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Conifer leaf wax acts as a source of secondary fatty alcohols in atmospheric aerosols
Abstract. Fatty alcohols (FAs) are major components of plant leaf surface lipids emitted into the atmosphere as primary biological aerosol particles (PBAPs). FAs in the atmosphere can act as ice-nucleating particles to form clouds that affect climate through radiative forcing and precipitation processes. Secondary FAs (SFAs) in plant waxes can act as tracers for PBAPs. However, the specific plant species that contribute to the atmospheric emissions of SFAs, as well as the factors controlling the SFA amount of atmospheric SFA emissions, remain poorly understood. In this study, we collected size-segregated aerosols and leaf samples from various plant species from a cool-temperate forest site in Hokkaido, northern Japan, during different seasons. n-nonacosan-10-ol was the most abundant SFA in the aerosols, which resided mostly in the supermicrometer size range, with the maximum concentration observed in spring. Among all plant leaves examined, n-nonacosan-10-ol was identified only in coniferous leaf samples. The mass of n-nonacosan-10-ol per leaf exhibited a seasonal trend similar to that of the aerosol SFA concentrations. Our results suggested that the amount of n-nonacosan-10-ol in aerosols was primarily controlled by the number of n-nonacosan-10-ol coniferous trees, which was determined by the phenology. Overall, our findings suggest n-nonacosan-10-ol can be used as a tracer compound for PBAPs originating from conifer leaf wax, which can be used to estimate the atmospheric emission flux of PBAPs on a global scale.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4483', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Dec 2025 reply
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-4483', Anonymous Referee #2, 22 Dec 2025
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General Comments
This manuscript, which builds on a previous study by Cui et al. (2023), examines the origin and emission of secondary fatty alcohols (SFAs) in size-segregated atmospheric aerosols collected at a cool-temperate forest site in Hokkaido, Japan. The authors identified n-nonacosan-10-ol as the predominant SFA produced by coniferous trees and compared the concentrations in conifer leaves to levels in aerosol samples collected across seasons. The authors observed a seasonal variability, but due to extremely limited sampling in the summer and winter, it may be more accurate to consider their findings a comparison of spring and autumn n-nonacosan-10-ol levels. However, the methods are comprehensive, and overall, the study provides interesting new insights into a biogenic source of atmospheric aerosols, despite a somewhat small dataset. Therefore, I support the publication of this manuscript in BG, after addressing the following comments.
Specific Comments
- Fig 7/Table S4: The mass of n-nonacosan-10-ol shown for winter in Fig. 7 does not match the data presented in Table S4. According to Fig. 7, the mass of n-nonacosan-10-ol per leaf in winter is 2.32±34 mg, but the average mass of the winter values shown in Table S4 can be calculated as 16.17 mg. In addition, the winter n-nonacosan-10-ol masses are exactly the same as those for summer (16.9, 14.3, and 17.3 mg), and two of the three leaf weights shown for summer and winter are identical (4.51 and 4.58 mg). Please double check the data shown in Table S4 and confirm that the values align with what is shown in Fig. 7.
- Table S3: Does ‘deep yellow’ refer to the brown part of the leaf? I might have missed it, but it seems that this specific color is not defined in the text.
Technical Corrections
- Line 104 is missing the word the (‘These species were selected because they dominate the study site in the forest’).
- Table S1 should be referenced in the main text.
- Table S2 should be referenced in the caption of Fig. 6 or in nearby text.
- A reference to Table S3 should be included in the main text.
- Line 457 and 457: The supplement is referred to as Supplementary Material and Supplementary Information, respectively. Please select one for consistency.
- Lines 476 – 479 need references.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-4483-RC2
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Understanding the emission of PBAPs into the atmosphere and their impact is of high importance to the scientific community to deepen the understanding of the complex dynamics of our climate. This study focuses on the emission of secondary fatty acids as PBAPs tracers. The authors identified certain coniferous trees in Japanese forests and investigate SFAs from these trees by first directly assessing SFA concentration from the trees surface and compare these to SFAs in the atmosphere by sampling aerosol in proximity. Moreover, they set this into a seasonal perspective and compare it to a small number of meteorological variables.
The methodology is well thought out and the basis for good scientific work. The dataset is rather small but valuable, and makes the authors conclude with seasonal trends of SFA emission and that coniferous trees are the main emitter of SFAs. While the methodology provides a good basis for scientific quality, to this reviewer it was hard to follow the story. The results are presented step by step, however sometimes the reason why something is presented (or not) is inconclusive. The fact that winter is missing for most of the seasonal data is a bummer, also the fact that for summer there is only one datapoint. To me the question arises how to conclude with seasonal trends if only two seasons are supported with somewhat reliable data. Regardless of the reason for the missing data, the manuscript must acknowledge this limitation in the abstract and conclusion, and refrain from generalizing to seasonal trends, when it is rather a spring-autumn comparison.
Still, this manuscript provides interesting data worth publishing, but I suggest a major revision of the storyline and the data presentation, which will be described below.
Major points:
The manuscript could be reframed as a comparative study of Spring vs. Autumn. The Abstract and Conclusion must be revised to remove broad generalizations about "seasonal variations" where data is insufficient. I strongly suggest removing the winter data point from Figure 7.
Minor points:
Technical points: