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Determining the key sources of uncertainty in dimethyl sulfide and methanethiol oxidation under tropical, temperate, and polar marine conditions
Abstract. This study quantifies how uncertainties in the gas-phase rate constants used in the oxidation mechanisms of dimethyl sulfide (DMS) and methanethiol (CH3SH) (both major natural sources of sulfur to the atmosphere), affect products such as methanesulfonic acid and sulfuric acid, which influence cloud formation and climate.
We updated our previously reported DMS oxidation mechanism and extended it to include 9 halogen, 71 aqueous, and 4 CH3SH reactions. This updated mechanism was then run in box models covering temperate, tropical, and polar marine conditions based on field campaigns.
Constrained Monte Carlo sampling was employed to propagate the uncertainties in the mechanism. Uncertainties in the concentrations of the products were time-dependent and ranged from 10–200 % for most species, with OCS, methanesulfonic acid, and sulfuric acid having the largest uncertainties.
Sensitivity analysis using the EASI RBD-FAST algorithm was performed to identify which reactions and processes were the largest sources of uncertainty for the modelled oxidation products. Individually, reactions involving the formation and loss of CH3SO2O2 were major contributors to the uncertainties in gas-phase methanesulfonic acid and sulfuric acid. Reactions of species with OH and rate constants based on structure-activity relationships were commonly found to significantly contribute to uncertainty in most of the DMS oxidation products studied. Large uncertainties associated with OCS were attributed to the photolysis of hydroperoxymethyl thioformate, which has not yet been studied experimentally or theoretically. We suggest that future work on DMS oxidation should prioritise these processes to reduce the uncertainty in the climate impact of marine sulfur species.
Competing interests: Chiara Giorio is a member of the editorial board of Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5103', Anonymous Referee #1, 14 Nov 2025 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-5103', Anonymous Referee #2, 14 Nov 2025
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This paper presents a thorough analysis of the sources and relative magnitudes of uncertainty in the DMS and methanethiol oxidation mechanisms. Such analysis is immensely useful for guiding future theoretical and experimental work, as it helps to clarify which reactions contribute the most to uncertainty in our understanding of this chemical system. The techniques used here will likely prove valuable in the study of other atmospheric chemical reaction systems. While I think the writing could be tightened in places to improve readability, I think this work represents a valuable contribution to the study of atmospheric sulfur chemistry and will fit in well in ACP. I have included a list of relatively minor comments below.
Major comments:
- Some of the model description details are notably missing from the main text. The basic high-level details identifying the model are only included in the SI (Line 27). The authors describe the addition of aqueous chemistry (in the abstract and even the name of Section 2) as a substantial development, but fail to provide almost any description of it in the main text, and even fail to provide a main-text citation for the paper upon which most of the aqueous chemistry was based. (This is discussed further below).
- The paper is a bit on the long side. To increase readability, the authors could consider shortening the article. If they chose to tackle this, I would consider moving Section 6.1 “Time dependence of the uncertainty” to the supporting information, as it seems the sensitivity index is only time-dependent in niche scenarios.
- The authors present excellent sensitivity analysis, demonstrating which reactions contribute the most to uncertainty in species concentrations. However, the sensitivity indices as shown in Figures 8 and 9 all scale to 1, regardless of the absolute uncertainty in the concentration of a given compound. The absolute uncertainty can be quite variable, where for example HPMTF and SO2 exhibit considerably less total uncertainty than OCS or MSA (Figure 5). Perhaps the authors could consider visualizing this alongside the data in Figures 8 and 9 (perhaps a smaller second-row bar chart showing the magnitude of variability for each product from the Monte Carlo analysis?), to help identify which reactions contribute the most to the largest uncertainties in the total reaction system.
- ACP requires that authors include a statement of data availability, but none is presented here. I encourage the authors to at minimum publish their updated mechanism in a file format that can be easily used, and ideally include at least some of the code as was used to run to model.
Minor comments:
Line 23: Consider adding an additional more recent reference, as I believe there has been continued work in this space.
Line 71: Topic sentence could more clearly introduce paragraph. “One-at-a-time” strikes me as overly colloquial.
Line 81: EASI stands for something?
Line 92: Sentence introducing CH3SH is a little bit awkward. It could also probably be better motivated (CH3SH is an important source of SO2 and as such, uncertainties in its oxidation processes may contribute substantially to the uncertainty in SO2 production).
Line 98: A basic description of the box model is conspicuously missing! Further, this section title includes the word “aqueous” but these additions to the model are not discussed! This doesn’t need to be a long discussion but a couple sentences (e.g., “aqueous mechanisms is based on __ et al. Partitioning is based on __ etc., see SI for full description”) is important to include. Importantly, citations that are only found in the supplement don’t “count” from the perspective of appropriately giving other authors credit for their work in the form of citations that show up in google scholar etc. While it’s not necessary to include every citation in the main text, there are notable omissions here, for example: Hoffman et al. 2016 is not cited in the main text, despite forming the basis for the entire aqueous reaction scheme! Please put some time into making sure that key references are acknowledged in the main text.
Line 110: I’m slightly confused by this statement. When zooming in on the figure, the only product for which the updated mechanism clearly appears to have the lowest error is for TPA. In other cases, (for example OCS) the grey line or the yellow dot look slightly lower or the same. Perhaps it is just an issue with where the center of the point appears as plotted. Perhaps you can clarify in the caption or text which 6 products you’re referencing and check that calculation.
131: I find the framing of the modeling of field data a little unclear. Is this modeling supposed to represent real measurements taken at a time and place? Or do the field data merely represent average conditions from three different latitudes, useful for testing the model? I think it is the latter, but that could be made clearer.
Line 141: Some kind of annotation, such as a superscript, could be useful in more directly identifying which parameters in Table 1 are measured values from contemporary field campaigns, measurements taken from completely different field campaigns, or modeled/estimated values.
Line 143: Is it a good assumption that background air has no sulfur species in it?
Line 148: It’s not very clear what the 8 day period corresponds to. Are all the parameters the same for each day such that the 8 days represent a spin-up period? Or do these 8 days represent “real” days, following measurements from some of the days of the field campaigns? Are all the 24 hour results presented later just taken from the final day, or do they represent an average?
Line 148: Are emissions constant, or do these scale with factors such as wind speed?
Line 160: Scaling BrO and Cl to other oxidants seems a little arbitrary. Is this an approach that others have used?
Line 174: The implied complement to “reaction with BrO” would be “reaction with OH,” which makes up about half of reactivity. I think the way this sentence is written doesn’t quite do the importance of OH justice.
Line 176: The aqueous loss of DMS to O3 is quite different than what was reported by Hoffman et al. 2016. Consider contextualizing this.
Line 210: It does not seem that the f2(298 K) notation is particularly common, but it is used (and discussed at length) in the NASA rate evaluation document. I would suggest adding a citation pointing this out for clarity. This is likewise the case the choice of g for the temperature dependence.
Line 226: The decision tree is quite useful for understanding your process. It would be useful to clarify that “Evaluated experimental data” refers to NASA/IUPAC evaluated experimental data, rather than your own evaluations.
Line 239: Thank you for including sources! It would be great to include all sources and not just the sources of those that are new to help readers more easily understand the source of the rates used.
Line 241: Poorly written wandering paragraph.
Line 269: Defining two parameters i and Si sequentially is slightly confusing.
Line 270: Wouldn’t n be a more common variable here?
Line 289: I assume that no uncertainties in emissions are included. This should be specified.
Line 300: Not clear what “within” means here (±39%, 39% total uncertainty range?).
Line 303: This section is unclear, awkwardly written, and does not clearly communicate the accuracy of the simulations. Ideally, this section should briefly but systematically walk through a comparison of modeled concentrations with field measurements for a range of sulfur products. For example, Veres et al. 2020 measured HPMTF concentrations that seem to acceptably align with the box model results. Ending a sentence with “to them,” mixing units, the current focus on upper bounds rather than central estimates, and not clearly identifying concentrations for MSA and H2SO4 separately make things a bit confusing. Even if the match with observations is imperfect, I think the most important and novel part of this work is the sensitivity analysis, which is at least partially independent of the model fidelity.
Line 320: Some kind of section overview to guide the reader could be nice, as we currently jump right into a discussion of HPMTF without any rationale.
Line 322: Consider defining “Norrish Type I” for non-organic chemists.
Line 327: Specify that this is for midday if that is the case.
Line 328: In Figure 6, the “blue” of HPMTF appears gray-green and does not clearly stand out to me against the gray species labels. I would suggest re-coloring with a bluer blue. Consider italics to visually separate the species names. The acronym TPA is not particularly common and only defined later in the paper; consider introducing it here.
Line 339: Can you provide a little more information about how you ran the multiple linear regression model? Is this just [MSA] = a + b * [DMS] + c * [DMSO] + …?
Line 377: This paragraph is difficult to follow, but makes sense after some careful re-reading. I think it may be possible to make it shorter and clearer.
Line 408: I find the dark purple and dark blue difficult to distinguish on my screen and mixed them up multiple times while reading this paper. I would encourage the authors to select a lighter purple hue to give these colors better contrast.
Line 428: Briefly contextualize this change in the main text (“… based on analysis of measurements by…”).
Line 444: This sentence is probably unnecessary as it is well described in the methods.
Line 452 (and in Figure 9): Again clarify that “evaluated data” refers to data evaluated by NASA/IUPAC, not just the authors.
Line 491: “possible new products.” Who knows, perhaps we’ve got them all already? This statement (that analysis does not cover missing reactions) is important and maybe worth reiterating elsewhere in the paper.
Line 492: Slightly unconventional to put a table with new data in the conclusions but seems ok. Are there numerical criteria for what made it into this table? I think R-HO is supposed to mean the RO2 has lost an H and an O but it’s not very clear with the long dash. Perhaps R’O would be better?
Line 503: Kind of a meandering way to end a paper.
SI:
Line 27: This basic model info should be in the main text.
Line 64: The scaling performed here is unclear.
Line 77: Are both of the values (0.2 and 0.02) in this sentence supposed to match?
Line 90: I encourage the authors to include a reference for each reaction, not just a select few, to help with traceability.
Line 117: Maybe this is correct but it seems odd that no year is present for dataset citations.
Table S3: Are these loss rates rational? (Considering expected background levels of other OH-reactive species?)
Line 221: The discussion of a pooled RO2 rate constant is unclear.
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Overview:
This study by Jacob et al. presents a comprehensive analysis of uncertainties in the oxidation mechanisms of dimethyl sulfide (DMS) and methanethiol (CH3SH). Building upon a DMS oxidation mechanism previously compiled by this team, this study implements that mechanism in a box model emulating three representative field campaigns to quantify the largest sources of uncertainty in the mechanism under various atmospheric conditions. Through a sensitivity analysis, they identify individual reactions and process that drive uncertainty in modelled reactants and oxidation products in each model case. Reactions involving CH3SO2O2 formation and loss, HPMTF photolysis, BrO oxidation, and other processes were found to be major sources of uncertainty, which the authors suggest should be the focus of future studies. The box model setup and uncertainty sensitivity analysis both sound, and methods and results are described in a clear well-organized way. Given the considerable recent developments in DMS oxidation chemistry, including theoretical, lab, and field results, there is a clear need for a comprehensive and critical evaluation and synthesis of the literature which this study nicely contributes too. The mechanism and uncertainty analysis presented here, provide a potential common point of reference for future studies to compare against which should be quite a useful contribution to the literature. However, I have some comments related to the representativeness of the model conditions, and the evaluation criteria which should be addressed before publication.
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