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Brief communication: Towards inclusive risk management
Abstract. People with disabilities face heightened vulnerability during disasters, yet they remain underrepresented in risk management planning and response. This brief communication highlights findings from a pilot study in Tyrol, Austria, which assessed flood exposure and disaster preparedness in facilities serving people with disabilities. Spatial analysis revealed significant exposure to flood hazards, while qualitative interviews uncovered critical gaps in risk awareness, preparedness, and inclusive planning. The study underscores the urgent need for disability-inclusive disaster risk management, calling for accessible information, targeted preparedness measures, and the integration of disability perspectives into emergency planning to enhance resilience for all.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1145', Anonymous Referee #1, 07 May 2025
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The paper is generally well structured and well written and presents an important topic within the field and with revisions would make a useful contribution to the literature on disability inclusive disaster risk reduction in relation to early warning systems. This would require further justifications for the choices made and discussion on the limitations of these choices, at it stands there are weak or missing justifications for critical methodological decisions. The recommendations that are given in the results sections have been made on multiple occasions in other work, in order to strengthen the papers unique contribution it would be important to see this further linked to the empirical evidence that was collected, this would help to provide a more novel perspective - from a case study in this region. In addition, the results section is mostly made of recommendations rather than empirical evidence, which leaves the reader wanting more. Tying these up in a conclusion section would benefit the paper and strengthen the overall argument of the piece, by not having a conclusion section the conclusions are not substantial. It is also important to be clearer with terms, for example ‘residential facilities’, equally in the final sentences, resilience is introduced but without clarity.
Clarifications and questions:
In the introduction it would be useful to provide further comment on some of the work that has taken place on disability inclusive DRR to orientate the reader as there is an increasing body of work on this topic. This includes emerging research on early warning systems for people with disabilities in the context of flooding.
Did the research carry out participatory methods or is the process of the local government participatory? In the case study section it mentions participatory methods but it is not clear if this is in relation to this study or not.
How did the paper reach a saturation point with a small number of qualitative interviews? Were these long in-depth interviews and perhaps more than one with each individuals, what where ther content and aim? How were these experts selected? Who was the "expert in the field" - in what field DRR or Disability or disability inclusive DRR? What was the justification for not including people with disabilities themselves? The decision-making processes behind this research design need to be more clearly outlined and with limitations provided.
At points the paper is repetitive and would benefit from editing and diversity in its vocabulary. For example, it says in multiple locations that training programmes, early warning systems etc are not accessible and ‘overlook people with disabilties’ - 35, 160, 135, 65. In what ways and for what individuals? This leaves some of these observations to feel a little vague - further detail would be beneficial, and for this to be reframed or re-worded differently each time.
The paper would benefit from further discussion on the challenges of defining disability and the multiple ways it can be understood and defined, this is mentioned in the final results but not in the outset of the paper. This would be beneficial in the sense that it would allow the paper to reflect on and provide clarity on how residential and workspace places of people with disabilities were identified. Did residential facilities include private residencies i.e private homes? Further clarity of this definition would be helpful as well as why these were selected. From line 125 it suggests this means residential facilities i.e homes for people with disabilities, this needs clarity earlier in the paper but also a justification for why these are the focus rather than general households. How does this influence the findings or importance of the study as this was critical to its design.
If also residential houses i.e private home, How was disability defined within this identification process and did this account for less severe disabilities, or neurodiversity for example with ADHD or autism? As all of these would come under the explanation of disability in the CRPD provided in the introduction. - what disabilties or individuals with disabilties is this study relevant to and what are the limitations if focussing on residential homes for people with disabilties (if meaning those who cannot live alone) and what was is justification and/or importance of this choice and this group?
145 line explains that the early warning systems was viewed critically by a participant, in what way, was this probed, can further information be provided? Being more specific would provide greater clarity and orientation to the reader and strengthen a core argument of the piece, this may also help to provide more specific recommendations, including context specific recommendations that could then be broadened out to wider arguments or suggestions.
In line 180 it says 'inherently complicated and challenging', why is it 'inherently' complicated rather than complicated because of institutional and/or access, cultural barriers etc, is there any empirical evidence from this study to support this statement?
Technical errors:
- The CRPD provides and explanation of disability rather than a definition because of the reality of the multiple ways of which it can be defined.
- In line 180 it says inherently complicate and challenging, this is a typo.
- The figures are too small, they cannot be read easily which means they were not supporting the papers arguments well and present an inclusion challenge in its own right.
- The Global disability report should be referenced as UNDRR rather than Gvetadze et al., 2023. This should be cited as the Global disability report on disasters not the global disability report which is written by the WHO and is a different report. It might also be useful to emphasise that the difference between the 2013 and 2023 report statistics are limited to further accentuate the point and need for disability-inclusive early warning systems.
While the topic is important and the paper has potential, it needs further clarification, restructuring and methodological transparency.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2025-1145-RC1
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