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Exploring biases in brown carbon model representation with in-situ flight observations
Abstract. The inclusion of brown carbon (BrC), the subset of organic aerosols (OAs) that absorb light in the near UV to visible wavelength range, in climate models is necessary to represent an abundant atmospheric constituent and to improve OA radiative forcing estimates. However, the large degree in variability of laboratory and field measurements of BrC properties makes model representation difficult. We utilized in-situ observations of BrC absorption from the DC3, SEAC4RS, ATom, WE-CAN, and FIREX-AQ flight campaigns to evaluate the GISS ModelE Earth system model BrC scheme. We focused on measurements influenced by biomass burning (BB) and the region of temperate and boreal North America. Average vertical profile comparisons of measured versus simulated absorption, corrected for model biases in carbon monoxide and black carbon (commonly co-emitted with BrC) concentrations, revealed a systematic underestimation in modelled BrC absorption. To explore possible causes of this bias, we evaluated the model's BrC-to-OA relationship. Sensitivity tests were run to determine if parameter changes could improve model performance and therefore substantiate the potential causes of bias identified. Increasing model organic aerosol-to-organic carbon (OA-to-OC) mass ratio for BB and aged OAs greatly improved alignment to measured OA-to-OC but decreased OA burden and increased BrC bias in the upper troposphere. Decreasing wet removal of BrC appeared to partially address the bias in aged air masses and fire plumes, while other potential BrC-specific biases, like missing secondary sources, could not be substantiated. Based on this, we highlight BrC processes that require further research and future directions for model development.
Competing interests: At least one of the (co-)authors is a member of the editorial board of Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics.
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- RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1760', Anonymous Referee #1, 26 May 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1760', Anonymous Referee #2, 21 Jul 2025
This manuscript presents an evaluation of BrC (brown carbon) absorption in the GISS ModelE Earth System Model using aircraft campaign measurements of black carbon (BC), organic aerosol (OA), and BrC. By comparing average vertical profiles, the authors find that the model systematically underestimates BrC absorption, even after correcting for biases in carbon monoxide and BC. To investigate this issue, they explore a range of sensitivity tests, including variations in the OA:OC ratio, BrC aging, the water-soluble fraction of emitted BrC, and assumptions about the relative fraction of emitted/browner/bleached BrC. Despite these efforts, model biases persist in comparison to the in situ observations. While the topic is important and the dataset valuable, several critical issues must be addressed before I can make a recommendation.
Major issues:
1. Model Description of BrC Optical Properties. The paper lacks any discussion of the BrC optical properties implemented in the model, such as the mass absorption coefficient (MAC) values. Since these assumptions directly influence BrC absorption estimates, they should be explicitly described and justified. There is very little discussion on browning and bleaching of BrC. How exactly is it implemented? Is it in agreement with current understanding of the timescale of browning and bleaching?
Additionally, there is no discussion of how dry and wet deposition processes are handled for BrC species, which is essential for interpreting vertical profile comparisons.
2. Emission Corrections. The corrections applied for CO and BC based on wildfire attribution are not well justified. For some of the aircraft campaigns, wildfires are not the only significant sources of BC and CO. Without proper source attribution, applying such corrections could introduce further uncertainties.
3. Possible Causes of Model Bias. While the authors test several model parameters, their exploration of potential causes for the underestimation of BrC absorption remains somewhat narrow. Other important factors could include the assumed MAC values and their spectral dependence, photobleaching rates, emission injection heights, numerical diffusion in the model, and general representation errors in model transport and mixing. A broader discussion of these potential factors would strengthen the analysis.
Minor issues:
4. The use of dashed lines in the vertical profile figures is confusing. The captions state that dashed lines “indicate altitudes with no data,” yet lines are drawn—implying interpolated or assumed values. This needs to be clarified.
Overall, the model-observation comparison comes across as rather superficial. The paper presents a potentially useful dataset-model comparison, but it currently lacks sufficient detail in model description and scientific interpretation. I recommend a major revision to address the above issues before the manuscript can be considered for publication.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-1760-RC2 - AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1760', Maegan DeLessio, 16 Oct 2025
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