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Selective deuteration as a tool for resolving autoxidation mechanisms in α-pinene ozonolysis
Abstract. Highly oxygenated organic molecules (HOM) from α-pinene ozonolysis have been shown to be significant contributors to secondary organic aerosol (SOA), yet our mechanistic understanding of how the peroxy radical-driven autoxidation leads to their formation in this system is still limited. The involved isomerisation reactions such as H-atom abstractions followed by O2 additions can take place on sub-second time-scales in short-lived intermediates, making the process challenging to study. Similarly, while the end products and sometimes radical intermediates can be observed using mass spectrometry, their structures remain elusive. Therefore, we propose a method utilising selective deuterations for unveiling the mechanisms of autoxidation, where the HOM products can be used to infer which C-atoms have taken part in the isomerisation reactions. This relies on the fact that if a C−D bond is broken due to an abstraction by a peroxy group forming a −OOD hydroperoxide, the D-atom will become labile and able to be exchanged with a hydrogen atom in water vapour (H2O), effectively leading to loss of the D-atom from the molecule.
In this study, we test the applicability of this method using three differently deuterated versions of α-pinene with the newly developed chemical ionisation Orbitrap (CI-Orbitrap) mass spectrometer to inspect the oxidation products. The high mass resolving power of the Orbitrap is critical, as it allows the unambiguous separation of molecules with a D-atom (mD=2.0141) from those with two H-atoms (mH2=2.0157). We found that the method worked well and we could deduce that two of the three tested compounds had lost D-atoms during oxidation, suggesting that those deuterated positions were actively involved in the autoxidation process. Surprisingly, the deuterations were not observed to decrease HOM molar yields, as would have been expected due to kinetic isotope effects. This may be an indication that the relevant H (or D) abstractions were fast enough that no competing pathways were of relevance despite slower abstraction rates of the D-atom. We show that selective deuteration can be a very useful method for studying autoxidation on a molecular level, and likely not limited to the system of α-pinene ozonolysis tested here.
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #1, 15 Nov 2022
In their article "Selective deuteration as a tool for resolving autoxidation mechanisms in α-pinene ozonolysis," the authors present an interesting effort to use deuterated isotopologues to understand the potential mechanisms for the formation of highly oxygenated molecules from oxidation of a common atmospherically important compound. Overall, it is a neat study that appears to be conducted carefully and knowledgeably. I recommend its publication after addressing mostly minor comments below.
Major comment:(1) I am left a little bit wanting for a more in depth discussion of mechanisms in the results section. There is a lot of great discussion of the data, but not effort to interpret the data in the context of existing (or new) proposed mechanisms other than that of Iyer et al.
For example, on line 299, the pathway that removes D from the D3 is different from the proposed one, so it should account for some of the 50% not accounted for by Iyer, correct? Do you have any proposed mechanism for what that pathway is, and if so, does it account for any of the loss observed for the D2? If not, do you have any ideas about the loss of the cylclobutyl carbon? If those are all different pathways, it would almost fully explain the product. The tool the authors are using here seems quite powerful and it would be nice to see some new ideas for the mechanisms proposed or at least specifically discussed in the context of Figure 2. Can some of these formulas be given more clear example structures that would be consistent with existing (or new) mechanisms and account for the H/D data presented here?
(2) In Figure 8 and its disucssion, why use number of oxygens as a proxy for lost? It seems to me that somehow breaking out the quantifaction by amount of D lost would be relevant. Part of the reason differences in yield are lower than in Rissanen is because not all of the ions have actually been impacted by a kinetic isotope effect. A figure like Figure 8, but only for ions in which some portion are deuterated, or perhaps colored by mass fraction of deuterium. For example, if 50% of C10H14O7 is actually C10H13DO7, color it as maybe the weighted number of deutrium (0.5) or as fraction of hydrogens that are heavy (0.5*0+0.5*(1/14)). This might make an actually kinetic effect stand out. Otherwise, that implies there is no KIE - why might this be, given the results of Rissanen? What other reaction would outcompete? Given that there is usually going to be a non-deuterated abstraction available elsewhere in the molecule, shouldn't that usually outcompete? Could some of the differences in the relative yields and overall mass spectra be explained by KIE? For example, are the ions around 310 that are supressed in the D1 relative to the D0 (see Fig A2) heavily deuterated, thus possibly explained by KIE? Overall, it would be great to see a little more deep thought into what the mass spectra as a whole tell us about the KIE and also the potential mechanisms (comment 1)
Technical comments:
Line 22 and throughout: Defining "HOM" as the plural "highly oxygenated organic molecules" leads to prevelant odd grammar. In some places, it is fine, such as line 24 ("HOM ... have been shown"). However, it means it is basically grammatically impossible to refer to a single highly oxygneated organic molecule. For example, line 87, "a closed shell HOM" means "a closed shell highly oxygenated organic molecules", which is not grammatically correct, and there isn't really a good way to make this sentence grammatically correct if HOM is defined as plural. I recommend defining HOM singularly and using HOMs as the plural.
Line 34: Run-on sentence. Instead of "[and] it can be a", use "as in the case of"
Line 39-40: I'm not sure I understand what this sentence means, try to clarify a bit what was shown in that paper.
Lines 48 and 111: Delete "molecules"
Line 183-185: Run-on sentence
Line 233 and 236: Should be "by a large margin", not "with a large margin"
Line 238: Do I understand correctly that it is not completely inactive, just mostly so? Or can even an inactive carbon lose some of its H/D?
Line 266-267: I'm not sure I understand what the authors mean by there being "numerous isoprenes for every molecule". Do they mean for each molecule they will investigate multiple D/H isotopes? Or do they mean something about the natural distribution of isotopes? Re-word.
Line 326: What was the value reported by Bianchi et al.?
Methods section is written very informally. I'm not actually sure this is an issue, but it does feel a little odd. For example "the PTR instruments were calibrated for sensitivity, and we used that information to get the precursor concentrations from the ion signal" - the use of the word "get" here is a very informal use. A more typical writing style for a manuscript might be "the PTR instruments were calibrated to estimate a response factor, which was used to convert ion signals into precursor concentrations." The informal language is seen throughout the manuscript, but particularly in the methods. I think whether this is an issue or not is an editorial decision.
Figure 1 is very helpful and clear
Figure 4 - I am generally strongly opposed to bar charts in log space, because the idea of a bar chart is that height or area of each bar should represent relative magnitude, which is not true in log space because there is no true zero and the relative heights of bars provide little information about their relative magnitude. However, given that this particular is illustrative and not particularly focused on qunatitation, I'm not necessarily opposed to it here.
Figure A2 - label left and right as monomer and dimer. It is also very interesting that the overall distributions of ions is not the same for each precursor (for instance ratio of cluster around 310 and 315 is different for the D1 and D3 precursor), do the authors have any thoughts on this?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-1131-RC1 - AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Nov 2022
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #3, 28 Nov 2022
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC4: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #4, 29 Nov 2022
Meder et al. discuss the use of deuterated α-pinene standards to investigate its oxidation by ozonolysis. The authors selectively replaced hydrogen atoms with deuterium atoms to investigate at what carbon centers hydrogen/deuterium abstraction occurred. The authors used a high resolution chemical ionization orbitrap mass spectrometer to differentiate peaks associated with the deuterated samples and based on obtained mass spectra, discussed likely oxidation mechanisms. The work presented in this manuscript is novel and attempts to address a challenging gap in knowledge regarding oxidation mechanisms for α-pinene ozonolysis. Overall, the manuscript presents important data that should be accepted for publication in ACP once some major comments have been addressed.
Major comments
- Although this manuscript presents some convincing arguments, I feel it would benefit from some structural changes that would significantly streamline and clarify the work presented. Primarily the manuscript should be reorganized to follow a more logical flow. For example, the “selective deuteration and autoxidation sections” contains a mixture of literature motivation and methods used, and as such could be instead integrated into the “introduction” as well as the “methods” sections as is appropriate. Additionally, the authors should consider reorganizing the structure of their results and discussion section (e.g., switching the order of sections 4.1 and 4.2). Data should be presented first followed by in its interpretation and discussion, i.e., there should not be a section on “interpreting the mass spectra” before “experiment overview” where mass spectra should be introduced.
- This manuscript would also benefit from some additional details regarding experimental conditions, instrument details and uncertainties, etc. Although the authors state that they were focused on the interpretation of general trends in the mass spectral data between different deuterated species, including these quantitative details would help readers to interpret the data presented and importantly the limitations of the work that are described by the authors. Furthermore, a lot of useful information is present in the manuscript, but it can be challenging to find in its current organizational state. For example, some of these important details (e.g., α-pinene mixing ratios) were not stated in the text, but instead had to be determined via figures. Additionally, even though the authors reference existing literature for the instrumental methods, enough details should be given so that readers know the essentials without having to refer to other publications.
- The number of experiments conducted is unclear. Were replicates of these experiments conducted or just the 4 listed? Given the large experimental uncertainty, replicate measurements would be of significant benefit to help constrain these results and allow for a more rigorous interpretation of the experimental data. Furthermore, a summary of experiments and conditions would be beneficial.
Minor comments
- The color scheme of the figures could be improved. It would be very beneficial for the authors to stick with a common color scheme and employ this throughout the manuscript. Also, shaded regions and lines do not have to have a pattern if an appropriate color scheme is chosen.
- The authors are attempting to determine the mechanism through which α-pinene undergoes ozonolysis. However, OH is also generated since an OH scavenger was not used during the experiments. The authors do not comment on this in the manuscript discussion. Further mention of this should be discussed. In particular, do the authors expect that the kinetics of OD vs OH generated to impact potential OH oxidation chemistry?
- There is a lot of discussion in the introduction regarding decrease in reaction rates due to the kinetic isotope effect (KIE), yet the authors claim that a KIE is not observed with their data. Why do the authors propose this is?
- The authors state that the data were divided into two periods “Chigh” and “Clow” when the reaction rates for k[α-pinene][O3] were 0.5 ppt s-1 and 0.015 ppt s-1 Can the authors please elaborate on how these periods were chosen?
- If the chamber is being operated in a steady state continuous flow mode, why is the signal for the precursor dropping over time but ozone is relatively stable?
- The authors cite Rissanen et al. stating that “D-atoms can exchanged to H-atoms in contact with water vapour in cases where a C-D bond was broken”. The experiments were conducted at RH<1% so it is unlikely that these processes should be significant under the experimental conditions. However, under ambient conditions RH is much higher. How do the authors expect RH might affect the experimentally observed results?
Specific comments
Line 66- The authors state “The purity of each compound was >95% as determined by 1HNMR spectroscopy and we were unable to observe residual proton resonances associated with the deuterated carbon positions for any sample…” This is misleading as only NMR spectra are given for the 3D1 α-pinene sample. Was a purity of >95% also obtained and characterized by NMR for the other two deuterated α-pinene samples synthesized?
Line 137- “RH” should be in brackets.
Line 150- How much did these concentrations vary? Please state a range in the text. These can be determined from Figure 5 but should be stated in the text.
Line 157-158- The authors state “the instrument has been shown to be effective in detecting HOMs”. It would be beneficial for the authors to more information here regarding instrument sensitivity, etc. Perhaps adding parts of the “data analysis” section here would be helpful.
Line 162- The authors state “the results were comparable” in reference to the using both a VOCUS-PTR-ToF and PTR-ToF to conduct experiments. Without showing the data or giving any sort of quantitative comparison, it is hard to make these statements. Consider rephrasing or adding details to convince the readers that this is in fact the case.
Line 173- Please state the sensitivity here.
Line 177- The authors state “We excluded all isotopes that contained deuterium, because using selectively deuterated precursors distorts these signals”. It is unclear what the authors mean here. If you are trying to measure deuterated samples, then understanding the instruments response to these species is key to obtaining quantitative data.
Line 214- Please state the limit of detection of the instrument.
Line 240- This section is labeled “experiment overview”. Data are being discussed here and not the experimental procedure. Consider renaming this section.
Line 241- The authors state “we conducted four experiments with…” Were these 4 different types of experiments or only 4 experiments total? It is unclear if or how many replicates of these experiments were conducted.
Line 308-311- It would be helpful to include the fraction of times that e.g., Ds were lost. Statements such as “often” or “rarely” are somewhat ambiguous.
Line 337- The authors state “…the differences in steady-state precursor concentrations between the experiments”. There are not explicitly given in the manuscript (other than what can be deduced from Figure 5) and should be added as part of the methods section. Also, the term steady state should not be used here as it implies that the concentrations are not changing. However, according to Figure 5, and the authors themselves on Line 242, this is not true for several of the experiments.
Figure 8- Please state slopes and offsets for the linear fits listed in graphs 8b-d.
Line 403- “there was a bug in the pump” is unclear. Was this a mechanical issue? Can the authors please clarify this in the text.
Figure A2- Were the α-pinene oxidation products not measured by orbitrap? As such their mass spectra should not be in “unit mass resolution”. Also, it would be of benefit to either label the peaks or list the m/z associated with each HOM for ease of reading.
References
Rissanen, M. P., Kurtén, T., Sipilä, M., Thornton, J. A., Kangasluoma, J., Sarnela, N., Junninen, H., Jørgensen, S., Schallhart, S., Kajos, M. K., Taipale, R., Springer, M., Mentel, T. F., Ruuskanen, T., Petäjä, T., Worsnop, D. R., Kjaergaard, H. G., and Ehn, M.: The Formation of Highly Oxidized Multifunctional Products in the Ozonolysis of Cyclohexene, Journal of the American Chemical Society, 136, 15 596–15 606, https://doi.org/10.1021/ja507146s, pMID: 25283472, 2014.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-1131-RC4 - AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #1, 15 Nov 2022
In their article "Selective deuteration as a tool for resolving autoxidation mechanisms in α-pinene ozonolysis," the authors present an interesting effort to use deuterated isotopologues to understand the potential mechanisms for the formation of highly oxygenated molecules from oxidation of a common atmospherically important compound. Overall, it is a neat study that appears to be conducted carefully and knowledgeably. I recommend its publication after addressing mostly minor comments below.
Major comment:(1) I am left a little bit wanting for a more in depth discussion of mechanisms in the results section. There is a lot of great discussion of the data, but not effort to interpret the data in the context of existing (or new) proposed mechanisms other than that of Iyer et al.
For example, on line 299, the pathway that removes D from the D3 is different from the proposed one, so it should account for some of the 50% not accounted for by Iyer, correct? Do you have any proposed mechanism for what that pathway is, and if so, does it account for any of the loss observed for the D2? If not, do you have any ideas about the loss of the cylclobutyl carbon? If those are all different pathways, it would almost fully explain the product. The tool the authors are using here seems quite powerful and it would be nice to see some new ideas for the mechanisms proposed or at least specifically discussed in the context of Figure 2. Can some of these formulas be given more clear example structures that would be consistent with existing (or new) mechanisms and account for the H/D data presented here?
(2) In Figure 8 and its disucssion, why use number of oxygens as a proxy for lost? It seems to me that somehow breaking out the quantifaction by amount of D lost would be relevant. Part of the reason differences in yield are lower than in Rissanen is because not all of the ions have actually been impacted by a kinetic isotope effect. A figure like Figure 8, but only for ions in which some portion are deuterated, or perhaps colored by mass fraction of deuterium. For example, if 50% of C10H14O7 is actually C10H13DO7, color it as maybe the weighted number of deutrium (0.5) or as fraction of hydrogens that are heavy (0.5*0+0.5*(1/14)). This might make an actually kinetic effect stand out. Otherwise, that implies there is no KIE - why might this be, given the results of Rissanen? What other reaction would outcompete? Given that there is usually going to be a non-deuterated abstraction available elsewhere in the molecule, shouldn't that usually outcompete? Could some of the differences in the relative yields and overall mass spectra be explained by KIE? For example, are the ions around 310 that are supressed in the D1 relative to the D0 (see Fig A2) heavily deuterated, thus possibly explained by KIE? Overall, it would be great to see a little more deep thought into what the mass spectra as a whole tell us about the KIE and also the potential mechanisms (comment 1)
Technical comments:
Line 22 and throughout: Defining "HOM" as the plural "highly oxygenated organic molecules" leads to prevelant odd grammar. In some places, it is fine, such as line 24 ("HOM ... have been shown"). However, it means it is basically grammatically impossible to refer to a single highly oxygneated organic molecule. For example, line 87, "a closed shell HOM" means "a closed shell highly oxygenated organic molecules", which is not grammatically correct, and there isn't really a good way to make this sentence grammatically correct if HOM is defined as plural. I recommend defining HOM singularly and using HOMs as the plural.
Line 34: Run-on sentence. Instead of "[and] it can be a", use "as in the case of"
Line 39-40: I'm not sure I understand what this sentence means, try to clarify a bit what was shown in that paper.
Lines 48 and 111: Delete "molecules"
Line 183-185: Run-on sentence
Line 233 and 236: Should be "by a large margin", not "with a large margin"
Line 238: Do I understand correctly that it is not completely inactive, just mostly so? Or can even an inactive carbon lose some of its H/D?
Line 266-267: I'm not sure I understand what the authors mean by there being "numerous isoprenes for every molecule". Do they mean for each molecule they will investigate multiple D/H isotopes? Or do they mean something about the natural distribution of isotopes? Re-word.
Line 326: What was the value reported by Bianchi et al.?
Methods section is written very informally. I'm not actually sure this is an issue, but it does feel a little odd. For example "the PTR instruments were calibrated for sensitivity, and we used that information to get the precursor concentrations from the ion signal" - the use of the word "get" here is a very informal use. A more typical writing style for a manuscript might be "the PTR instruments were calibrated to estimate a response factor, which was used to convert ion signals into precursor concentrations." The informal language is seen throughout the manuscript, but particularly in the methods. I think whether this is an issue or not is an editorial decision.
Figure 1 is very helpful and clear
Figure 4 - I am generally strongly opposed to bar charts in log space, because the idea of a bar chart is that height or area of each bar should represent relative magnitude, which is not true in log space because there is no true zero and the relative heights of bars provide little information about their relative magnitude. However, given that this particular is illustrative and not particularly focused on qunatitation, I'm not necessarily opposed to it here.
Figure A2 - label left and right as monomer and dimer. It is also very interesting that the overall distributions of ions is not the same for each precursor (for instance ratio of cluster around 310 and 315 is different for the D1 and D3 precursor), do the authors have any thoughts on this?
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-1131-RC1 - AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Nov 2022
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #3, 28 Nov 2022
- AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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RC4: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131', Anonymous Referee #4, 29 Nov 2022
Meder et al. discuss the use of deuterated α-pinene standards to investigate its oxidation by ozonolysis. The authors selectively replaced hydrogen atoms with deuterium atoms to investigate at what carbon centers hydrogen/deuterium abstraction occurred. The authors used a high resolution chemical ionization orbitrap mass spectrometer to differentiate peaks associated with the deuterated samples and based on obtained mass spectra, discussed likely oxidation mechanisms. The work presented in this manuscript is novel and attempts to address a challenging gap in knowledge regarding oxidation mechanisms for α-pinene ozonolysis. Overall, the manuscript presents important data that should be accepted for publication in ACP once some major comments have been addressed.
Major comments
- Although this manuscript presents some convincing arguments, I feel it would benefit from some structural changes that would significantly streamline and clarify the work presented. Primarily the manuscript should be reorganized to follow a more logical flow. For example, the “selective deuteration and autoxidation sections” contains a mixture of literature motivation and methods used, and as such could be instead integrated into the “introduction” as well as the “methods” sections as is appropriate. Additionally, the authors should consider reorganizing the structure of their results and discussion section (e.g., switching the order of sections 4.1 and 4.2). Data should be presented first followed by in its interpretation and discussion, i.e., there should not be a section on “interpreting the mass spectra” before “experiment overview” where mass spectra should be introduced.
- This manuscript would also benefit from some additional details regarding experimental conditions, instrument details and uncertainties, etc. Although the authors state that they were focused on the interpretation of general trends in the mass spectral data between different deuterated species, including these quantitative details would help readers to interpret the data presented and importantly the limitations of the work that are described by the authors. Furthermore, a lot of useful information is present in the manuscript, but it can be challenging to find in its current organizational state. For example, some of these important details (e.g., α-pinene mixing ratios) were not stated in the text, but instead had to be determined via figures. Additionally, even though the authors reference existing literature for the instrumental methods, enough details should be given so that readers know the essentials without having to refer to other publications.
- The number of experiments conducted is unclear. Were replicates of these experiments conducted or just the 4 listed? Given the large experimental uncertainty, replicate measurements would be of significant benefit to help constrain these results and allow for a more rigorous interpretation of the experimental data. Furthermore, a summary of experiments and conditions would be beneficial.
Minor comments
- The color scheme of the figures could be improved. It would be very beneficial for the authors to stick with a common color scheme and employ this throughout the manuscript. Also, shaded regions and lines do not have to have a pattern if an appropriate color scheme is chosen.
- The authors are attempting to determine the mechanism through which α-pinene undergoes ozonolysis. However, OH is also generated since an OH scavenger was not used during the experiments. The authors do not comment on this in the manuscript discussion. Further mention of this should be discussed. In particular, do the authors expect that the kinetics of OD vs OH generated to impact potential OH oxidation chemistry?
- There is a lot of discussion in the introduction regarding decrease in reaction rates due to the kinetic isotope effect (KIE), yet the authors claim that a KIE is not observed with their data. Why do the authors propose this is?
- The authors state that the data were divided into two periods “Chigh” and “Clow” when the reaction rates for k[α-pinene][O3] were 0.5 ppt s-1 and 0.015 ppt s-1 Can the authors please elaborate on how these periods were chosen?
- If the chamber is being operated in a steady state continuous flow mode, why is the signal for the precursor dropping over time but ozone is relatively stable?
- The authors cite Rissanen et al. stating that “D-atoms can exchanged to H-atoms in contact with water vapour in cases where a C-D bond was broken”. The experiments were conducted at RH<1% so it is unlikely that these processes should be significant under the experimental conditions. However, under ambient conditions RH is much higher. How do the authors expect RH might affect the experimentally observed results?
Specific comments
Line 66- The authors state “The purity of each compound was >95% as determined by 1HNMR spectroscopy and we were unable to observe residual proton resonances associated with the deuterated carbon positions for any sample…” This is misleading as only NMR spectra are given for the 3D1 α-pinene sample. Was a purity of >95% also obtained and characterized by NMR for the other two deuterated α-pinene samples synthesized?
Line 137- “RH” should be in brackets.
Line 150- How much did these concentrations vary? Please state a range in the text. These can be determined from Figure 5 but should be stated in the text.
Line 157-158- The authors state “the instrument has been shown to be effective in detecting HOMs”. It would be beneficial for the authors to more information here regarding instrument sensitivity, etc. Perhaps adding parts of the “data analysis” section here would be helpful.
Line 162- The authors state “the results were comparable” in reference to the using both a VOCUS-PTR-ToF and PTR-ToF to conduct experiments. Without showing the data or giving any sort of quantitative comparison, it is hard to make these statements. Consider rephrasing or adding details to convince the readers that this is in fact the case.
Line 173- Please state the sensitivity here.
Line 177- The authors state “We excluded all isotopes that contained deuterium, because using selectively deuterated precursors distorts these signals”. It is unclear what the authors mean here. If you are trying to measure deuterated samples, then understanding the instruments response to these species is key to obtaining quantitative data.
Line 214- Please state the limit of detection of the instrument.
Line 240- This section is labeled “experiment overview”. Data are being discussed here and not the experimental procedure. Consider renaming this section.
Line 241- The authors state “we conducted four experiments with…” Were these 4 different types of experiments or only 4 experiments total? It is unclear if or how many replicates of these experiments were conducted.
Line 308-311- It would be helpful to include the fraction of times that e.g., Ds were lost. Statements such as “often” or “rarely” are somewhat ambiguous.
Line 337- The authors state “…the differences in steady-state precursor concentrations between the experiments”. There are not explicitly given in the manuscript (other than what can be deduced from Figure 5) and should be added as part of the methods section. Also, the term steady state should not be used here as it implies that the concentrations are not changing. However, according to Figure 5, and the authors themselves on Line 242, this is not true for several of the experiments.
Figure 8- Please state slopes and offsets for the linear fits listed in graphs 8b-d.
Line 403- “there was a bug in the pump” is unclear. Was this a mechanical issue? Can the authors please clarify this in the text.
Figure A2- Were the α-pinene oxidation products not measured by orbitrap? As such their mass spectra should not be in “unit mass resolution”. Also, it would be of benefit to either label the peaks or list the m/z associated with each HOM for ease of reading.
References
Rissanen, M. P., Kurtén, T., Sipilä, M., Thornton, J. A., Kangasluoma, J., Sarnela, N., Junninen, H., Jørgensen, S., Schallhart, S., Kajos, M. K., Taipale, R., Springer, M., Mentel, T. F., Ruuskanen, T., Petäjä, T., Worsnop, D. R., Kjaergaard, H. G., and Ehn, M.: The Formation of Highly Oxidized Multifunctional Products in the Ozonolysis of Cyclohexene, Journal of the American Chemical Society, 136, 15 596–15 606, https://doi.org/10.1021/ja507146s, pMID: 25283472, 2014.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/egusphere-2022-1131-RC4 - AC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2022-1131 - Final author reply to the editor', Melissa Meder, 28 Feb 2023
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Melissa J. A. Meder
Otso Peräkylä
Jonathan G. Varelas
Jenny Luo
Runlong Cai
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Theo Kurtén
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Matti P. Rissanen
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