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The State of Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion in the Cloud Physics Community
Abstract. The Geosciences are amongst the least diverse research fields, where women and other underrepresented 19 groups face systemic biases. This paper presents the state of diversity, equity, and inclusion (DEI) in the cloud-physics community, by combining a metadata analysis of 6987 cloud-physics peer-reviewed journal articles published between 1970 and 2020 with responses from a survey of 198 participants from the cloud-physics community. Women first author contributions are evident only after 1997 and presently only ∼17 % of studies in the cloud physics field are led by women. Authors from the Global North dominate first and corresponding-author positions, with only ∼5 % of studies led by tropical affiliation authors. The latter’s participation was low even for study sites in the tropics, suggesting widespread practice of parachute science. Of the survey respondents, 23 % identified as a minority group and feel that being a minority has had a negative impact on their scientific career, in terms of collaborations, promotions, publishing, funding, salary, and citations. Although the survey data shows the general experiences of cloud physicists globally, the perspectives from this work can aid the cloud-physics community to develop strategies to improve DEI in institutions beyond a business case for a diverse science community. Rather we should consider an equity-centered approach by understanding our ethical responsibilities to benefit research of the climate system.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4499', Anonymous Referee #1, 12 Oct 2025
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EC1: 'Thanks for RC1', David Crookall, 12 Oct 2025
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-4499-EC1
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EC1: 'Thanks for RC1', David Crookall, 12 Oct 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4499', Anonymous Referee #2, 28 Oct 2025
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In this study, the authors present the current state and over time development of Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion (DEI) in the cloud physics community by considering two different data sets: metadata of 6,987 published papers between 1970 and 2020, and the survey responses from 198 participants. This research is significant for the advancement of the geosciences as it helps identify areas that need improvement. However, there are some issues with the framing of certain aspects, including the terminology used. Therefore, my general comments align with the Rev1.
General comments:- Underrepresented instead of the word minority or marginalised: Minority means that the smaller number or part. As Rev1 mentioned, minorities differ from region to regionIt is important to note that labelling the global south as a minority is a Western-centric viewpoint. The groups considered in this context are not smaller in number; they are underrepresented, overlooked, or lacking visibility. Additionally, "marginalised" implies insignificance or a peripheral status, which also doesn’t adequately convey the issue at hand.
- Terminology tropical scientists/countries: The term "tropical" carries connotations that could present an "exotic" portrayal, which is not appropriate here. I completely agree with Rev1. Additionally, framing a comparison of “tropical countries” with so so-called global north is a false dichotomy. One is defined by economic and historical factors under neo-colonial structures, while the other is geographical.
- The gender analysis presented is binary and fails to include non-binary and transgender individuals. This omission is not addressed in the paper. Although the potential for misgendering due to the algorithm is acknowledged, it still contains uncategorized (gender-blind) names. Furthermore, such gender-inferencing algorithms often struggle with the accuracy of non-Western names.
I will try to elaborate on what I mentioned in the general comments by giving specific examples from the first couple of pages, which are valid throughout the entirety of the paper.
line 46: ".... minority representation..." This gap exists for any underrepresented group, not just minorities. You might not be a minority, but underrepresented, you might be a minority if you are looking from a Western lens. We are great in numbers, but our work or existence is not represented or acknowledged.
line 65: same issue here with the use of minorities
line 70: Women are underrepresented but larger in number, exactly like the scientists from the so-called global south. They are underrepresented, and there is a lack of acknowledgement.
line 81: In the cited paper, this is mentioned as "USA, UK, ... However, these are not necessarily the most collaborative countries, if measured by their proportion of collaborative output... The analysis provided evidence that countries rated high in terms of scientific development were more likely to collaborate." This does not necessarily mean low income with low scientific development.
line 86&96: Egypt and South Africa are not situated in the tropics but the subtropics. When comparing these regions with the global north, framing it as a dichotomy could be misleading, aka a false dichotomy. Additionally, the term "tropical" carries connotations that could present an "exotic" portrayal, which is not appropriate here.
line 189: Latitude range includes Australia, which is considered to be a "global north" country. If the intention is to analyse underrepresentation, this could lead to misrepresentation in the analysis. Although the countries are highlighted later in the table, it would be beneficial to clarify this point earlier on.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-4499-RC2
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This manuscript presents an important and timely assessment of diversity, equity, and inclusion (DEI) in the cloud physics community, combining a metadata analysis of 6,987 peer-reviewed papers (1970–2020) with a community survey of 198 respondents. The topic is highly relevant, and the effort to integrate quantitative and qualitative perspectives is commendable. However, several conceptual and structural issues limit the manuscript’s clarity and impact in its current form. In particular, the terminology used to describe researchers from the Global South, the framing of gender analysis, and the interpretation of small-sample survey results require substantial revision. Addressing these concerns would considerably strengthen the analytical rigor, inclusivity, and global sensitivity of the paper.
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