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Contrasting Impacts of Dust Ice-Nucleating Particles on the Evolution and Radiative Effects of Mixed-Phase and Ice Clouds
Abstract. The effect of aerosols acting as ice-nucleating particles (INPs) remains one of the least understood processes in aerosol–cloud–climate interactions. Mineral dust can serve as INPs in both mixed-phase and ice clouds, yet few studies have simultaneously considered dust INPs in both cloud types, limiting our understanding of their impacts on clouds and radiation. Here, we develop an improved INP parameterization in WRF-Chem that explicitly represents dust INPs in both cloud types, incorporating both non-size-resolved and size-resolved INP parameterizations. Model evaluation against ground-based and satellite observations shows good agreement with the observed spatiotemporal variations of surface PM10, dust INPs, liquid water path (LWP), and ice water path (IWP) over East Asia. Simulations for spring 2018 reveal that dust INPs in mixed-phase clouds accelerate the Wegener–Bergeron–Findeisen (WBF) process, increasing IWP by 2.3 % and decreasing LWP by 3.3 %, thereby reducing cloud albedo and producing a warming of 0.20 W m−2. In ice clouds, dust INPs enhance heterogeneous nucleation, increase ice crystal number concentrations, and reduce their effective radius. Sedimenting ice crystals from ice clouds further intensify the WBF process in mixed-phase clouds, ultimately yielding a stronger warming of 3.56 W m−2. Differences among INP parameterizations are comparable to those between simulations with and without INPs, whereas the size-resolved scheme may more reasonably represent the spatial variability of dust INP effects. This study highlights the distinct roles of dust INPs in mixed-phase and ice clouds from the microphysical perspective and advances our understanding of aerosol–cloud–climate interactions.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5277', Anonymous Referee #1, 18 Jan 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5277', Anonymous Referee #2, 06 Feb 2026
In this work, the authors introduce two new parameterizations for ice-nucleating particles (INPs) in WRF-Chem to investigate the impacts of dust INPs on mixed-phase and ice clouds and their radiative effects. Given the large uncertainties surrounding the role of dust emissions in ice formation and cloud evolution, this study is relevant to the community. The methods and results are described in detail, the manuscript is generally well written, and the inclusion of model validation is commendable.
However, I find the paper largely descriptive, with few overarching conclusions that advance the state of the field, and I question whether it is a good fit for the journal. Several mechanisms are proposed to explain the results, but these remain mostly speculative. In addition, there may be fundamental flaws in the implementation of the ice nucleation parameterizations that warrant major revisions. These issues must be addressed before the paper can be considered for publication.
General comments
Overall, the manuscript is clearly written, detailed, and the simulation experiments are well designed. At the same time, the discussion often falls back on straightforward descriptions of figures without deeper analysis. When mechanistic explanations are proposed (for example involving sedimentation or the WBF process) they are not supported by evidence. It should be possible to output the relevant microphysical rates from the model to demonstrate that the proposed mechanisms are actually operating. As written, these explanations are often lost in the text and do not appear central to the paper’s conclusions. I encourage the authors to include a dedicated discussion section where these mechanisms can be addressed in more depth, and where Figure 10 and the hypotheses raised in the conclusions can be more fully developed.
More fundamentally, there may be a major flaw in the implementation of the ice formation parameterizations for ice clouds. It is never clear what subgrid-scale vertical velocity is used. At the model resolution employed (27 km), the dynamics of individual parcels are not resolved; using grid-scale vertical velocities would significantly underestimate peak supersaturation and ice formation rates, particularly for homogeneous ice nucleation. This issue would strongly affect, and likely alter, the conclusions of the study. The authors should provide more detailed information on the implementation of the ice nucleation parameterizations and clearly state the assumptions made regarding subgrid-scale dynamics.
Minor comments
- Line 69: Remove “simple.”
- Lines 92–94: Please clarify this sentence. Parameterizations derived for cirrus should be applicable wherever cirrus clouds occur.
- Line 159: Consider “the latter mechanism remains…”
- Section 2.2.1: Whether immersion freezing is restricted to the presence of liquid water has a significant impact on simulated cloud properties (see, e.g., Tan and Barahona, 2022).
- Lines 215–217: Any droplet reaching −40 °C would freeze; it is unclear why heterogeneous ice nucleation would be more likely.
- Line 224: “Before” is ambiguous here.
- Line 316: Please specify whether, in the NoINPs experiment, INPs are represented by the default parameterization or removed entirely.
- Line 348: Consider “homogeneous and heterogeneous ice nucleation in ice clouds followed…”
- Line 393: This is a large number of sites. Please describe how samples are collected.
- Figure 2: How is supersaturation diagnosed? What assumptions are made regarding subgrid-scale variability?
- Lines 524–526: Low ice crystal concentrations from homogeneous ice nucleation may indicate overly weak vertical velocities.
- Line 538: Is dust transported with cloud droplets in the convective parameterization?
- Lines 600–602: Again, please ensure this result is not driven by weak subgrid-scale vertical velocities.
- Figure 10: The proposed mechanisms are largely speculative and should be supported by diagnosed WBF rates. The figure also seems misplaced in the conclusions.
- Code and data availability: At minimum, the source data for the figures should be made available. Please also indicate the sources of the model code and parameterizations, even if they were modified by the authors.
Reference
Tan, I., and D. Barahona, 2022: The impacts of immersion ice nucleation parameterizations on Arctic mixed-phase stratiform cloud properties and the Arctic radiation budget in GEOS-5. J. Climate, 35, 4049–4070.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-5277-RC2
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This review concerns the ACP manuscript of Hua Zhang et al. entitled “Contrasting Impacts of Dust Ice-Nucleating Particles on the Evolution and Radiative Effects of Mixed-Phase and Ice Clouds”.
The authors use a customized version of WRF-Chem to investigate the impact of variable INP setups on the cloud evolution and radiation budget over China and associated regions of Asia. The conclusions which the authors draw from their study are generally sound and of certain relevance to the community. Nevertheless, one has to consider that the study is kind of a synthesis report which deploys a range of existing methods and techniques to investigate the subject of dust impacts on the evolution of the tropospheric ice phase and the radiation budget. This was, however, done before by others, which is also acknowledged by the authors in the manuscript.
Given that the study is not a big leap forward for fundamental research (while it is certainly of some interest and impact for the community), there is no new technique that would require careful evaluation. After having read the study in the framework of this review I thus only identified mostly minor issues. The identification of these minor issues was happily possible rather easy as the quality of the English text is already in the current state pretty advanced.
Find below the listing of the comments. Only general minor (or rather semi-major) comments are listed here. I’m strongly in favor for a second round of reviews, as the implementation of some of my comments might have some impact on the study.
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