Observational study of factors influencing the dispersion of warm fog droplet spectrum in Xishuangbanna, China
Abstract. The microphysical characteristics of fog and stratiform clouds are somewhat similar. The study of the microphysical characteristics of warm fog, fog droplet spectral relative dispersion, and their influencing factors can deepen our understanding of the variability and influencing factors of cloud droplet spectral relative dispersion, while also investigating the formation and maintenance mechanisms of fog. This is currently a scientific issue that still remains controversial in cloud physics research and climate prediction. In this paper, we analyzed three months of Xishuangbanna radiation fog observations to explore the microphysical characteristics of fog. The results show followings: (1) When the autoconversion threshold (T) increased to greater than 0.4, the positive correlation between the relative dispersion of fog droplet spectrum and the volume mean diameter or water content of fog droplet weakened, also the positive correlation between relative dispersion and number concentration increased where the main mechanism needed to be integrated considering the interaction of collision-coalescence, condensation, and nucleation processes. It is found that the strength of the collision-coalescence process has a certain influence on the variation rule of dispersion. (2) The number concentration of 2–12 µm droplets in the fog constrained the relationship between the T and relative dispersion, with the number of large droplets reflects the strength of the collision-coalescence process. (3) Supersaturation changed microphysical quantities by increasing the number concentration of small droplets in the fog, which affected the variations of relative dispersion. For supersaturation greater than 0.12 %, the number concentration of droplets larger than 30 µm may be decreased due to gravitational settling. In addition, there is no significant relationship between supersaturation and relative dispersion if the initial nucleated fog droplet spectrum is narrow.
First review of the manuscript. Observational study of factors influencing the dispersion of warm fog droplet spectrum in Xishuangbanna, China by Zhenya An and Xiaoli Liu Marie Mazoyer, Météo-France The paper titled “Observational study of factors influencing the dispersion of warm fog droplet spectrum in Xishuangbanna, China” by An et al., aims to study the characteristics of fog microphysical properties by considering 19 fog cases observed in a tropical rainforest . Their study mainly focuses on the relationship between self-conversion and the relative dispersion of fog droplet spectra. Additional emphasis is placed on the relationship of supersaturation with the concentration of fog droplets. I think this study is of great interest given the current challenges of forecasting and modeling fog and associated microphysics. It gives a relevant description of microphysical processes occurring during fog evolution.
However, I feel that clarification of the paper's objectives needs to be made. In this way, the novelty of this work must be emphasized. The presentation of the measurement campaign and the cases studied is completely necessary before considering publication of this work. The introduction should also focus on fog microphysical processes, their impact on the fog life cycle and their consideration in the numerical model. A summary effort is really necessary on your results section for better reading. The concentration of aerosols is sometimes commented on but no plot presents it. The captions need to be rewritten much more explicitly for the description of the figures. Finally, a conceptual diagram (“handmade” graphic) could be very interesting to conclude the article. Given these points, I'm really hesitant between rejection and major revision. As your article could be significantly improved with additional work, I would suggest a major revision.
Introduction:
-A review of fog processes affecting fog during its evolution could be nice.
-Explain why we need a better description of fog microphysical processes. -A few words about numerical modeling might be interesting. -I really appreciate the presentation of the measurement campaign but it lacks international references. On the campaigns and results C-FOG (Gultepe, 2021), LANFEX (Price, 2019), SOFOG-3D (Burnet, 2020) or WIFEX (Ghude, 2023), among others. -A deeper focus on the relevance of T and ε for fog description could provide a better understanding of the article and promote their use for future studies in the community. A “handmade” spectra plot could be useful for this task and help the reader understand how variations in T and ε are related to fog microphysical processes. -Then, new questions in relation to previous studies Zhao, 2013 for example and among others must be pointed out.
Methods:
- Present the campaign, the instruments and the cases studied. Or make references to any article that has already featured it. - Supersaturation section: Petters and Kredenweis (2007) (the reference is missing in your reference session) indicates that the formula you used for A cannot be used for kappa < 0.2. As you use it for a kappa=0.15, a discussion is in order. A diagram would be welcome for a better understanding of the method used. See Mazoyer (2009) for example.
Results and analysis:
-Present the figures and the objectives of the figures before commenting on them. -The captions are not complete enough. -A comparison of your results with previous studies is sometimes missing. -Figure 3, you comment on T, but where is T? The color legend is missing. -Figure 8 and 11, your comments on the concentration of aerosols are very interesting but must be documented with an aerosol concentration plot for example.
Conclusions:
-Please re-introduce the objectives
-Please comment your findings on the processes rather than re-presenting your findings on direct MVD, LWC, T, epsilon,… relationships.
-Please draw the most important conclusions and implications for fog forecasting and modeling.
-A conceptual diagram ('handmade' graphic) could be very nice to conclude the article
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