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New ozone-nitrogen model shows early senescence onset is the primary cause of ozone-induced reduction in grain quality of wheat
Abstract. Ozone (O3) air pollution is well known to adversely affect both the grain and protein yield of wheat, an important staple crop. This study aims to identify and model the key plant processes influencing the effect of O3 on wheat protein. We modified the DO3SE-Crop model to incorporate nitrogen (N) processes, and parameterised the O3 effect on stem, leaf and grain N using O3 fumigation datasets spanning 3 years and 4 O3 treatments. Our results show the new model captures the O3 effect on grain N concentrations, and anthesis leaf and stem concentration, well. However, the O3 effect on harvest leaf and stem N is exaggerated. Further, a sensitivity analysis revealed that, irrespective of O3 treatment, accelerated senescence onset was the primary plant process affecting grain N. This modelling study therefore demonstrates the capability of the DO3SE-CropN model to simulate processes by which O3 affects N content, and thereby determines that senescence onset is the main driver of O3 reductions in grain protein yield. The implication of the sensitivity analysis is that breeders should focus their efforts on stay-green cultivars that do not experience a protein penalty when developing O3 tolerant lines, to maintain both wheat yield and nutritional quality under O3 exposure.
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Owen Cooper, 01 Jul 2024
My comments can be found in the attached pdf.
- AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Stefano Galmarini, 17 Jul 2024
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2024/egusphere-2024-1311/egusphere-2024-1311-RC1-supplement.pdf
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Anonymous Referee #2, 31 Jul 2024
Cook and others incorporate a new model meant to explicitly simulate the impact of ozone on plant nitrogen dynamics and apply it to wheat trials. The results are interesting with a nice and defensible finding that stay green varieties are likely to minimize ozone impacts, which tend to hasten senescence. The manuscript could benefit from a number of adjustments that would make it easier to read and more concise.The abstract was rather terse and did not enumerate particular findings, quantitatively, that make the study unique.Please edit the manuscript for flow and redundancies: note for example ‘Northern India’ is used twice in 28-29.The narrative is tied to the FAO’s sustainable development goals, but ozone impacts to wheat is important regardless and becomes a bit of a distraction because the purpose of the manuscript stands alone: the importance of ozone to wheat yield and productivity.Note usage errors like the rogue period on line 52.67: ‘possess the capacity to’ -> ‘can’. Emphasis on removing all unnecessary words and phrases will make the manuscript more succinct and impactful.Eq 1 and elsewhere: don’t use the star in formal mathematical equations for multiplication, it has too many meanings (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asterisk#Mathematics)Table 1: just note in the legend that the parameters are unitless. There are also probably too many significant digits given realistic uncertainties.What do the lightning bolts mean in figure 3?320: ’that they were varied’ -> ‘between which they were varied’?In Figure 4 and elsewhere, why do the ’simulated’ variables have no uncertainty estimates?345 and elsewhere: a time series figure of yield for different years could help the reader understand some of the variability involved.The Discussion makes some interesting points and is nice and upfront about the things that the model still struggles with. It could benefit from a bit more brevity if possible.I like the schematics, also in the appendix, that highlight what equations correspond to different processes.Citation: https://doi.org/
10.5194/egusphere-2024-1311-RC2 - AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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Status: closed
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CC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Owen Cooper, 01 Jul 2024
My comments can be found in the attached pdf.
- AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Stefano Galmarini, 17 Jul 2024
The comment was uploaded in the form of a supplement: https://egusphere.copernicus.org/preprints/2024/egusphere-2024-1311/egusphere-2024-1311-RC1-supplement.pdf
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-1311', Anonymous Referee #2, 31 Jul 2024
Cook and others incorporate a new model meant to explicitly simulate the impact of ozone on plant nitrogen dynamics and apply it to wheat trials. The results are interesting with a nice and defensible finding that stay green varieties are likely to minimize ozone impacts, which tend to hasten senescence. The manuscript could benefit from a number of adjustments that would make it easier to read and more concise.The abstract was rather terse and did not enumerate particular findings, quantitatively, that make the study unique.Please edit the manuscript for flow and redundancies: note for example ‘Northern India’ is used twice in 28-29.The narrative is tied to the FAO’s sustainable development goals, but ozone impacts to wheat is important regardless and becomes a bit of a distraction because the purpose of the manuscript stands alone: the importance of ozone to wheat yield and productivity.Note usage errors like the rogue period on line 52.67: ‘possess the capacity to’ -> ‘can’. Emphasis on removing all unnecessary words and phrases will make the manuscript more succinct and impactful.Eq 1 and elsewhere: don’t use the star in formal mathematical equations for multiplication, it has too many meanings (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asterisk#Mathematics)Table 1: just note in the legend that the parameters are unitless. There are also probably too many significant digits given realistic uncertainties.What do the lightning bolts mean in figure 3?320: ’that they were varied’ -> ‘between which they were varied’?In Figure 4 and elsewhere, why do the ’simulated’ variables have no uncertainty estimates?345 and elsewhere: a time series figure of yield for different years could help the reader understand some of the variability involved.The Discussion makes some interesting points and is nice and upfront about the things that the model still struggles with. It could benefit from a bit more brevity if possible.I like the schematics, also in the appendix, that highlight what equations correspond to different processes.Citation: https://doi.org/
10.5194/egusphere-2024-1311-RC2 - AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Jo Cook, 16 Sep 2024
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