Figure 10

We discovered that when calculating the adiabatic liquid water content (LWC) profiles, we divided the excess water vapor mixing ratio of the parcel (g kg^-1) by air density (kg m^-3), which results in unphysical units of (g m^3 kg^-2) when we should have multiplied by air density to correctly calculate adiabatic LWC (g m^-3). This was a subtle error to find since the density of air at the altitudes examined is close to 1 kg m^-3. The corrected adiabatic LWC is around 10-20% higher than the original plot. No change to the text is required.

 

Figure 17

We discovered that we errantly normalized (divided) by the bin width twice resulting in unphysical plotting units of L^-1 um^-1 m^-1. We have removed the duplicate normalization so that the correct units of L^-1 um^-1 are plotted. This decreases the plotted quantities by several orders of magnitude (integrating the corrected curves now agrees with Ni) but changes no interpretations.