Droughts in western Central Europe and associated atmospheric circulation patterns since 1844
Abstract. Droughts in western Central Europe have major impacts on agriculture, ecosystems, and society, yet their long-term variability and drivers remain poorly understood. This study investigates drought variability over the past 180 years and its link to atmospheric circulation to identify their dynamic drivers. Three reanalysis datasets (ERA5, 20CRv3, and ModE-RA) are used to detect meteorological drought events via the 3-month Standardized Precipitation (Evapotranspiration) Indexes (SPI-3 & SPEI-3) and to connect them to atmospheric circulation patterns through k-means clustering. Dataset reliability is assessed over western Central Europe, providing consistent coverage from 70 to 165 years. Results show that recent severe and successive droughts, such as the 2018-drought, have historical precedents and display strong multidecadal variability. Diverging trends between SPI-3 and SPEI-3 over the last decades indicate an increasing role of atmospheric evaporative demand (AED). Summer dryness has intensified over the past 180 years, whereas winter dryness has declined. Regional and seasonal contrasts further emphasize the complexity of drought dynamics. Four distinct circulation patterns associated with droughts are identified: the Baltic High, British Isles High, North–South Dipole, and European High. Over time, droughts have become increasingly linked to the European High, a pattern characterized by strong AED anomalies, intense droughts, and this had a central role in the recent spring drying. The findings highlight the recent emergence of circulation patterns that enhance AED, marking a shift in the dynamic drivers of regional droughts under climate change.
Neimry et al. have analysed historical drought trends in western Central Europe (BE,NL,LUX,partFR,partDE). Using three different reanalysis products and four meteorological stations, they calculate SPI3 and SPEI3 and analyse trends and circulation associated with drought events. I find parts of the study interesting, for example the circulation drivers, the long historical perspective and the decadal variability in drought occurrence shown in Figure 5. However, I sometimes got lost in reading the results sections where many statistics are noted and discussed, often in a very lengthy way.
My first point of advise to the authors is thus to make an attempt at shortening the manuscript, by being more direct or where possible leaving out some explanations or moving things to the supplementary materials. An example, at the start of your data section:
“In addition to the identification of droughts, an objective is to connect them to atmospheric circulation. Consequently, reanalyses are pivotal datasets for this study. A reanalysis is a combination of historical weather observations and weather forecasting models, using a method called data assimilation (Slivinski et al., 2019; Valler et al., 2024). This approach provides a comprehensive dataset that represents fields consistent with each other through the application of physical laws within the model and the elimination of spatial and temporal gaps.”
In my opinion this whole bit can go. The objectives are already listed in the introduction, and I think the readers of WCD can be expected to know what reanalyses datasets are. Hopefully by critically assessing the text as a whole, you will be able to achieve a more streamlined and clear manuscript, that better showcases your work and results.
My second point is a hesitation regarding the fact that all analysis (outside Fig 8a/b) is related to SPI or SPEI trends/values, rather than the actual physical input variables of precipitation, temperature and evapotranspiration. I struggle with terms like ‘dryness’, when SPI/SPEI indicate a relative position on the wet/dry spectrum. Please consider performing or adding (in the SI?) Some analysis on the physical variables, and using the language to go with that (related to my point on clarity before). E.g. I believe that when you write about a ‘decline in dryness’ measured by SPI, you in fact mean an increasing precipitation trend. As a physically trained climate scientist that is easier to interpret.
Finally, I miss a critical evaluation in the discussion of the validity of your results and assumptions. Throughout the results section there are quite a few places where the three reanalysis products thoroughly disagree with each other, even when a common period is used. No statements or conclusions are made regarding this, whilst for me this is very important. Furthermore, given your interesting Fig. 5, should you not comment more on the influence of interannual/multidecadal variability on trends in relation to climate change trends (signal to noise discussion)? In a similar matter, I miss a critical discussion on the use of Thornthwaite, which as far as I know is a dated method of calculation PET. I fully understand that when only monthly data is available, this is your only option, but this will influence your computed trends and results, so I expect a critical discussion of implications.
As such, my advise to the editor is to offer the authors a chance to reword, and consider the manuscript again after major revisions have been made.
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