrates the transformation process from river source areas to drainage zones and reveals the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions. This work carries significant importance for understanding the hydrological processes across mountainous and plain regions. Overall, this manuscript is of considerable value to the field of hydrology, offering novel insights into the dynamics of groundwater and surface water interactions across diverse terrains. Thus, I recommend its publication following revisions.However, some improvements in presentation and clarity will further enhance the manuscript. My detailed comments are as follows:
Specific comments
1. Typing errors and Formatting Issues:
Line 14: Please ensure that isotopes are expressed with superscripts (e.g., 18O) throughout the manuscript. A careful review is needed, as a similar issue appears on Line 32.
Line 267: There is a spelling error that should be corrected.
Line 184: Spelling error.
2. References:
Line 38: One of the references is missing the publication year; please verify and amend this accordingly.
Line 81-82: Consider including a reference regarding the number of glaciers mentioned.
Line 430-431: It is recommended to add the appropriate references to support the statements made in these lines.
3. Clarity and Expansion of Study Importance:
Lines 50-52: I suggest that the authors further elaborate on the significance and innovative aspects of their study. After reviewing the current state of research in the introduction, stressing the distinctive contributions of the present study would greatly enhance its impact and facilitate broader dissemination within the community.
Lines 70-75: Given the focus on the topic and the subsequent conclusions, please incorporate a statement in the study objectives regarding the construction of a conceptual model to explain the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions.
4. Data and Methodological Details:
Lines 105-110: I recommend including a brief introduction on the intra-annual variations in precipitation. This information could help readers better understand the hydrological cycle characteristics in arid regions.
Line 119: Please provide the data source for Figure 2.
Line 178: It is advisable to add the computational method for d-excess.
Line 190: When discussing Changma Reservoir and Shuangta Reservoir, please refer the reader to Figure 1 for better geographic orientation.
5. Figures and Tables:
Line 96-98: It is advisable to add details regarding the base map and the source of the elevation data for Figure 1. In addition, it is suggested that authors mark the blue part in Figure 1a as the SRB.
Line 235: The title of Figure 6 appears to be incorrect. Moreover, consider relocating Figure 6 to the discussion section to better integrate and illustrate the findings.
Line 365: The title of Figure 9 contains an error; a comprehensive review of all figure titles is recommended to ensure they are correct.
6. Section-Specific Recommendations:
Section 4.2: It is advisable to reposition the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios to the results section. In addition, the text between Lines 287–295 is somewhat repetitive and redundant; please consider rewriting this portion for enhanced clarity.
Line 410: I suggest expanding Section 4.3.2 to more comprehensively describe the hydrochemical evolution process including river water and groundwater.
Section 4.4: Please include a reference for the water quality evaluation standards. Additionally, add the calculations for TH, Na%, and SAR in a supplemental table.
Lines 250-255: The authors should further clarify how the LMWL are established and elaborate on the rationale for developing different LMWL. This additional explanation would assist readers in comprehending the underlying assumptions and methodology.
7. Conclusions:
In the conclusions section, it would be beneficial to explicitly address all the study objectives mentioned in the introduction. Please ensure that the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions is clearly emphasized. Furthermore, discuss the implications of these findings for similar regions facing analogous issues and for the sustainable management of regional water resources.Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-RC2 -
AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Yanhui Dong, 19 Apr 2025
- Line 14: Please ensure that isotopes are expressed with superscripts (e.g., 18O) throughout the manuscript. A careful review is needed, as a similar issue appears on Line 32.
RESPONSE：
- In response to the comment on Line 14 (and the similar instance on Line 32), we apologize for the formatting oversight in our isotope notation. We have carefully reviewed the entire manuscript and corrected all instances to ensure that isotopes (e.g., 18O) are uniformly expressed with superscripts. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
- Line 267: There is a spelling error that should be corrected.
RESPONSE：
- We sincerely apologize for the noted spelling error. We have carefully proofread the entire manuscript and corrected this mistake, as well as any similar errors, to ensure the highest level of accuracy. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
- Line 184: Spelling error.
RESPONSE：
- It has been corrected.
- Line 38: One of the references is missing the publication year; please verify and amend this accordingly.
RESPONSE：
- The publication year has been added.
- Line 81-82: Consider including a reference regarding the number of glaciers mentioned.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment and we have added references.
- Line 430-431: It is recommended to add the appropriate references to support the statements made in these lines.
RESPONSE：
- The appropriate references have been added.
- Lines 50-52: I suggest that the authors further elaborate on the significance and innovative aspects of their study. After reviewing the current state of research in the introduction, stressing the distinctive contributions of the present study would greatly enhance its impact and facilitate broader dissemination within the community.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this insightful suggestion, we have revised the Abstract to more explicitly articulate the significance and novelty of our work. Specifically, we now highlight how our study advances current understanding by discussing the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions—from mountainous to plain regions—at the watershed scale in arid environments, and by introducing a novel application of isotopic and hydrochemical methods across multiple water bodies, including groundwater, glacier meltwater, and river water, in the typical arid areas. We believe these enhancements clearly underscore the distinctive contributions of our research and will facilitate broader dissemination within the hydrological community. Thank you for encouraging us to strengthen this aspect of the manuscript.
- Lines 70-75: Given the focus on the topic and the subsequent conclusions, please incorporate a statement in the study objectives regarding the construction of a conceptual model to explain the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions.
RESPONSE：
- We have amended both the Abstract and the Conclusions to explicitly include, as a key study objective, the construction of a conceptual model aimed at explaining the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions. This addition clarifies how our conceptual framework integrates findings across mountainous and plain regions, thereby strengthening the link between our data and the overarching watershed‑scale patterns. Thank you for prompting us to make this enhancement
- Lines 105-110: I recommend including a brief introduction on the intra-annual variations in precipitation. This information could help readers better understand the hydrological cycle characteristics in arid regions.
RESPONSE：
- It has been added to the current manuscript.
- Line 119: Please provide the data source for Figure 2.
RESPONSE：
- The data source has been added to the Figure Caption.
- Line 178: It is advisable to add the computational method for d-excess.
RESPONSE：
- It has been added.
- Line 190: When discussing Changma Reservoir and Shuangta Reservoir, please refer the reader to Figure 1 for better geographic orientation.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment and we have revised the manuscript.
- Line 96-98: It is advisable to add details regarding the base map and the source of the elevation data for Figure 1. In addition, it is suggested that authors mark the blue part in Figure 1a as the SRB.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion and we have revised them.
- Line 235: The title of Figure 6 appears to be incorrect. Moreover, consider relocating Figure 6 to the discussion section to better integrate and illustrate the findings.
RESPONSE：
- We are very sorry that we made such a mistake when editing the manuscript to HESS format. We have checked and corrected all the errors. Thank you for your suggestion.
- Line 365: The title of Figure 9 contains an error; a comprehensive review of all figure titles is recommended to ensure they are correct.
RESPONSE：
- It has been corrected.
- Section 4.2: It is advisable to reposition the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios to the results section. In addition, the text between Lines 287–295 is somewhat repetitive and redundant; please consider rewriting this portion for enhanced clarity.
RESPONSE：
- We have reorganized the manuscript to improve its logical flow and readability. Specifically, the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios has been moved from the Discussion to the Results section. We have also rewritten the text originally between Lines 287–295 to remove redundancy and enhance clarity. Thank you for helping us strengthen the presentation of our findings
- Line 410: I suggest expanding Section 4.3.2 to more comprehensively describe the hydrochemical evolution process including river water and groundwater.
RESPONSE：
- We have substantially expanded Section 4.3.2 to offer a more comprehensive account of the hydrochemical evolution processes affecting both river water and groundwater. In the revised manuscript, we now: 1) Detail the sequential changes in major ion concentrations and isotopic signatures from upstream headwaters to downstream alluvial plains. 2) Describe the mixing dynamics between surface and subsurface flows, highlighting key zones of geochemical interaction. We trust that these enhancements provide a clearer and more thorough understanding of the hydrochemical evolution across the study area. Thank you for prompting us to enrich this section.
- Section 4.4: Please include a reference for the water quality evaluation standards. Additionally, add the calculations for TH, Na%, and SAR in a supplemental table.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this comment, we have added the appropriate citation for the water quality evaluation standards (WHO, 2010) in the Methods section. Furthermore, we have included a new Supplemental Table S1 detailing the calculations of Total Hardness (TH), Sodium Percentage (Na %), and Sodium Adsorption Ratio (SAR) for all sampling sites. Thank you for this helpful suggestion.
- Lines 250-255: The authors should further clarify how the LMWL are established and elaborate on the rationale for developing different LMWL. This additional explanation would assist readers in comprehending the underlying assumptions and methodology.
RESPONSE：
- We have expanded the manuscript to provide a more detailed account of how the LMWL are established and why separate lines are developed. Specifically, we now: 1) Describe the precipitation sampling network and isotopic dataset used to derive each LMWL. 2) Outline the least‑squares regression approach applied to δ¹⁸O versus δ²H data to generate the line parameters. 3) Clarify the criteria for defining distinct sub‑regional LMWLs—namely, how variations in climate regime and isotopic composition justify separate lines to ensure each is appropriately applicable. These additions elucidate the underlying assumptions, data sources, and methodological rationale for developing different LMWLs. Thank you for encouraging us to make this improvement.
- In the conclusions section, it would be beneficial to explicitly address all the study objectives mentioned in the introduction. Please ensure that the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions is clearly emphasized. Furthermore, discuss the implications of these findings for similar regions facing analogous issues and for the sustainable management of regional water resources.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this valuable suggestion, we have revised the Conclusions section to explicitly address all the study objectives outlined in the Introduction. In particular, we now place stronger emphasis on the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions across different geomorphic zones of the watershed. Additionally, we discuss the broader implications of our findings for arid and semi-arid regions facing similar hydrological challenges, and highlight how the insights gained from our conceptual model and hydrochemical analyses can inform the sustainable management and allocation of regional water resources. We appreciate your thoughtful recommendation, which has helped us to strengthen the overall impact and relevance of our conclusions.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC3
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AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Yanhui Dong, 19 Apr 2025
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Nima Zafarmomen, 11 Mar 2025
It is a great work, it is worth publishing.
- The introduction effectively highlights the importance of studying groundwater-surface water interactions in arid regions. However, the authors should elaborate on the existing knowledge gaps that this study aims to fill.
- The discussion of previous studies (e.g., Zhou et al., 2015; Wang et al., 2016) is useful but could be more critically analyzed to highlight the limitations of past work and justify the need for this study.
- The sample size (31 samples) is relatively small for a large-scale basin. The authors should discuss whether this sample size is sufficient for robust conclusions.
- The identification of groundwater recharge sources is well-explained, but there is no attempt to quantify the contribution of different sources using mixing models or statistical analysis.
- The role of fault structures and subsurface geological formations in influencing groundwater flow and interaction with surface water should be elaborated.
- I strongly recommend to mention other method in the methodology for SW-GW interaction and cite papers such as: "Assimilation of Sentinel-Based Leaf Area Index for Modeling Surface-Ground Water Interactions in Irrigation Districts"
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-CC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
- The introduction effectively highlights the importance of studying groundwater-surface water interactions in arid regions. However, the authors should elaborate on the existing knowledge gaps that this study aims to fill.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you very much for your recognition and valuable suggestion. We have rewritten the introduction as per your recommendation and that of Reviewer 1. The revised introduction now explicitly details the existing knowledge gaps that our study aims to address. Thank you again for your helpful comments.
- The discussion of previous studies (e.g., Zhou et al., 2015; Wang et al., 2016) is useful but could be more critically analyzed to highlight the limitations of past work and justify the need for this study.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. You are absolutely correct that while some studies have been conducted in this watershed, previous work has largely focused on small-scale analyses of groundwater recharge sources and evolution processes. Inspired by these earlier investigations, our study aims to address groundwater–surface water interactions at the entire watershed scale, providing a more comprehensive and holistic perspective. In response to your comment, we have added a paragraph in the discussion section that critically assesses the limitations of earlier studies and outlines the novelty and strengths of our work. Thank you again for your insightful feedback.
- The sample size (31 samples) is relatively small for a large-scale basin. The authors should discuss whether this sample size is sufficient for robust conclusions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. You are absolutely correct that a sample size of 31 for such a large-scale basin may initially seem limited. We have now incorporated additional analysis in the discussion section to address the representativeness of our samples and to justify the robustness of our conclusions. Thank you again for your valuable feedback.
- The identification of groundwater recharge sources is well-explained, but there is no attempt to quantify the contribution of different sources using mixing models or statistical analysis.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you very much for your valuable comment. Indeed, applying an end-member mixing model to quantify the contributions of different recharge sources is a critical approach. However, previous studies have attempted to address this issue, and it is important to note that in a large-scale basin, groundwater recharge sources can vary significantly, making it challenging to define consistent end-members. Furthermore, such an analysis might divert the focus from the primary objectives of our study. For these reasons, we have chosen to refrain from incorporating a quantitative contribution analysis in this manuscript. Thank you again for your thoughtful suggestion.
- The role of fault structures and subsurface geological formations in influencing groundwater flow and interaction with surface water should be elaborated.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. Indeed, fault structures play an indispensable role in controlling groundwater flow and its interactions with surface water, especially in transitions from mountainous regions to basins. We have now added content related to this aspect in the Materials and Methods section. Thank you for your helpful feedback.
- I strongly recommend to mention other method in the methodology for SW-GW interaction and cite papers such as: "Assimilation of Sentinel-Based Leaf Area Index for Modeling Surface-Ground Water Interactions in Irrigation Districts".
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable suggestion. I have noted the important and innovative paper you mentioned. In response, we have revised the introduction in the updated manuscript to comprehensively review various methods used to study groundwater–surface water interactions, and we have incorporated relevant citations including the suggested paper. Thank you again for your helpful recommendation.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC1
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Anonymous Referee #1, 06 Apr 2025
General comments:
This manuscript presents a valuable investigation of groundwater-surface water interactions in an arid region basin using stable isotopes and hydrochemical analysis. The study appears methodologically sound and addresses an important gap in understanding hydrological processes in water-scarce environments. Although the description of river and groundwater dynamics in an arid region, using tools such as isotopes and hydrogeochemistry, but they are detailed analyzed.
Below I provide specific comments organized by manuscript section.
Abstract
L10：China's Northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares some ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical similarities with Central Asia, but it cannot fully represent Central Asia.
The paper is entitled "Interactions of Surface Water and Groundwater", yet the abstract fails to elaborate on the mechanisms of their interaction.
L14: Isotope notation must be formatted as superscript, such as: δ18O
Consider adding a sentence about the practical implications of the findings for water resource management in arid regions.
Introduction
Your introduction is very general and elaborate.
The literature review adequately covers relevant studies but could better highlight the novelty of this work.
The rationale for focusing on arid regions is not enough.
Materials and methods
One sampling campaign with merely 23 samples cannot adequately elucidate the groundwater-surface water interaction mechanisms.
L159: Well water samples are obtained from agricultural irrigation wells. Maybe the groundwater sample is mixed with different deep groundwater.
L160-164: What is the distance between the well and the river?
Discussion
The sections 4.2.1, 4.2.2, 4.2.3 are results not discussion.
Discussion needs to be improved to explain the relevancy of these findings. This is rather short in the current version.
Consider adding a conceptual model summarizing interactions.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-RC1 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
Abstract:
- L10：China's Northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares some ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical similarities with Central Asia, but it cannot fully represent Central Asia.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your valuable comment. You are absolutely correct that while China's northwest region (e.g., Xinjiang, Gansu) shares certain ethnic, linguistic, religious, and geographical characteristics with Central Asia, it does not fully represent the entire region. We acknowledge that we have broadened the scope regarding Central Asia in the manuscript. We will revise this statement to ensure greater accuracy and clarity.
- The paper is entitled "Interactions of Surface Water and Groundwater", yet the abstract fails to elaborate on the mechanisms of their interaction.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have revised the abstract in the updated manuscript to clarify the mechanisms of surface water and groundwater interactions, ensuring consistency with the title.
- L14: Isotope notation must be formatted as superscript, such as: δ18O.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We will correct this issue and conduct a thorough review of the manuscript to ensure that similar errors do not occur elsewhere.
- Consider adding a sentence about the practical implications of the findings for water resource management in arid regions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have thoroughly revised the abstract and added a sentence highlighting the practical implications of our findings for water resource management in arid regions.
Introduction
- Your introduction is very general and elaborate. The literature review adequately covers relevant studies but could better highlight the novelty of this work. The rationale for focusing on arid regions is not enough.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. We have revised the first, second, and fourth paragraphs of the introduction. First, we re-reviewed the latest published literature on groundwater–surface water interactions in arid regions and provided a detailed summary of these studies. Second, we have emphasized the significance and innovative aspects of our work. Finally, we clearly stated in the objectives that this study focuses on the heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions at the watershed scale.
Materials and methods
- One sampling campaign with merely 23 samples cannot adequately elucidate the groundwater-surface water interaction mechanisms.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment. This issue is indeed crucial and has also been raised in community comments. The Shule River spans over 620 kilometers, from which we collected 23 surface water samples and 8 groundwater samples. Our sampling strategy was developed based on a thorough literature review and an understanding of the study area's specific characteristics. On one hand, as illustrated in Figure 4, the hydrochemical composition in the upper and mid-stream regions remains relatively consistent; significant changes are observed only in the downstream areas, such as near Shuangta Reservoir and on the Guazhou Plain. Thus, we believe that the 23 surface water samples are sufficiently representative. To further substantiate our approach, we have compiled additional published data on the Shule River and provided this information in Supplementary Table S1.
- L159: Well water samples are obtained from agricultural irrigation wells. Maybe the groundwater sample is mixed with different deep groundwater.
RESPONSE：
- Indeed, this is true. Agricultural irrigation wells typically do not have screened intervals isolated by depth in order to maximize water extraction rates. We have acknowledged and clarified this limitation in the sample collection section of our manuscript, explaining the representative nature of the groundwater samples obtained.
- L160-164: What is the distance between the well and the river?
RESPONSE：
- The distance between the wells and the river ranges from 0.5 to 9 km, with most wells located around 1 km away. We will include these details in the manuscript to further clarify the representativeness of our groundwater samples.
Discussion
- The sections 4.2.1, 4.2.2, 4.2.3 are results not discussion.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have reorganized these sections accordingly, ensuring that the relevant results have been moved to section 3.
- Discussion needs to be improved to explain the relevancy of these findings. This is rather short in the current version.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have expanded the discussion section (Section 4) to more thoroughly explain and discuss the relevance of our findings.
- Consider adding a conceptual model summarizing interactions.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion. We have now included an explanation and summary of the conceptual model in both the discussion and conclusion sections of the manuscript.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC2
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AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Yanhui Dong, 11 Apr 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-552', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 Apr 2025
General Comments:
The manuscript submitted by Wang et al. presents a highly valuable contribution to the current frontiers in hydrology by elucidating the interactions between groundwater and surface water along a complete watershed in Central Asia. By integrating hydrochemical and isotopic techniques, the study effectively demonstrates the transformation process from river source areas to drainage zones and reveals the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions. This work carries significant importance for understanding the hydrological processes across mountainous and plain regions. Overall, this manuscript is of considerable value to the field of hydrology, offering novel insights into the dynamics of groundwater and surface water interactions across diverse terrains. Thus, I recommend its publication following revisions.However, some improvements in presentation and clarity will further enhance the manuscript. My detailed comments are as follows:
Specific comments
1. Typing errors and Formatting Issues:
Line 14: Please ensure that isotopes are expressed with superscripts (e.g., 18O) throughout the manuscript. A careful review is needed, as a similar issue appears on Line 32.
Line 267: There is a spelling error that should be corrected.
Line 184: Spelling error.
2. References:
Line 38: One of the references is missing the publication year; please verify and amend this accordingly.
Line 81-82: Consider including a reference regarding the number of glaciers mentioned.
Line 430-431: It is recommended to add the appropriate references to support the statements made in these lines.
3. Clarity and Expansion of Study Importance:
Lines 50-52: I suggest that the authors further elaborate on the significance and innovative aspects of their study. After reviewing the current state of research in the introduction, stressing the distinctive contributions of the present study would greatly enhance its impact and facilitate broader dissemination within the community.
Lines 70-75: Given the focus on the topic and the subsequent conclusions, please incorporate a statement in the study objectives regarding the construction of a conceptual model to explain the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions.
4. Data and Methodological Details:
Lines 105-110: I recommend including a brief introduction on the intra-annual variations in precipitation. This information could help readers better understand the hydrological cycle characteristics in arid regions.
Line 119: Please provide the data source for Figure 2.
Line 178: It is advisable to add the computational method for d-excess.
Line 190: When discussing Changma Reservoir and Shuangta Reservoir, please refer the reader to Figure 1 for better geographic orientation.
5. Figures and Tables:
Line 96-98: It is advisable to add details regarding the base map and the source of the elevation data for Figure 1. In addition, it is suggested that authors mark the blue part in Figure 1a as the SRB.
Line 235: The title of Figure 6 appears to be incorrect. Moreover, consider relocating Figure 6 to the discussion section to better integrate and illustrate the findings.
Line 365: The title of Figure 9 contains an error; a comprehensive review of all figure titles is recommended to ensure they are correct.
6. Section-Specific Recommendations:
Section 4.2: It is advisable to reposition the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios to the results section. In addition, the text between Lines 287–295 is somewhat repetitive and redundant; please consider rewriting this portion for enhanced clarity.
Line 410: I suggest expanding Section 4.3.2 to more comprehensively describe the hydrochemical evolution process including river water and groundwater.
Section 4.4: Please include a reference for the water quality evaluation standards. Additionally, add the calculations for TH, Na%, and SAR in a supplemental table.
Lines 250-255: The authors should further clarify how the LMWL are established and elaborate on the rationale for developing different LMWL. This additional explanation would assist readers in comprehending the underlying assumptions and methodology.
7. Conclusions:
In the conclusions section, it would be beneficial to explicitly address all the study objectives mentioned in the introduction. Please ensure that the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions is clearly emphasized. Furthermore, discuss the implications of these findings for similar regions facing analogous issues and for the sustainable management of regional water resources.Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-RC2 -
AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Yanhui Dong, 19 Apr 2025
- Line 14: Please ensure that isotopes are expressed with superscripts (e.g., 18O) throughout the manuscript. A careful review is needed, as a similar issue appears on Line 32.
RESPONSE：
- In response to the comment on Line 14 (and the similar instance on Line 32), we apologize for the formatting oversight in our isotope notation. We have carefully reviewed the entire manuscript and corrected all instances to ensure that isotopes (e.g., 18O) are uniformly expressed with superscripts. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
- Line 267: There is a spelling error that should be corrected.
RESPONSE：
- We sincerely apologize for the noted spelling error. We have carefully proofread the entire manuscript and corrected this mistake, as well as any similar errors, to ensure the highest level of accuracy. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
- Line 184: Spelling error.
RESPONSE：
- It has been corrected.
- Line 38: One of the references is missing the publication year; please verify and amend this accordingly.
RESPONSE：
- The publication year has been added.
- Line 81-82: Consider including a reference regarding the number of glaciers mentioned.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment and we have added references.
- Line 430-431: It is recommended to add the appropriate references to support the statements made in these lines.
RESPONSE：
- The appropriate references have been added.
- Lines 50-52: I suggest that the authors further elaborate on the significance and innovative aspects of their study. After reviewing the current state of research in the introduction, stressing the distinctive contributions of the present study would greatly enhance its impact and facilitate broader dissemination within the community.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this insightful suggestion, we have revised the Abstract to more explicitly articulate the significance and novelty of our work. Specifically, we now highlight how our study advances current understanding by discussing the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions—from mountainous to plain regions—at the watershed scale in arid environments, and by introducing a novel application of isotopic and hydrochemical methods across multiple water bodies, including groundwater, glacier meltwater, and river water, in the typical arid areas. We believe these enhancements clearly underscore the distinctive contributions of our research and will facilitate broader dissemination within the hydrological community. Thank you for encouraging us to strengthen this aspect of the manuscript.
- Lines 70-75: Given the focus on the topic and the subsequent conclusions, please incorporate a statement in the study objectives regarding the construction of a conceptual model to explain the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions.
RESPONSE：
- We have amended both the Abstract and the Conclusions to explicitly include, as a key study objective, the construction of a conceptual model aimed at explaining the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions. This addition clarifies how our conceptual framework integrates findings across mountainous and plain regions, thereby strengthening the link between our data and the overarching watershed‑scale patterns. Thank you for prompting us to make this enhancement
- Lines 105-110: I recommend including a brief introduction on the intra-annual variations in precipitation. This information could help readers better understand the hydrological cycle characteristics in arid regions.
RESPONSE：
- It has been added to the current manuscript.
- Line 119: Please provide the data source for Figure 2.
RESPONSE：
- The data source has been added to the Figure Caption.
- Line 178: It is advisable to add the computational method for d-excess.
RESPONSE：
- It has been added.
- Line 190: When discussing Changma Reservoir and Shuangta Reservoir, please refer the reader to Figure 1 for better geographic orientation.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your comment and we have revised the manuscript.
- Line 96-98: It is advisable to add details regarding the base map and the source of the elevation data for Figure 1. In addition, it is suggested that authors mark the blue part in Figure 1a as the SRB.
RESPONSE：
- Thank you for your suggestion and we have revised them.
- Line 235: The title of Figure 6 appears to be incorrect. Moreover, consider relocating Figure 6 to the discussion section to better integrate and illustrate the findings.
RESPONSE：
- We are very sorry that we made such a mistake when editing the manuscript to HESS format. We have checked and corrected all the errors. Thank you for your suggestion.
- Line 365: The title of Figure 9 contains an error; a comprehensive review of all figure titles is recommended to ensure they are correct.
RESPONSE：
- It has been corrected.
- Section 4.2: It is advisable to reposition the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios to the results section. In addition, the text between Lines 287–295 is somewhat repetitive and redundant; please consider rewriting this portion for enhanced clarity.
RESPONSE：
- We have reorganized the manuscript to improve its logical flow and readability. Specifically, the discussion of the Gibbs diagram and ionic ratios has been moved from the Discussion to the Results section. We have also rewritten the text originally between Lines 287–295 to remove redundancy and enhance clarity. Thank you for helping us strengthen the presentation of our findings
- Line 410: I suggest expanding Section 4.3.2 to more comprehensively describe the hydrochemical evolution process including river water and groundwater.
RESPONSE：
- We have substantially expanded Section 4.3.2 to offer a more comprehensive account of the hydrochemical evolution processes affecting both river water and groundwater. In the revised manuscript, we now: 1) Detail the sequential changes in major ion concentrations and isotopic signatures from upstream headwaters to downstream alluvial plains. 2) Describe the mixing dynamics between surface and subsurface flows, highlighting key zones of geochemical interaction. We trust that these enhancements provide a clearer and more thorough understanding of the hydrochemical evolution across the study area. Thank you for prompting us to enrich this section.
- Section 4.4: Please include a reference for the water quality evaluation standards. Additionally, add the calculations for TH, Na%, and SAR in a supplemental table.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this comment, we have added the appropriate citation for the water quality evaluation standards (WHO, 2010) in the Methods section. Furthermore, we have included a new Supplemental Table S1 detailing the calculations of Total Hardness (TH), Sodium Percentage (Na %), and Sodium Adsorption Ratio (SAR) for all sampling sites. Thank you for this helpful suggestion.
- Lines 250-255: The authors should further clarify how the LMWL are established and elaborate on the rationale for developing different LMWL. This additional explanation would assist readers in comprehending the underlying assumptions and methodology.
RESPONSE：
- We have expanded the manuscript to provide a more detailed account of how the LMWL are established and why separate lines are developed. Specifically, we now: 1) Describe the precipitation sampling network and isotopic dataset used to derive each LMWL. 2) Outline the least‑squares regression approach applied to δ¹⁸O versus δ²H data to generate the line parameters. 3) Clarify the criteria for defining distinct sub‑regional LMWLs—namely, how variations in climate regime and isotopic composition justify separate lines to ensure each is appropriately applicable. These additions elucidate the underlying assumptions, data sources, and methodological rationale for developing different LMWLs. Thank you for encouraging us to make this improvement.
- In the conclusions section, it would be beneficial to explicitly address all the study objectives mentioned in the introduction. Please ensure that the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions is clearly emphasized. Furthermore, discuss the implications of these findings for similar regions facing analogous issues and for the sustainable management of regional water resources.
RESPONSE：
- In response to this valuable suggestion, we have revised the Conclusions section to explicitly address all the study objectives outlined in the Introduction. In particular, we now place stronger emphasis on the spatial heterogeneity of groundwater–surface water interactions across different geomorphic zones of the watershed. Additionally, we discuss the broader implications of our findings for arid and semi-arid regions facing similar hydrological challenges, and highlight how the insights gained from our conceptual model and hydrochemical analyses can inform the sustainable management and allocation of regional water resources. We appreciate your thoughtful recommendation, which has helped us to strengthen the overall impact and relevance of our conclusions.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-552-AC3
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